Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Enticing
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem Fay. Daybreak, like twilight, is always a moment of magic
June 3rd, 2021 04:58
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem Fay. Daybreak, like twilight, is always a moment of magic
June 3rd, 2021 04:58
Enticing
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay and so very true for me, maybe one day we will Dawn’s wonderful glory.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 04:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay and so very true for me, maybe one day we will Dawn’s wonderful glory.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 04:55
Enticing
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
I have to settle for a morning mist clearing over the local duck pond! Well, that\'s good sight too. lol.
June 3rd, 2021 04:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
I have to settle for a morning mist clearing over the local duck pond! Well, that\'s good sight too. lol.
June 3rd, 2021 04:22
Enticing
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for your take on an early morning wakening, Fay.
I shall view my early starts in a more positive light in future....
June 3rd, 2021 04:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for your take on an early morning wakening, Fay.
I shall view my early starts in a more positive light in future....
June 3rd, 2021 04:17
Queries
L. B. Mek said:
how much we mourn
those aspects, we seldom
reflect - on, until
it\'s far - far: too late
to quantify
the why, when and how
of all, that perished
within those
we so fervently, cherished...
June 3rd, 2021 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
how much we mourn
those aspects, we seldom
reflect - on, until
it\'s far - far: too late
to quantify
the why, when and how
of all, that perished
within those
we so fervently, cherished...
June 3rd, 2021 03:53
Queries
SureshG said:
Sorrows only answer is hope, but the journey, as you have so eloquently poemed, rides the saltine stream,
June 3rd, 2021 00:14
SureshG said:
Sorrows only answer is hope, but the journey, as you have so eloquently poemed, rides the saltine stream,
June 3rd, 2021 00:14
Queries
Neville said:
... DA put it like I would have put it if he hadn\'t got here first .. a little masterpiece mistress Fay ...
Neville ........ x
June 2nd, 2021 05:29
Neville said:
... DA put it like I would have put it if he hadn\'t got here first .. a little masterpiece mistress Fay ...
Neville ........ x
June 2nd, 2021 05:29
Queries
dusk arising said:
I sense those jarring moments when self assurance subsides and faith in where you fit into the scheme of things capsizes......
. ...... but a slap in the face from the seventh wave of incoming tide reminds you, you\'ve a life to be getting on with and suddenly those tears have done their job..... repaired, at least for the time being.
Outstanding wordsmanship. Beautifully crafted delve into the human psyche. A must for my favourites.
June 2nd, 2021 04:34
dusk arising said:
I sense those jarring moments when self assurance subsides and faith in where you fit into the scheme of things capsizes......
. ...... but a slap in the face from the seventh wave of incoming tide reminds you, you\'ve a life to be getting on with and suddenly those tears have done their job..... repaired, at least for the time being.
Outstanding wordsmanship. Beautifully crafted delve into the human psyche. A must for my favourites.
June 2nd, 2021 04:34
Frenzy
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Praise for such industry bred in nature.\" - such true words Fay, I have many birds coming into the garden, filling there beaks up with food or moss and twigs to keep there nests sound.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
\"Praise for such industry bred in nature.\" - such true words Fay, I have many birds coming into the garden, filling there beaks up with food or moss and twigs to keep there nests sound.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:38
Frenzy
Doggerel Dave said:
If I had any sense, I would creep right round your poem, Fay.
Trouble is, here the blackbird is a pest, an introduced species in company with the fox, rabbit and others.
Remove myself from that position however, and I can appreciate through your richly descriptive imagery, that industry you characterise with which most birds conduct their affairs.
As a complete aside, news hot off the…..media…suggests that New Zealand has a hedgehog problem (introduced species) and is about to embark on an eradication programme, while in the UK hedgehogs are facing extinction….
June 1st, 2021 19:45
Doggerel Dave said:
If I had any sense, I would creep right round your poem, Fay.
Trouble is, here the blackbird is a pest, an introduced species in company with the fox, rabbit and others.
Remove myself from that position however, and I can appreciate through your richly descriptive imagery, that industry you characterise with which most birds conduct their affairs.
As a complete aside, news hot off the…..media…suggests that New Zealand has a hedgehog problem (introduced species) and is about to embark on an eradication programme, while in the UK hedgehogs are facing extinction….
June 1st, 2021 19:45
Frenzy
L. B. Mek said:
those first two lines were so enticingly melodic, rhymed
to a soundless drumbeat..
such an immersive portrait of nature, yet again dear Fay
a beautiful reading experience, thank you!
June 1st, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
those first two lines were so enticingly melodic, rhymed
to a soundless drumbeat..
such an immersive portrait of nature, yet again dear Fay
a beautiful reading experience, thank you!
June 1st, 2021 05:24
Frenzy
dusk arising said:
Lovely depiction of my favourite bird. I\'m always amazed by the bird feeding activity after I have disturbed anything in the garden. Mowing the lawn gives the featherefed fraternity a huge skope of plunder and peck opportunity.
Love your \'skating through lawn\' phrase.
June 1st, 2021 04:05
dusk arising said:
Lovely depiction of my favourite bird. I\'m always amazed by the bird feeding activity after I have disturbed anything in the garden. Mowing the lawn gives the featherefed fraternity a huge skope of plunder and peck opportunity.
Love your \'skating through lawn\' phrase.
June 1st, 2021 04:05
Frenzy
Neville said:
... as true as true and then some ...
I takes me horneyculturists hat off to thee .......... x
June 1st, 2021 03:45
Neville said:
... as true as true and then some ...
I takes me horneyculturists hat off to thee .......... x
June 1st, 2021 03:45
Together
L. B. Mek said:
what a beacon of poetic hope
you effortlessly exude, dear Fay..
thank you!
June 1st, 2021 03:17
L. B. Mek said:
what a beacon of poetic hope
you effortlessly exude, dear Fay..
thank you!
June 1st, 2021 03:17
Together
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace and love is within 99% of the people on this earth but it is the 1% that is destroying it, may they realise the error of their ways and love and joy is there for all of us.
Good words Fay.
Andy
June 1st, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace and love is within 99% of the people on this earth but it is the 1% that is destroying it, may they realise the error of their ways and love and joy is there for all of us.
Good words Fay.
Andy
June 1st, 2021 00:48
Together
SureshG said:
I believe, you penned this in your very early days of poetry, for in its simplicity is a call for togetherness, for humans though capable are unwilling.
It’s always a pleasure to visit here.
May 31st, 2021 11:51
SureshG said:
I believe, you penned this in your very early days of poetry, for in its simplicity is a call for togetherness, for humans though capable are unwilling.
It’s always a pleasure to visit here.
May 31st, 2021 11:51
Together
Neville said:
I hope your messages for world peace go\'s viral Fay ...................x
May 31st, 2021 09:35
Neville said:
I hope your messages for world peace go\'s viral Fay ...................x
May 31st, 2021 09:35
Together
Doggerel Dave said:
The light bulb moment when all with power (not you or I) realize the futility of it all….. What are the odds? Not good at the moment, I’m afraid….Our pollies are being bluntly hyper-critical of China, including hints of possible open conflict would you believe…and ‘Stralia is losing export trade as a consequence…..
‘Sorry to be such a wet blanket, Fay
May 31st, 2021 08:00
Doggerel Dave said:
The light bulb moment when all with power (not you or I) realize the futility of it all….. What are the odds? Not good at the moment, I’m afraid….Our pollies are being bluntly hyper-critical of China, including hints of possible open conflict would you believe…and ‘Stralia is losing export trade as a consequence…..
‘Sorry to be such a wet blanket, Fay
May 31st, 2021 08:00
Together
Accidental Poet said:
You speak a truth so few can understand Fay. But your words heard loud and clear with those few to spread far and wide. Excellent write Fay. ; )
May 31st, 2021 06:28
Accidental Poet said:
You speak a truth so few can understand Fay. But your words heard loud and clear with those few to spread far and wide. Excellent write Fay. ; )
May 31st, 2021 06:28
Together
dusk arising said:
One to one as neighbors we seem to get along until a politician or two creates mistrust. Politicians should be put in a boxing ring if they want to start a fight.
Your words have an eternal truth and are worthy of a peace prize. SAdly the masses of humanity cannot see the reasoning.
May 31st, 2021 02:51
dusk arising said:
One to one as neighbors we seem to get along until a politician or two creates mistrust. Politicians should be put in a boxing ring if they want to start a fight.
Your words have an eternal truth and are worthy of a peace prize. SAdly the masses of humanity cannot see the reasoning.
May 31st, 2021 02:51
Spent
SureshG said:
in whirl-crazy abandon
as love takes a bettering
Strewn together, words that exploit ecstacy.
May 30th, 2021 16:21
SureshG said:
in whirl-crazy abandon
as love takes a bettering
Strewn together, words that exploit ecstacy.
May 30th, 2021 16:21
Spent
Goldfinch60 said:
That hot season need never pass when love is within us.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That hot season need never pass when love is within us.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:25
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