Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
OLD INTO NEW
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Fay , and happy new year to you 🙂🌸🌸
You are a good poet .
January 1st, 2022 02:55
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Fay , and happy new year to you 🙂🌸🌸
You are a good poet .
January 1st, 2022 02:55
OLD INTO NEW
Goldfinch60 said:
May you too have a wonderful New Year Fay.
Andy
January 1st, 2022 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
May you too have a wonderful New Year Fay.
Andy
January 1st, 2022 02:54
New Depths
Rozina said:
Inspiring that a few lines can say so much. Happy New Year.
December 31st, 2021 22:05
Rozina said:
Inspiring that a few lines can say so much. Happy New Year.
December 31st, 2021 22:05
New Depths
Neville said:
one has to look more than just closely to see beyond the tip .......... perfect poetry Fay ..................................... N
December 31st, 2021 09:25
Neville said:
one has to look more than just closely to see beyond the tip .......... perfect poetry Fay ..................................... N
December 31st, 2021 09:25
New Depths
SureshG said:
Positively Bodhisattva, may this light shine forever
December 31st, 2021 09:23
SureshG said:
Positively Bodhisattva, may this light shine forever
December 31st, 2021 09:23
New Depths
dusk arising said:
D\'you know... I was just cutting my toenails this morning ready for new year when by happenchance i began to contemplate my navel (my slang for weighing up my life). However a bout of flatulence soon put an end to that and to clear the air I headed for the kitchen for to raise a cuppa.
Mid cuppa i was navel bound again having hovvered over your poem. Trying to discover why I am a positive thinker, why i feel fortunate, how difficult would it be to look at my existence in a more negative, unfortunate light. Strange thoughts.... something innate, which i can\'t change from within, powers the light which guides me. Maybe it\'s a light from my ever present guardian angel who reassures me of their company no matter what.... i know someone/something is giving me unconditional love..... even if it\'s just the all encompassing universe of which I am an integral part.
Where your poetry will take my poetic thoughts is priceless.
December 31st, 2021 05:15
dusk arising said:
D\'you know... I was just cutting my toenails this morning ready for new year when by happenchance i began to contemplate my navel (my slang for weighing up my life). However a bout of flatulence soon put an end to that and to clear the air I headed for the kitchen for to raise a cuppa.
Mid cuppa i was navel bound again having hovvered over your poem. Trying to discover why I am a positive thinker, why i feel fortunate, how difficult would it be to look at my existence in a more negative, unfortunate light. Strange thoughts.... something innate, which i can\'t change from within, powers the light which guides me. Maybe it\'s a light from my ever present guardian angel who reassures me of their company no matter what.... i know someone/something is giving me unconditional love..... even if it\'s just the all encompassing universe of which I am an integral part.
Where your poetry will take my poetic thoughts is priceless.
December 31st, 2021 05:15
New Depths
woundedheart said:
Very beautiful self reflection poem my friend there us beauty to be found if only we are willing to truly see. ☺
December 31st, 2021 04:57
woundedheart said:
Very beautiful self reflection poem my friend there us beauty to be found if only we are willing to truly see. ☺
December 31st, 2021 04:57
Not to be Missed
Goldfinch60 said:
Can I haver the next dance after dusk arising Fay?
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Can I haver the next dance after dusk arising Fay?
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:30
Arousal
Neville said:
its no accident that I found these words by accident, is it ... one likes a bit o pre weekend teasing any time of day or day of the week even ... yes, very much enjoyed ........ N x
December 30th, 2021 18:00
Neville said:
its no accident that I found these words by accident, is it ... one likes a bit o pre weekend teasing any time of day or day of the week even ... yes, very much enjoyed ........ N x
December 30th, 2021 18:00
Not to be Missed
spilleronsheet said:
Dance of angels
A beautiful imagination runs in my mind
Those words have magic creating sceneries if all kind
Great play with the words dear Fay
December 30th, 2021 11:55
spilleronsheet said:
Dance of angels
A beautiful imagination runs in my mind
Those words have magic creating sceneries if all kind
Great play with the words dear Fay
December 30th, 2021 11:55
Not to be Missed
orchidee said:
I won\'t miss it, but I missed the No.11 bus. Doh! lol.
December 30th, 2021 06:33
orchidee said:
I won\'t miss it, but I missed the No.11 bus. Doh! lol.
December 30th, 2021 06:33
Not to be Missed
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I so believe in angels 😇
December 30th, 2021 06:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I so believe in angels 😇
December 30th, 2021 06:25
Not to be Missed
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
So beautiful , Fay ! 🌸🌸 such a lovely engaging write ..
December 30th, 2021 06:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
So beautiful , Fay ! 🌸🌸 such a lovely engaging write ..
December 30th, 2021 06:25
Not to be Missed
dusk arising said:
LOL been there, done that... got a return ticket too.... meanwhile.... shall we dance.
Yes i love it when my muse takes me to the wonderland of fantasy. From my hand has flowed some of the pieces which really give me satisfaction. Oh to read them to the grandchildren.
Your invitation to indulge is, I hope, going to be taken up by our friends the mps poets and we shall see wonderland in all its glorious forms from creative minds...... well I can live in hope I suppose.
Great writing Fay.
December 30th, 2021 06:21
dusk arising said:
LOL been there, done that... got a return ticket too.... meanwhile.... shall we dance.
Yes i love it when my muse takes me to the wonderland of fantasy. From my hand has flowed some of the pieces which really give me satisfaction. Oh to read them to the grandchildren.
Your invitation to indulge is, I hope, going to be taken up by our friends the mps poets and we shall see wonderland in all its glorious forms from creative minds...... well I can live in hope I suppose.
Great writing Fay.
December 30th, 2021 06:21
White Icing
Neville said:
snow blindingly brilliant Ms Slimm .. as ever .......................................... x
December 30th, 2021 05:01
Neville said:
snow blindingly brilliant Ms Slimm .. as ever .......................................... x
December 30th, 2021 05:01
White Icing
Rozina said:
Beautiful description and I can picture this clearly from your poem.
December 30th, 2021 01:48
Rozina said:
Beautiful description and I can picture this clearly from your poem.
December 30th, 2021 01:48
White Icing
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay that white icing will soon fade away and the glory of natures colourful artwork will soon be with us.
Andy
December 30th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay that white icing will soon fade away and the glory of natures colourful artwork will soon be with us.
Andy
December 30th, 2021 01:38
White Icing
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Me own poem for this December is - \'It\'s a bit wet!\' lol.
December 29th, 2021 13:18
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Me own poem for this December is - \'It\'s a bit wet!\' lol.
December 29th, 2021 13:18
White Icing
kitty the naughty poet said:
that is a great opening line. I think I\'m ready for spring lol I\'m not too keen on winter. although it is beautiful.
great share :)
December 29th, 2021 06:03
kitty the naughty poet said:
that is a great opening line. I think I\'m ready for spring lol I\'m not too keen on winter. although it is beautiful.
great share :)
December 29th, 2021 06:03
White Icing
dusk arising said:
Somehow you took me back to childhood christmas and winter scenes of white and cold when wrapped up warm and weatherproof six year old me and my three older siblings were allowed to tramp the streets of London suburbs at night, unescourted, to sing carols at anonymous doors for donations to our cash horde. Scant but fond memories. And winter 1963, was that before or after christmas, or both when everywhere was deep white... nearly sixty years passing has given memories the blur of convenience, we can make of them what we will.
Your poetry today is another fine example of Fay\'s fingertips painting a scene from natures tapestry. Such poetry is not just enjoyable to read but a delight. One for my favourites.
December 29th, 2021 05:38
dusk arising said:
Somehow you took me back to childhood christmas and winter scenes of white and cold when wrapped up warm and weatherproof six year old me and my three older siblings were allowed to tramp the streets of London suburbs at night, unescourted, to sing carols at anonymous doors for donations to our cash horde. Scant but fond memories. And winter 1963, was that before or after christmas, or both when everywhere was deep white... nearly sixty years passing has given memories the blur of convenience, we can make of them what we will.
Your poetry today is another fine example of Fay\'s fingertips painting a scene from natures tapestry. Such poetry is not just enjoyable to read but a delight. One for my favourites.
December 29th, 2021 05:38
White Icing
woundedheart said:
I think we are all ready for spring and the reawaking of the floral majesty of nature and maybe a little sunshine would be nice too. Very chillingly discriptive poem my friend. 💟
December 29th, 2021 05:36
woundedheart said:
I think we are all ready for spring and the reawaking of the floral majesty of nature and maybe a little sunshine would be nice too. Very chillingly discriptive poem my friend. 💟
December 29th, 2021 05:36
Winding Down
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene clearly. Your description is lovely.
December 29th, 2021 01:28
Rozina said:
I can imagine this scene clearly. Your description is lovely.
December 29th, 2021 01:28
Winding Down
woundedheart said:
After the last few days of rain and thick fog i found this very appropriate and meaningful, lovely descriptive text my friend. ☺
December 28th, 2021 17:58
woundedheart said:
After the last few days of rain and thick fog i found this very appropriate and meaningful, lovely descriptive text my friend. ☺
December 28th, 2021 17:58
Winding Down
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words and images created by those words Fay.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 14:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words and images created by those words Fay.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 14:35
Winding Down
Neville said:
glad you re-posted, there is something a little special about this .. I guess in the kind of way our DA has alluded to ............................. N x
December 28th, 2021 13:11
Neville said:
glad you re-posted, there is something a little special about this .. I guess in the kind of way our DA has alluded to ............................. N x
December 28th, 2021 13:11
Winding Down
dusk arising said:
Overall I felt the warm cosyness of this poem Fay. You bring out the romance of village life which rests in our psyche which probably has little to do with reality but its a picture many of us carry. As evening comes on so to relax and in a place, your village, where life takes on a quite relaxed pace compared to our techno/business reality.
Yes a very interesting and entertaining relaxing read from your skilled hand.
December 28th, 2021 07:55
dusk arising said:
Overall I felt the warm cosyness of this poem Fay. You bring out the romance of village life which rests in our psyche which probably has little to do with reality but its a picture many of us carry. As evening comes on so to relax and in a place, your village, where life takes on a quite relaxed pace compared to our techno/business reality.
Yes a very interesting and entertaining relaxing read from your skilled hand.
December 28th, 2021 07:55
Winding Down
Paul Bell said:
Great poem. Yes, the animals don\'t know it\'s Christmas, and the farmer\'s day probably stays the same.
Mind you, after two days off, we\'re all running around the fields.
December 28th, 2021 05:34
Paul Bell said:
Great poem. Yes, the animals don\'t know it\'s Christmas, and the farmer\'s day probably stays the same.
Mind you, after two days off, we\'re all running around the fields.
December 28th, 2021 05:34
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