Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Evolving
Lorna said:
Good images of people trying to evolve Fay - if they make it that long!
December 6th, 2021 05:20
Lorna said:
Good images of people trying to evolve Fay - if they make it that long!
December 6th, 2021 05:20
Wintery Sky
L. B. Mek said:
worded passion at witnessing
such a breathtakingly mesmeric scene,
I especially like your sparse wording, dear Fay
as-if stating, such beauty
need not be diluted by endless explanation
Nature\'s grace: is - just is!
all we need do
is witness poetic and appreciate sincere...
December 6th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
worded passion at witnessing
such a breathtakingly mesmeric scene,
I especially like your sparse wording, dear Fay
as-if stating, such beauty
need not be diluted by endless explanation
Nature\'s grace: is - just is!
all we need do
is witness poetic and appreciate sincere...
December 6th, 2021 04:54
Wintery Sky
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s wrong with hot sweaty sub tropical summery dawn sky (apart from the hot sweaty bit)?
Vivid miniature picture you paint there, Fay - last line (two?) is something I shall try to hold in my head.....
December 5th, 2021 23:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s wrong with hot sweaty sub tropical summery dawn sky (apart from the hot sweaty bit)?
Vivid miniature picture you paint there, Fay - last line (two?) is something I shall try to hold in my head.....
December 5th, 2021 23:04
Wintery Sky
Neville said:
Just what I needed as I wind my way slowly up the hill & into bed .. my skylight provides the perfect frame for such delights ................. x
December 5th, 2021 16:52
Neville said:
Just what I needed as I wind my way slowly up the hill & into bed .. my skylight provides the perfect frame for such delights ................. x
December 5th, 2021 16:52
Incomparable
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
Love does have a way of staying young. I still feel sexy at 83.
December 3rd, 2021 16:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
Love does have a way of staying young. I still feel sexy at 83.
December 3rd, 2021 16:42
Incomparable
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your awesome poem is definitely in a class of its own. Your writings amaze me. It’s such a pleasure and delight to read your poetry.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laura🌻
December 3rd, 2021 16:23
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Your awesome poem is definitely in a class of its own. Your writings amaze me. It’s such a pleasure and delight to read your poetry.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laura🌻
December 3rd, 2021 16:23
Incomparable
orchidee said:
Bit of French there from Neville?! lol.
Non-wotsit. A fine write Fay.
December 3rd, 2021 13:56
orchidee said:
Bit of French there from Neville?! lol.
Non-wotsit. A fine write Fay.
December 3rd, 2021 13:56
Incomparable
SureshG said:
…and so now you torment us with blissful words, for its not enough to have left the youth behind and just reminisce….
December 3rd, 2021 11:31
SureshG said:
…and so now you torment us with blissful words, for its not enough to have left the youth behind and just reminisce….
December 3rd, 2021 11:31
Incomparable
Michael Edwards said:
Oh the joys of youthful reverie recaptured as I read your forever incomparable words.
December 3rd, 2021 10:08
Michael Edwards said:
Oh the joys of youthful reverie recaptured as I read your forever incomparable words.
December 3rd, 2021 10:08
Incomparable
dusk arising said:
And upon that plane may the pleasing calm of slumber overide these aches of age and blissfully accompany my dreams into embraces of passionate fervour where youth and vigour excite to life.
I was taken into your poetry wholeheartedly.
December 3rd, 2021 08:57
dusk arising said:
And upon that plane may the pleasing calm of slumber overide these aches of age and blissfully accompany my dreams into embraces of passionate fervour where youth and vigour excite to life.
I was taken into your poetry wholeheartedly.
December 3rd, 2021 08:57
Incomparable
Neville said:
nonpariel is a word I have only rarely used before ... but, it seems appropriate to use write here & now .. x
December 3rd, 2021 08:05
Neville said:
nonpariel is a word I have only rarely used before ... but, it seems appropriate to use write here & now .. x
December 3rd, 2021 08:05
Faking
Garth Rakumakoe said:
All is fair in love and war they say. This piece points out just how unfair and hurtful things in love can be. Well written, dear Fay.
December 2nd, 2021 07:17
Garth Rakumakoe said:
All is fair in love and war they say. This piece points out just how unfair and hurtful things in love can be. Well written, dear Fay.
December 2nd, 2021 07:17
Faking
Caring dove said:
Some people simply like to lie and are not to be trusted . It’s difficult sometimes , because we want to feel we can trust someone .. I guess we have to try to trust ourselves and what feels right or wrong . But sometimes we just can’t tell ,
A good writing , Fay 🙂
December 2nd, 2021 02:30
Caring dove said:
Some people simply like to lie and are not to be trusted . It’s difficult sometimes , because we want to feel we can trust someone .. I guess we have to try to trust ourselves and what feels right or wrong . But sometimes we just can’t tell ,
A good writing , Fay 🙂
December 2nd, 2021 02:30
Faking
Goldfinch60 said:
That deceit is appalling, love is such a special thing and must always be real.
Andy
December 2nd, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That deceit is appalling, love is such a special thing and must always be real.
Andy
December 2nd, 2021 01:54
Faking
SureshG said:
Loneliness makes us a target of deceit, and it’s even more painful when wrapped in the cushion of love, as your words have so exposed
December 1st, 2021 12:33
SureshG said:
Loneliness makes us a target of deceit, and it’s even more painful when wrapped in the cushion of love, as your words have so exposed
December 1st, 2021 12:33
Faking
Lorna said:
What a message and one hardly ever mentioned - to do that intentionally! Like chalking bomber strikes on the side of a plane .... trophies....
December 1st, 2021 06:26
Lorna said:
What a message and one hardly ever mentioned - to do that intentionally! Like chalking bomber strikes on the side of a plane .... trophies....
December 1st, 2021 06:26
Faking
Neville said:
deceit aint a four letter word, it is something worse than all of em put together ............ Some things go without saying ... ink well n truly spent Fay ................. x
December 1st, 2021 04:54
Neville said:
deceit aint a four letter word, it is something worse than all of em put together ............ Some things go without saying ... ink well n truly spent Fay ................. x
December 1st, 2021 04:54
Faking
dusk arising said:
I was never attractive enough to attract overt declarations of love. LOL Nor was I one to bandy the word or phrase. Only ever leaving my lips when truly felt.
Though I can see that such falseness may have been a ploy to secure an entrance into a ladies boudoir in past times, I can\'t see that declarations of love are a necessity in 2021 to gain such access any more.
How times changed in the lifetime of us baby boomers.
December 1st, 2021 03:43
dusk arising said:
I was never attractive enough to attract overt declarations of love. LOL Nor was I one to bandy the word or phrase. Only ever leaving my lips when truly felt.
Though I can see that such falseness may have been a ploy to secure an entrance into a ladies boudoir in past times, I can\'t see that declarations of love are a necessity in 2021 to gain such access any more.
How times changed in the lifetime of us baby boomers.
December 1st, 2021 03:43
Her Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of a lost one will never leave you, as I well know.
Andy
December 1st, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of a lost one will never leave you, as I well know.
Andy
December 1st, 2021 01:30
Her Love
Victor Tango 12 said:
The loss of someone we love is one of life\'s greatest trials. Out of sight but close to the heart so they say... Far from comforting, such thoughts sometimes cause even more anguish. Each person mourns at their own pace, some overcome easier, other never get over the pain of loss. I\'m afraid I\'m one of them.
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VT12
November 30th, 2021 17:52
Victor Tango 12 said:
The loss of someone we love is one of life\'s greatest trials. Out of sight but close to the heart so they say... Far from comforting, such thoughts sometimes cause even more anguish. Each person mourns at their own pace, some overcome easier, other never get over the pain of loss. I\'m afraid I\'m one of them.
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VT12
November 30th, 2021 17:52
Her Love
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry is truly empathetic
Such sadness it is laced with
Losing a closed one can’t be described
Tears wish to come, yet an expressionless emotion we may hold
It’s surprising and grief stricken, when we realise that someone whom we saw so often is no more
Hugs to you my dear poetess
November 30th, 2021 12:48
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry is truly empathetic
Such sadness it is laced with
Losing a closed one can’t be described
Tears wish to come, yet an expressionless emotion we may hold
It’s surprising and grief stricken, when we realise that someone whom we saw so often is no more
Hugs to you my dear poetess
November 30th, 2021 12:48
Her Love
Neville said:
as you no doubt already know .. these words of yours will surely make this grown man cry ........................... x
November 30th, 2021 12:15
Neville said:
as you no doubt already know .. these words of yours will surely make this grown man cry ........................... x
November 30th, 2021 12:15
Her Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yet her love
has not let us cry,
as quenched need
knows she rests\'..
love your wording of implied strength, in these words
necessary, to overcome the inevitable strife
we accumulate, in life..
(sorry for your loss, dear Fay
love the calm, in the suffering
you\'ve
helped reveal
in this poignantly worded, dedication)
November 30th, 2021 07:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yet her love
has not let us cry,
as quenched need
knows she rests\'..
love your wording of implied strength, in these words
necessary, to overcome the inevitable strife
we accumulate, in life..
(sorry for your loss, dear Fay
love the calm, in the suffering
you\'ve
helped reveal
in this poignantly worded, dedication)
November 30th, 2021 07:32
Her Love
Lorna said:
Winter and death.... maybe the best time to die so that the joy of summer sunshine doesn\'t make mockery of the end of life....it seems so appropriate to lie down in the peace of winter fields.....
November 30th, 2021 05:51
Lorna said:
Winter and death.... maybe the best time to die so that the joy of summer sunshine doesn\'t make mockery of the end of life....it seems so appropriate to lie down in the peace of winter fields.....
November 30th, 2021 05:51
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