Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Demons
Poetic Licence said:
Well as someone who has danced with many devils i really like this poem, and highlights the fact we have all danced at some stage, some who did not choose to and those who did, Very enjoyable read.
December 15th, 2024 08:26
Poetic Licence said:
Well as someone who has danced with many devils i really like this poem, and highlights the fact we have all danced at some stage, some who did not choose to and those who did, Very enjoyable read.
December 15th, 2024 08:26
Demons
aDarkerMind said:
a wonderful write indeed Tristan.
we eat from the same table my friend.
December 15th, 2024 07:37
aDarkerMind said:
a wonderful write indeed Tristan.
we eat from the same table my friend.
December 15th, 2024 07:37
Demons
sorenbarrett said:
We all are tempted to dance with sirens and at one time or another we all succumb to the call. A wonderfull write my friend
December 15th, 2024 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
We all are tempted to dance with sirens and at one time or another we all succumb to the call. A wonderfull write my friend
December 15th, 2024 07:34
Doors
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to doors - well, I know now! lol.
December 15th, 2024 03:47
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to doors - well, I know now! lol.
December 15th, 2024 03:47
The Key
Cheeky Missy said:
Mmm, I might be tempted to say you\'re worth the trouble, depends. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 14th, 2024 17:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Mmm, I might be tempted to say you\'re worth the trouble, depends. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 14th, 2024 17:48
Doors
Cassie58 said:
Much to contemplate in this superbly crafted poem Tristan. We are all on a journey. I guess most will say ‘ I did it my way’. A long time since I listened to the Doors. Time to change that. Have a good rest of weekend dear poet.
December 14th, 2024 17:40
Cassie58 said:
Much to contemplate in this superbly crafted poem Tristan. We are all on a journey. I guess most will say ‘ I did it my way’. A long time since I listened to the Doors. Time to change that. Have a good rest of weekend dear poet.
December 14th, 2024 17:40
Doors
Neville said:
When you put it like that, the light seems to flicker more brightly & come on which in turn, shows one the way .. Neville 👍
December 14th, 2024 12:32
Neville said:
When you put it like that, the light seems to flicker more brightly & come on which in turn, shows one the way .. Neville 👍
December 14th, 2024 12:32
Doors
Poetic Licence said:
Those with closed minds only hear what they want to hear ( especially if the truth effects them), those with open minds may not agree but will listen. Great read, Thank you Tristan
December 14th, 2024 12:17
Poetic Licence said:
Those with closed minds only hear what they want to hear ( especially if the truth effects them), those with open minds may not agree but will listen. Great read, Thank you Tristan
December 14th, 2024 12:17
Doors
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words that one must loose fear to hear the truth before one can hear it. Nicely done
December 14th, 2024 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words that one must loose fear to hear the truth before one can hear it. Nicely done
December 14th, 2024 11:05
One Out of Five
cellinic said:
Poem well-done, easily and eagerly faved, my friend!
December 14th, 2024 06:34
cellinic said:
Poem well-done, easily and eagerly faved, my friend!
December 14th, 2024 06:34
One Out of Five
rebellion_in_sanity said:
WOW! I don\'t know if it is a poem or a painting where disparate segments are made into a whole by the skilful artist. Perception - the grave of reality. \"Loved it\" sounds too lame, but my limited vocabulary can\'t drege up any suitable adornment.
December 14th, 2024 01:45
rebellion_in_sanity said:
WOW! I don\'t know if it is a poem or a painting where disparate segments are made into a whole by the skilful artist. Perception - the grave of reality. \"Loved it\" sounds too lame, but my limited vocabulary can\'t drege up any suitable adornment.
December 14th, 2024 01:45
One Out of Five
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem
and I agree! 👍
We\'re on an uphill
battle definitely! 😢
Great read my friend
penned superbly!! 🎖️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:05
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem
and I agree! 👍
We\'re on an uphill
battle definitely! 😢
Great read my friend
penned superbly!! 🎖️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:05
One Out of Five
Mutley Ravishes said:
Be careful not to bang your head on the brick wall too much, Tristan!
December 13th, 2024 21:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Be careful not to bang your head on the brick wall too much, Tristan!
December 13th, 2024 21:42
One Out of Five
Doggerel Dave said:
This is rich and complex, Tristan. Seems your piece has thrown up many different feelings in the debate here - including some of mine. Can’t help but agree with the general tenor of your depiction of the movement change over several generations. Can’t help but agree with the overall ‘progress’. The only point I feel impelled to make is that categorized generalisations are dangerous if they extend themselves beyond poetic limits. The Boomers (and I’m not one) were as much subjected to political control as any other generation. Some (perhaps almost the majority) fell into line (including going to war) but many did not.
But I think I can agree on the main point: it all seems to be going down the gurgler now.
Take care of yourself.
December 13th, 2024 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
This is rich and complex, Tristan. Seems your piece has thrown up many different feelings in the debate here - including some of mine. Can’t help but agree with the general tenor of your depiction of the movement change over several generations. Can’t help but agree with the overall ‘progress’. The only point I feel impelled to make is that categorized generalisations are dangerous if they extend themselves beyond poetic limits. The Boomers (and I’m not one) were as much subjected to political control as any other generation. Some (perhaps almost the majority) fell into line (including going to war) but many did not.
But I think I can agree on the main point: it all seems to be going down the gurgler now.
Take care of yourself.
December 13th, 2024 19:10
One Out of Five
Teddy.15 said:
Unbelievably beautiful powerful and your reeled me in to every line. Superb dear Tristan. 🌹
December 13th, 2024 13:37
Teddy.15 said:
Unbelievably beautiful powerful and your reeled me in to every line. Superb dear Tristan. 🌹
December 13th, 2024 13:37
One Out of Five
arqios said:
Somehow brought me back to thoughts of the Vietnam War and all other such sociopolitical upheavals that twisted and defined generations. I lost my cousin and best friend during the Gulf War in which he did 2 tours. I’m sure the poems apply to several other things but that stood out to me for some reason.
December 13th, 2024 09:01
arqios said:
Somehow brought me back to thoughts of the Vietnam War and all other such sociopolitical upheavals that twisted and defined generations. I lost my cousin and best friend during the Gulf War in which he did 2 tours. I’m sure the poems apply to several other things but that stood out to me for some reason.
December 13th, 2024 09:01
One Out of Five
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words and fantastic lines of poetic understanding. A lovely poem that makes its point.
December 13th, 2024 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words and fantastic lines of poetic understanding. A lovely poem that makes its point.
December 13th, 2024 08:35
One Out of Five
Poetic Licence said:
We need a handbrake on life, then a reverse gear and then we might be going in the right direction. Another enjoyable read Tristan, thank you
December 13th, 2024 08:07
Poetic Licence said:
We need a handbrake on life, then a reverse gear and then we might be going in the right direction. Another enjoyable read Tristan, thank you
December 13th, 2024 08:07
One Out of Five
2781 said:
There making progress, and it speeds up going downhill.
December 13th, 2024 07:55
2781 said:
There making progress, and it speeds up going downhill.
December 13th, 2024 07:55
The Key
teardrop said:
Love, love, love this! Loved the read and really loved your format. You tell a story in itself. Thank you for the read.
December 13th, 2024 05:46
teardrop said:
Love, love, love this! Loved the read and really loved your format. You tell a story in itself. Thank you for the read.
December 13th, 2024 05:46
The Key
cellinic said:
Very impressive and persuasive reflection... Mystical sense is interlinked with reality. Thanks!
December 13th, 2024 04:31
cellinic said:
Very impressive and persuasive reflection... Mystical sense is interlinked with reality. Thanks!
December 13th, 2024 04:31
A Dance With Death
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning is word which came to my mind during each read of the poem....loved it and read it several times
December 12th, 2024 23:53
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning is word which came to my mind during each read of the poem....loved it and read it several times
December 12th, 2024 23:53
The Key
Mutley Ravishes said:
How worth it am I?
Who are these I\'s?
Who am I?
The greatest adventure of all time!
Well, it seems like there\'s no avoiding a trip
To hell!
Great write, Tristan.
December 12th, 2024 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
How worth it am I?
Who are these I\'s?
Who am I?
The greatest adventure of all time!
Well, it seems like there\'s no avoiding a trip
To hell!
Great write, Tristan.
December 12th, 2024 18:49
A Dance With Death
NinjaGirl said:
Dance until you drop dead taken literally! On one hand Death is terrifying, but I\'ve heard he likes to flirt.
December 12th, 2024 18:16
NinjaGirl said:
Dance until you drop dead taken literally! On one hand Death is terrifying, but I\'ve heard he likes to flirt.
December 12th, 2024 18:16
The Key
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t think I\'m going to emulate, but I can surely appreciate the art, Tristan.
December 12th, 2024 17:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t think I\'m going to emulate, but I can surely appreciate the art, Tristan.
December 12th, 2024 17:32
A Dance With Death
Cassie58 said:
Wow I need a torch. There’s alot of darkness in this poem Tristan. Pleased to say I know the sun’s warmth and try my best to steer towards the light. A great read though:) Excellent poetry.
December 12th, 2024 13:38
Cassie58 said:
Wow I need a torch. There’s alot of darkness in this poem Tristan. Pleased to say I know the sun’s warmth and try my best to steer towards the light. A great read though:) Excellent poetry.
December 12th, 2024 13:38
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