Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Light In Our Lives.
MendedFences27 said:
Thoroughly enjoyable, both poem and music. Yes I was toe tapping. Finding the light is everyone\'s end game. Some do and some never will. In nature, as brutal as it can be, somehow it seems to shine that light everywhere all the time.A very nice poem. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2021 16:37
MendedFences27 said:
Thoroughly enjoyable, both poem and music. Yes I was toe tapping. Finding the light is everyone\'s end game. Some do and some never will. In nature, as brutal as it can be, somehow it seems to shine that light everywhere all the time.A very nice poem. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2021 16:37
Light In Our Lives.
Accidental Poet said:
That light never dims. I half expected to see Orchi\'s footprints all over this page. Well done Andy.
April 11th, 2021 08:52
Accidental Poet said:
That light never dims. I half expected to see Orchi\'s footprints all over this page. Well done Andy.
April 11th, 2021 08:52
Light In Our Lives.
dusk arising said:
Yes, there is always light for those who will see it, even in the darkest of times. A light which lifts our spirit.
April 11th, 2021 03:13
dusk arising said:
Yes, there is always light for those who will see it, even in the darkest of times. A light which lifts our spirit.
April 11th, 2021 03:13
Light In Our Lives.
Caring dove said:
Lovely words 🙂 always light outside in nature ...
April 11th, 2021 01:28
Caring dove said:
Lovely words 🙂 always light outside in nature ...
April 11th, 2021 01:28
Island Heaven.
Accidental Poet said:
Very impressive Andy. And yes, you will be with her again.
April 10th, 2021 19:15
Accidental Poet said:
Very impressive Andy. And yes, you will be with her again.
April 10th, 2021 19:15
Island Heaven.
dusk arising said:
Rare to see you producing rhyme like this. It\'s as if you were doodling whilst in a dream of your destiny.
April 10th, 2021 11:06
dusk arising said:
Rare to see you producing rhyme like this. It\'s as if you were doodling whilst in a dream of your destiny.
April 10th, 2021 11:06
Island Heaven.
Doggerel Dave said:
You know what I\'m going to put here , even before...
Yep - thanks for the rhythm and rhyme.
And after reading I can have no doubt you will be whole on your star, never slowing, you both.
The magic of poetry, Andy
April 10th, 2021 01:43
Doggerel Dave said:
You know what I\'m going to put here , even before...
Yep - thanks for the rhythm and rhyme.
And after reading I can have no doubt you will be whole on your star, never slowing, you both.
The magic of poetry, Andy
April 10th, 2021 01:43
All Will Be Fine.
Michael Edwards said:
And all\'s well with the world - warming write Andy.
April 9th, 2021 14:18
Michael Edwards said:
And all\'s well with the world - warming write Andy.
April 9th, 2021 14:18
All Will Be Fine.
L. B. Mek said:
\'This too will pass,
Back into a new normality.\'
in today\'s \'all is doom n gloom\': as our go-to state
positivity\'s hat has become such a heavy burden to carry and display proudly,
thank you for all the heavy lifting Andy
yet another refreshingly uplifting read!
April 9th, 2021 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'This too will pass,
Back into a new normality.\'
in today\'s \'all is doom n gloom\': as our go-to state
positivity\'s hat has become such a heavy burden to carry and display proudly,
thank you for all the heavy lifting Andy
yet another refreshingly uplifting read!
April 9th, 2021 05:31
British Springtime.
L. B. Mek said:
so well articulated, but I don\'t know if that\'s just Spring, even our British Summer\'s get a little temperamental, especially when we walk down a busy high-street and find people drenched wet at one end and sweating buckets the other, lol
though personally I wouldn\'t have it any other way!
I found this a somewhat nostalgic read Andy (not quite sure why)
April 8th, 2021 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
so well articulated, but I don\'t know if that\'s just Spring, even our British Summer\'s get a little temperamental, especially when we walk down a busy high-street and find people drenched wet at one end and sweating buckets the other, lol
though personally I wouldn\'t have it any other way!
I found this a somewhat nostalgic read Andy (not quite sure why)
April 8th, 2021 03:19
Almost Praying.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. lol.
Then you said another prayer, hoping I don\'t turn up with water?! lol.
April 8th, 2021 01:57
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. lol.
Then you said another prayer, hoping I don\'t turn up with water?! lol.
April 8th, 2021 01:57
Almost Praying.
Caring dove said:
I was wandering what you were writing about before I read the last line lol . Good poem 🙂
April 8th, 2021 01:29
Caring dove said:
I was wandering what you were writing about before I read the last line lol . Good poem 🙂
April 8th, 2021 01:29
British Springtime.
Michael Edwards said:
Ta 4 the smile - it stopped me from dividng the eupatoriums and killed the blossom on the magnolias - not a good day.
April 7th, 2021 15:57
Michael Edwards said:
Ta 4 the smile - it stopped me from dividng the eupatoriums and killed the blossom on the magnolias - not a good day.
April 7th, 2021 15:57
British Springtime.
Doggerel Dave said:
It is an addiction beyond all reason or comprehension - are you sure you don\'t want to seek counselling, Andy? :-)
April 7th, 2021 04:21
Doggerel Dave said:
It is an addiction beyond all reason or comprehension - are you sure you don\'t want to seek counselling, Andy? :-)
April 7th, 2021 04:21
British Springtime.
orchidee said:
It\'s them (lesser-known snow?) April showers!
Good write Gold.
April 7th, 2021 02:07
orchidee said:
It\'s them (lesser-known snow?) April showers!
Good write Gold.
April 7th, 2021 02:07
Musical Opening.
Doggerel Dave said:
And your introductions to music I\'ve never encountered continue to give ME pleasure, Andy.
April 6th, 2021 05:19
Doggerel Dave said:
And your introductions to music I\'ve never encountered continue to give ME pleasure, Andy.
April 6th, 2021 05:19
Vincent.
L. B. Mek said:
a great dedication Andy, with meaningful commentary on generationally inherited consequence of capitalism\'s rat-race mentality, where consumption of ease with speed, is prioritised above actual quality of \'what\' we consume and much more importantly: \'why\'?..
historically, society overtly worshiped art and creativity, now in this age where everything must be reduced to insignificance if it doesn\'t fit with that \'Netflix and chill\' mentality, we all have greater access to masterpieces and we simply ignore it, diminishing genius to one-eared craziness to fit a narrative of dismissal for legacy\'s we can\'t surpass..
even those few with enough culture and opportunity to appreciate, bring their baggage of stereotyped prejudice and choose to see \'what they\'ve been told\' rather than witnessing and appreciating the skill and beauty that\'s survived centuries, I mean devoid of context who can argue the breath-taking talent of Caravaggio\'s brilliance? such a waste
April 6th, 2021 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
a great dedication Andy, with meaningful commentary on generationally inherited consequence of capitalism\'s rat-race mentality, where consumption of ease with speed, is prioritised above actual quality of \'what\' we consume and much more importantly: \'why\'?..
historically, society overtly worshiped art and creativity, now in this age where everything must be reduced to insignificance if it doesn\'t fit with that \'Netflix and chill\' mentality, we all have greater access to masterpieces and we simply ignore it, diminishing genius to one-eared craziness to fit a narrative of dismissal for legacy\'s we can\'t surpass..
even those few with enough culture and opportunity to appreciate, bring their baggage of stereotyped prejudice and choose to see \'what they\'ve been told\' rather than witnessing and appreciating the skill and beauty that\'s survived centuries, I mean devoid of context who can argue the breath-taking talent of Caravaggio\'s brilliance? such a waste
April 6th, 2021 04:29
Musical Opening.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
You know the piece I wrote, similar to 4\' 33\"? It\'s called \'24 hours\'. A silent piece, where I don\'t sing for a whole day! It\'s Number 1 in the charts!
They say \' Record that song every day, Orchi\' (to keep me quiet). lol.
April 6th, 2021 01:36
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
You know the piece I wrote, similar to 4\' 33\"? It\'s called \'24 hours\'. A silent piece, where I don\'t sing for a whole day! It\'s Number 1 in the charts!
They say \' Record that song every day, Orchi\' (to keep me quiet). lol.
April 6th, 2021 01:36
Vincent.
John Prophet said:
Hi Andy,
Van Gogh is by far my favorite... Great poem!
April 5th, 2021 06:14
John Prophet said:
Hi Andy,
Van Gogh is by far my favorite... Great poem!
April 5th, 2021 06:14
Vincent.
Accidental Poet said:
Inspiration comes from a wide variety of sources. Just as we poets are inspired from so many different things. I would agree with you that looking at a painter\'s work would make me stop to ponder where his inspiration for the work came from and how he goes about transferring what\'s in his mind onto the canvas. Excellent write Andy.
April 5th, 2021 05:34
Accidental Poet said:
Inspiration comes from a wide variety of sources. Just as we poets are inspired from so many different things. I would agree with you that looking at a painter\'s work would make me stop to ponder where his inspiration for the work came from and how he goes about transferring what\'s in his mind onto the canvas. Excellent write Andy.
April 5th, 2021 05:34
Vincent.
Makoto Maruyama said:
Well writing, I feel your impression from fine art.
April 5th, 2021 04:48
Makoto Maruyama said:
Well writing, I feel your impression from fine art.
April 5th, 2021 04:48
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