Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, drowning in ink is what we all tend to do.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, drowning in ink is what we all tend to do.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:53
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Rozina said:
Lovely words of truth. So much to learn yet. Thank you.
December 16th, 2021 01:05
Rozina said:
Lovely words of truth. So much to learn yet. Thank you.
December 16th, 2021 01:05
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Michael Edwards said:
Almost abstract and yet with great meaning - super work Fay
December 16th, 2021 00:22
Michael Edwards said:
Almost abstract and yet with great meaning - super work Fay
December 16th, 2021 00:22
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Coyote said:
A wonderful write on our efforts to master the poet\'s craft. Nicely done Fay🙂
December 15th, 2021 14:25
Coyote said:
A wonderful write on our efforts to master the poet\'s craft. Nicely done Fay🙂
December 15th, 2021 14:25
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Poetic Dan said:
Wow... thank you so much for sharing what we all try.. your opening lines were amazing! I\'ll quickly pop on to dusk now...
December 15th, 2021 14:04
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... thank you so much for sharing what we all try.. your opening lines were amazing! I\'ll quickly pop on to dusk now...
December 15th, 2021 14:04
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spilleronsheet said:
Very beautiful and profound
Very well said miss Fay
Loved the closing lines
December 15th, 2021 12:33
spilleronsheet said:
Very beautiful and profound
Very well said miss Fay
Loved the closing lines
December 15th, 2021 12:33
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woundedheart said:
Very truthful poem we all feel the need to stain the page with words that beat within our hearts minds and veins, may it always be so.
December 15th, 2021 10:39
woundedheart said:
Very truthful poem we all feel the need to stain the page with words that beat within our hearts minds and veins, may it always be so.
December 15th, 2021 10:39
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orchidee said:
It\'s a nuisance if we\'re inspired, and our pen runs out of ink! lol.
December 15th, 2021 10:24
orchidee said:
It\'s a nuisance if we\'re inspired, and our pen runs out of ink! lol.
December 15th, 2021 10:24
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dusk arising said:
Yes, the search for and joy of the authentic and original, combined with the need to communicate one\'s own perception and touch the heart of a reader.
I think you have woven much into this subject and i\'m pleased you found a little nudge from me to repeat this wonderful piece.
December 15th, 2021 10:01
dusk arising said:
Yes, the search for and joy of the authentic and original, combined with the need to communicate one\'s own perception and touch the heart of a reader.
I think you have woven much into this subject and i\'m pleased you found a little nudge from me to repeat this wonderful piece.
December 15th, 2021 10:01
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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Brilliant words , Fay 🙂 I liked the read …
December 15th, 2021 09:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Brilliant words , Fay 🙂 I liked the read …
December 15th, 2021 09:37
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Neville said:
Now ya come to mention it ............. :)
tis like looking in a mind mirror, slowly but deep ............. N x
December 15th, 2021 09:19
Neville said:
Now ya come to mention it ............. :)
tis like looking in a mind mirror, slowly but deep ............. N x
December 15th, 2021 09:19
Keep Hold
spilleronsheet said:
So Miss Fay is back with bang
Such powerful thoughts
Kept striking
I read
And I read again
Too deep yet so true
Wonderful dear poet
December 14th, 2021 12:47
spilleronsheet said:
So Miss Fay is back with bang
Such powerful thoughts
Kept striking
I read
And I read again
Too deep yet so true
Wonderful dear poet
December 14th, 2021 12:47
Keep Hold
dusk arising said:
I\'m reading that those in deep troubled states can only really feel the rescue of those who have found themselves in deep troubled states also. Though light hearted reassurances and a cup of tea are nontheless a comfort to keep one afloat a while.
December 14th, 2021 09:59
dusk arising said:
I\'m reading that those in deep troubled states can only really feel the rescue of those who have found themselves in deep troubled states also. Though light hearted reassurances and a cup of tea are nontheless a comfort to keep one afloat a while.
December 14th, 2021 09:59
Keep Hold
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Someone threw me a line, well, a raft. But it had holes in it, cos they had heard me singing before! lol.
The mad adventures of Orchi and Fido.
December 14th, 2021 09:37
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Someone threw me a line, well, a raft. But it had holes in it, cos they had heard me singing before! lol.
The mad adventures of Orchi and Fido.
December 14th, 2021 09:37
Keep Hold
woundedheart said:
A life line is always a good thing we all need help now and again if only we are brave enough to ask for it. Very lovely piece☺
December 14th, 2021 09:09
woundedheart said:
A life line is always a good thing we all need help now and again if only we are brave enough to ask for it. Very lovely piece☺
December 14th, 2021 09:09
Unflowered
SureshG said:
We are all a product of seeding, and when protected and nurtured, the growth can be amazing, such as phrased by you here.
December 11th, 2021 23:31
SureshG said:
We are all a product of seeding, and when protected and nurtured, the growth can be amazing, such as phrased by you here.
December 11th, 2021 23:31
Unflowered
Quijote said:
Like that sweet pea we all wither without a little loving attention….
December 11th, 2021 06:57
Quijote said:
Like that sweet pea we all wither without a little loving attention….
December 11th, 2021 06:57
Unflowered
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
If neglected , we need attention and love … and we need others to love us , and help us to feel we can grow . It’s not nice to feel alone and neglected
An interested read , Fay )
December 9th, 2021 10:27
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
If neglected , we need attention and love … and we need others to love us , and help us to feel we can grow . It’s not nice to feel alone and neglected
An interested read , Fay )
December 9th, 2021 10:27
Unflowered
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will shine on her soon and she will \'Spring\' into a glorious life of beauty.
Andy
December 9th, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will shine on her soon and she will \'Spring\' into a glorious life of beauty.
Andy
December 9th, 2021 01:56
Unflowered
Lorna said:
Awwww wishing her warmth and life....... in your hands I\'m sure it will happen.
December 8th, 2021 12:00
Lorna said:
Awwww wishing her warmth and life....... in your hands I\'m sure it will happen.
December 8th, 2021 12:00
Unflowered
dusk arising said:
I used to enjoy planting seeds in my old green house and marvelling at growth from seedlings upwards. My sunflowers were staggering beasts.
Love the way you have personified this little seed and made us all want to recue her from winters chill.
Great when people get involved with one\'s poetry isn\'t it - you\'re good at it.
December 8th, 2021 07:05
dusk arising said:
I used to enjoy planting seeds in my old green house and marvelling at growth from seedlings upwards. My sunflowers were staggering beasts.
Love the way you have personified this little seed and made us all want to recue her from winters chill.
Great when people get involved with one\'s poetry isn\'t it - you\'re good at it.
December 8th, 2021 07:05
Unflowered
spilleronsheet said:
A good message stored
Loved the metaphor you used
Like the seed we are but to bloom we must struggle
As always your poetry has a different kind of aura
December 8th, 2021 06:58
spilleronsheet said:
A good message stored
Loved the metaphor you used
Like the seed we are but to bloom we must struggle
As always your poetry has a different kind of aura
December 8th, 2021 06:58
Unflowered
woundedheart said:
Nurtured nature truely is a thing of beauty reflected perfectly within your poetry
December 8th, 2021 06:12
woundedheart said:
Nurtured nature truely is a thing of beauty reflected perfectly within your poetry
December 8th, 2021 06:12
Wild Land
Goldfinch60 said:
Such places are so wonderful to explore Fay as long as we follow the rule:
\"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time\"
Andy
December 8th, 2021 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Such places are so wonderful to explore Fay as long as we follow the rule:
\"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time\"
Andy
December 8th, 2021 02:08
Wild Land
dusk arising said:
And it all takes place regardless of the activity or presence of humanity but with so little respect.
How cheap and uncaring are we to have a button to press which would end it all.... yet, now we know a button called complacency, a self destruct button which will hand back planet earth to the ways of nature.
December 7th, 2021 11:50
dusk arising said:
And it all takes place regardless of the activity or presence of humanity but with so little respect.
How cheap and uncaring are we to have a button to press which would end it all.... yet, now we know a button called complacency, a self destruct button which will hand back planet earth to the ways of nature.
December 7th, 2021 11:50
Wild Land
Lorna said:
I\'m down at grass level with this one Fay sitting with the frightened rabbits watching the sky! You paint so well.
December 7th, 2021 10:40
Lorna said:
I\'m down at grass level with this one Fay sitting with the frightened rabbits watching the sky! You paint so well.
December 7th, 2021 10:40
Wild Land
SureshG said:
I close my eyes and envision what the planet would be like without the humans, and I see a menagerie of life, full of vibrant colors. Yes a struggle for survival, but each only taking what each needs to survive.
Your words highlight this so poetically
December 7th, 2021 09:26
SureshG said:
I close my eyes and envision what the planet would be like without the humans, and I see a menagerie of life, full of vibrant colors. Yes a struggle for survival, but each only taking what each needs to survive.
Your words highlight this so poetically
December 7th, 2021 09:26
Wild Land
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes dear Fay
I must remember, to simply read your work
and appreciate it, before scrounging around for a suitable commented reply,
I must remember to appreciate
and cherish that first read,
for if I rush, I miss it
and then I can never retrieve that moment..
almost like, seeing such an idyllic scene
and scrambling for a camera
before our eyes have had their fill
maybe that\'s why, we trip up so often
rushing
for the next: for the best
in this our fleeting experience of life...
\'Such is the dictum
of force and order
among the creatures
surviving in wilderness\'
December 7th, 2021 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes dear Fay
I must remember, to simply read your work
and appreciate it, before scrounging around for a suitable commented reply,
I must remember to appreciate
and cherish that first read,
for if I rush, I miss it
and then I can never retrieve that moment..
almost like, seeing such an idyllic scene
and scrambling for a camera
before our eyes have had their fill
maybe that\'s why, we trip up so often
rushing
for the next: for the best
in this our fleeting experience of life...
\'Such is the dictum
of force and order
among the creatures
surviving in wilderness\'
December 7th, 2021 07:06
Wild Land
Doggerel Dave said:
Nature in the raw - survival of the fittest, I know but...you capture the rawness of It all, Fay in a poetic form which displays both the wild feel and the delicate balance.
December 7th, 2021 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Nature in the raw - survival of the fittest, I know but...you capture the rawness of It all, Fay in a poetic form which displays both the wild feel and the delicate balance.
December 7th, 2021 07:06
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