Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
June Vibrations
Accidental Poet said:
A delightful read this Saturday morning. ; )
June 19th, 2021 06:56
Accidental Poet said:
A delightful read this Saturday morning. ; )
June 19th, 2021 06:56
June Vibrations
dusk arising said:
Drenched in your words I am determined to take a drive into the countryside today to sit peacefully and take it all in.
June 19th, 2021 06:44
dusk arising said:
Drenched in your words I am determined to take a drive into the countryside today to sit peacefully and take it all in.
June 19th, 2021 06:44
Not Meant
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
its one thing to voice our own truth\'s: relatable,
its on another sphere completely
to put ourselves in the shoes of someone, imagined
yet still
produce a poetic voice, that reads so authentic
what a wonderfully empathetic gift, you posses
dear Fay, and thank you
for choosing to share it with us
June 17th, 2021 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
its one thing to voice our own truth\'s: relatable,
its on another sphere completely
to put ourselves in the shoes of someone, imagined
yet still
produce a poetic voice, that reads so authentic
what a wonderfully empathetic gift, you posses
dear Fay, and thank you
for choosing to share it with us
June 17th, 2021 03:42
Love Bites
Dove said:
Lovely as usual, filled with truths, love cools as it burns!
June 17th, 2021 01:04
Dove said:
Lovely as usual, filled with truths, love cools as it burns!
June 17th, 2021 01:04
Not Meant
Goldfinch60 said:
One certainly wonders what is in her mind Fay.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
One certainly wonders what is in her mind Fay.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 00:15
Not Meant
SureshG said:
Your titles says it all, but your words bring it to life.
June 16th, 2021 12:51
SureshG said:
Your titles says it all, but your words bring it to life.
June 16th, 2021 12:51
Not Meant
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
The first two lines are just beautiful. Keep them handy for a Renga.
June 16th, 2021 08:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
The first two lines are just beautiful. Keep them handy for a Renga.
June 16th, 2021 08:32
Not Meant
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one Fay. Sometimes somethings just don\'t matter
June 16th, 2021 06:25
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one Fay. Sometimes somethings just don\'t matter
June 16th, 2021 06:25
Not Meant
dusk arising said:
A brief encounter, over the counter perhaps? A shiver or a wriggle, maybe a tiny giggle.
Nothing lasts for ever - diamonds are forever. No diamonds, no looking back.
Que sera sera.
June 16th, 2021 05:54
dusk arising said:
A brief encounter, over the counter perhaps? A shiver or a wriggle, maybe a tiny giggle.
Nothing lasts for ever - diamonds are forever. No diamonds, no looking back.
Que sera sera.
June 16th, 2021 05:54
Show Us
Accidental Poet said:
Love is the answer to all the world\'s problems Fay. Your words here could be a excellent anthem heard around the world. ; )
June 14th, 2021 19:35
Accidental Poet said:
Love is the answer to all the world\'s problems Fay. Your words here could be a excellent anthem heard around the world. ; )
June 14th, 2021 19:35
Show Us
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
In the words of John Lee Hooker
\"Hate\'s not the boss just tall that\'s all\"
June 14th, 2021 16:31
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
In the words of John Lee Hooker
\"Hate\'s not the boss just tall that\'s all\"
June 14th, 2021 16:31
Show Us
Neville said:
in a grossly unfair world, it is the only way dear Fay to address the issue of injustice & so many other social/cultural imbalances ..
June 14th, 2021 14:20
Neville said:
in a grossly unfair world, it is the only way dear Fay to address the issue of injustice & so many other social/cultural imbalances ..
June 14th, 2021 14:20
Show Us
SureshG said:
No matter ones conviction, every single human in humility takes this posture, that your words have given meaning.
June 14th, 2021 12:28
SureshG said:
No matter ones conviction, every single human in humility takes this posture, that your words have given meaning.
June 14th, 2021 12:28
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dusk arising said:
What a wonderful world we should have were your words of wisdom sincerely taken up by each living person.
A plea to humanity.
June 14th, 2021 06:39
dusk arising said:
What a wonderful world we should have were your words of wisdom sincerely taken up by each living person.
A plea to humanity.
June 14th, 2021 06:39
Branded
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
that picture screams, of that young love
you worded so enticingly majestic, dear Fay
June 14th, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
that picture screams, of that young love
you worded so enticingly majestic, dear Fay
June 14th, 2021 05:34
Show Us
Doggerel Dave said:
Who are you praying to, Fay?
Like the sentiments, though not sure how it might be operationalised - more attention needs (not just... by everyone) on ways and means.
BTW : not an attack on religious convictions on a personal level (you would be well aware of mine or lack therof) I would never do that.
June 14th, 2021 04:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Who are you praying to, Fay?
Like the sentiments, though not sure how it might be operationalised - more attention needs (not just... by everyone) on ways and means.
BTW : not an attack on religious convictions on a personal level (you would be well aware of mine or lack therof) I would never do that.
June 14th, 2021 04:07
Branded
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
I remember it well; the day I traded a bicycle and a ball-glove for the love of Betty Harvey.
June 13th, 2021 13:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
I remember it well; the day I traded a bicycle and a ball-glove for the love of Betty Harvey.
June 13th, 2021 13:53
Branded
SureshG said:
she had mastered her assets, and he, and his like, were all prey, as we to your art of prosing.
June 13th, 2021 13:05
SureshG said:
she had mastered her assets, and he, and his like, were all prey, as we to your art of prosing.
June 13th, 2021 13:05
Branded
dusk arising said:
Well a bit of sunshine\'s got the sap rising all over the place today.
She\'ll never go back but he\'ll want to climb trees too for a good many years until he\'s old enough to captivate and keep a pretty one\'s heart at ground/sea level.
June 13th, 2021 10:52
dusk arising said:
Well a bit of sunshine\'s got the sap rising all over the place today.
She\'ll never go back but he\'ll want to climb trees too for a good many years until he\'s old enough to captivate and keep a pretty one\'s heart at ground/sea level.
June 13th, 2021 10:52
Branded
Neville said:
Cor blimey O\' Riley .. everything about this page looks good and feels so very good 10/10 Fay .... x
June 13th, 2021 10:26
Neville said:
Cor blimey O\' Riley .. everything about this page looks good and feels so very good 10/10 Fay .... x
June 13th, 2021 10:26
Love Bites
Neville said:
... you possibly hold the record for penning reasons why this old fella first fell in love with poetry ... x
June 13th, 2021 06:35
Neville said:
... you possibly hold the record for penning reasons why this old fella first fell in love with poetry ... x
June 13th, 2021 06:35
Love Bites
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love bites but the love that bit me took me into a place of absolute wonder which will never die.
Good words Fay.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love bites but the love that bit me took me into a place of absolute wonder which will never die.
Good words Fay.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:38
Love Bites
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’m so happy to read your poetry once again. You’re an amazing writer!
Yes, love does bite and sometimes it stings.
This reminded me of the lyrics…
“When the bee stings
When I\'m feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
And then I don\'t feel so bad”!
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
June 11th, 2021 15:59
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’m so happy to read your poetry once again. You’re an amazing writer!
Yes, love does bite and sometimes it stings.
This reminded me of the lyrics…
“When the bee stings
When I\'m feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
And then I don\'t feel so bad”!
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
June 11th, 2021 15:59
Love Bites
SureshG said:
While we may control hate, love has no bounds. It even melts the heart of the devil incarnate. So yes, love bites at my pleasure
Once again, a fab work
June 11th, 2021 12:36
SureshG said:
While we may control hate, love has no bounds. It even melts the heart of the devil incarnate. So yes, love bites at my pleasure
Once again, a fab work
June 11th, 2021 12:36
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