Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Inside the Sky
2781 said:
May your mourning turn to dancing, and your sorry turn joy.
July 5th, 2025 09:16
2781 said:
May your mourning turn to dancing, and your sorry turn joy.
July 5th, 2025 09:16
Inside the Sky
Teddy.15 said:
Inside the Sky, it\'s a very big sky. I always find as a woman any good man really does put it all on his shoulders and carries it regardless of any obstacles, I see the behind the scenes here and it\'s fabulous, fabulous in the fact that you have made it come alive with all its tragedy and with so much dignity. Now I know you have a very very kind heart and I also know that your an artist of great talent. As a woman I appreciate what a great man goes through, I see it every day but not all women can see it, and you have just shown the world. 💜
July 5th, 2025 08:58
Teddy.15 said:
Inside the Sky, it\'s a very big sky. I always find as a woman any good man really does put it all on his shoulders and carries it regardless of any obstacles, I see the behind the scenes here and it\'s fabulous, fabulous in the fact that you have made it come alive with all its tragedy and with so much dignity. Now I know you have a very very kind heart and I also know that your an artist of great talent. As a woman I appreciate what a great man goes through, I see it every day but not all women can see it, and you have just shown the world. 💜
July 5th, 2025 08:58
Inside the Sky
Caring dove said:
We all should all feel we can cry .. without that feeling of ‘ we can’t ‘ or being worried about upsetting others , or feeling embarrassed .
‘ Sometimes ‘ others can make us feel bad for letting our emotions out ..
A good writing )
July 5th, 2025 08:03
Caring dove said:
We all should all feel we can cry .. without that feeling of ‘ we can’t ‘ or being worried about upsetting others , or feeling embarrassed .
‘ Sometimes ‘ others can make us feel bad for letting our emotions out ..
A good writing )
July 5th, 2025 08:03
Inside the Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Intricate rhyme woven in a persistently formed gender specific cultural training of male toughness and emotionlessness image that persists despite knowledge to its contrary. How persistent is the effects of cultural expectation and past learning. How we are stuck in the cement of our past learning and culture. Even the roots of knowledge have a hard time breaking cracks in this pavement. Very nice a fave
July 5th, 2025 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
Intricate rhyme woven in a persistently formed gender specific cultural training of male toughness and emotionlessness image that persists despite knowledge to its contrary. How persistent is the effects of cultural expectation and past learning. How we are stuck in the cement of our past learning and culture. Even the roots of knowledge have a hard time breaking cracks in this pavement. Very nice a fave
July 5th, 2025 07:54
Fornication Nation
orchidee said:
Well, two people don\'t help to reduce it - we knows them. Popeye and Obi. lol.
July 5th, 2025 01:20
orchidee said:
Well, two people don\'t help to reduce it - we knows them. Popeye and Obi. lol.
July 5th, 2025 01:20
Fornication Nation
sorenbarrett said:
We live in a greedy species, in a greedy world, under a greedy system. Greed is preached as desired (He who dies with the most toys wins) A strong poem Tristan.
July 4th, 2025 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
We live in a greedy species, in a greedy world, under a greedy system. Greed is preached as desired (He who dies with the most toys wins) A strong poem Tristan.
July 4th, 2025 15:51
Fornication Nation
Teddy.15 said:
A magnificent song here dear Tristan,
In the land of the free
There’s always a cost,
But the cycle can end
Before you’re too lost.
Just open your eyes,
It’s not too late to see.
You gotta stand up and fight.
If you’re gonna…be free
I could say I could hear Bob Marley singing this
A piece of art with is timeless sad but so true. If you celebrate independence I wish you a fabulous day dear friend. 🌹
July 4th, 2025 15:16
Teddy.15 said:
A magnificent song here dear Tristan,
In the land of the free
There’s always a cost,
But the cycle can end
Before you’re too lost.
Just open your eyes,
It’s not too late to see.
You gotta stand up and fight.
If you’re gonna…be free
I could say I could hear Bob Marley singing this
A piece of art with is timeless sad but so true. If you celebrate independence I wish you a fabulous day dear friend. 🌹
July 4th, 2025 15:16
Fornication Nation
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed listening to that, very Neil Young to me, one of my favourites, nicely done
July 4th, 2025 13:18
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed listening to that, very Neil Young to me, one of my favourites, nicely done
July 4th, 2025 13:18
The Cycle of a Dark Seed
arqios said:
This poem strikes like a tempest, capturing the raw, untamed turbulence of a young mind wrestling with profound darkness and emotion. Its vivid, visceral imagery reveals a struggle against inner shadows and a desperate search for control or release. Beneath the storm lies a haunting vulnerability; a voice grappling with despair, yet also reaching for acknowledgment and catharsis. This piece is a testament to the depths of human thought, where chaos and creativity intertwine, forging powerful and evocative expressions.
July 3rd, 2025 17:23
arqios said:
This poem strikes like a tempest, capturing the raw, untamed turbulence of a young mind wrestling with profound darkness and emotion. Its vivid, visceral imagery reveals a struggle against inner shadows and a desperate search for control or release. Beneath the storm lies a haunting vulnerability; a voice grappling with despair, yet also reaching for acknowledgment and catharsis. This piece is a testament to the depths of human thought, where chaos and creativity intertwine, forging powerful and evocative expressions.
July 3rd, 2025 17:23
The Cycle of a Dark Seed
Doggerel Dave said:
....so it wasn\'t buried, then? Cheered me up no end, Tristan.😝
July 3rd, 2025 16:58
Doggerel Dave said:
....so it wasn\'t buried, then? Cheered me up no end, Tristan.😝
July 3rd, 2025 16:58
The Cycle of a Dark Seed
Poetic Licence said:
The pent up anger of youth feeling violence might be the only way to express themselves or be heard, a raw and dark step inside a worried mind, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 12:46
Poetic Licence said:
The pent up anger of youth feeling violence might be the only way to express themselves or be heard, a raw and dark step inside a worried mind, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 12:46
The Cycle of a Dark Seed
Teddy.15 said:
The energy is fearce it\'s a very very dark piece, brilliant, to say you wrote it as a young lad, I study the minds of young people and this says you had much talent, where that came from then, well you know, where you are today is a lesson to us all. 🌹 Born to write.
July 3rd, 2025 11:08
Teddy.15 said:
The energy is fearce it\'s a very very dark piece, brilliant, to say you wrote it as a young lad, I study the minds of young people and this says you had much talent, where that came from then, well you know, where you are today is a lesson to us all. 🌹 Born to write.
July 3rd, 2025 11:08
The Cycle of a Dark Seed
orchidee said:
If hunger and famine was not such a serious theme, that guy looks a bit under-fed there. Doh!
And then I make some weird comment - \'Oooh, not today, thank you; don\'t fancy the theme of that poem! lol.
July 3rd, 2025 09:44
orchidee said:
If hunger and famine was not such a serious theme, that guy looks a bit under-fed there. Doh!
And then I make some weird comment - \'Oooh, not today, thank you; don\'t fancy the theme of that poem! lol.
July 3rd, 2025 09:44
The Cycle of a Dark Seed
sorenbarrett said:
The anger of youth in this poem as well as violence. Even in metaphor it expounds force and the vigor of youth. Energetic and passionate it cries out.
July 3rd, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
The anger of youth in this poem as well as violence. Even in metaphor it expounds force and the vigor of youth. Energetic and passionate it cries out.
July 3rd, 2025 08:45
The P\'s of Poetry
NafisaSB said:
pleasing poem - professionally prepared
A thumbs up here for you..
July 3rd, 2025 06:37
NafisaSB said:
pleasing poem - professionally prepared
A thumbs up here for you..
July 3rd, 2025 06:37
Where Are They Now?
orchidee said:
Good write T. Erm, my poem is \'Where are they now\' - Popeye and Obi, that is. Don\'t answer that! LOL.
July 3rd, 2025 02:23
orchidee said:
Good write T. Erm, my poem is \'Where are they now\' - Popeye and Obi, that is. Don\'t answer that! LOL.
July 3rd, 2025 02:23
Where Are They Now?
Cheeky Missy said:
Quoth the Girrabbit,\"Wouldn\'t you like to know?!--\" who doesn\'t know shall apparently remain blind until...eternity? The driving cause behind our varied languages and disparity hasn\'t ceased to exist, but morphed throughout the millennia, so far as I know. Charmingly rendered little riddle with grand imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 2nd, 2025 22:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Quoth the Girrabbit,\"Wouldn\'t you like to know?!--\" who doesn\'t know shall apparently remain blind until...eternity? The driving cause behind our varied languages and disparity hasn\'t ceased to exist, but morphed throughout the millennia, so far as I know. Charmingly rendered little riddle with grand imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 2nd, 2025 22:18
Where Are They Now?
arqios said:
The physical Babylon lay in ruin but her spirit lives on... a scary thought.💭🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 21:48
arqios said:
The physical Babylon lay in ruin but her spirit lives on... a scary thought.💭🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 21:48
Where Are They Now?
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, though not many words they prick at your conscience with many other questions, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 13:52
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, though not many words they prick at your conscience with many other questions, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 13:52
Where Are They Now?
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe by the river? Oh my if you could speak any louder through your words you would be shouting, and that my friend is a massive compliment. 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 13:49
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe by the river? Oh my if you could speak any louder through your words you would be shouting, and that my friend is a massive compliment. 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 13:49
Where Are They Now?
sorenbarrett said:
They are long gone and the majesty of mighty Babylon lies buried soon to be a myth of culture beyond its time turned to sin by modern believers. A wonderful poem full of metaphor that might take pages to interpret. Nicely worded Tristan
July 2nd, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
They are long gone and the majesty of mighty Babylon lies buried soon to be a myth of culture beyond its time turned to sin by modern believers. A wonderful poem full of metaphor that might take pages to interpret. Nicely worded Tristan
July 2nd, 2025 12:57
I Am Tittu
Cheeky Missy said:
What an exquisite dedication to a sweet friendship across the miles, across the seas, beautifully born even here! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a very beautiful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 2nd, 2025 09:34
Cheeky Missy said:
What an exquisite dedication to a sweet friendship across the miles, across the seas, beautifully born even here! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a very beautiful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 2nd, 2025 09:34
I Am Tittu
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, a sense of calm, unity and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:31
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, a sense of calm, unity and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:31
I Am Tittu
Salvia.S said:
This is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!!!! Love it ❤️ Very nicely written dear Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 1st, 2025 10:41
Salvia.S said:
This is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!!!! Love it ❤️ Very nicely written dear Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 1st, 2025 10:41
I Am Tittu
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good. The last line, in its simplicity worked in a strange way. It is a firm commitment to peace which emerged with a gravity of declaration of war against forces which were hell bent to subvert peace. I am not sure if I could explain myself. But what I wanted say was that your poem worked.
July 1st, 2025 10:05
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good. The last line, in its simplicity worked in a strange way. It is a firm commitment to peace which emerged with a gravity of declaration of war against forces which were hell bent to subvert peace. I am not sure if I could explain myself. But what I wanted say was that your poem worked.
July 1st, 2025 10:05
I Am Tittu
Damaso said:
Immense overflowing, an incredible sensation of magnificence sir, thank you very much for sharing it. A pleasure to read. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:44
Damaso said:
Immense overflowing, an incredible sensation of magnificence sir, thank you very much for sharing it. A pleasure to read. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:44
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