Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Together
dusk arising said:
One to one as neighbors we seem to get along until a politician or two creates mistrust. Politicians should be put in a boxing ring if they want to start a fight.
Your words have an eternal truth and are worthy of a peace prize. SAdly the masses of humanity cannot see the reasoning.
May 31st, 2021 02:51
dusk arising said:
One to one as neighbors we seem to get along until a politician or two creates mistrust. Politicians should be put in a boxing ring if they want to start a fight.
Your words have an eternal truth and are worthy of a peace prize. SAdly the masses of humanity cannot see the reasoning.
May 31st, 2021 02:51
Spent
SureshG said:
in whirl-crazy abandon
as love takes a bettering
Strewn together, words that exploit ecstacy.
May 30th, 2021 16:21
SureshG said:
in whirl-crazy abandon
as love takes a bettering
Strewn together, words that exploit ecstacy.
May 30th, 2021 16:21
Spent
Goldfinch60 said:
That hot season need never pass when love is within us.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That hot season need never pass when love is within us.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:25
Spent
orchidee said:
Any \'hot\' poems, and I faint - so I say! lol. It\'s me sheltered life. heehee.
May 29th, 2021 08:40
orchidee said:
Any \'hot\' poems, and I faint - so I say! lol. It\'s me sheltered life. heehee.
May 29th, 2021 08:40
Spent
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have had an interesting life, Fay Slimm - when and where can I purchase your \'reveal all\' autobiography?????
May 29th, 2021 07:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have had an interesting life, Fay Slimm - when and where can I purchase your \'reveal all\' autobiography?????
May 29th, 2021 07:32
Spent
dusk arising said:
Those of us living in the sometimes fertile lands outside a marriage come to know only too well the cyclical seasons of a love match. Include too the hopeful scattered seeds which never break soil. Hopeful, for when they do such a glorious blossoming enriches our lives with it\'s \'love summer\'.
The years bring patience and a knowing accepting peace. Memories of many summers.
The places my mind will travel to when reading your poetry is quite remarkable. A landscape of visions opens before me.
May 29th, 2021 03:46
dusk arising said:
Those of us living in the sometimes fertile lands outside a marriage come to know only too well the cyclical seasons of a love match. Include too the hopeful scattered seeds which never break soil. Hopeful, for when they do such a glorious blossoming enriches our lives with it\'s \'love summer\'.
The years bring patience and a knowing accepting peace. Memories of many summers.
The places my mind will travel to when reading your poetry is quite remarkable. A landscape of visions opens before me.
May 29th, 2021 03:46
Interference
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, it was as though I was that fish.
Andy
May 29th, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, it was as though I was that fish.
Andy
May 29th, 2021 01:53
Love\'s Glow
SureshG said:
Love certainly warms the cockles of ones heart, as do your words the literary world.
May 28th, 2021 23:34
SureshG said:
Love certainly warms the cockles of ones heart, as do your words the literary world.
May 28th, 2021 23:34
Interference
Dove said:
Beautifully done, What came first the photo or the poem? Such a peaceful and graceful poem, lovely imagery too
May 28th, 2021 17:58
Dove said:
Beautifully done, What came first the photo or the poem? Such a peaceful and graceful poem, lovely imagery too
May 28th, 2021 17:58
Interference
Neville said:
this one, is either one, or five of the very best .. whatever the case may be clearly depends on the way one looks at it or them ... there is no doubt whatsoever though, the interface is seamless ...........
... a very special kind of poetry my friend ......................................... N x
May 28th, 2021 07:02
Neville said:
this one, is either one, or five of the very best .. whatever the case may be clearly depends on the way one looks at it or them ... there is no doubt whatsoever though, the interface is seamless ...........
... a very special kind of poetry my friend ......................................... N x
May 28th, 2021 07:02
Interference
L. B. Mek said:
I remember this, (hope I\'m not mistaken)
one of your very best, dear Fay
a beautiful marriage
of imagery and artistry!
May 28th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
I remember this, (hope I\'m not mistaken)
one of your very best, dear Fay
a beautiful marriage
of imagery and artistry!
May 28th, 2021 05:15
Interference
dusk arising said:
A vision came as I read your words today. Nothing profound but a vision of Fay sat on the bank of the brook with her toes in the cool water so as to be closer to her subject. Calmly waiting for a fishy soul to enquire.
There is in your writing a sense of calm as time expires and the patient watching eye captures to become the knowing observer.
May 28th, 2021 04:34
dusk arising said:
A vision came as I read your words today. Nothing profound but a vision of Fay sat on the bank of the brook with her toes in the cool water so as to be closer to her subject. Calmly waiting for a fishy soul to enquire.
There is in your writing a sense of calm as time expires and the patient watching eye captures to become the knowing observer.
May 28th, 2021 04:34
Love\'s Glow
Neville said:
... to coin a phrase ...Love is all ya need ...
... warm glows & poetry apart ... this is something else
Neville ........................ x
May 28th, 2021 02:25
Neville said:
... to coin a phrase ...Love is all ya need ...
... warm glows & poetry apart ... this is something else
Neville ........................ x
May 28th, 2021 02:25
Love\'s Glow
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so very strong in our lives Fay and your words have shown this strength.
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so very strong in our lives Fay and your words have shown this strength.
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:06
Love\'s Glow
dusk arising said:
Love comes to us like the promised treasure at the end of that rainbow of desire we know with the colours of self protection harbouring hope. A gift so precious that it is truly priceless.
Your words today reminded me of the warm \'twoness\' of real love.
May 27th, 2021 12:22
dusk arising said:
Love comes to us like the promised treasure at the end of that rainbow of desire we know with the colours of self protection harbouring hope. A gift so precious that it is truly priceless.
Your words today reminded me of the warm \'twoness\' of real love.
May 27th, 2021 12:22
Love\'s Glow
AuburnScribbler said:
These two stanzas are true poetic medicine Fay, though beautifully delicate, they are mightily constructed.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
May 27th, 2021 07:02
AuburnScribbler said:
These two stanzas are true poetic medicine Fay, though beautifully delicate, they are mightily constructed.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
May 27th, 2021 07:02
Love\'s Glow
L. B. Mek said:
well I, do certainly feel
the magnetic capability you imbue within each write
empowering while nourishing our tapped-out, spirituality
a pathway to that lost language, devoid of words
where Nature guides us
through the wise words of her Poetess queens...
as ever I humbly thank you, dear Fay
May 27th, 2021 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
well I, do certainly feel
the magnetic capability you imbue within each write
empowering while nourishing our tapped-out, spirituality
a pathway to that lost language, devoid of words
where Nature guides us
through the wise words of her Poetess queens...
as ever I humbly thank you, dear Fay
May 27th, 2021 05:23
So Much
L. B. Mek said:
\'I watch
a sunflower slowly lifting
its stiff grass coloured, under-vest
to expose more yellow petals
to a small breeze\'..
what an immersive experience, it ease
to read your nature themed poetry, dear Fay
an absolute treasure!!!
thank you
May 27th, 2021 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'I watch
a sunflower slowly lifting
its stiff grass coloured, under-vest
to expose more yellow petals
to a small breeze\'..
what an immersive experience, it ease
to read your nature themed poetry, dear Fay
an absolute treasure!!!
thank you
May 27th, 2021 03:51
So Much
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Fay showing the absolute glory of nature\'s palette before us in all its wonder.
Andy
May 27th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Fay showing the absolute glory of nature\'s palette before us in all its wonder.
Andy
May 27th, 2021 00:33
So Much
MendedFences27 said:
Difficult to convey the wonderment we feel when face to face with Nature\'s beauty. Language does not possess apt wording for such a thrill.
Your poem is a top notch presentation of flowering magnificence.
It uplifts the readers spirit while describing a mornings vision. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2021 12:45
MendedFences27 said:
Difficult to convey the wonderment we feel when face to face with Nature\'s beauty. Language does not possess apt wording for such a thrill.
Your poem is a top notch presentation of flowering magnificence.
It uplifts the readers spirit while describing a mornings vision. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2021 12:45
So Much
Doggerel Dave said:
I do admire Fay, no absorb at least, some of the meditative awareness you describe in your responses to nature, its rhythm and change even if I don’t know how to frame my reaction.
Here, I really felt this one – I’m unable to say any more……enuf?
May 26th, 2021 04:39
Doggerel Dave said:
I do admire Fay, no absorb at least, some of the meditative awareness you describe in your responses to nature, its rhythm and change even if I don’t know how to frame my reaction.
Here, I really felt this one – I’m unable to say any more……enuf?
May 26th, 2021 04:39
So Much
orchidee said:
We could do with more of them golden mornings. Spring is rushing by! Help!
May 26th, 2021 04:15
orchidee said:
We could do with more of them golden mornings. Spring is rushing by! Help!
May 26th, 2021 04:15
So Much
Neville said:
this humble pilgrim bows his head in awe my lady .. sipping from the nectared pool of words you leave behind this mane .. I feel a feeling stirred ...
tis spring after all .. and I am but a naughtyculturist .............. delicious too :)
Neville ............... x
May 26th, 2021 03:31
Neville said:
this humble pilgrim bows his head in awe my lady .. sipping from the nectared pool of words you leave behind this mane .. I feel a feeling stirred ...
tis spring after all .. and I am but a naughtyculturist .............. delicious too :)
Neville ............... x
May 26th, 2021 03:31
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