Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Her Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of a lost one will never leave you, as I well know.
Andy
December 1st, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of a lost one will never leave you, as I well know.
Andy
December 1st, 2021 01:30
Her Love
Victor Tango 12 said:
The loss of someone we love is one of life\'s greatest trials. Out of sight but close to the heart so they say... Far from comforting, such thoughts sometimes cause even more anguish. Each person mourns at their own pace, some overcome easier, other never get over the pain of loss. I\'m afraid I\'m one of them.
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VT12
November 30th, 2021 17:52
Victor Tango 12 said:
The loss of someone we love is one of life\'s greatest trials. Out of sight but close to the heart so they say... Far from comforting, such thoughts sometimes cause even more anguish. Each person mourns at their own pace, some overcome easier, other never get over the pain of loss. I\'m afraid I\'m one of them.
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VT12
November 30th, 2021 17:52
Her Love
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry is truly empathetic
Such sadness it is laced with
Losing a closed one can’t be described
Tears wish to come, yet an expressionless emotion we may hold
It’s surprising and grief stricken, when we realise that someone whom we saw so often is no more
Hugs to you my dear poetess
November 30th, 2021 12:48
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry is truly empathetic
Such sadness it is laced with
Losing a closed one can’t be described
Tears wish to come, yet an expressionless emotion we may hold
It’s surprising and grief stricken, when we realise that someone whom we saw so often is no more
Hugs to you my dear poetess
November 30th, 2021 12:48
Her Love
Neville said:
as you no doubt already know .. these words of yours will surely make this grown man cry ........................... x
November 30th, 2021 12:15
Neville said:
as you no doubt already know .. these words of yours will surely make this grown man cry ........................... x
November 30th, 2021 12:15
Her Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yet her love
has not let us cry,
as quenched need
knows she rests\'..
love your wording of implied strength, in these words
necessary, to overcome the inevitable strife
we accumulate, in life..
(sorry for your loss, dear Fay
love the calm, in the suffering
you\'ve
helped reveal
in this poignantly worded, dedication)
November 30th, 2021 07:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yet her love
has not let us cry,
as quenched need
knows she rests\'..
love your wording of implied strength, in these words
necessary, to overcome the inevitable strife
we accumulate, in life..
(sorry for your loss, dear Fay
love the calm, in the suffering
you\'ve
helped reveal
in this poignantly worded, dedication)
November 30th, 2021 07:32
Her Love
Lorna said:
Winter and death.... maybe the best time to die so that the joy of summer sunshine doesn\'t make mockery of the end of life....it seems so appropriate to lie down in the peace of winter fields.....
November 30th, 2021 05:51
Lorna said:
Winter and death.... maybe the best time to die so that the joy of summer sunshine doesn\'t make mockery of the end of life....it seems so appropriate to lie down in the peace of winter fields.....
November 30th, 2021 05:51
Her Love
dusk arising said:
Sad words of loss and adjustment as the onset of winter seems to take away the vibrance and colour of life all around with it\'s relentless bone chilling reminder of how frail life can be.
November 30th, 2021 05:35
dusk arising said:
Sad words of loss and adjustment as the onset of winter seems to take away the vibrance and colour of life all around with it\'s relentless bone chilling reminder of how frail life can be.
November 30th, 2021 05:35
Changes.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Fay !! Very beautiful expression ..Good one...
November 29th, 2021 23:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Fay !! Very beautiful expression ..Good one...
November 29th, 2021 23:40
In The Making
SureshG said:
It’s magic to know how perfection takes shape, it’s inner satisfaction when one learns how to create perfection, it’s something else when one puts it to perfection
Thanks
November 29th, 2021 19:24
SureshG said:
It’s magic to know how perfection takes shape, it’s inner satisfaction when one learns how to create perfection, it’s something else when one puts it to perfection
Thanks
November 29th, 2021 19:24
In The Making
Lorna said:
You are the master of showing us other worlds Fay.... you\'ve done similar before and I always love them....
November 29th, 2021 12:51
Lorna said:
You are the master of showing us other worlds Fay.... you\'ve done similar before and I always love them....
November 29th, 2021 12:51
In The Making
Nicholas Browning said:
Symphony is everywhere. A poetry may be a song, or a painting. A serenade perhaps the brightest image ever to graze your mind. And work well done could be your legacy.
Well done Fay. A thoroughly enjoyed read.
November 29th, 2021 07:25
Nicholas Browning said:
Symphony is everywhere. A poetry may be a song, or a painting. A serenade perhaps the brightest image ever to graze your mind. And work well done could be your legacy.
Well done Fay. A thoroughly enjoyed read.
November 29th, 2021 07:25
In The Making
L. B. Mek said:
how well, you\'ve captured
forgotten time\'s, immortalised
in this poignant artwork
of Artisan\'s;
a time when apprentice
was a word: of virtue
and learning
meant communing, with those
who imbued love and Art
in-to all, that they crafted
by hand...
another wonderfully vivid poem, dear Fay
November 29th, 2021 07:02
L. B. Mek said:
how well, you\'ve captured
forgotten time\'s, immortalised
in this poignant artwork
of Artisan\'s;
a time when apprentice
was a word: of virtue
and learning
meant communing, with those
who imbued love and Art
in-to all, that they crafted
by hand...
another wonderfully vivid poem, dear Fay
November 29th, 2021 07:02
In The Making
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay, gone are the days of such enthusiasm from the young (by and large). As a now retired tradesman I had many young fellas come along thinking they wanted apprenticeships but the reality soon brought out their true characters.
I really enjoyed your romance with the old tradesman\'s workshop environment. I have been in such places and taken the time to look around and drink in the atmosphere. Times change but there will always be a place for the highly skilled tradesman.
A very enjoyable read which took me through quite a few memories.
November 29th, 2021 05:49
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay, gone are the days of such enthusiasm from the young (by and large). As a now retired tradesman I had many young fellas come along thinking they wanted apprenticeships but the reality soon brought out their true characters.
I really enjoyed your romance with the old tradesman\'s workshop environment. I have been in such places and taken the time to look around and drink in the atmosphere. Times change but there will always be a place for the highly skilled tradesman.
A very enjoyable read which took me through quite a few memories.
November 29th, 2021 05:49
In The Making
Doggerel Dave said:
You have captured perfectly the apparent chaos but actual order of a true craftsman\'s workshop, Fay.
(Going to get married ? Feels like there\'s an embedded subtle metaphor there relating to the construction of a large wooden cross.... 😊 .)
November 29th, 2021 05:44
Doggerel Dave said:
You have captured perfectly the apparent chaos but actual order of a true craftsman\'s workshop, Fay.
(Going to get married ? Feels like there\'s an embedded subtle metaphor there relating to the construction of a large wooden cross.... 😊 .)
November 29th, 2021 05:44
In The Making
Neville said:
what an absolute marvel you are dear lady Fay ... I could smell, taste and feel my fathers old workshop & no kiddin ... am left wondering how & where you gained such insights that equipped you for such an undertaking as this little beauty .... x
November 29th, 2021 04:35
Neville said:
what an absolute marvel you are dear lady Fay ... I could smell, taste and feel my fathers old workshop & no kiddin ... am left wondering how & where you gained such insights that equipped you for such an undertaking as this little beauty .... x
November 29th, 2021 04:35
In The Making
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. In my years as an inspector of building maintenance I have seen some marvellous craftsmen at work.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 04:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay. In my years as an inspector of building maintenance I have seen some marvellous craftsmen at work.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 04:04
Sunday Shores
Goldfinch60 said:
May that lay-in always bring peace to you Fay.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
May that lay-in always bring peace to you Fay.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 02:20
Sunday Shores
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories: Sunday certainly differed from every other day of the week during a very much earlier part of my life. As a kid, In the big city everyone was home and house redecorating was in full swing..
The Sunday you portray brings back memories of a seaside holiday. Something I loved.
Thanks for that, Fay.
November 28th, 2021 18:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories: Sunday certainly differed from every other day of the week during a very much earlier part of my life. As a kid, In the big city everyone was home and house redecorating was in full swing..
The Sunday you portray brings back memories of a seaside holiday. Something I loved.
Thanks for that, Fay.
November 28th, 2021 18:19
Exchange
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An heated exchange definitely. I love how you mold the unseen into clear view here Fay. Beautifully written.
November 28th, 2021 14:12
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An heated exchange definitely. I love how you mold the unseen into clear view here Fay. Beautifully written.
November 28th, 2021 14:12
Sunday Shores
Neville said:
This is superb Fay ... I could read it over and over and not find any fault .. and my word, I could just stare at it for ages ... in fact, I have done both .. x
November 28th, 2021 14:00
Neville said:
This is superb Fay ... I could read it over and over and not find any fault .. and my word, I could just stare at it for ages ... in fact, I have done both .. x
November 28th, 2021 14:00
Sunday Shores
dusk arising said:
Sundays are when your muse recharges her batteries I imagine here. Had to read this several times as i thought you were describing ypurself as cold-caught stored cargo.... which i couldn\'t settle with LOL
November 28th, 2021 12:35
dusk arising said:
Sundays are when your muse recharges her batteries I imagine here. Had to read this several times as i thought you were describing ypurself as cold-caught stored cargo.... which i couldn\'t settle with LOL
November 28th, 2021 12:35
Sunday Shores
spilleronsheet said:
So true Sunday is a sigh of relief after running for a week
Though for some even Sunday doesn’t bring respite
Mothers are seen working even on weekdays time
Beautiful expression dear Fay
November 28th, 2021 11:51
spilleronsheet said:
So true Sunday is a sigh of relief after running for a week
Though for some even Sunday doesn’t bring respite
Mothers are seen working even on weekdays time
Beautiful expression dear Fay
November 28th, 2021 11:51
Exchange
SureshG said:
Gentleness is in your words, heat was in the way I perceived, had to step out into the cold
November 28th, 2021 10:43
SureshG said:
Gentleness is in your words, heat was in the way I perceived, had to step out into the cold
November 28th, 2021 10:43
Exchange
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words showing that kiss can be so overwhelmingly passionate Fay.
Andy
November 28th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words showing that kiss can be so overwhelmingly passionate Fay.
Andy
November 28th, 2021 01:36
Exchange
Lorna said:
Phew Fay! A hot one! Bring it on - the weather is cold here......
November 27th, 2021 12:45
Lorna said:
Phew Fay! A hot one! Bring it on - the weather is cold here......
November 27th, 2021 12:45
Exchange
dusk arising said:
Lovely capture here. The magic of two souls wanting again to share, taking and giving of pleasure. The mutual sharing, pleasures of receiving and the knowing of this union finds what you both are.
November 27th, 2021 09:00
dusk arising said:
Lovely capture here. The magic of two souls wanting again to share, taking and giving of pleasure. The mutual sharing, pleasures of receiving and the knowing of this union finds what you both are.
November 27th, 2021 09:00
Exchange
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m glad some one(s) are having fun!
I\'ve fainted now. It\'s too much for me. Neville knows it would be! lol.
November 27th, 2021 05:54
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m glad some one(s) are having fun!
I\'ve fainted now. It\'s too much for me. Neville knows it would be! lol.
November 27th, 2021 05:54
Exchange
Paul Bell said:
A bit of Saturday erotica to stir the loins. Are you allowed to use loins on this site? Anyway, I think they both came together in splendid harmony.
November 27th, 2021 05:45
Paul Bell said:
A bit of Saturday erotica to stir the loins. Are you allowed to use loins on this site? Anyway, I think they both came together in splendid harmony.
November 27th, 2021 05:45
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