Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Rousing
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Yes, it\'s daft, some adverts on TV. It\'s always a bright morning; it never rains; all smile (sickly) sweetly; it\'s never a dark morning. Completely naff! lol. Nice dreams though.
January 22nd, 2021 05:09
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Yes, it\'s daft, some adverts on TV. It\'s always a bright morning; it never rains; all smile (sickly) sweetly; it\'s never a dark morning. Completely naff! lol. Nice dreams though.
January 22nd, 2021 05:09
Rousing
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot to be said about morning arousal when a bird is singing Fay. However I digress into fantasy land.
I love my minds silly picture of sparrows tucking into weetabix breakfasts whilst blackbird dines on rice and peas and robin calls through your window:-
wake up wake up sleepyhead Fay
it\'s time to start your new day
through your window thats ouvre
i say throw back your duvet
get up and get on your way.
January 22nd, 2021 04:31
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot to be said about morning arousal when a bird is singing Fay. However I digress into fantasy land.
I love my minds silly picture of sparrows tucking into weetabix breakfasts whilst blackbird dines on rice and peas and robin calls through your window:-
wake up wake up sleepyhead Fay
it\'s time to start your new day
through your window thats ouvre
i say throw back your duvet
get up and get on your way.
January 22nd, 2021 04:31
Paired
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, that oneness between two people is so very special.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, that oneness between two people is so very special.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 01:47
Paired
FredPeyer said:
Finding that one person to spend the rest of our life with is a great miracle. And you said it so well!
January 21st, 2021 22:05
FredPeyer said:
Finding that one person to spend the rest of our life with is a great miracle. And you said it so well!
January 21st, 2021 22:05
Paired
L. B. Mek said:
\'they viewed with awe
at what they knew had begun
for fate showed them
beyond convention\'s chained
boundary begins
destiny\'s chance for a second
time round\'...
that tingling - rekindling
of feelings
once thought - long shrivelled
by those weighty silences
in our moonless nights,
a good read dear Fay
January 21st, 2021 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'they viewed with awe
at what they knew had begun
for fate showed them
beyond convention\'s chained
boundary begins
destiny\'s chance for a second
time round\'...
that tingling - rekindling
of feelings
once thought - long shrivelled
by those weighty silences
in our moonless nights,
a good read dear Fay
January 21st, 2021 06:47
Weaponry
L. B. Mek said:
\'humans just bow in acceptance\'
or sadly, take aim...
I never knew how magnificently intimidating they looked \'in flight\' until a few years ago, so fast: their dive is spectacular,
a fitting dedication dear Fay
January 21st, 2021 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'humans just bow in acceptance\'
or sadly, take aim...
I never knew how magnificently intimidating they looked \'in flight\' until a few years ago, so fast: their dive is spectacular,
a fitting dedication dear Fay
January 21st, 2021 05:08
Paired
dusk arising said:
You describe well the magic between two as they realise their feelings are mutual and a new oneness of purpose begins. .... sigh!
January 21st, 2021 04:37
dusk arising said:
You describe well the magic between two as they realise their feelings are mutual and a new oneness of purpose begins. .... sigh!
January 21st, 2021 04:37
Weaponry
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay and a wonderful picture.
All raptors are so wonderful to see and I have seen many of them in my birdwatching life.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay and a wonderful picture.
All raptors are so wonderful to see and I have seen many of them in my birdwatching life.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:21
Weaponry
Doggerel Dave said:
This photo is terrifying. I cannot look at it without the feeling that in the next few moments my guts are to be torn out
Yet I don’t want to forget the grace and beauty of these raptors in the air. Perfect harmony with their environment.
Your poem covers the current situation perfectly, structured with the care, which is your forte, Fay.
January 20th, 2021 16:59
Doggerel Dave said:
This photo is terrifying. I cannot look at it without the feeling that in the next few moments my guts are to be torn out
Yet I don’t want to forget the grace and beauty of these raptors in the air. Perfect harmony with their environment.
Your poem covers the current situation perfectly, structured with the care, which is your forte, Fay.
January 20th, 2021 16:59
Weaponry
jarcher54 said:
You are so right. Many photos of violence, natural or other, seem as if they will shatter the lens and burn a hole through the film or whatever is inside cameras these days. Fit metaphor for human slaughter too? We don\'t seem to ask for permission, do we?
January 20th, 2021 11:12
jarcher54 said:
You are so right. Many photos of violence, natural or other, seem as if they will shatter the lens and burn a hole through the film or whatever is inside cameras these days. Fit metaphor for human slaughter too? We don\'t seem to ask for permission, do we?
January 20th, 2021 11:12
Weaponry
Neville said:
amazing creatures aren\'t they .. and probably as near to perfect predators as there ever has been ..
I think I saw a couple of frames after this mid air shot was taken ... shocking, but entirely necessary for survival ...
January 20th, 2021 09:01
Neville said:
amazing creatures aren\'t they .. and probably as near to perfect predators as there ever has been ..
I think I saw a couple of frames after this mid air shot was taken ... shocking, but entirely necessary for survival ...
January 20th, 2021 09:01
Weaponry
Philip said:
Hi Fay
I love the first line and the pace of the poem. Falcon\'s don\'t hang about with their killing.
Phil
January 20th, 2021 08:09
Philip said:
Hi Fay
I love the first line and the pace of the poem. Falcon\'s don\'t hang about with their killing.
Phil
January 20th, 2021 08:09
Weaponry
dusk arising said:
Built for predation. Such perfection is poetry itself. These are stunning birds to see in the wild as are all the hawks. Mind you, you\'ll need excellent eyesight to determine which hawk you see because they don\'t hang about.
Yep. I think you\'ve encompassed all of a bird of prey\'s action features here including their usual brief appearance.
January 20th, 2021 04:20
dusk arising said:
Built for predation. Such perfection is poetry itself. These are stunning birds to see in the wild as are all the hawks. Mind you, you\'ll need excellent eyesight to determine which hawk you see because they don\'t hang about.
Yep. I think you\'ve encompassed all of a bird of prey\'s action features here including their usual brief appearance.
January 20th, 2021 04:20
Awareness
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, may that love\'s awareness be forever with us.
Andy
January 20th, 2021 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, may that love\'s awareness be forever with us.
Andy
January 20th, 2021 01:21
Awareness
dusk arising said:
The words of love enriching understanding and acceptance. But told in your exquisite style.
Again, to write like this, one has to have lived it.
January 19th, 2021 07:04
dusk arising said:
The words of love enriching understanding and acceptance. But told in your exquisite style.
Again, to write like this, one has to have lived it.
January 19th, 2021 07:04
Awareness
L. B. Mek said:
\'while when gentle generates ease
hurtful moments start
to melt for regret weeds out stress
then stillness returns
to dissipate pain and scatter seeds
of relationship\'s curse
as forgiving aids love\'s awareness.\'
just a drip of your daily writing routine these words may be, but they reach deep to those unspoken words of regret I carry with me, what a wonderful gift you share with us dear Fay, beautifully worded
January 19th, 2021 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'while when gentle generates ease
hurtful moments start
to melt for regret weeds out stress
then stillness returns
to dissipate pain and scatter seeds
of relationship\'s curse
as forgiving aids love\'s awareness.\'
just a drip of your daily writing routine these words may be, but they reach deep to those unspoken words of regret I carry with me, what a wonderful gift you share with us dear Fay, beautifully worded
January 19th, 2021 06:32
Awareness
Neville said:
there is more truth contained here than is fair to most non fiction writers .. and your summative line is more than insightful ... it is enlightening ...
January 19th, 2021 05:56
Neville said:
there is more truth contained here than is fair to most non fiction writers .. and your summative line is more than insightful ... it is enlightening ...
January 19th, 2021 05:56
Sunday Ways
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful trip back in time, to an idyllic scene, worded so accessibly immersive,
thank you for sharing dear Fay
January 19th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful trip back in time, to an idyllic scene, worded so accessibly immersive,
thank you for sharing dear Fay
January 19th, 2021 04:36
Sunday Ways
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Fay and that picture really took me back to the days of my childhood. Thank you.
Andy
January 19th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Fay and that picture really took me back to the days of my childhood. Thank you.
Andy
January 19th, 2021 01:44
Sunday Ways
FredPeyer said:
You really are a wordsmith, Fay. Wonderful description of a lazy Sunday, took me back to my youth. And the picture goes so well with your fine words.
January 18th, 2021 21:14
FredPeyer said:
You really are a wordsmith, Fay. Wonderful description of a lazy Sunday, took me back to my youth. And the picture goes so well with your fine words.
January 18th, 2021 21:14
Sunday Ways
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i enjoyed this down to earth write fay
January 18th, 2021 17:09
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i enjoyed this down to earth write fay
January 18th, 2021 17:09
Sunday Ways
Neville said:
You have such a remarkable way with words .. I only need to half close my eyes and I am transported to some other place ... write now is no exception to that rule .... Sunday tea time with my Mum & Dad and little brother ... it never varied, until it was gone ... x
January 18th, 2021 04:48
Neville said:
You have such a remarkable way with words .. I only need to half close my eyes and I am transported to some other place ... write now is no exception to that rule .... Sunday tea time with my Mum & Dad and little brother ... it never varied, until it was gone ... x
January 18th, 2021 04:48
Specialness
Neville said:
These fine words are both special and splendid in their own write ... and truly too ................................................ x
January 16th, 2021 08:35
Neville said:
These fine words are both special and splendid in their own write ... and truly too ................................................ x
January 16th, 2021 08:35
Specialness
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Buttercup summers\" Wow that is really good Fay.
January 15th, 2021 09:35
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Buttercup summers\" Wow that is really good Fay.
January 15th, 2021 09:35
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