Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Gaza Plaza
Cassie58 said:
A well executed poem dear Tristen. I think Trumps suggestions for Gaza are madness and should be executed too. (In a different way). Whatever is he thinking of? Happy holiday my friend.
February 5th, 2025 15:05
Cassie58 said:
A well executed poem dear Tristen. I think Trumps suggestions for Gaza are madness and should be executed too. (In a different way). Whatever is he thinking of? Happy holiday my friend.
February 5th, 2025 15:05
The Gaza Plaza
arqios said:
Like a political correspondent living in dangerous times! Gives the feel of a real Indiana Jones, minus the archeology ✌🏼🕊️
February 5th, 2025 12:49
arqios said:
Like a political correspondent living in dangerous times! Gives the feel of a real Indiana Jones, minus the archeology ✌🏼🕊️
February 5th, 2025 12:49
The Gaza Plaza
Poetic Licence said:
There is no hope for the criminally insane !!!, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 10:37
Poetic Licence said:
There is no hope for the criminally insane !!!, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 10:37
The Gaza Plaza
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunatly you can\'t fix stupid especially when they follow a Jim Jones, David Koresh or savior god. What need fixing are the supporters that are willing to follow fanatics into hell. A heart felt write
February 5th, 2025 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunatly you can\'t fix stupid especially when they follow a Jim Jones, David Koresh or savior god. What need fixing are the supporters that are willing to follow fanatics into hell. A heart felt write
February 5th, 2025 10:33
Heart Disease
Tom Dylan said:
A thought-provoking piece. Works on a few levels. Nicely done.
February 3rd, 2025 09:37
Tom Dylan said:
A thought-provoking piece. Works on a few levels. Nicely done.
February 3rd, 2025 09:37
Midwinter Vacation
sorenbarrett said:
Now days children get out of school for snow days. We never had that when I was a child so no vaction. Hope you have a great time and return soon.
February 3rd, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Now days children get out of school for snow days. We never had that when I was a child so no vaction. Hope you have a great time and return soon.
February 3rd, 2025 04:00
Heart Disease
Poetic Licence said:
If someone cannot be fully committed or give their whole heart to something or someone, it is better off leaving alone. enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 02:43
Poetic Licence said:
If someone cannot be fully committed or give their whole heart to something or someone, it is better off leaving alone. enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 02:43
Heart Disease
Michael Edwards said:
In simple terms if its worth doing its worth doing well - your super shorty captures this with elegance.
February 3rd, 2025 02:23
Michael Edwards said:
In simple terms if its worth doing its worth doing well - your super shorty captures this with elegance.
February 3rd, 2025 02:23
Midwinter Vacation
arqios said:
Oh nice! Somewhere warm or somewhere snowy… it shall be revealed whence thou returneth… Have a good one!
February 3rd, 2025 01:25
arqios said:
Oh nice! Somewhere warm or somewhere snowy… it shall be revealed whence thou returneth… Have a good one!
February 3rd, 2025 01:25
Heart Disease
orchidee said:
Doh! if there\'s deep meanings in poems, I often don\'t get their meaning and may put my big foot in it! Or maybe, as you say, poems can be open to different interpretations.
February 2nd, 2025 14:48
orchidee said:
Doh! if there\'s deep meanings in poems, I often don\'t get their meaning and may put my big foot in it! Or maybe, as you say, poems can be open to different interpretations.
February 2nd, 2025 14:48
Heart Disease
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! How charmingly rendered in dearest Will\'s inimitable fashion, laced with such tantalizing intrigue to captivate, its haunting poignancy nearly culls swooning. La dee! Superb! Applicable on multiple points, this is too good and expertly crafted. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 2nd, 2025 12:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! How charmingly rendered in dearest Will\'s inimitable fashion, laced with such tantalizing intrigue to captivate, its haunting poignancy nearly culls swooning. La dee! Superb! Applicable on multiple points, this is too good and expertly crafted. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 2nd, 2025 12:31
Heart Disease
Cassie58 said:
Hello Tristen. A nicely penned brevity here with layers. This is how I interpreted your words. Put your heart and soul into everything you do to reap the full benefits. Anything less, particularly when it comes to love is going to give you heart ache. Heart disease is a common complaint these days. Hope your Sunday is going well. Another fine write from your talented pen.
February 2nd, 2025 11:59
Cassie58 said:
Hello Tristen. A nicely penned brevity here with layers. This is how I interpreted your words. Put your heart and soul into everything you do to reap the full benefits. Anything less, particularly when it comes to love is going to give you heart ache. Heart disease is a common complaint these days. Hope your Sunday is going well. Another fine write from your talented pen.
February 2nd, 2025 11:59
rejected
accross_world_with_u said:
When we just don’t fit! It’s not that we don’t we are just in the wrong puzzle box…❤️
February 2nd, 2025 08:55
accross_world_with_u said:
When we just don’t fit! It’s not that we don’t we are just in the wrong puzzle box…❤️
February 2nd, 2025 08:55
Heart Disease
sorenbarrett said:
Here the metaphor comes through strong and clear. One\'s heart should always be in the dance just as in music or any art.
February 2nd, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
Here the metaphor comes through strong and clear. One\'s heart should always be in the dance just as in music or any art.
February 2nd, 2025 07:47
The Man I Cannot Hear
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, the melencholia is palpable. Superb work.
February 1st, 2025 21:22
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, the melencholia is palpable. Superb work.
February 1st, 2025 21:22
The Man I Cannot Hear
Neville said:
You are really on form and without doubt, a much braver man than me Tristan .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:06
Neville said:
You are really on form and without doubt, a much braver man than me Tristan .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:06
The Man I Cannot Hear
orchidee said:
A fictional write? Good to see some more of the \'old RC\'. Aghh, not Roman Catholics, but Revelatory Cascades!
February 1st, 2025 11:58
orchidee said:
A fictional write? Good to see some more of the \'old RC\'. Aghh, not Roman Catholics, but Revelatory Cascades!
February 1st, 2025 11:58
The Man I Cannot Hear
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reminded me a the swing of a church bell. As it swings silently in form it can be heard underneath in the words of the poem. Very createive
February 1st, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reminded me a the swing of a church bell. As it swings silently in form it can be heard underneath in the words of the poem. Very createive
February 1st, 2025 09:46
The Withered Garden
arqios said:
Now this brings me way back. Love poems that are able to transport the reader every which way! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 09:02
arqios said:
Now this brings me way back. Love poems that are able to transport the reader every which way! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 09:02
You
Cheeky Missy said:
Whomever inspired this pretty number sounds like a number of individuals who recklessly abandon others to the edge of life, aptly conveyed as lacking any concern for the same. Beautifully rendered with a painfully haunting poignancy. Too many should resonate with this.
January 31st, 2025 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Whomever inspired this pretty number sounds like a number of individuals who recklessly abandon others to the edge of life, aptly conveyed as lacking any concern for the same. Beautifully rendered with a painfully haunting poignancy. Too many should resonate with this.
January 31st, 2025 18:58
Echoes of Inevitability
Cheeky Missy said:
If I said simply, Genesis 3, would it really matter? It\'s a reality fewer realize than aught, since the end is hauntingly coldly eerie when you mistakenly believed you couldn\'t be so alone. Years ago it dawned on me that there\'d be none to advocate for me to the LORD, only Himself. And the reality which pans itself out even now is so devoid of close companions, I find Job\'s words too aprops, \"...Thou hast made desolate all my company--\" (Job 16:7b) Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a superbly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 17:58
Cheeky Missy said:
If I said simply, Genesis 3, would it really matter? It\'s a reality fewer realize than aught, since the end is hauntingly coldly eerie when you mistakenly believed you couldn\'t be so alone. Years ago it dawned on me that there\'d be none to advocate for me to the LORD, only Himself. And the reality which pans itself out even now is so devoid of close companions, I find Job\'s words too aprops, \"...Thou hast made desolate all my company--\" (Job 16:7b) Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a superbly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 17:58
1933/2016/2024
arqios said:
I liked how the years are used to mark points in history like coordinates, very effective there , T👍🏻🙏🏻✌🏼
January 31st, 2025 12:49
arqios said:
I liked how the years are used to mark points in history like coordinates, very effective there , T👍🏻🙏🏻✌🏼
January 31st, 2025 12:49
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