Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Solitude Acrostic
L. B. Mek said:
an eclectic blend of hope and surrender
that exemplifies the true turmoil, in solitude\'s nature
a very intriguing concept, Andy
November 25th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
an eclectic blend of hope and surrender
that exemplifies the true turmoil, in solitude\'s nature
a very intriguing concept, Andy
November 25th, 2021 05:48
Solitude Acrostic
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An acquired delight, solitude is. Not for everyone. I\'m quite certain though, many of us here get exactly what it means. A powerful write. Kudos to you, Andy.
November 25th, 2021 05:21
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An acquired delight, solitude is. Not for everyone. I\'m quite certain though, many of us here get exactly what it means. A powerful write. Kudos to you, Andy.
November 25th, 2021 05:21
Solitude Acrostic
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you\'ve got to get it all in prospective. A bit of togetherness, a bit of solitude to regain your thoughts.
November 25th, 2021 03:54
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you\'ve got to get it all in prospective. A bit of togetherness, a bit of solitude to regain your thoughts.
November 25th, 2021 03:54
Solitude Acrostic
dusk arising said:
Soilitude, that much misunderstood word. Solidity of will and purpose stands out in your words.
November 25th, 2021 03:52
dusk arising said:
Soilitude, that much misunderstood word. Solidity of will and purpose stands out in your words.
November 25th, 2021 03:52
Solitude Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully positive acrostic based on Solitude - so good your poetry group is still in operation dear Andy.
November 25th, 2021 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully positive acrostic based on Solitude - so good your poetry group is still in operation dear Andy.
November 25th, 2021 03:12
Solitude Acrostic
Neville said:
quite possibly the most stand alone acrostic I\'ve come across in a very long time ........................................ N
November 25th, 2021 03:05
Neville said:
quite possibly the most stand alone acrostic I\'ve come across in a very long time ........................................ N
November 25th, 2021 03:05
Solitude Acrostic
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
\'I want to be alone\'. Just call me Great (Garbo).
Being alone, and experiencing solitude, may not be exactly the same things though.
November 25th, 2021 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
\'I want to be alone\'. Just call me Great (Garbo).
Being alone, and experiencing solitude, may not be exactly the same things though.
November 25th, 2021 02:46
Lost Worries.
spilleronsheet said:
A bookaholic I am
So true you describe the addiction stored
While the lady was reading a book
You surely were reading a life book
And a reader and poet is a wonderful combination
It adds to intuition of people
I wonder what was the lady’s reaction to the poetry of yours
November 24th, 2021 12:25
spilleronsheet said:
A bookaholic I am
So true you describe the addiction stored
While the lady was reading a book
You surely were reading a life book
And a reader and poet is a wonderful combination
It adds to intuition of people
I wonder what was the lady’s reaction to the poetry of yours
November 24th, 2021 12:25
Lost Worries.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Absolutely. I couldnt agree more with the sentiment expressed. A mind escape, reading is!
November 24th, 2021 06:11
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Absolutely. I couldnt agree more with the sentiment expressed. A mind escape, reading is!
November 24th, 2021 06:11
One Of Our Favourites.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The last line stings, and turns everything on its head. Well written. A worthy addition to my favorites list.
November 24th, 2021 06:09
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The last line stings, and turns everything on its head. Well written. A worthy addition to my favorites list.
November 24th, 2021 06:09
Lost Worries.
Nicholas Browning said:
What a nice gesture. I hope she enjoyed it as much as we did.
November 24th, 2021 04:16
Nicholas Browning said:
What a nice gesture. I hope she enjoyed it as much as we did.
November 24th, 2021 04:16
Lost Worries.
dusk arising said:
The people watching poems you write bring up all kinds of subjects. How brave you are to present your writing to strangers. I would be afraid that it would be seen as a chat-up tecnique in the circumstance you describe with a lady alone.
For me reading has become a luxury reserved now for liesure times away from home now. I started a Grisham novel in hospital but it remains half read. Roll on nicer weather and days out in the car with a peaceful read.
November 24th, 2021 03:34
dusk arising said:
The people watching poems you write bring up all kinds of subjects. How brave you are to present your writing to strangers. I would be afraid that it would be seen as a chat-up tecnique in the circumstance you describe with a lady alone.
For me reading has become a luxury reserved now for liesure times away from home now. I started a Grisham novel in hospital but it remains half read. Roll on nicer weather and days out in the car with a peaceful read.
November 24th, 2021 03:34
Lost Worries.
Neville said:
what can one say except well observed my friend and of course, read on .............................. Neville
November 24th, 2021 03:19
Neville said:
what can one say except well observed my friend and of course, read on .............................. Neville
November 24th, 2021 03:19
Lost Worries.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Reading indeed engrosses our Soul in, devoid of worries !! Good one !!
November 24th, 2021 03:00
Vamsi Sudha said:
Reading indeed engrosses our Soul in, devoid of worries !! Good one !!
November 24th, 2021 03:00
One Of Our Favourites.
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful memory
The wonderful dish
It sounds appetising
And your love so inspiring
I hope fate can grant us loving memories like you had with Joyce
November 23rd, 2021 14:42
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful memory
The wonderful dish
It sounds appetising
And your love so inspiring
I hope fate can grant us loving memories like you had with Joyce
November 23rd, 2021 14:42
One Of Our Favourites.
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure she was with you in spirit and encouraging you to be the man she loves so much.
Many a lesser man could allow standards to drop but in reading your post today it\'s plain to see that\'s not your way.
Live long and prosper you ball basher.
November 23rd, 2021 06:03
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure she was with you in spirit and encouraging you to be the man she loves so much.
Many a lesser man could allow standards to drop but in reading your post today it\'s plain to see that\'s not your way.
Live long and prosper you ball basher.
November 23rd, 2021 06:03
One Of Our Favourites.
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s nothing as barren
as a table, for one
still, in a month or so
you\'ll be approaching: two years!
and I can only praise you
for the strength and positivity
you demonstrate daily;
choose to believe, in that reunion scene
that approaches
with each passing, sigh..
stay strong, my friend
(salmon cooking details
is mouth-watering, btw)
November 23rd, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s nothing as barren
as a table, for one
still, in a month or so
you\'ll be approaching: two years!
and I can only praise you
for the strength and positivity
you demonstrate daily;
choose to believe, in that reunion scene
that approaches
with each passing, sigh..
stay strong, my friend
(salmon cooking details
is mouth-watering, btw)
November 23rd, 2021 05:29
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
Paul Bell said:
I was told you weren\'t allowed to retire until you were 95, is this not true then. Leisure is the new work.
November 22nd, 2021 12:57
Paul Bell said:
I was told you weren\'t allowed to retire until you were 95, is this not true then. Leisure is the new work.
November 22nd, 2021 12:57
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
dusk arising said:
A wholesome envy (not a sin) fills me as I read this piece. Stuck indoors shielding grrrrr. Though I\'m not as gregarious as yourself, a stroll through town, a walk in the parkland is on my wishlist.
Yes I have read this as an untypical day in the life of a certain Goldfinch.
November 22nd, 2021 06:37
dusk arising said:
A wholesome envy (not a sin) fills me as I read this piece. Stuck indoors shielding grrrrr. Though I\'m not as gregarious as yourself, a stroll through town, a walk in the parkland is on my wishlist.
Yes I have read this as an untypical day in the life of a certain Goldfinch.
November 22nd, 2021 06:37
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'A pint, maybe two
to wash down
a simple, repast.\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'A pint, maybe two
to wash down
a simple, repast.\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:28
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
Doggerel Dave said:
Great, ain\'t it Andy?
Retirement - the best time of my life, and your\'s too, obviously
November 22nd, 2021 06:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Great, ain\'t it Andy?
Retirement - the best time of my life, and your\'s too, obviously
November 22nd, 2021 06:02
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
spilleronsheet said:
It sounds amazing
Maybe tomorrow we would have similar days
Maybe today’s chaos may come with rest tomorrow
It sounds like a vacation to me
Enjoy loads dear Andy
May almighty protect us all
Keep your mask around though
November 22nd, 2021 05:08
spilleronsheet said:
It sounds amazing
Maybe tomorrow we would have similar days
Maybe today’s chaos may come with rest tomorrow
It sounds like a vacation to me
Enjoy loads dear Andy
May almighty protect us all
Keep your mask around though
November 22nd, 2021 05:08
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
Neville said:
I simply love your title up there and what follows epitomises my birds eye view of you my golden friend .... enjoy to the hilt mate ........................... Neville
November 22nd, 2021 02:55
Neville said:
I simply love your title up there and what follows epitomises my birds eye view of you my golden friend .... enjoy to the hilt mate ........................... Neville
November 22nd, 2021 02:55
Don\'t Think Too Much.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Overthinking breeds worry, and half the things we worry about never happen anyway. We really do fuss. Thank you Andy. Well penned!
November 22nd, 2021 02:29
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Overthinking breeds worry, and half the things we worry about never happen anyway. We really do fuss. Thank you Andy. Well penned!
November 22nd, 2021 02:29
Don\'t Think Too Much.
Doggerel Dave said:
Once that was me, but now the living is easy and I have no problems....until the next time...
A very truthful write Andy.
November 21st, 2021 19:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Once that was me, but now the living is easy and I have no problems....until the next time...
A very truthful write Andy.
November 21st, 2021 19:47
Don\'t Think Too Much.
Coyote said:
The truth resides in the brief pause between two thoughts. Beautiful write.
November 21st, 2021 12:56
Coyote said:
The truth resides in the brief pause between two thoughts. Beautiful write.
November 21st, 2021 12:56
Don\'t Think Too Much.
spilleronsheet said:
I am an over thinker
And I can feel the after effects it brings to me
It’s a very important advise
Thank you so much dear Andy
November 21st, 2021 09:18
spilleronsheet said:
I am an over thinker
And I can feel the after effects it brings to me
It’s a very important advise
Thank you so much dear Andy
November 21st, 2021 09:18
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