Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
I remember it well; the day I traded a bicycle and a ball-glove for the love of Betty Harvey.
June 13th, 2021 13:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
I remember it well; the day I traded a bicycle and a ball-glove for the love of Betty Harvey.
June 13th, 2021 13:53
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SureshG said:
she had mastered her assets, and he, and his like, were all prey, as we to your art of prosing.
June 13th, 2021 13:05
SureshG said:
she had mastered her assets, and he, and his like, were all prey, as we to your art of prosing.
June 13th, 2021 13:05
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dusk arising said:
Well a bit of sunshine\'s got the sap rising all over the place today.
She\'ll never go back but he\'ll want to climb trees too for a good many years until he\'s old enough to captivate and keep a pretty one\'s heart at ground/sea level.
June 13th, 2021 10:52
dusk arising said:
Well a bit of sunshine\'s got the sap rising all over the place today.
She\'ll never go back but he\'ll want to climb trees too for a good many years until he\'s old enough to captivate and keep a pretty one\'s heart at ground/sea level.
June 13th, 2021 10:52
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Neville said:
Cor blimey O\' Riley .. everything about this page looks good and feels so very good 10/10 Fay .... x
June 13th, 2021 10:26
Neville said:
Cor blimey O\' Riley .. everything about this page looks good and feels so very good 10/10 Fay .... x
June 13th, 2021 10:26
Love Bites
Neville said:
... you possibly hold the record for penning reasons why this old fella first fell in love with poetry ... x
June 13th, 2021 06:35
Neville said:
... you possibly hold the record for penning reasons why this old fella first fell in love with poetry ... x
June 13th, 2021 06:35
Love Bites
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love bites but the love that bit me took me into a place of absolute wonder which will never die.
Good words Fay.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love bites but the love that bit me took me into a place of absolute wonder which will never die.
Good words Fay.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:38
Love Bites
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’m so happy to read your poetry once again. You’re an amazing writer!
Yes, love does bite and sometimes it stings.
This reminded me of the lyrics…
“When the bee stings
When I\'m feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
And then I don\'t feel so bad”!
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
June 11th, 2021 15:59
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
I’m so happy to read your poetry once again. You’re an amazing writer!
Yes, love does bite and sometimes it stings.
This reminded me of the lyrics…
“When the bee stings
When I\'m feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
And then I don\'t feel so bad”!
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
June 11th, 2021 15:59
Love Bites
SureshG said:
While we may control hate, love has no bounds. It even melts the heart of the devil incarnate. So yes, love bites at my pleasure
Once again, a fab work
June 11th, 2021 12:36
SureshG said:
While we may control hate, love has no bounds. It even melts the heart of the devil incarnate. So yes, love bites at my pleasure
Once again, a fab work
June 11th, 2021 12:36
Love Bites
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay. All anthologies aside, I like being loved.
June 11th, 2021 08:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay. All anthologies aside, I like being loved.
June 11th, 2021 08:55
Who Dares
Neville said:
excellently cleva use of the daring and dashing SAS motto .. and used here to great effect .............. made me think of Ring of Bright Water .. x
June 11th, 2021 07:16
Neville said:
excellently cleva use of the daring and dashing SAS motto .. and used here to great effect .............. made me think of Ring of Bright Water .. x
June 11th, 2021 07:16
Love Bites
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully, profound
imbued with that wondrousness
only instinctive poetry, can reveal..
a great write dear Fay
June 11th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully, profound
imbued with that wondrousness
only instinctive poetry, can reveal..
a great write dear Fay
June 11th, 2021 05:21
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L. B. Mek said:
\'Starvation dislike\'
my submission for the most poetically, stark
understatement of the year, lol
such a fun read and picture
thanks for sharing dear Fay
June 11th, 2021 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Starvation dislike\'
my submission for the most poetically, stark
understatement of the year, lol
such a fun read and picture
thanks for sharing dear Fay
June 11th, 2021 03:41
Love Bites
dusk arising said:
\"Love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs any heart not tough, or strong enough to take a lot of pain\"
Those words from the old Everly Bros song came immediately to mind reading your post today.
How, scarred and battered from love\'s past, we fall into the pleasure pit when love chances our way. Do we shun it or seduce it. Have we become the spider to the fly?
Forever mystifying is love. But why bother quizzing ones brain over it. Romantic love is the highest high known to mankind.... well, this man anyway.
June 11th, 2021 03:33
dusk arising said:
\"Love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs any heart not tough, or strong enough to take a lot of pain\"
Those words from the old Everly Bros song came immediately to mind reading your post today.
How, scarred and battered from love\'s past, we fall into the pleasure pit when love chances our way. Do we shun it or seduce it. Have we become the spider to the fly?
Forever mystifying is love. But why bother quizzing ones brain over it. Romantic love is the highest high known to mankind.... well, this man anyway.
June 11th, 2021 03:33
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ron parrish aka wordman said:
life in motion we don`t take time to see
June 11th, 2021 00:14
ron parrish aka wordman said:
life in motion we don`t take time to see
June 11th, 2021 00:14
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Goldfinch60 said:
I love otters, such wonderful creatures and your words capture there being so wonderfully Fay.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I love otters, such wonderful creatures and your words capture there being so wonderfully Fay.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:07
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SureshG said:
Those fury creatures, ferocious in the art of survival, admired at a distance or by poetic words by you
June 10th, 2021 13:27
SureshG said:
Those fury creatures, ferocious in the art of survival, admired at a distance or by poetic words by you
June 10th, 2021 13:27
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Doggerel Dave said:
Nature in the raw. Personified nicely in your short sweet verse, Fay.
But that\'s the balance - the way this nature should work.
The only problem is humankind, which has gone feral.
June 10th, 2021 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Nature in the raw. Personified nicely in your short sweet verse, Fay.
But that\'s the balance - the way this nature should work.
The only problem is humankind, which has gone feral.
June 10th, 2021 06:41
Who Dares
dusk arising said:
They\'re marvelous creations those tenacious Otter. We have some in a brook in the city here which is quite remarkable. I hope to see them post pandemic.
Your words do justice to that action picture so well today.
June 10th, 2021 04:34
dusk arising said:
They\'re marvelous creations those tenacious Otter. We have some in a brook in the city here which is quite remarkable. I hope to see them post pandemic.
Your words do justice to that action picture so well today.
June 10th, 2021 04:34
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SureshG said:
I have so contemplated on this subject and have firmly concluded that no matter how we think we would redo our actions, the eventuality cannot be altered, and so, our present actions must reflect this understanding.
As always enamored by your poetry.
June 8th, 2021 12:25
SureshG said:
I have so contemplated on this subject and have firmly concluded that no matter how we think we would redo our actions, the eventuality cannot be altered, and so, our present actions must reflect this understanding.
As always enamored by your poetry.
June 8th, 2021 12:25
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Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment should be treasured as they will not come again.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment should be treasured as they will not come again.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 00:12
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Neville said:
....... grab it and hang on tight .. it may not all be plain sailing but ... storms come and go .. enjoy the moment, I say .. every single one of em ............ x
June 7th, 2021 16:44
Neville said:
....... grab it and hang on tight .. it may not all be plain sailing but ... storms come and go .. enjoy the moment, I say .. every single one of em ............ x
June 7th, 2021 16:44
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Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve been away for a while but I see your magic persists dear Fay
June 7th, 2021 15:32
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve been away for a while but I see your magic persists dear Fay
June 7th, 2021 15:32
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dusk arising said:
LOL the only times I look back with regret are upon the times i put my foot in my mouth and I still cringe at those moments. However. I could do with my mum nagging me about not putting off until tomorrow.... but i have so many excuses...... real ones to do with physical pain....
I just relax and lazily do what I want to do but still have that mischievous twinkle.
June 7th, 2021 12:08
dusk arising said:
LOL the only times I look back with regret are upon the times i put my foot in my mouth and I still cringe at those moments. However. I could do with my mum nagging me about not putting off until tomorrow.... but i have so many excuses...... real ones to do with physical pain....
I just relax and lazily do what I want to do but still have that mischievous twinkle.
June 7th, 2021 12:08
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