Comments received on poems by Andrew Charles Forrest
THE CRAVENNESS OF THE BLUE FUNK
Michael Edwards said:
I guess I\'m lucky in that I can close doors behind me - rarely if ever do I feel the need to revisit them. But I can understand the trauma for those who cannot isolate a troubled past and I have witnessed this at first hand - your superb poem captures this so well .
February 23rd, 2019 08:11
Michael Edwards said:
I guess I\'m lucky in that I can close doors behind me - rarely if ever do I feel the need to revisit them. But I can understand the trauma for those who cannot isolate a troubled past and I have witnessed this at first hand - your superb poem captures this so well .
February 23rd, 2019 08:11
THE CRAVENNESS OF THE BLUE FUNK
Neville said:
Hey buddy, you just took me somewhere that I have never actually been before.. shame on me.. I knew it existed but tend to avoid it like the plague.. the reason why, my personal blue funk room consists of a whole new extension and then some.... a great write and one o them universal truths I occasionally bang on about... Have a great weekend my friend... N
February 23rd, 2019 05:13
Neville said:
Hey buddy, you just took me somewhere that I have never actually been before.. shame on me.. I knew it existed but tend to avoid it like the plague.. the reason why, my personal blue funk room consists of a whole new extension and then some.... a great write and one o them universal truths I occasionally bang on about... Have a great weekend my friend... N
February 23rd, 2019 05:13
THE CRAVENNESS OF THE BLUE FUNK
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks ANDREW for an excellent poem : YES we all bear GUILT for the death of each & every Christian Martyr : from Stephen to those who will die this Month ! We also bear guilt for the death of Jesus for our SINS !
Im the one who shouted CRUCIFY
Im the one who raised His Cross on high
Im the one who stood and watched Him die
What have I done ? Im the one !
If you visit Balliol College in OXFORD : in the carpark there is a BRASS CROSS on the GROUND. It marks the spot where Lattimer & Ridley where burned @ the stake for their Faith in Jesus. Stand on and you can feel the HEAT : AMEN
Blessings in the Spirit : ANGELA 🧡
February 23rd, 2019 04:53
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks ANDREW for an excellent poem : YES we all bear GUILT for the death of each & every Christian Martyr : from Stephen to those who will die this Month ! We also bear guilt for the death of Jesus for our SINS !
Im the one who shouted CRUCIFY
Im the one who raised His Cross on high
Im the one who stood and watched Him die
What have I done ? Im the one !
If you visit Balliol College in OXFORD : in the carpark there is a BRASS CROSS on the GROUND. It marks the spot where Lattimer & Ridley where burned @ the stake for their Faith in Jesus. Stand on and you can feel the HEAT : AMEN
Blessings in the Spirit : ANGELA 🧡
February 23rd, 2019 04:53
Ink spots and paper snowballs
Goldfinch60 said:
May those pens never stop writing Andrew.
February 22nd, 2019 15:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May those pens never stop writing Andrew.
February 22nd, 2019 15:44
Ink spots and paper snowballs
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause for each of these lovely reasons for writing - an unforgettable read which must be one of your best - into my faves it goes dear Andrew.
February 22nd, 2019 11:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause for each of these lovely reasons for writing - an unforgettable read which must be one of your best - into my faves it goes dear Andrew.
February 22nd, 2019 11:27
Disillusioned
Suresh said:
Once this land too must have witnessed happier times, where farmers toiled and the craftsmen reveled in their work.
Nice subject
February 22nd, 2019 11:20
Suresh said:
Once this land too must have witnessed happier times, where farmers toiled and the craftsmen reveled in their work.
Nice subject
February 22nd, 2019 11:20
Ink spots and paper snowballs
SerenWise said:
This is lovely! Very well written and relatable
February 22nd, 2019 08:46
SerenWise said:
This is lovely! Very well written and relatable
February 22nd, 2019 08:46
Ink spots and paper snowballs
dusk arising said:
I wish you many refills for your many talented pens sir.
Excellent piece.
February 22nd, 2019 07:16
dusk arising said:
I wish you many refills for your many talented pens sir.
Excellent piece.
February 22nd, 2019 07:16
Ink spots and paper snowballs
Neville said:
a pen for all seasons, ages and mood
perfectly penned poem in any book.... N
February 22nd, 2019 05:02
Neville said:
a pen for all seasons, ages and mood
perfectly penned poem in any book.... N
February 22nd, 2019 05:02
Ink spots and paper snowballs
Michael Edwards said:
A lovely write which underlines the reasons why we write . There is one - no there are two predominant reasons why I write which I can add to this: a daft sense of humour and, more importantly, a love of the language. Regarding the later I value both flow and metre which I try to observe even in my silliest pieces.
February 22nd, 2019 04:05
Michael Edwards said:
A lovely write which underlines the reasons why we write . There is one - no there are two predominant reasons why I write which I can add to this: a daft sense of humour and, more importantly, a love of the language. Regarding the later I value both flow and metre which I try to observe even in my silliest pieces.
February 22nd, 2019 04:05
Ink spots and paper snowballs
sylviasearcher said:
You have captured the purpose of my prose.
February 22nd, 2019 03:55
sylviasearcher said:
You have captured the purpose of my prose.
February 22nd, 2019 03:55
Some Sort Of Dipity
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Andrew, I will meet you in that sea.
February 21st, 2019 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Andrew, I will meet you in that sea.
February 21st, 2019 01:36
Some Sort Of Dipity
Fay Slimm. said:
A deep and meaningful write Andrew - looking forward to that happy time of feeling the sun again and finding the sea. A lovely read.
February 20th, 2019 06:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A deep and meaningful write Andrew - looking forward to that happy time of feeling the sun again and finding the sea. A lovely read.
February 20th, 2019 06:42
Some Sort Of Dipity
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - and all\'s well with the world.
February 20th, 2019 06:27
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - and all\'s well with the world.
February 20th, 2019 06:27
Some Sort Of Dipity
Neville said:
I love the title.. and the poem, and all the things that spring to mind as a result of visiting this page.. cheers
February 20th, 2019 05:40
Neville said:
I love the title.. and the poem, and all the things that spring to mind as a result of visiting this page.. cheers
February 20th, 2019 05:40
Some Sort Of Dipity
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
May you dulcet tones be eternal Orchi with song there would be no dance
February 20th, 2019 04:19
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
May you dulcet tones be eternal Orchi with song there would be no dance
February 20th, 2019 04:19
Some Sort Of Dipity
orchidee said:
A good write Andrew. Also - There are those who will sing again - me, unfortunately. Argghh! lol.
February 20th, 2019 03:59
orchidee said:
A good write Andrew. Also - There are those who will sing again - me, unfortunately. Argghh! lol.
February 20th, 2019 03:59
Covered in Dust
Neville said:
Your words just sent a shiver up & down the entire length of my spine so they did... stark reality mixed with a touch of poetry will do it every time ... Neville
February 19th, 2019 17:16
Neville said:
Your words just sent a shiver up & down the entire length of my spine so they did... stark reality mixed with a touch of poetry will do it every time ... Neville
February 19th, 2019 17:16
Eight lessons I learned in life... (In the order I learnt them)
Neville said:
You definitely have something of the sage about ya squire.. message received, over and out..... Neville
February 18th, 2019 11:04
Neville said:
You definitely have something of the sage about ya squire.. message received, over and out..... Neville
February 18th, 2019 11:04
You...
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Why thank you... That one was from the lovely pen, I still hae that one
February 12th, 2019 07:49
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Why thank you... That one was from the lovely pen, I still hae that one
February 12th, 2019 07:49
You...
Neville said:
what a terrifically touching and tender reminder of what true love can be like ... so damn good and on so many darn levels......................Neville
February 12th, 2019 07:45
Neville said:
what a terrifically touching and tender reminder of what true love can be like ... so damn good and on so many darn levels......................Neville
February 12th, 2019 07:45
Disillusioned
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Andrew, they are always there within their land.
Andy
February 12th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Andrew, they are always there within their land.
Andy
February 12th, 2019 01:00
Disillusioned
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thank you Alislinn you are very kind
thank you for the read I am sorry for apalachia too in that case
February 11th, 2019 16:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thank you Alislinn you are very kind
thank you for the read I am sorry for apalachia too in that case
February 11th, 2019 16:26
Disillusioned
Aislinn Wilson said:
Reminded me of appaclachia. Good emotionally effective write.
February 11th, 2019 14:08
Aislinn Wilson said:
Reminded me of appaclachia. Good emotionally effective write.
February 11th, 2019 14:08
Disillusioned
Neville said:
a fine write sir, a very fine write indeed
and one that makes one wonder, tis not so very long ago after all, is it... Regards to both you & your pen.... Neville
February 11th, 2019 14:00
Neville said:
a fine write sir, a very fine write indeed
and one that makes one wonder, tis not so very long ago after all, is it... Regards to both you & your pen.... Neville
February 11th, 2019 14:00
Disillusioned
Michael Edwards said:
Sad reflective write but so captivating - much enjoyed the read.
February 11th, 2019 13:01
Michael Edwards said:
Sad reflective write but so captivating - much enjoyed the read.
February 11th, 2019 13:01
Disillusioned
orchidee said:
A fine write A. Is that your house after gale force winds - blew the roof off and the windows/doors out?! I was gonna come and stay a fortnight, but I don\'t fancy the look of that house this season. lol.
February 11th, 2019 10:56
orchidee said:
A fine write A. Is that your house after gale force winds - blew the roof off and the windows/doors out?! I was gonna come and stay a fortnight, but I don\'t fancy the look of that house this season. lol.
February 11th, 2019 10:56
Disillusioned
dusk arising said:
Lovely piece sir. Picture reminds me of Skye.
When they are gone, what thoughts accompany them through the years. Chased off their homesteads by capitalist lairds. Where do they end up.
Today we look at these ruins of their past with romantic eyes but the very existence in that land of those times must have been hard work for all.
Yes their souls haunt their lands.
February 11th, 2019 10:55
dusk arising said:
Lovely piece sir. Picture reminds me of Skye.
When they are gone, what thoughts accompany them through the years. Chased off their homesteads by capitalist lairds. Where do they end up.
Today we look at these ruins of their past with romantic eyes but the very existence in that land of those times must have been hard work for all.
Yes their souls haunt their lands.
February 11th, 2019 10:55
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