Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Song You Taught Me
sorenbarrett said:
Very personal yet so applicable it reaches me personally. For those with the anchor of faith they remain in one place but to those adrift currents carry them to other shores. They may remain the same people but now separated by oceans of belief. Again loved the format that funneled one down to single word thoughts. We are all sailors on a vast sea.
January 25th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
Very personal yet so applicable it reaches me personally. For those with the anchor of faith they remain in one place but to those adrift currents carry them to other shores. They may remain the same people but now separated by oceans of belief. Again loved the format that funneled one down to single word thoughts. We are all sailors on a vast sea.
January 25th, 2025 08:08
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
arqios said:
Nine, ten, a big fat hen! Then we’ll all ah-tishoo and all fall down… so here’s to watchfully be aware and praying, surely something is in the air… 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 25th, 2025 06:12
arqios said:
Nine, ten, a big fat hen! Then we’ll all ah-tishoo and all fall down… so here’s to watchfully be aware and praying, surely something is in the air… 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 25th, 2025 06:12
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
Cheeky Missy said:
WTF is this, eh?! Too delightfully rendered with classic, enchanting rhythm and excellent imagery, not to mention a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 24th, 2025 16:53
Cheeky Missy said:
WTF is this, eh?! Too delightfully rendered with classic, enchanting rhythm and excellent imagery, not to mention a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 24th, 2025 16:53
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
orchidee said:
Millions of years ago I recall playing \'One potato, two, potato,.....\' using fists, but not fisticuffs! lol.
January 24th, 2025 11:26
orchidee said:
Millions of years ago I recall playing \'One potato, two, potato,.....\' using fists, but not fisticuffs! lol.
January 24th, 2025 11:26
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
Poetic Licence said:
Strong piece, in a dictators world there are no such things as freedom or amendments as the world is about to find out, i think the saying will be My Way Or Your On The Highway, really enjoyed the read.
January 24th, 2025 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
Strong piece, in a dictators world there are no such things as freedom or amendments as the world is about to find out, i think the saying will be My Way Or Your On The Highway, really enjoyed the read.
January 24th, 2025 11:09
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem and
I totally agree too,! 👍
We only need amendments
to fix constitutions, so true! 🙏🤩
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 24th, 2025 10:09
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem and
I totally agree too,! 👍
We only need amendments
to fix constitutions, so true! 🙏🤩
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 24th, 2025 10:09
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
sorenbarrett said:
I would so agree thank heavens the ratification of ammendments were left up to a herd of fools call the people. These are the same ones that elect the king fool. A most wonderful read to open eyes. It is the end of the string in the tangle
January 24th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
I would so agree thank heavens the ratification of ammendments were left up to a herd of fools call the people. These are the same ones that elect the king fool. A most wonderful read to open eyes. It is the end of the string in the tangle
January 24th, 2025 09:59
A Cut
Neville said:
The first cut is rarely the deepest .. so that blows that old myth out of the water to start with .. it often takes at least one or two testing nicks before the big one .. unless we are talking tension release and then who knows .. because who\'s counting by that stage .. Nice one for an early Friday afternoon ponder with the whole weekend off to look forward to too Tristan .. Kindest Regards, Neville
January 24th, 2025 09:22
Neville said:
The first cut is rarely the deepest .. so that blows that old myth out of the water to start with .. it often takes at least one or two testing nicks before the big one .. unless we are talking tension release and then who knows .. because who\'s counting by that stage .. Nice one for an early Friday afternoon ponder with the whole weekend off to look forward to too Tristan .. Kindest Regards, Neville
January 24th, 2025 09:22
Satin Sheets
arqios said:
Seems to call for a change of sheets, one for each mood and situation. Perhaps, imo. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 20:52
arqios said:
Seems to call for a change of sheets, one for each mood and situation. Perhaps, imo. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 20:52
Satin Sheets
Thad Wilk said:
A really emotional,
poignant and powerful
poem of unrequited love!
So eloquently penned,
Love this form, 😍!!
Great job my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:38
Thad Wilk said:
A really emotional,
poignant and powerful
poem of unrequited love!
So eloquently penned,
Love this form, 😍!!
Great job my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:38
Satin Sheets
orchidee said:
Some good more revelatory-wotsits! lol. I\'m caught up with catching any pesky extra syllables that creep into my poem formats. lol. I can\'t truly call it \'metre\' as that involves stressed and unstressed syllables. I would become too stressed over it. lol. And them imabic thingies too - pentameters.
January 23rd, 2025 11:20
orchidee said:
Some good more revelatory-wotsits! lol. I\'m caught up with catching any pesky extra syllables that creep into my poem formats. lol. I can\'t truly call it \'metre\' as that involves stressed and unstressed syllables. I would become too stressed over it. lol. And them imabic thingies too - pentameters.
January 23rd, 2025 11:20
Satin Sheets
sorenbarrett said:
What seems reality is a dream what seems the present only memories of the past. Pleasure becomes pain in this poem of hauting thoughts. Very well expressed.
January 23rd, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
What seems reality is a dream what seems the present only memories of the past. Pleasure becomes pain in this poem of hauting thoughts. Very well expressed.
January 23rd, 2025 10:51
Satin Sheets
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think i understood the authors comments!!, Those sheets have been through the wringer !!, Enjoy the rest of your day
January 23rd, 2025 10:22
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think i understood the authors comments!!, Those sheets have been through the wringer !!, Enjoy the rest of your day
January 23rd, 2025 10:22
Satin Sheets
Neville said:
Whilst it is imminently possible to beat an egg & a few other things besides .. it is clearly impossible to beat a Revelatory Cascade Tetrameter .. A seemingly seamless example of the principle showing the unity of opposites in poetic form .. By Jove I think you not only got it, but you just went and done it too .. Life is such a bloomin predicament innit .. in spite of this form being new to me I suspect this example is crafted to perfection and is very impressive .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
Neville said:
Whilst it is imminently possible to beat an egg & a few other things besides .. it is clearly impossible to beat a Revelatory Cascade Tetrameter .. A seemingly seamless example of the principle showing the unity of opposites in poetic form .. By Jove I think you not only got it, but you just went and done it too .. Life is such a bloomin predicament innit .. in spite of this form being new to me I suspect this example is crafted to perfection and is very impressive .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
A Cut
Olive Anderson said:
Life is a bunch of cuts. Sometimes there is sweetness added to a cut helps lessen the pain you feel. Other times you get a cut, salt is added and the pain is deeper than it was originally. The one thing cuts have in common is that they eventually close up. I love the way you ended your poem...
January 23rd, 2025 02:03
Olive Anderson said:
Life is a bunch of cuts. Sometimes there is sweetness added to a cut helps lessen the pain you feel. Other times you get a cut, salt is added and the pain is deeper than it was originally. The one thing cuts have in common is that they eventually close up. I love the way you ended your poem...
January 23rd, 2025 02:03
A Cut
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem, 😀
you must have amazing
healing powers¿?😳
Glad it wasn\'t serious! 😁
Great use of form,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:31
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem, 😀
you must have amazing
healing powers¿?😳
Glad it wasn\'t serious! 😁
Great use of form,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:31
Inauguration Day
Poetic Licence said:
I have never been a crowd follower the sheep mentality drives me insane. Sadly thou i fear we are entering what is going to be a unstable and very frighting period in our history, and for sure social injustice is only going to get worse. A great piece of writing, raising issues we should all pay attention to you.
January 22nd, 2025 21:57
Poetic Licence said:
I have never been a crowd follower the sheep mentality drives me insane. Sadly thou i fear we are entering what is going to be a unstable and very frighting period in our history, and for sure social injustice is only going to get worse. A great piece of writing, raising issues we should all pay attention to you.
January 22nd, 2025 21:57
A Cut
sorenbarrett said:
I took this literally the first read then I wondered about metaphor. Many times we suffer other times of cuts rather than our literal hand. Mind wandering again
January 22nd, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
I took this literally the first read then I wondered about metaphor. Many times we suffer other times of cuts rather than our literal hand. Mind wandering again
January 22nd, 2025 14:18
A Cut
Cheeky Missy said:
At least it\'s a minor abrasion at this rate, nothing like the paring knife through my fingertip, piecing from one side to the other and leaving actual scars. Beautifully eloquent in its rendering with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, it\'s winsome to boot. Thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:18
Cheeky Missy said:
At least it\'s a minor abrasion at this rate, nothing like the paring knife through my fingertip, piecing from one side to the other and leaving actual scars. Beautifully eloquent in its rendering with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, it\'s winsome to boot. Thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:18
A Cut
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read with a serious message, that over time things will heal, but there will always be another cut at sometime, really enjoyed this one.
January 22nd, 2025 12:18
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read with a serious message, that over time things will heal, but there will always be another cut at sometime, really enjoyed this one.
January 22nd, 2025 12:18
A Cut
Cassie58 said:
Paper cuts are some of the most painful. Sting like hell. This appears to be deeper and describes the healing process. The all important healing process. Hopefully no scars will be left. Great description here Tristen. Have a happy Wednesday.
January 22nd, 2025 11:52
Cassie58 said:
Paper cuts are some of the most painful. Sting like hell. This appears to be deeper and describes the healing process. The all important healing process. Hopefully no scars will be left. Great description here Tristen. Have a happy Wednesday.
January 22nd, 2025 11:52
Descent in D Minor
NinjaGirl said:
I perhaps wouldn\'t go as far as to call them devilish notes, but they certainly have dark undertones! The piano, while basic, is a hauntingly beautiful instrument.
January 21st, 2025 22:51
NinjaGirl said:
I perhaps wouldn\'t go as far as to call them devilish notes, but they certainly have dark undertones! The piano, while basic, is a hauntingly beautiful instrument.
January 21st, 2025 22:51
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