Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Would I
Michael Edwards said:
You\'re an inspiration dear Fay - another gem of a posting.
January 5th, 2022 13:47
Michael Edwards said:
You\'re an inspiration dear Fay - another gem of a posting.
January 5th, 2022 13:47
Would I
woundedheart said:
How do i favourite this piece as it is gorgeous a true classical poem of love, bravo poetess 💗
January 5th, 2022 13:32
woundedheart said:
How do i favourite this piece as it is gorgeous a true classical poem of love, bravo poetess 💗
January 5th, 2022 13:32
Would I
spilleronsheet said:
Took me in portraits of olden days
Women in crochet
Men in tails coat
Caverns on street
A beautiful scene playing at its peak
Thanks dear Fay for creating those scenes
January 5th, 2022 13:04
spilleronsheet said:
Took me in portraits of olden days
Women in crochet
Men in tails coat
Caverns on street
A beautiful scene playing at its peak
Thanks dear Fay for creating those scenes
January 5th, 2022 13:04
Would I
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking she\'s keeping the bling, but he might be in with a shout if a ring is produced pronto.
January 5th, 2022 09:44
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking she\'s keeping the bling, but he might be in with a shout if a ring is produced pronto.
January 5th, 2022 09:44
Would I
L. B. Mek said:
\'and if I, were ever
to be deemed worthy
of reciprocating
such a fateful, choice
would it be your forgiving warmth
I would embrace
or once more
let my ineptitude, ground me
to those quicksand\'s
of accursed regret...\'
(what a scenic portrait you weaved
dear Fay,
forgive me but I couldn\'t resist
trying to scribble a little reply
to your captivating poem)
January 5th, 2022 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'and if I, were ever
to be deemed worthy
of reciprocating
such a fateful, choice
would it be your forgiving warmth
I would embrace
or once more
let my ineptitude, ground me
to those quicksand\'s
of accursed regret...\'
(what a scenic portrait you weaved
dear Fay,
forgive me but I couldn\'t resist
trying to scribble a little reply
to your captivating poem)
January 5th, 2022 06:16
Would I
orchidee said:
Thou hast done a good write Fay!
I suppose I could use \'thee\' and \'thou\', if it helped to give more rhyming opportunities?! I prefer \'you\', etc, though.
January 5th, 2022 03:55
orchidee said:
Thou hast done a good write Fay!
I suppose I could use \'thee\' and \'thou\', if it helped to give more rhyming opportunities?! I prefer \'you\', etc, though.
January 5th, 2022 03:55
Evocative
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay.
I love the Pre-Raphaelite painters.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay.
I love the Pre-Raphaelite painters.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:37
Evocative
dusk arising said:
The romance of young lady rose\'s perfumed blossoming readyness.... perchance to dream of handsome allured prince upon the horizon (while frogs await hopeful kisses).
So much more passionate than the 21st century version \"Oi, i\'m ready... come and get it\".
January 4th, 2022 14:20
dusk arising said:
The romance of young lady rose\'s perfumed blossoming readyness.... perchance to dream of handsome allured prince upon the horizon (while frogs await hopeful kisses).
So much more passionate than the 21st century version \"Oi, i\'m ready... come and get it\".
January 4th, 2022 14:20
Evocative
spilleronsheet said:
An elegant yet a majestic poetry
A beautiful lady formed in my imagination
January 4th, 2022 13:12
spilleronsheet said:
An elegant yet a majestic poetry
A beautiful lady formed in my imagination
January 4th, 2022 13:12
New Depths
L. B. Mek said:
love this image
and your words, enrich
its profound depths
so meaningfully:
\'stand on the edge
of seen and unseen, and listen
to Nature speaking.
Awe is too vast to describe in words\'
\'Authentic soul-beauty
empties Self, to display
the experience of ecstasy.\'
(a great write!)
January 4th, 2022 08:22
L. B. Mek said:
love this image
and your words, enrich
its profound depths
so meaningfully:
\'stand on the edge
of seen and unseen, and listen
to Nature speaking.
Awe is too vast to describe in words\'
\'Authentic soul-beauty
empties Self, to display
the experience of ecstasy.\'
(a great write!)
January 4th, 2022 08:22
Evocative
L. B. Mek said:
\'slowly unfurled
petaled perfection
opens, to show
in this single rose
tender attention\'
just sublime wording
your lines go beyond imagery
they word
portrayals and depictions in
hammer-to-the-head
sensual Artistry,
my first read of years in 2022
what a great write, dear Fay
Happy New Year!
January 4th, 2022 08:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'slowly unfurled
petaled perfection
opens, to show
in this single rose
tender attention\'
just sublime wording
your lines go beyond imagery
they word
portrayals and depictions in
hammer-to-the-head
sensual Artistry,
my first read of years in 2022
what a great write, dear Fay
Happy New Year!
January 4th, 2022 08:16
Evocative
Dove said:
Loved it! Romantic, the lady reminds me of a younger (You) and the Rose is fragrant!
and lovely like your poem!
January 4th, 2022 07:00
Dove said:
Loved it! Romantic, the lady reminds me of a younger (You) and the Rose is fragrant!
and lovely like your poem!
January 4th, 2022 07:00
Evocative
Paul Bell said:
Fantastic, love the way it flows to its ultimate end.
January 4th, 2022 06:04
Paul Bell said:
Fantastic, love the way it flows to its ultimate end.
January 4th, 2022 06:04
Re-Shaping
Neville said:
no doubt about it, this is treemendous Fay .. and sentiment reciprocated :) x
January 3rd, 2022 12:20
Neville said:
no doubt about it, this is treemendous Fay .. and sentiment reciprocated :) x
January 3rd, 2022 12:20
Re-Shaping
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay. I am sure that canvas will be shaped into a world of wonder and beauty.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay. I am sure that canvas will be shaped into a world of wonder and beauty.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:23
Re-Shaping
Michael Edwards said:
Something different from you Fay - your talent knows no bounds - a beautiful write and the very best to you and yours for 2022 - keep writing.
January 2nd, 2022 15:45
Michael Edwards said:
Something different from you Fay - your talent knows no bounds - a beautiful write and the very best to you and yours for 2022 - keep writing.
January 2nd, 2022 15:45
Re-Shaping
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done shape poem, Fay.
Left up to us to decorate it.
Happy New Year
January 2nd, 2022 14:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done shape poem, Fay.
Left up to us to decorate it.
Happy New Year
January 2nd, 2022 14:50
Re-Shaping
chriswylie2 said:
Well written, love the use of words to paint a figurative but also a physical picture! Bravo!
January 2nd, 2022 09:41
chriswylie2 said:
Well written, love the use of words to paint a figurative but also a physical picture! Bravo!
January 2nd, 2022 09:41
Re-Shaping
dusk arising said:
Well with the blank sheet of 2022 ahead theres just so much to be done!
Like the tree-words... clever stuff in itself
January 2nd, 2022 07:07
dusk arising said:
Well with the blank sheet of 2022 ahead theres just so much to be done!
Like the tree-words... clever stuff in itself
January 2nd, 2022 07:07
OLD INTO NEW
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry throughout this past year. I’m looking forward to your new poetry for 2022.
Wishing you the healthiest and happiest New Year.
Laura 🌻
January 2nd, 2022 00:58
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry throughout this past year. I’m looking forward to your new poetry for 2022.
Wishing you the healthiest and happiest New Year.
Laura 🌻
January 2nd, 2022 00:58
OLD INTO NEW
dusk arising said:
Thank you Fay, and I wish you a safe, healthy and rewarding new year ahead too.
January 1st, 2022 06:00
dusk arising said:
Thank you Fay, and I wish you a safe, healthy and rewarding new year ahead too.
January 1st, 2022 06:00
OLD INTO NEW
spilleronsheet said:
A very happy new year dear Fay
A very poetic wishes you delivered
Thank you so much dear Friend
January 1st, 2022 03:35
spilleronsheet said:
A very happy new year dear Fay
A very poetic wishes you delivered
Thank you so much dear Friend
January 1st, 2022 03:35
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