Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



Chloe
arqios said:

Sublime and alive with connection🙏🏻🕊️

May 10th, 2025 08:34

Chloe
orchidee said:

Good write T. Does Mr OWK have any pets?! :)

May 10th, 2025 08:25

Chloe
Tony Grannell said:

If any animal has a soul, it\'s surely a dog. Loyal, doting, Chloe in a poem oozing with love. You are very lucky, Tristan to have such a grand companion.

Wishing you, fine health and happiness.

Tony.

May 10th, 2025 08:14

Chloe
sorenbarrett said:

It is interesting how there can be such a strong bond between a dog and man. I have had dogs and other animals with which I have had such a bond and this poem encapsulates it well. Loved it.

May 10th, 2025 07:56

The Laughing Matter
Teddy.15 said:

Incredibly brilliant and sad your last lines, so very relatable dear Tristan, love the way you have layed it out too. Kudos 🌹

May 9th, 2025 13:02

Does It Matter?
orchidee said:

It matters if our initials are OWK. (you knows it :) ).

May 9th, 2025 11:27

Does It Matter?
Tony Grannell said:

The blank space before the, \'never mind\', says it all, that is, saying nothing. Enough to dampen any, wow. Excellent, my friend.

All the very best,
Tony.

May 9th, 2025 10:57

Does It Matter?
NinjaGirl said:

Haha!

May 9th, 2025 10:45

Does It Matter?
Poetic Licence said:

To the point, nail on head time, very nicely done

May 9th, 2025 10:42

Does It Matter?
sorenbarrett said:

They say that it is what is not said that matters and so it is in this poem. I love the white between the print in this work. Very nice my friend

May 9th, 2025 09:58

Does It Matter?
arqios said:

It always matters. The why, the how, the because. 🙏🏻🕊️

May 9th, 2025 09:33

Does It Matter?
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

May 9th, 2025 09:08

Betrayal
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

May 8th, 2025 19:21

Betrayal
arqios said:

Looking at getting tone on paper… probably the toughest of these traitors. Subtle betrayals… breathe even makes the mark. A sure assassin. 🙏🏻🕊

May 8th, 2025 15:55

Betrayal
Poetic Licence said:

A cleverly crafted write a sense of the double edged sword, and maybe some betrayal in the write, enjoyed the read

May 8th, 2025 11:08

Betrayal
orchidee said:

Were we betrayed by Obi or Popeye, or both? And - don\'t I think of anyone else besides those two? LOL.

May 8th, 2025 10:29

Betrayal
sorenbarrett said:

So few words that also betray. Words are not always needed to betray one. A wonderful poetic write

May 8th, 2025 09:59

Betrayal
Cheeky Missy said:

Hahaha, but of course! And I\'d have it no other way. I\'m happy to be me. This gorgeous itty bitty pretty number packs a punch in tantalizing brevity. Superb. Thank you for sharing. I love it. Excellently rendered with a piercing poignancy and sparse imagery.

May 8th, 2025 09:50

Don\'t Let It Own You
Damaso said:

Friend, I can feel the blood rushing as I read each line, and my heart fills with courage enough to take down an army single-handedly. Heroic. Greetings.

May 8th, 2025 09:00

Don\'t Let It Own You
arqios said:

Being “owned” had quite a strong meaning in Gen Y and such. “Pwned” in gamer parlance. When we rise above we have a sense of not being owned or whatever the term is these days🙏🏻🕊️

May 8th, 2025 00:59

Don\'t Let It Own You
Cheeky Missy said:

Funny, \"... hath no fury like a woman scorned.\" Wasn\'t it? Concluding on that note, manhood seems to beautifully assert itself. Fascinating. This is a very pretty number in your characteristic style with gorgeous imagery and a ringing, provocative poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

May 7th, 2025 13:20

The Laughing Matter
Cheeky Missy said:

La dee! Were we, every last one of us, clowns in our various circles before finally being shown as artists and poets/poetesses? There\'s so much in this pretty number which resonates and seems to reverberate as if--? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, fascinating effects, and a charming though painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

May 7th, 2025 13:15

Don\'t Let It Own You
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Your work truly captures a person Tristan. I hope you never stop writing. There’s always something to be learned.

May 7th, 2025 12:41

Don\'t Let It Own You
Poetic Licence said:

Highlighting the issue of getting your permit to live in hell, as for most people life gets tough and one time or another. I understand the message of not letting it own you, which is a very positive statement, sometimes it\'s just not that simple, nicely crafted meaningful write

May 7th, 2025 12:33

Don\'t Let It Own You
orchidee said:

Fido says - bit \'dark\' this poem. heehee.

May 7th, 2025 11:51

Don\'t Let It Own You
orchidee said:

Erm spinach has no fury?! Good write Pop... erm Tristan. lol. I write some rubbish - sometimes! heehee.

May 7th, 2025 11:50

Don\'t Let It Own You
sorenbarrett said:

Might be me and my mania for metaphor but I hear one here. Life can be tough and we call it hell sometime yes don\'t let it own you. Very nice Tristan

May 7th, 2025 10:12

The Laughing Matter
Poetic Licence said:

A very creative way of touching a very serious subject, relatable in so many ways, wonderful write

May 7th, 2025 06:20

The Laughing Matter
Salvia.S 🌹 said:

Vivid and impactful imagery with palpable emotional depth. Well done!!!

May 6th, 2025 21:58

The Laughing Matter
NinjaGirl said:

A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I certainly was made to feel stupid in school!

May 6th, 2025 18:49



« Return to the profile of Tristan Robert Lange