Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Invitation
Paul Bell said:
Nothing better than a bit of erotica to cheer your day up. I\'m in the throes of desire, though it could also be delirium.
January 19th, 2022 09:19
Paul Bell said:
Nothing better than a bit of erotica to cheer your day up. I\'m in the throes of desire, though it could also be delirium.
January 19th, 2022 09:19
Invitation
Keith said:
Beautiful in every way - wonderful form - not only do you have a touch of Hopkins I sense the spirit of John Donne within your style also! Impressive.
January 19th, 2022 06:57
Keith said:
Beautiful in every way - wonderful form - not only do you have a touch of Hopkins I sense the spirit of John Donne within your style also! Impressive.
January 19th, 2022 06:57
Invitation
Neville said:
this is splendid & on so very many different levels .. if you could just let me have your number again, I\'ll set off straight after me breakfast
.. surely one of your very finest Fay .. Neville x
January 19th, 2022 05:22
Neville said:
this is splendid & on so very many different levels .. if you could just let me have your number again, I\'ll set off straight after me breakfast
.. surely one of your very finest Fay .. Neville x
January 19th, 2022 05:22
Invitation
spilleronsheet said:
A very different genre from you miss Fay
So intense
January 19th, 2022 05:10
spilleronsheet said:
A very different genre from you miss Fay
So intense
January 19th, 2022 05:10
Allure
Goldfinch60 said:
\"where earth married to ocean breeds
such savage beauty.\"
Such wonderful words at the end of a beautiful poem Fay. I have been to Cornwall but not down that far - I will have to go.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
\"where earth married to ocean breeds
such savage beauty.\"
Such wonderful words at the end of a beautiful poem Fay. I have been to Cornwall but not down that far - I will have to go.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:42
Allure
GypsyLady said:
I never been to Cornwall, but your imagery has taken me there in this beautifully wild, windswept poem! Amazing!
January 18th, 2022 11:39
GypsyLady said:
I never been to Cornwall, but your imagery has taken me there in this beautifully wild, windswept poem! Amazing!
January 18th, 2022 11:39
Allure
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful miss Fay
When the world still not open as before
When the abnormal still in score
Here I take my eyes to travel the world through your lines
January 18th, 2022 09:20
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful miss Fay
When the world still not open as before
When the abnormal still in score
Here I take my eyes to travel the world through your lines
January 18th, 2022 09:20
Allure
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Never been,but you paint such a picture,..now I have.🌹✌🕊
January 18th, 2022 09:10
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Never been,but you paint such a picture,..now I have.🌹✌🕊
January 18th, 2022 09:10
Allure
L. B. Mek said:
\'If you wish to breathe air, sieved
to pure ether by saline
turn, to those rarely used paths
and thrill
at long patches of house-less wilderness
anciently remaining, unmatched.\'
(\'Belerion\' thy unsurpassed, divine
of Nature\'s majesty
and antiquity\'s, once fabled welcoming warmth
seat of all-thing\'s, unhurried
by the whimsy of Time!)
simply, Brilliant dear Fay
a worthy ballad
in dedication to one of Blighty\'s
most beloved: iconic landmarks.
January 18th, 2022 07:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'If you wish to breathe air, sieved
to pure ether by saline
turn, to those rarely used paths
and thrill
at long patches of house-less wilderness
anciently remaining, unmatched.\'
(\'Belerion\' thy unsurpassed, divine
of Nature\'s majesty
and antiquity\'s, once fabled welcoming warmth
seat of all-thing\'s, unhurried
by the whimsy of Time!)
simply, Brilliant dear Fay
a worthy ballad
in dedication to one of Blighty\'s
most beloved: iconic landmarks.
January 18th, 2022 07:32
Allure
Neville said:
this has everything of Kernow infused within each word, line & stanza .. I doubt whether such a tribute could ever be bettered ......... N x
January 18th, 2022 04:12
Neville said:
this has everything of Kernow infused within each word, line & stanza .. I doubt whether such a tribute could ever be bettered ......... N x
January 18th, 2022 04:12
Allure
dusk arising said:
I know that stretch of Cornwall where you would not believe you are in the same county as Newquay or Perranporth. Here the wild is as wild as any windswept cliff top in the nation. Houses are sparse and low until further south west where St Just boasts wilderness braved by past cornishfolk in the statuesque remains of coastal mining courage. Nothing twee or kiss me quick as Atlantic winds storm and batter. Find an upright tree if you can for each leaning form bears testament to the struggle of this environment.
Your words took me there Fay.
January 18th, 2022 03:32
dusk arising said:
I know that stretch of Cornwall where you would not believe you are in the same county as Newquay or Perranporth. Here the wild is as wild as any windswept cliff top in the nation. Houses are sparse and low until further south west where St Just boasts wilderness braved by past cornishfolk in the statuesque remains of coastal mining courage. Nothing twee or kiss me quick as Atlantic winds storm and batter. Find an upright tree if you can for each leaning form bears testament to the struggle of this environment.
Your words took me there Fay.
January 18th, 2022 03:32
Allure
Rozina said:
I went to Cornwall, to Land\'s End many years back. A lovely place and your poem brought back beautiful memories.
January 18th, 2022 03:08
Rozina said:
I went to Cornwall, to Land\'s End many years back. A lovely place and your poem brought back beautiful memories.
January 18th, 2022 03:08
Internment
dusk arising said:
Enraged by the ignorance keeping beauty encaged.
January 17th, 2022 09:14
dusk arising said:
Enraged by the ignorance keeping beauty encaged.
January 17th, 2022 09:14
Internment
L. B. Mek said:
how brief, life\'s hurried - skip
from our cyclical internment\'s
to that abrupt, finale: interment...
(Brilliantly conceived and executed,
just another joy of a poetic treat, dear Fay
thank you! )
January 17th, 2022 08:16
L. B. Mek said:
how brief, life\'s hurried - skip
from our cyclical internment\'s
to that abrupt, finale: interment...
(Brilliantly conceived and executed,
just another joy of a poetic treat, dear Fay
thank you! )
January 17th, 2022 08:16
Internment
Rozina said:
Never meant to be imprisoned. Free them, freedom. Beautiful lines.
January 17th, 2022 04:58
Rozina said:
Never meant to be imprisoned. Free them, freedom. Beautiful lines.
January 17th, 2022 04:58
Winding Down
Keith said:
You paint a beautiful scene here, Fay. I like the way you form your lines and your sense of rhythm and your use of alliteration is clever and well employed.
January 17th, 2022 04:31
Keith said:
You paint a beautiful scene here, Fay. I like the way you form your lines and your sense of rhythm and your use of alliteration is clever and well employed.
January 17th, 2022 04:31
Internment
spilleronsheet said:
The soul felt captivated by those words
The words that shall free the lost chained self
Look how wonderfully the bird could finally escape in its paradise
A very dreary and compassionate write dear Fay
Such elegant words at display
January 17th, 2022 04:29
spilleronsheet said:
The soul felt captivated by those words
The words that shall free the lost chained self
Look how wonderfully the bird could finally escape in its paradise
A very dreary and compassionate write dear Fay
Such elegant words at display
January 17th, 2022 04:29
Internment
Neville said:
A cage filled with untold sorrow .. but given a voice through the compassionate pen of a mighty fine poet ........... Free them all I say and watch em fly high ........ N x
January 17th, 2022 03:53
Neville said:
A cage filled with untold sorrow .. but given a voice through the compassionate pen of a mighty fine poet ........... Free them all I say and watch em fly high ........ N x
January 17th, 2022 03:53
Internment
Goldfinch60 said:
May that open door be there for us all Fay.
Andy
January 17th, 2022 03:35
Goldfinch60 said:
May that open door be there for us all Fay.
Andy
January 17th, 2022 03:35
Would I
Neville said:
dear lord if only I could bring my set of pencils and a rubber or two ....... x
this is nowt short of excellent my lady F :)
January 15th, 2022 14:04
Neville said:
dear lord if only I could bring my set of pencils and a rubber or two ....... x
this is nowt short of excellent my lady F :)
January 15th, 2022 14:04
Re-Shaping
woundedheart said:
A beautiful poem dear friend and a happy New year to you also ☺
January 6th, 2022 11:17
woundedheart said:
A beautiful poem dear friend and a happy New year to you also ☺
January 6th, 2022 11:17
Would I
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow... A definite favorite for me Fay. It\'s classic to say the least. Evergreen in its sentiment!
January 6th, 2022 04:36
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow... A definite favorite for me Fay. It\'s classic to say the least. Evergreen in its sentiment!
January 6th, 2022 04:36
Would I
Goldfinch60 said:
If the love was so strong Fay of course you would.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
If the love was so strong Fay of course you would.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:29
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