Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
In Motion
Neville said:
one might very easily drown here & willingly ......................................... x
December 22nd, 2021 11:14
Neville said:
one might very easily drown here & willingly ......................................... x
December 22nd, 2021 11:14
In Motion
karvelD said:
I really felt I was by a stream made by your words. Lovely composition. Ty_/\\_:)
December 22nd, 2021 08:22
karvelD said:
I really felt I was by a stream made by your words. Lovely composition. Ty_/\\_:)
December 22nd, 2021 08:22
In Motion
dusk arising said:
You bring to life the energy of a country stream here. A life so beautiful yet so easily overlooked. The undemanding calmness of a streamside allows us to wonder at the magnificence of nature where the richness of life gathers to drink of the bounty slipping by over polished stones of ages past.
December 22nd, 2021 06:15
dusk arising said:
You bring to life the energy of a country stream here. A life so beautiful yet so easily overlooked. The undemanding calmness of a streamside allows us to wonder at the magnificence of nature where the richness of life gathers to drink of the bounty slipping by over polished stones of ages past.
December 22nd, 2021 06:15
In Motion
Rozina said:
I can see and hear this magic from your words. Lovely poem.
December 22nd, 2021 03:54
Rozina said:
I can see and hear this magic from your words. Lovely poem.
December 22nd, 2021 03:54
In Motion
woundedheart said:
From babbling brook to raging river each have their own magic and majesty, very beautiful poem FS.
December 22nd, 2021 03:34
woundedheart said:
From babbling brook to raging river each have their own magic and majesty, very beautiful poem FS.
December 22nd, 2021 03:34
In Motion
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, I could hear that river.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 03:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, I could hear that river.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 03:25
My Friend
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I say the same of Fido, though he does not exist! He is not friendly when poets do not mark poems 18+ though. lol.
How could anyone not like her?!
So much animal cruelty in the world. Yet so much - more we hope - animal kindness.
December 22nd, 2021 02:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I say the same of Fido, though he does not exist! He is not friendly when poets do not mark poems 18+ though. lol.
How could anyone not like her?!
So much animal cruelty in the world. Yet so much - more we hope - animal kindness.
December 22nd, 2021 02:49
My Friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about man\'s/woman\'s best friend.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about man\'s/woman\'s best friend.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 02:01
My Friend
Coyote said:
Ah Fay, the only thing better than a good dog is two good dogs. Wonderfully penned my friend.
December 21st, 2021 15:47
Coyote said:
Ah Fay, the only thing better than a good dog is two good dogs. Wonderfully penned my friend.
December 21st, 2021 15:47
My Friend
dusk arising said:
Gorgeous looking lil dawg you have there (what breed is she?).
From your words today one might get the impression you two are quite attached..... but isn\'t it marvellous how a dawg can co-exist quite contented with us and obviously really enjoy our company and vice-versa. Yep, I love \'em.
December 21st, 2021 11:49
dusk arising said:
Gorgeous looking lil dawg you have there (what breed is she?).
From your words today one might get the impression you two are quite attached..... but isn\'t it marvellous how a dawg can co-exist quite contented with us and obviously really enjoy our company and vice-versa. Yep, I love \'em.
December 21st, 2021 11:49
My Friend
Neville said:
Fur wrapped luverlyness .... you can beat an egg, but ya can\'t beat a dog now can ya ....................................... x
December 21st, 2021 11:32
Neville said:
Fur wrapped luverlyness .... you can beat an egg, but ya can\'t beat a dog now can ya ....................................... x
December 21st, 2021 11:32
My Friend
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , Fay 🙂🙂 I love animals . I’m glad you have a dog to keep you company
December 21st, 2021 09:22
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , Fay 🙂🙂 I love animals . I’m glad you have a dog to keep you company
December 21st, 2021 09:22
One More
Neville said:
A lifetime captured & held fast now for all of time left .. a magnificent & most accurate depiction I fear ..
between just you & me .. I do believe I was there maybe .. Passchendaele that is .. and that portrait up there is far too familiar by half ...
not surprisingly then, I have a lump in my throat the size of a greengage .......................... N x
December 21st, 2021 03:56
Neville said:
A lifetime captured & held fast now for all of time left .. a magnificent & most accurate depiction I fear ..
between just you & me .. I do believe I was there maybe .. Passchendaele that is .. and that portrait up there is far too familiar by half ...
not surprisingly then, I have a lump in my throat the size of a greengage .......................... N x
December 21st, 2021 03:56
One More
Goldfinch60 said:
What a brilliant poem Fay, it must go into my favourites.
Andy
December 19th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
What a brilliant poem Fay, it must go into my favourites.
Andy
December 19th, 2021 01:47
One More
Saxon Crow said:
Beautiful story Fay. A very well captured moment of history
December 18th, 2021 13:53
Saxon Crow said:
Beautiful story Fay. A very well captured moment of history
December 18th, 2021 13:53
One More
spilleronsheet said:
Very emotive Dear Fay
A distraught scene built in my mind
An estranged lady passed in my memories beside
I remembered my school nurse
She was a very kind lady. Held so many griefs yet she never cried. I don’t know why but your poetry made my memories revive.
Thanks a lot daer Fay for sharing this.
December 18th, 2021 11:49
spilleronsheet said:
Very emotive Dear Fay
A distraught scene built in my mind
An estranged lady passed in my memories beside
I remembered my school nurse
She was a very kind lady. Held so many griefs yet she never cried. I don’t know why but your poetry made my memories revive.
Thanks a lot daer Fay for sharing this.
December 18th, 2021 11:49
Arousal
L. B. Mek said:
\'I draw in brighter breath
and whisper
more tease, by sliding
pink limbs
between tight resistance\'..
breathtakingly immersive
to say the least, dear Fay
Bravo!
December 17th, 2021 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'I draw in brighter breath
and whisper
more tease, by sliding
pink limbs
between tight resistance\'..
breathtakingly immersive
to say the least, dear Fay
Bravo!
December 17th, 2021 06:07
Arousal
spilleronsheet said:
I feel it’s the night and day in play
Such sensual write
The words doing justice of teasing beside
December 17th, 2021 05:59
spilleronsheet said:
I feel it’s the night and day in play
Such sensual write
The words doing justice of teasing beside
December 17th, 2021 05:59
His Call
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay, a person from the past has returned maybe.
Andy
December 17th, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay, a person from the past has returned maybe.
Andy
December 17th, 2021 01:53
His Call
Coyote said:
This one grabbed me from the first line and never let go. AWESOME write Fay!
December 16th, 2021 16:52
Coyote said:
This one grabbed me from the first line and never let go. AWESOME write Fay!
December 16th, 2021 16:52
His Call
Neville said:
okay guv\'nor he say\'s with a grin ... it woz me .......... luverly Fay n truly .. x
December 16th, 2021 13:54
Neville said:
okay guv\'nor he say\'s with a grin ... it woz me .......... luverly Fay n truly .. x
December 16th, 2021 13:54
His Call
spilleronsheet said:
The never ending conversations that kept us alive
The interconnectivity despite so far away
Maybe the technology still kindles the flame
It’s a delight to read such a beautiful poetry dear Fay
December 16th, 2021 11:05
spilleronsheet said:
The never ending conversations that kept us alive
The interconnectivity despite so far away
Maybe the technology still kindles the flame
It’s a delight to read such a beautiful poetry dear Fay
December 16th, 2021 11:05
His Call
L. B. Mek said:
these words remind me of love, in the eyes of teen angst
when we tried to stay up, talking all night
wake-up with our mobiles
plastered to our cheeks or necks
and whisper
a tentative spluttering, \'hello\'
then feel our face
heating crimson
at the sweet voice responding
\'finally, thought you\'d never get up\'..
(before we have our latest
mini break-up, over who
was snoring loudest... lol)
a wonderful scene you\'ve weaved in ink, dear Fay
thanks for sharing
December 16th, 2021 07:20
L. B. Mek said:
these words remind me of love, in the eyes of teen angst
when we tried to stay up, talking all night
wake-up with our mobiles
plastered to our cheeks or necks
and whisper
a tentative spluttering, \'hello\'
then feel our face
heating crimson
at the sweet voice responding
\'finally, thought you\'d never get up\'..
(before we have our latest
mini break-up, over who
was snoring loudest... lol)
a wonderful scene you\'ve weaved in ink, dear Fay
thanks for sharing
December 16th, 2021 07:20
His Call
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey missus its them saucy dreams of yours again making me spill my cuppa.
\"bliss drips on surrender and nectar infiltrates\" ... lovely words and then waking slowly robs you of the dreams reality..... grrrrr why do we have to awaken sometimes.... it would be blissful just to hovver in dreamland... but then..... who would tend the vegetable patch and pay the council tax..... call me killjoy.
So this beautiful dream of yours (and I know how beautiful such dreams can be) do you think he knows you dream of him..... do you think it\'s reciprocated..... such ideas are the fun of daydreams.
December 16th, 2021 05:36
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey missus its them saucy dreams of yours again making me spill my cuppa.
\"bliss drips on surrender and nectar infiltrates\" ... lovely words and then waking slowly robs you of the dreams reality..... grrrrr why do we have to awaken sometimes.... it would be blissful just to hovver in dreamland... but then..... who would tend the vegetable patch and pay the council tax..... call me killjoy.
So this beautiful dream of yours (and I know how beautiful such dreams can be) do you think he knows you dream of him..... do you think it\'s reciprocated..... such ideas are the fun of daydreams.
December 16th, 2021 05:36
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