Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Personal Paroxysm
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutations for great haikus, their interconnectedness and the account of the process they convey. 👍
November 22nd, 2024 16:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutations for great haikus, their interconnectedness and the account of the process they convey. 👍
November 22nd, 2024 16:57
Personal Paroxysm
Cassie58 said:
Give me the serenity, the rest is too mind blowing. I don’t fancy the lava fllows after seeing stuff on Pompeii. Having said that, your haikus are awesome Tristan.
November 22nd, 2024 15:56
Cassie58 said:
Give me the serenity, the rest is too mind blowing. I don’t fancy the lava fllows after seeing stuff on Pompeii. Having said that, your haikus are awesome Tristan.
November 22nd, 2024 15:56
Personal Paroxysm
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life, a wonderful thing well expressed in this poem
November 22nd, 2024 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life, a wonderful thing well expressed in this poem
November 22nd, 2024 12:46
Personal Paroxysm
orchidee said:
Good write T. To pinch a poet\'s saying (not plagiarising though): \'You can beat an egg, but can ya beat a bit of... a paroxysm?\' [Or fill in blank of whatever you wish]. I\'m talking utter rubbish now. lol.
November 22nd, 2024 09:32
orchidee said:
Good write T. To pinch a poet\'s saying (not plagiarising though): \'You can beat an egg, but can ya beat a bit of... a paroxysm?\' [Or fill in blank of whatever you wish]. I\'m talking utter rubbish now. lol.
November 22nd, 2024 09:32
Personal Paroxysm
arqios said:
Pyroclastic displays are both awe-inspiring and terrifying in the same breath!
November 22nd, 2024 09:04
arqios said:
Pyroclastic displays are both awe-inspiring and terrifying in the same breath!
November 22nd, 2024 09:04
Architecture of Artifice
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Bravo!
Wow, powerful penning my friend!
Much enjoyed beginning to end. 👍
I loved the rhyme, the flow and blend.
Much praise I send, much praise I send.💯
Rock on poet!! ✌️ Thad
November 22nd, 2024 00:02
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Bravo!
Wow, powerful penning my friend!
Much enjoyed beginning to end. 👍
I loved the rhyme, the flow and blend.
Much praise I send, much praise I send.💯
Rock on poet!! ✌️ Thad
November 22nd, 2024 00:02
Architecture of Artifice
sorenbarrett said:
No one knows what to believe anymore. Whether the Internet, social media national news, all affected ending infected. Nicely written.
November 21st, 2024 22:56
sorenbarrett said:
No one knows what to believe anymore. Whether the Internet, social media national news, all affected ending infected. Nicely written.
November 21st, 2024 22:56
Architecture of Artifice
Doggerel Dave said:
Prompts are something I\'ve never felt inclined to try. Can you convince me? Inspiration? Extension of the poetic muscle? Quite possibly it would save me from the need to scratch up a lengthy piece proclaiming my muse is AWOL...\' Interesting write Tristan.
November 21st, 2024 17:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Prompts are something I\'ve never felt inclined to try. Can you convince me? Inspiration? Extension of the poetic muscle? Quite possibly it would save me from the need to scratch up a lengthy piece proclaiming my muse is AWOL...\' Interesting write Tristan.
November 21st, 2024 17:36
Architecture of Artifice
Neville said:
Do you know what Tristan .. I have a ton of respect for anyone that sets themself a task, or who agrees to stick withing the parameters of a given task set by someone else and goes on to achieve it like you have so obviously done here .. I wouldn\'t even dare attempt it .. so please accept these from me 👍👍
November 21st, 2024 11:41
Neville said:
Do you know what Tristan .. I have a ton of respect for anyone that sets themself a task, or who agrees to stick withing the parameters of a given task set by someone else and goes on to achieve it like you have so obviously done here .. I wouldn\'t even dare attempt it .. so please accept these from me 👍👍
November 21st, 2024 11:41
CHANGE
NinjaGirl said:
it\'s interesting - one cannot just want something to be better without working to change it, but many of us think that way
November 20th, 2024 22:37
NinjaGirl said:
it\'s interesting - one cannot just want something to be better without working to change it, but many of us think that way
November 20th, 2024 22:37
CHANGE
sorenbarrett said:
Change what most people find most difficult yet in nature, it is constantly occurring. A beautiful poem, Tristan.
November 20th, 2024 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
Change what most people find most difficult yet in nature, it is constantly occurring. A beautiful poem, Tristan.
November 20th, 2024 19:54
INTENTIONS
Hanna_love said:
Вау, ви гарно пишете, тут закладено дуже глибокий сенс. Основний посил, ймовірно, полягає в тому, що егоїзм, невігластво і відсутність глибокого розуміння того, що відбувається навколо можуть призвести до морального та соціального занепаду та руйнівних наслідків суспільству. Браво!👏
November 20th, 2024 16:12
Hanna_love said:
Вау, ви гарно пишете, тут закладено дуже глибокий сенс. Основний посил, ймовірно, полягає в тому, що егоїзм, невігластво і відсутність глибокого розуміння того, що відбувається навколо можуть призвести до морального та соціального занепаду та руйнівних наслідків суспільству. Браво!👏
November 20th, 2024 16:12
CHANGE
Neville said:
I must congratulate you on completion of the task you set for yourself .. not an easy one I\'m sure maybe you could make it an annual event .. we sure as hell could use some good advice and pointing in the write direction .. Neville
November 20th, 2024 08:17
Neville said:
I must congratulate you on completion of the task you set for yourself .. not an easy one I\'m sure maybe you could make it an annual event .. we sure as hell could use some good advice and pointing in the write direction .. Neville
November 20th, 2024 08:17
INTENTIONS
Neville said:
The message contained within held me throughout & felt so hugely important, that it was only later .. and thanks to your authors footnote, I realised there was an acrostic standing on the sideline .. 😎🖤👍
November 20th, 2024 00:39
Neville said:
The message contained within held me throughout & felt so hugely important, that it was only later .. and thanks to your authors footnote, I realised there was an acrostic standing on the sideline .. 😎🖤👍
November 20th, 2024 00:39
INTENTIONS
arqios said:
Ooh, “reality analysis“ sends shivers down along the spine!
November 19th, 2024 17:18
arqios said:
Ooh, “reality analysis“ sends shivers down along the spine!
November 19th, 2024 17:18
INTENTIONS
sorenbarrett said:
They say hell is full of good intentions. Nevertheless, I do believe intentions make some difference otherwise the law would not recognize them. There would be no difference between first-degree murder and manslaughter. A very thought-Provoking poem
November 19th, 2024 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
They say hell is full of good intentions. Nevertheless, I do believe intentions make some difference otherwise the law would not recognize them. There would be no difference between first-degree murder and manslaughter. A very thought-Provoking poem
November 19th, 2024 12:08
LOVE
Cassie58 said:
An acrostic for LOVE. So very thoughtfully conveyed. I like. Well penned Tristan.
November 18th, 2024 17:21
Cassie58 said:
An acrostic for LOVE. So very thoughtfully conveyed. I like. Well penned Tristan.
November 18th, 2024 17:21
LOVE
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely stated in acrostic form. Love is a difficult thing to define in any sense and you have done well
November 18th, 2024 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely stated in acrostic form. Love is a difficult thing to define in any sense and you have done well
November 18th, 2024 12:08
This Sunday Night
Neville said:
I so get this Tristan .. as a general rule, Sunday nights in November rank among the top four of my overall least favourite nights of the year .. I tend to get a bit of a downer in November and the end of a weekend usually heralds another busy week .. Neville
November 18th, 2024 09:00
Neville said:
I so get this Tristan .. as a general rule, Sunday nights in November rank among the top four of my overall least favourite nights of the year .. I tend to get a bit of a downer in November and the end of a weekend usually heralds another busy week .. Neville
November 18th, 2024 09:00
This Sunday Night
NafisaSB said:
i really hope the dreary mood passes - time really drags and it\'s a lamentable time indeed...
poignant write
November 18th, 2024 08:59
NafisaSB said:
i really hope the dreary mood passes - time really drags and it\'s a lamentable time indeed...
poignant write
November 18th, 2024 08:59
This Sunday Night
orchidee said:
It might help if we think - there\'s only a few weeks to go, the nit starts getting lighter again.
November 18th, 2024 03:25
orchidee said:
It might help if we think - there\'s only a few weeks to go, the nit starts getting lighter again.
November 18th, 2024 03:25
Satanic Panic
NafisaSB said:
good write - and yes, many a time, we tend to believe all that we are fed, especially when young, until the innocence is ripped out.
great work
November 18th, 2024 00:18
NafisaSB said:
good write - and yes, many a time, we tend to believe all that we are fed, especially when young, until the innocence is ripped out.
great work
November 18th, 2024 00:18
Satanic Panic
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful, haunting and
thought provoking Sonnet my friend! 😳
Exhilarating awesomeness, 🧑🎄👿
Love the word cringe you picked to go
with orange, great flow and blend!! 👍
I neva coulda thought of that!!! 😃
Terrific penning, loved it!!😍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 17th, 2024 20:12
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful, haunting and
thought provoking Sonnet my friend! 😳
Exhilarating awesomeness, 🧑🎄👿
Love the word cringe you picked to go
with orange, great flow and blend!! 👍
I neva coulda thought of that!!! 😃
Terrific penning, loved it!!😍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 17th, 2024 20:12
This Sunday Night
Thad Wilk said:
Time change can bring
this melancholy into flight! 😢
More darkness comes,
when there\'s less light! 🕯️
My pleasure to read indeed! 👍 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 17th, 2024 19:53
Thad Wilk said:
Time change can bring
this melancholy into flight! 😢
More darkness comes,
when there\'s less light! 🕯️
My pleasure to read indeed! 👍 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 17th, 2024 19:53
This Sunday Night
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks to exhaustion not of the physical type, but of the emotional a poem with some depressing overtones
November 17th, 2024 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks to exhaustion not of the physical type, but of the emotional a poem with some depressing overtones
November 17th, 2024 19:29
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