Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Endings
dusk arising said:
I guess it\'s why we bury or cremate, to do away with the ugliness of death where there is always a scavengers meal.
It\'s so sad to see the remains of what was once a beautiful being, now broken and still.
May 13th, 2021 02:30
dusk arising said:
I guess it\'s why we bury or cremate, to do away with the ugliness of death where there is always a scavengers meal.
It\'s so sad to see the remains of what was once a beautiful being, now broken and still.
May 13th, 2021 02:30
Apprehension
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words once more Fay, I had that \'phone call.
Andy
May 13th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words once more Fay, I had that \'phone call.
Andy
May 13th, 2021 00:23
Apprehension
SureshG said:
Life’s reality, when penned as such, is to be admired.
Thanks
May 12th, 2021 14:35
SureshG said:
Life’s reality, when penned as such, is to be admired.
Thanks
May 12th, 2021 14:35
Souls Know.
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words 🙂 the mention of the flame ... just lovely . Makes me almost think of “ twin flames “
Your poem is lovely to read
May 12th, 2021 12:19
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words 🙂 the mention of the flame ... just lovely . Makes me almost think of “ twin flames “
Your poem is lovely to read
May 12th, 2021 12:19
Apprehension
dusk arising said:
So relateable. As images flash across before our eyes like unfamiliar and otherwise welcome distractions we are unable to comprehend them in our mental fog of worrying concern.
May 12th, 2021 07:57
dusk arising said:
So relateable. As images flash across before our eyes like unfamiliar and otherwise welcome distractions we are unable to comprehend them in our mental fog of worrying concern.
May 12th, 2021 07:57
Apprehension
orchidee said:
Thanks Fay.
On a daft note, I was gonna step in front of that train. Whaddya know? It was cancelled due to leaves on the line! Mind ya, I slipped on the leaves and sprained me ankle. Doh!
Now my book \'The mad adventures of Orchi\'.
May 12th, 2021 05:37
orchidee said:
Thanks Fay.
On a daft note, I was gonna step in front of that train. Whaddya know? It was cancelled due to leaves on the line! Mind ya, I slipped on the leaves and sprained me ankle. Doh!
Now my book \'The mad adventures of Orchi\'.
May 12th, 2021 05:37
Apprehension
Neville said:
Flipping heck Fay ... this is both so darn good and in view of the concluding statement you make in your authors note, so bad too ....
May 12th, 2021 03:18
Neville said:
Flipping heck Fay ... this is both so darn good and in view of the concluding statement you make in your authors note, so bad too ....
May 12th, 2021 03:18
Love-Light.
Caring dove said:
Beautiful , strong words . Out of darkness and into light . Everyone needs lightness in their life and to move past what has hurt them ...
May 12th, 2021 02:54
Caring dove said:
Beautiful , strong words . Out of darkness and into light . Everyone needs lightness in their life and to move past what has hurt them ...
May 12th, 2021 02:54
Meditation
Caring dove said:
A sense of grounding between earth and sky ... that’s so important , to be in the here and now and be mindful
May 12th, 2021 02:49
Caring dove said:
A sense of grounding between earth and sky ... that’s so important , to be in the here and now and be mindful
May 12th, 2021 02:49
Meditation
Caring dove said:
Really like this , Fay 🙂 “ meditation in littleness delights my soul “ such a beautiful line . Lovely poem enjoyed reading your words
May 12th, 2021 02:49
Caring dove said:
Really like this , Fay 🙂 “ meditation in littleness delights my soul “ such a beautiful line . Lovely poem enjoyed reading your words
May 12th, 2021 02:49
Take One
Goldfinch60 said:
So very meaningful to me Fay.
\"sudden grief hits with no compromise. \" so very, very true Fay, there is no compromise.
Andy
May 12th, 2021 00:02
Goldfinch60 said:
So very meaningful to me Fay.
\"sudden grief hits with no compromise. \" so very, very true Fay, there is no compromise.
Andy
May 12th, 2021 00:02
Take One
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville cracked something there when he suggested grief for different folks will be in different ways - a good summation of your carefully constructed and compassionate (Your word appropriate here) poem which covers that neatly, Fay.
May 11th, 2021 21:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville cracked something there when he suggested grief for different folks will be in different ways - a good summation of your carefully constructed and compassionate (Your word appropriate here) poem which covers that neatly, Fay.
May 11th, 2021 21:57
Take One
Caring dove said:
Grief is difficult . You expressed this beautifully , Fay )
Although I guess we can experience grief in other areas of life , aswell
I have been through trauma and that has caused feelings of grief in me ... it’s a difficult feeling
May 11th, 2021 16:19
Caring dove said:
Grief is difficult . You expressed this beautifully , Fay )
Although I guess we can experience grief in other areas of life , aswell
I have been through trauma and that has caused feelings of grief in me ... it’s a difficult feeling
May 11th, 2021 16:19
Take One
PrEm Ji said:
How can I select one, when poetry and life are inseparable twins?
May 11th, 2021 13:25
PrEm Ji said:
How can I select one, when poetry and life are inseparable twins?
May 11th, 2021 13:25
Take One
Neville said:
I think we all grieve in our own inimitable and largely unique way ..
...
although there is little doubt there are social and cultural variances ...
...
You have clearly identified here with and because you are one .. poetically crafted a rather special dedication to loss and associated grief ................................................ x
Neville
May 11th, 2021 09:37
Neville said:
I think we all grieve in our own inimitable and largely unique way ..
...
although there is little doubt there are social and cultural variances ...
...
You have clearly identified here with and because you are one .. poetically crafted a rather special dedication to loss and associated grief ................................................ x
Neville
May 11th, 2021 09:37
Take One
dusk arising said:
I became quite sad reading your words today for you really captured the loss. Compassion does nothing more than ease the flow of tears.
To lifts oneself from the depths of loss and soldier on in faith shows the true mettle of character.
May 11th, 2021 08:50
dusk arising said:
I became quite sad reading your words today for you really captured the loss. Compassion does nothing more than ease the flow of tears.
To lifts oneself from the depths of loss and soldier on in faith shows the true mettle of character.
May 11th, 2021 08:50
Take One
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Fay. Will you be writing all seven takes?
May 11th, 2021 08:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Fay. Will you be writing all seven takes?
May 11th, 2021 08:06
Take One
Accidental Poet said:
Losing a loved one is like losing a part of yourself. The only comfort is knowing that they\'re going to a better place and no longer suffer in pain. Wonderful write Fay. ; )
May 11th, 2021 06:47
Accidental Poet said:
Losing a loved one is like losing a part of yourself. The only comfort is knowing that they\'re going to a better place and no longer suffer in pain. Wonderful write Fay. ; )
May 11th, 2021 06:47
Relevant
L. B. Mek said:
\'Scent-soaked written poetry will vibrate
as this clandestine rose
speaks its message from faraway hands\'..
Poetic immersivity - worded, as-ever: so quintessentially decadent!
memorably indulgent reading, dear Fay
thank you
May 11th, 2021 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'Scent-soaked written poetry will vibrate
as this clandestine rose
speaks its message from faraway hands\'..
Poetic immersivity - worded, as-ever: so quintessentially decadent!
memorably indulgent reading, dear Fay
thank you
May 11th, 2021 03:35
Relevant
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty opening into life as time passes. Wonderful words Fay.
Fabulous Emma Sandys picture, she certainly has a Pre-Raphaelite style about her works of art.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty opening into life as time passes. Wonderful words Fay.
Fabulous Emma Sandys picture, she certainly has a Pre-Raphaelite style about her works of art.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:08
Relevant
Trenz Pruca said:
Great image. Your response to Dusk\'s comment is a poem in itself.
May 10th, 2021 12:08
Trenz Pruca said:
Great image. Your response to Dusk\'s comment is a poem in itself.
May 10th, 2021 12:08
Relevant
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written poem here Fay, a pair of powerful stanzas acting as a true homage to nature.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
May 10th, 2021 10:13
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written poem here Fay, a pair of powerful stanzas acting as a true homage to nature.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
May 10th, 2021 10:13
Relevant
Neville said:
if its okay with you ... I\'m gonna roll with Dusk Arising\'s take on these exquisite words you have gifted us today ... the old fella seems to have taken the words outa my mouth, so he did ...................
I do by the way, only very rarely use the E word these days ... but it seems quite relevant in this case
.... Neville
May 10th, 2021 06:42
Neville said:
if its okay with you ... I\'m gonna roll with Dusk Arising\'s take on these exquisite words you have gifted us today ... the old fella seems to have taken the words outa my mouth, so he did ...................
I do by the way, only very rarely use the E word these days ... but it seems quite relevant in this case
.... Neville
May 10th, 2021 06:42
Relevant
dusk arising said:
The flowering of a young maiden bloom. Scented and bejewelled with colour blossoms into fertility.
Tickled by beeswing vibrations then tenderly touched for silent moments.
The private life of one blossom among many which adorn our gardens.
May 10th, 2021 04:54
dusk arising said:
The flowering of a young maiden bloom. Scented and bejewelled with colour blossoms into fertility.
Tickled by beeswing vibrations then tenderly touched for silent moments.
The private life of one blossom among many which adorn our gardens.
May 10th, 2021 04:54
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