Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Insistence
SureshG said:
That brief moment between sleep and waking up, is most intense, as are these words of yours
June 22nd, 2021 01:31
SureshG said:
That brief moment between sleep and waking up, is most intense, as are these words of yours
June 22nd, 2021 01:31
Insistence
Goldfinch60 said:
More wonderful words Fay.
ARE YOU AWAKE YET!!!!!! - LOL
Andy
June 22nd, 2021 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
More wonderful words Fay.
ARE YOU AWAKE YET!!!!!! - LOL
Andy
June 22nd, 2021 00:42
Insistence
Neville said:
.. Make no mistake, You have such a way with words my Lady ..
.. wish I was ya pen .................. x
June 21st, 2021 11:55
Neville said:
.. Make no mistake, You have such a way with words my Lady ..
.. wish I was ya pen .................. x
June 21st, 2021 11:55
Insistence
dusk arising said:
Wakey - wakey ! As the world awakens. Another pearl of poetry from our lady of the dawn Fay.
June 21st, 2021 11:40
dusk arising said:
Wakey - wakey ! As the world awakens. Another pearl of poetry from our lady of the dawn Fay.
June 21st, 2021 11:40
June Vibrations
Neville said:
the single word \'splendid\' springs to mind .. x
June 21st, 2021 00:43
Neville said:
the single word \'splendid\' springs to mind .. x
June 21st, 2021 00:43
June Vibrations
Goldfinch60 said:
As does my inner being begin to sing as I read your words Fay.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
As does my inner being begin to sing as I read your words Fay.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 00:14
June Vibrations
SureshG said:
Those bees wonât mind sharing their honey with you
June 19th, 2021 19:32
SureshG said:
Those bees wonât mind sharing their honey with you
June 19th, 2021 19:32
June Vibrations
Laurađ» said:
My Dear Fay,
Your penned words are joyous and pleasing to all of my sensesâŠespecially today! I enjoyed a most delightful day and your poem added to its beauty.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laurađ»
June 19th, 2021 17:34
Laurađ» said:
My Dear Fay,
Your penned words are joyous and pleasing to all of my sensesâŠespecially today! I enjoyed a most delightful day and your poem added to its beauty.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laurađ»
June 19th, 2021 17:34
June Vibrations
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Splendid idea, 24C gentle breeze, new holiday, a good day for a picknick.
June 19th, 2021 08:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Splendid idea, 24C gentle breeze, new holiday, a good day for a picknick.
June 19th, 2021 08:34
June Vibrations
dusk arising said:
Drenched in your words I am determined to take a drive into the countryside today to sit peacefully and take it all in.
June 19th, 2021 06:44
dusk arising said:
Drenched in your words I am determined to take a drive into the countryside today to sit peacefully and take it all in.
June 19th, 2021 06:44
Not Meant
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
its one thing to voice our own truth\'s: relatable,
its on another sphere completely
to put ourselves in the shoes of someone, imagined
yet still
produce a poetic voice, that reads so authentic
what a wonderfully empathetic gift, you posses
dear Fay, and thank you
for choosing to share it with us
June 17th, 2021 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
its one thing to voice our own truth\'s: relatable,
its on another sphere completely
to put ourselves in the shoes of someone, imagined
yet still
produce a poetic voice, that reads so authentic
what a wonderfully empathetic gift, you posses
dear Fay, and thank you
for choosing to share it with us
June 17th, 2021 03:42
Love Bites
Dove said:
Lovely as usual, filled with truths, love cools as it burns!
June 17th, 2021 01:04
Dove said:
Lovely as usual, filled with truths, love cools as it burns!
June 17th, 2021 01:04
Not Meant
Goldfinch60 said:
One certainly wonders what is in her mind Fay.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
One certainly wonders what is in her mind Fay.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 00:15
Not Meant
SureshG said:
Your titles says it all, but your words bring it to life.
June 16th, 2021 12:51
SureshG said:
Your titles says it all, but your words bring it to life.
June 16th, 2021 12:51
Not Meant
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
The first two lines are just beautiful. Keep them handy for a Renga.
June 16th, 2021 08:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
The first two lines are just beautiful. Keep them handy for a Renga.
June 16th, 2021 08:32
Not Meant
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one Fay. Sometimes somethings just don\'t matter
June 16th, 2021 06:25
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one Fay. Sometimes somethings just don\'t matter
June 16th, 2021 06:25
Not Meant
dusk arising said:
A brief encounter, over the counter perhaps? A shiver or a wriggle, maybe a tiny giggle.
Nothing lasts for ever - diamonds are forever. No diamonds, no looking back.
Que sera sera.
June 16th, 2021 05:54
dusk arising said:
A brief encounter, over the counter perhaps? A shiver or a wriggle, maybe a tiny giggle.
Nothing lasts for ever - diamonds are forever. No diamonds, no looking back.
Que sera sera.
June 16th, 2021 05:54
Show Us
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
In the words of John Lee Hooker
\"Hate\'s not the boss just tall that\'s all\"
June 14th, 2021 16:31
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
In the words of John Lee Hooker
\"Hate\'s not the boss just tall that\'s all\"
June 14th, 2021 16:31
Show Us
Neville said:
in a grossly unfair world, it is the only way dear Fay to address the issue of injustice & so many other social/cultural imbalances ..
June 14th, 2021 14:20
Neville said:
in a grossly unfair world, it is the only way dear Fay to address the issue of injustice & so many other social/cultural imbalances ..
June 14th, 2021 14:20
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SureshG said:
No matter ones conviction, every single human in humility takes this posture, that your words have given meaning.
June 14th, 2021 12:28
SureshG said:
No matter ones conviction, every single human in humility takes this posture, that your words have given meaning.
June 14th, 2021 12:28
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dusk arising said:
What a wonderful world we should have were your words of wisdom sincerely taken up by each living person.
A plea to humanity.
June 14th, 2021 06:39
dusk arising said:
What a wonderful world we should have were your words of wisdom sincerely taken up by each living person.
A plea to humanity.
June 14th, 2021 06:39
Branded
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
that picture screams, of that young love
you worded so enticingly majestic, dear Fay
June 14th, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
that picture screams, of that young love
you worded so enticingly majestic, dear Fay
June 14th, 2021 05:34
Show Us
Doggerel Dave said:
Who are you praying to, Fay?
Like the sentiments, though not sure how it might be operationalised - more attention needs (not just... by everyone) on ways and means.
BTW : not an attack on religious convictions on a personal level (you would be well aware of mine or lack therof) I would never do that.
June 14th, 2021 04:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Who are you praying to, Fay?
Like the sentiments, though not sure how it might be operationalised - more attention needs (not just... by everyone) on ways and means.
BTW : not an attack on religious convictions on a personal level (you would be well aware of mine or lack therof) I would never do that.
June 14th, 2021 04:07
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