Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Questions
Hakikur Rahman said:
Some realistic pointers to the reality of life. A thoughtful compose.
January 27th, 2022 22:05
Hakikur Rahman said:
Some realistic pointers to the reality of life. A thoughtful compose.
January 27th, 2022 22:05
Questions
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
As I read,I couldn\'t help but to wonder,..(and im so glad I didn\'t read your message before hand)..is this a personal thing,something she seen in the news,..a friend😢..but,wow Fay,..now that\'s the way to write a poem. Very enjoyable,..once I read your message😆🌹🍷🕊
January 27th, 2022 20:12
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
As I read,I couldn\'t help but to wonder,..(and im so glad I didn\'t read your message before hand)..is this a personal thing,something she seen in the news,..a friend😢..but,wow Fay,..now that\'s the way to write a poem. Very enjoyable,..once I read your message😆🌹🍷🕊
January 27th, 2022 20:12
Questions
Rozina said:
Disturbing reality. I kept reminding my daughter when she was at Uni to be very careful precisely because of this. An important message.
January 27th, 2022 08:43
Rozina said:
Disturbing reality. I kept reminding my daughter when she was at Uni to be very careful precisely because of this. An important message.
January 27th, 2022 08:43
Questions
Neville said:
shh ..... it happens .. dangerously dark, hard hitting truth all beautifully poemed .. but no matter how pretty we try and make it appear ... there\'s an ugly side to it all and captured so well here ........ x
January 27th, 2022 08:17
Neville said:
shh ..... it happens .. dangerously dark, hard hitting truth all beautifully poemed .. but no matter how pretty we try and make it appear ... there\'s an ugly side to it all and captured so well here ........ x
January 27th, 2022 08:17
Questions
L. B. Mek said:
(thank you, dear Fay
you\'ve gone n done it again
inspired me to write, something
I never knew I had in me,
with your beautifully, empathetic poetry,
what a gift you choose to share!)
\'...and then the freefall, begins:
drinks and drugs to forget, leading #
to her endlessly re-enacting, the same mistakes
only
she never had a chance, to realise
sexual emancipation, is nothing to be ashamed of
to begin with!
it was the rest, that messed her up
the
letting her flesh, be used
to give her mind, an escape
from this morosely incessant: self-judgement..
and all this turmoil
plastered, behind her concrete smile
as she walks, back
to that strange home
and hugs her dad, drowning
in his loving eyes
this father of a man, looking
like all those, other men
are they or is he
the false promise: in her life...!\'
January 27th, 2022 07:02
L. B. Mek said:
(thank you, dear Fay
you\'ve gone n done it again
inspired me to write, something
I never knew I had in me,
with your beautifully, empathetic poetry,
what a gift you choose to share!)
\'...and then the freefall, begins:
drinks and drugs to forget, leading #
to her endlessly re-enacting, the same mistakes
only
she never had a chance, to realise
sexual emancipation, is nothing to be ashamed of
to begin with!
it was the rest, that messed her up
the
letting her flesh, be used
to give her mind, an escape
from this morosely incessant: self-judgement..
and all this turmoil
plastered, behind her concrete smile
as she walks, back
to that strange home
and hugs her dad, drowning
in his loving eyes
this father of a man, looking
like all those, other men
are they or is he
the false promise: in her life...!\'
January 27th, 2022 07:02
Questions
Paul Bell said:
Great write with a stark message. Always keep your wits about you. Sadly, as a young girl these days, don\'t allow anyone to buy you a drink, and always get your friends to look out for you. Safety in numbers.
January 27th, 2022 06:46
Paul Bell said:
Great write with a stark message. Always keep your wits about you. Sadly, as a young girl these days, don\'t allow anyone to buy you a drink, and always get your friends to look out for you. Safety in numbers.
January 27th, 2022 06:46
Surrender
Neville said:
perfectly depicted in all its glory .. surely no one tires of the beauty displayed at the very break of each new day ......... superbly poemed as always ............................. Neville x
January 26th, 2022 13:44
Neville said:
perfectly depicted in all its glory .. surely no one tires of the beauty displayed at the very break of each new day ......... superbly poemed as always ............................. Neville x
January 26th, 2022 13:44
Surrender
Rozina said:
Fantastic lines making dawn appear right in front of me.
January 26th, 2022 08:37
Rozina said:
Fantastic lines making dawn appear right in front of me.
January 26th, 2022 08:37
Surrender
orchidee said:
It\'s no \'surrender\' (in the sense of giving up hopelessly) for me to say this is a fine poem Fay!
January 26th, 2022 08:25
orchidee said:
It\'s no \'surrender\' (in the sense of giving up hopelessly) for me to say this is a fine poem Fay!
January 26th, 2022 08:25
Surrender
Keith said:
Your poetry always lifts my spirits, Fay - thank you - a beautiful piece. GMH would be proud.
January 26th, 2022 05:27
Keith said:
Your poetry always lifts my spirits, Fay - thank you - a beautiful piece. GMH would be proud.
January 26th, 2022 05:27
Surrender
dusk arising said:
There\'s something special in the air as the day dawns. Photographers want the early morning light for its clarity. Romantic poets want the dawns air for its renewal of our faith in the majesty of creation.
Beautiful poetic images and birdsong on this chill morning.
January 26th, 2022 05:26
dusk arising said:
There\'s something special in the air as the day dawns. Photographers want the early morning light for its clarity. Romantic poets want the dawns air for its renewal of our faith in the majesty of creation.
Beautiful poetic images and birdsong on this chill morning.
January 26th, 2022 05:26
Unbeatable
Doggerel Dave said:
There are experiences/activities I have never and now never will experience for myself. Surfing, hang gliding are others. Doesn’t prevent imaginative journeys though. Your piece provided a perfect key for one such – Thanks Fay.
January 25th, 2022 22:54
Doggerel Dave said:
There are experiences/activities I have never and now never will experience for myself. Surfing, hang gliding are others. Doesn’t prevent imaginative journeys though. Your piece provided a perfect key for one such – Thanks Fay.
January 25th, 2022 22:54
Unbeatable
Rozina said:
Sometimes so difficult but still possible to overcome challenges in life, keep trying, don’t give up - a message of hope. Thank you for sharing.
January 23rd, 2022 18:20
Rozina said:
Sometimes so difficult but still possible to overcome challenges in life, keep trying, don’t give up - a message of hope. Thank you for sharing.
January 23rd, 2022 18:20
Unbeatable
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale Fay with a well and wise ending.
Andy
January 23rd, 2022 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale Fay with a well and wise ending.
Andy
January 23rd, 2022 02:08
Unbeatable
dusk arising said:
I wanna be there..... order me a helicopter cos i\'m too lazy to climb (shall I include a list of injuries and ailments here?). Oh I\'m often perched mentally upon a peak. It brings out the \"superior\" in me, especially when a choir of angels descent to exhalt me..... am I getting carried away here.. (or carried off).
Look what your elevated poetry has done to me..... I need earthing!
January 22nd, 2022 17:32
dusk arising said:
I wanna be there..... order me a helicopter cos i\'m too lazy to climb (shall I include a list of injuries and ailments here?). Oh I\'m often perched mentally upon a peak. It brings out the \"superior\" in me, especially when a choir of angels descent to exhalt me..... am I getting carried away here.. (or carried off).
Look what your elevated poetry has done to me..... I need earthing!
January 22nd, 2022 17:32
Unbeatable
rrodriguez said:
It\'s cold up here but the view can be breathtaking, I imagine since I\'m not a climber. Great write.
January 22nd, 2022 16:22
rrodriguez said:
It\'s cold up here but the view can be breathtaking, I imagine since I\'m not a climber. Great write.
January 22nd, 2022 16:22
Unbeatable
Michael Edwards said:
The quality of your words never falters dear Fay - simply reading it takes me to another place .
January 22nd, 2022 16:07
Michael Edwards said:
The quality of your words never falters dear Fay - simply reading it takes me to another place .
January 22nd, 2022 16:07
Unbeatable
jarcher54 said:
An intense, thoughtful exposition of the man v mountain confrontation. Why did you pen this steel-eyed look at the mointian? Because it\'s there!
January 22nd, 2022 10:37
jarcher54 said:
An intense, thoughtful exposition of the man v mountain confrontation. Why did you pen this steel-eyed look at the mointian? Because it\'s there!
January 22nd, 2022 10:37
Mislaid
Neville said:
now let this be a lesson to the lot of ya ... the lady has written something here for us all to heed ... & that aint no typo .................... N
January 21st, 2022 07:44
Neville said:
now let this be a lesson to the lot of ya ... the lady has written something here for us all to heed ... & that aint no typo .................... N
January 21st, 2022 07:44
Mislaid
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence must always be re-constructed to give the chance for life to be good between you once more - all will be well.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence must always be re-constructed to give the chance for life to be good between you once more - all will be well.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 02:42
Mislaid
Rozina said:
One of the toughest challenges in life is handling relationships. Your piece resonates with me. Thank you.
January 20th, 2022 21:32
Rozina said:
One of the toughest challenges in life is handling relationships. Your piece resonates with me. Thank you.
January 20th, 2022 21:32
Mislaid
spilleronsheet said:
If there is a way
To go back
And mend that was broken
I guess it’s not bad to go back and strengthen what we had
A beautiful poetry dear Fay
And those last lines were simply jewels on crown
January 20th, 2022 14:03
spilleronsheet said:
If there is a way
To go back
And mend that was broken
I guess it’s not bad to go back and strengthen what we had
A beautiful poetry dear Fay
And those last lines were simply jewels on crown
January 20th, 2022 14:03
Mislaid
L. B. Mek said:
\'mindless of relationship\'s worth.\'
if we but could
find a way, to correct this One curse
from faltering our future generations, unmapped horizon\'s
we\'ll have solved
the root cause of so much hurt, they\'ll inherit
by following
our doomed examples...
(just such a relatable read, dear Fay
beautifully unfurled)
January 20th, 2022 07:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'mindless of relationship\'s worth.\'
if we but could
find a way, to correct this One curse
from faltering our future generations, unmapped horizon\'s
we\'ll have solved
the root cause of so much hurt, they\'ll inherit
by following
our doomed examples...
(just such a relatable read, dear Fay
beautifully unfurled)
January 20th, 2022 07:46
Mislaid
Paul Bell said:
It\'s the weirdest thing when relationships crash. Couples don\'t move into the future, but play out the relationship in the past. You can see how therapists make a fortune.
January 20th, 2022 06:33
Paul Bell said:
It\'s the weirdest thing when relationships crash. Couples don\'t move into the future, but play out the relationship in the past. You can see how therapists make a fortune.
January 20th, 2022 06:33
Mislaid
dusk arising said:
With age has come patience, understanding and a less demanding attitude.... perhaps repair patches to buy time when younger will save losing the most important relationship in ones life. And not have to live through the regrets of losing it together with the subsequent heartaches earned from follow-on relationships with others. Easy to be philosophical with hindsight for me.
Another fine piece of writing Fay which certainly chimed for me.
January 20th, 2022 05:29
dusk arising said:
With age has come patience, understanding and a less demanding attitude.... perhaps repair patches to buy time when younger will save losing the most important relationship in ones life. And not have to live through the regrets of losing it together with the subsequent heartaches earned from follow-on relationships with others. Easy to be philosophical with hindsight for me.
Another fine piece of writing Fay which certainly chimed for me.
January 20th, 2022 05:29
Invitation
dusk arising said:
Yes, when so much has been right there can be a place to put away the wrong. What finer place than there, where together you celebrate the beauty and ecstacy of love\'s riches.
January 19th, 2022 11:37
dusk arising said:
Yes, when so much has been right there can be a place to put away the wrong. What finer place than there, where together you celebrate the beauty and ecstacy of love\'s riches.
January 19th, 2022 11:37
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