Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Descent in D Minor
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
A magical and
musical write! 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Just \"resonates\'\' with
greatness, to read a delight!! 🎹🎶
Thanks for sharing,
VERY creative!!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:16
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
A magical and
musical write! 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Just \"resonates\'\' with
greatness, to read a delight!! 🎹🎶
Thanks for sharing,
VERY creative!!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:16
Descent in D Minor
arqios said:
And lingers quite a while still…. Sometimes even for decades…. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 17:23
arqios said:
And lingers quite a while still…. Sometimes even for decades…. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 17:23
Descent in D Minor
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Though my style is mainly to \'ascend\'. Yet we\'re \'heavier\' at some seasons, such as Lent, and not all the Psalms are praise-y in all their verses.
January 21st, 2025 11:22
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Though my style is mainly to \'ascend\'. Yet we\'re \'heavier\' at some seasons, such as Lent, and not all the Psalms are praise-y in all their verses.
January 21st, 2025 11:22
Descent in D Minor
sorenbarrett said:
You have outdone yourself with this poem of music that can be seen. The format was perfect and the words resound in the eye as well as the ear. This is a Fave
January 21st, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
You have outdone yourself with this poem of music that can be seen. The format was perfect and the words resound in the eye as well as the ear. This is a Fave
January 21st, 2025 08:34
Inauguration Day
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A terrific poem
the thoughts
and message penned!!
Love the form, repeated lines
much enjoyed my friend!!! 🏆
Have a great day!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 20th, 2025 18:27
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A terrific poem
the thoughts
and message penned!!
Love the form, repeated lines
much enjoyed my friend!!! 🏆
Have a great day!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 20th, 2025 18:27
Inauguration Day
arqios said:
And yet it is more than social justice, big as that is as far as issues go, of a cosmological and existential dilemma… some are aware, others chose to ignore the signs.
January 20th, 2025 17:48
arqios said:
And yet it is more than social justice, big as that is as far as issues go, of a cosmological and existential dilemma… some are aware, others chose to ignore the signs.
January 20th, 2025 17:48
Inauguration Day
NinjaGirl said:
This is a good one, I like the repetition, it really does drive the point across
January 20th, 2025 10:35
NinjaGirl said:
This is a good one, I like the repetition, it really does drive the point across
January 20th, 2025 10:35
Inauguration Day
sorenbarrett said:
Several times in history such events have happened and with differing outcomes. Good or bad, right or wrong the potential for change toward safety or over a cliff and we will have to wait to see. A great write one should never follow the crowd in doing wrong. One voice can make a difference
January 20th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Several times in history such events have happened and with differing outcomes. Good or bad, right or wrong the potential for change toward safety or over a cliff and we will have to wait to see. A great write one should never follow the crowd in doing wrong. One voice can make a difference
January 20th, 2025 10:29
unexpected snowfall
Neville said:
You just draughted the blizzard from hell .. and such a pretty one too .. blindingly brill my friend .. and with no time to prep, it was a pleasure to get caught out in it .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:03
Neville said:
You just draughted the blizzard from hell .. and such a pretty one too .. blindingly brill my friend .. and with no time to prep, it was a pleasure to get caught out in it .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:03
unexpected snowfall
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem, thoughts
and message, skillfully expressed!!
Brilliantly composed,
poetic awesomeness!!! 🥇
Thank you for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 19th, 2025 21:43
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem, thoughts
and message, skillfully expressed!!
Brilliantly composed,
poetic awesomeness!!! 🥇
Thank you for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 19th, 2025 21:43
unexpected snowfall
NinjaGirl said:
the snow is the cold blanket offered to the empty world
January 19th, 2025 16:41
NinjaGirl said:
the snow is the cold blanket offered to the empty world
January 19th, 2025 16:41
unexpected snowfall
Cheeky Missy said:
Come, come, take a second look and see the darling flakes all jostling as they descend impetuously, the silence of falling snow very much alive and listening, listening without a voice to break the almost hallowed silence which half seems to beg a reverence even while we trudge in lonely naught to our tasks. [I\'m dreadfully overtired and rambling, please forgive me.]
Exquisite and rendered to effect with a painful poignancy and such delicious imagery. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 09:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Come, come, take a second look and see the darling flakes all jostling as they descend impetuously, the silence of falling snow very much alive and listening, listening without a voice to break the almost hallowed silence which half seems to beg a reverence even while we trudge in lonely naught to our tasks. [I\'m dreadfully overtired and rambling, please forgive me.]
Exquisite and rendered to effect with a painful poignancy and such delicious imagery. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 09:00
unexpected snowfall
Cassie58 said:
How heartfelt is this poem Tristen. The silence and coldness felt amid the crystal beauty.
Snowflakes are so delicate yet the mood in this poem hangs heavy. Have a wonderful Sunday.
January 19th, 2025 08:13
Cassie58 said:
How heartfelt is this poem Tristen. The silence and coldness felt amid the crystal beauty.
Snowflakes are so delicate yet the mood in this poem hangs heavy. Have a wonderful Sunday.
January 19th, 2025 08:13
unexpected snowfall
sorenbarrett said:
Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing of the ground as it piles higher. The metaphor works well and the feeling of being abandoned and isolated in the masses is clear to me. Snow is deafening in its silence.
January 19th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing of the ground as it piles higher. The metaphor works well and the feeling of being abandoned and isolated in the masses is clear to me. Snow is deafening in its silence.
January 19th, 2025 08:00
riverbeds
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message
on the subject of
suicide prevention,
loved the AN if anyone
in need of help!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 18th, 2025 22:39
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message
on the subject of
suicide prevention,
loved the AN if anyone
in need of help!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 18th, 2025 22:39
riverbeds
Mutley Ravishes said:
A cry for help
I hurt myself
Am I this way
Because I’m ready to break
Out of the cage ?
Haunting writing and imagery, Tristan.
January 18th, 2025 19:00
Mutley Ravishes said:
A cry for help
I hurt myself
Am I this way
Because I’m ready to break
Out of the cage ?
Haunting writing and imagery, Tristan.
January 18th, 2025 19:00
riverbeds
arqios said:
Rivulets like the branches of veins, nerves and arteries… a fitting image; quite powerful. My choice back then was a more noose type affair… but I’ve since walked away from that, although there are days when the option presents itself in passing. Your courage registers clearly. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 18th, 2025 14:56
arqios said:
Rivulets like the branches of veins, nerves and arteries… a fitting image; quite powerful. My choice back then was a more noose type affair… but I’ve since walked away from that, although there are days when the option presents itself in passing. Your courage registers clearly. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 18th, 2025 14:56
riverbeds
NinjaGirl said:
I never would have thought to use a dry riverbed for symbolism! I absolutely love that idea, the flowing of blood and the scars like the cracked soil. I seriously love this poem.
January 18th, 2025 14:14
NinjaGirl said:
I never would have thought to use a dry riverbed for symbolism! I absolutely love that idea, the flowing of blood and the scars like the cracked soil. I seriously love this poem.
January 18th, 2025 14:14
riverbeds
isa kemmy said:
excellent write , i like it, sometimes we go through this .
January 18th, 2025 13:07
isa kemmy said:
excellent write , i like it, sometimes we go through this .
January 18th, 2025 13:07
riverbeds
Neville said:
Quite possibly the single most important public service announcement in poetic form that I have ever come across .. indeed, I know for a fact that self harm in any and all of its many forms is a huge global issue because I encounter it almost every day .. Neville
January 18th, 2025 13:01
Neville said:
Quite possibly the single most important public service announcement in poetic form that I have ever come across .. indeed, I know for a fact that self harm in any and all of its many forms is a huge global issue because I encounter it almost every day .. Neville
January 18th, 2025 13:01
riverbeds
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed. A great message and much needed
January 18th, 2025 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed. A great message and much needed
January 18th, 2025 11:20
Passion\'s Paradox
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up
a sexSational poem!! 😍
SensualSational imagery too
I must say!!👌
Great use of that form
just blew me away!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 17th, 2025 21:00
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up
a sexSational poem!! 😍
SensualSational imagery too
I must say!!👌
Great use of that form
just blew me away!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 17th, 2025 21:00
Passion\'s Paradox
NinjaGirl said:
Dark and haunting I find commitment scarce.. it\'s much easier to have a sex partner than it is to have a \"let\'s tackle life together\" partner
January 17th, 2025 19:11
NinjaGirl said:
Dark and haunting I find commitment scarce.. it\'s much easier to have a sex partner than it is to have a \"let\'s tackle life together\" partner
January 17th, 2025 19:11
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