Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Laughter On The Lawn.
L. B. Mek said:
well then
let us toast, us \'old twats\'
who survived
to keep our loved ones, alive
within each smile
we display: Defiantly, each day!
\'Cheers\' 🍻 - my friend
to many more years, being serenaded
by laughter\'s music
while watching youthful vitality, script
their future\'s: tears of regret...
May 20th, 2021 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
well then
let us toast, us \'old twats\'
who survived
to keep our loved ones, alive
within each smile
we display: Defiantly, each day!
\'Cheers\' 🍻 - my friend
to many more years, being serenaded
by laughter\'s music
while watching youthful vitality, script
their future\'s: tears of regret...
May 20th, 2021 03:44
What Is A Youth.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Even teenagers are young. It\'s said youth are still developing their road-sense even at age 12 - crossing busy roads, etc.
You got road sense? That No.7 bus arrived yet?! lol.
May 20th, 2021 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Even teenagers are young. It\'s said youth are still developing their road-sense even at age 12 - crossing busy roads, etc.
You got road sense? That No.7 bus arrived yet?! lol.
May 20th, 2021 02:15
Laughter On The Lawn.
Doggerel Dave said:
Anyone bothered by \'twat\' should bugger off and consult Wikipedia on the subject - The scope of that reference never ceases to amaze....
May 19th, 2021 19:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Anyone bothered by \'twat\' should bugger off and consult Wikipedia on the subject - The scope of that reference never ceases to amaze....
May 19th, 2021 19:44
Laughter On The Lawn.
rosiedm said:
It\'s good you wrote about it about real daily events maybe he had a nice puncture on down the road and had to push his bike home
May 19th, 2021 17:40
rosiedm said:
It\'s good you wrote about it about real daily events maybe he had a nice puncture on down the road and had to push his bike home
May 19th, 2021 17:40
Laughter On The Lawn.
Andy Hunter said:
If you\'re having fun then laughter is a great way of remembering the day. A cheeky comment is always worth a chuckle 🙂
May 19th, 2021 15:13
Andy Hunter said:
If you\'re having fun then laughter is a great way of remembering the day. A cheeky comment is always worth a chuckle 🙂
May 19th, 2021 15:13
Laughter On The Lawn.
dusk arising said:
Wynton is probably the most technically proficient trumpet player of all time. What he is doing on circular breathing alone is mind blowing. Whilst being dazzled by his playing here, I would much rather enjoy the picture being painted rather than be dazzled. I.E. Chet never dazzled but painted with his soul.
Well as one \"old twat\" to another. Long live being an old twat, they may never achieve it.
May 19th, 2021 07:31
dusk arising said:
Wynton is probably the most technically proficient trumpet player of all time. What he is doing on circular breathing alone is mind blowing. Whilst being dazzled by his playing here, I would much rather enjoy the picture being painted rather than be dazzled. I.E. Chet never dazzled but painted with his soul.
Well as one \"old twat\" to another. Long live being an old twat, they may never achieve it.
May 19th, 2021 07:31
Nothing To Prove.
L. B. Mek said:
insightful observations Andy,
indeed, what most colours the perception we have for others
is our projection of what we assume
we would be like, in their shoes..
but like the bequeathed wisdom of our ancestral teachings
until we\'ve walked in the other persons shoes
we can not judge, merely: speculate...
or in more accessibly palatable: biblical terminology
\'Thou hypocrite, first cast out the beam
out of thine own eye; and then shalt thou
see clearly to cast out the mote
out of thy brother\'s (&/or sisters) eye.\'
May 19th, 2021 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
insightful observations Andy,
indeed, what most colours the perception we have for others
is our projection of what we assume
we would be like, in their shoes..
but like the bequeathed wisdom of our ancestral teachings
until we\'ve walked in the other persons shoes
we can not judge, merely: speculate...
or in more accessibly palatable: biblical terminology
\'Thou hypocrite, first cast out the beam
out of thine own eye; and then shalt thou
see clearly to cast out the mote
out of thy brother\'s (&/or sisters) eye.\'
May 19th, 2021 04:32
Laughter On The Lawn.
orchidee said:
A useful write Gold.
Their days will come, when they are twattish! Is that a word?
Well, we are very old, you and I. They got that bit right.
We would tell them:\'Do you know, lads, back in 1066 we......\'
May 19th, 2021 02:06
orchidee said:
A useful write Gold.
Their days will come, when they are twattish! Is that a word?
Well, we are very old, you and I. They got that bit right.
We would tell them:\'Do you know, lads, back in 1066 we......\'
May 19th, 2021 02:06
Laughter On The Lawn.
Caring dove said:
Sorry you were called this ... that’s rude isn’t it . I’m glad you tried to laugh it away .
There’s no need to call people names ... it’s unkind
May 19th, 2021 01:21
Caring dove said:
Sorry you were called this ... that’s rude isn’t it . I’m glad you tried to laugh it away .
There’s no need to call people names ... it’s unkind
May 19th, 2021 01:21
Nothing To Prove.
dusk arising said:
Other than on a race track those supercars have never attracted me. Yes the original Lamborghini Miura in 69 had beautiful lines which were soon lost as it was \'bettered\' by later models.
I\'m happy with my old Mercedes estate which will go fast if i want it to but these days i\'m more interested in getting high MPG than speeding.
They do look add and out of place among normal cars and I do agree that I expect them to be driven with pace and a show of accelleration. Why I wonder?
May 18th, 2021 03:25
dusk arising said:
Other than on a race track those supercars have never attracted me. Yes the original Lamborghini Miura in 69 had beautiful lines which were soon lost as it was \'bettered\' by later models.
I\'m happy with my old Mercedes estate which will go fast if i want it to but these days i\'m more interested in getting high MPG than speeding.
They do look add and out of place among normal cars and I do agree that I expect them to be driven with pace and a show of accelleration. Why I wonder?
May 18th, 2021 03:25
Nothing To Prove.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. It becomes tiresome if a fast car or motorbike roars past us just to show off, on the road, or while we\'re walking along the path.
May 18th, 2021 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. It becomes tiresome if a fast car or motorbike roars past us just to show off, on the road, or while we\'re walking along the path.
May 18th, 2021 01:44
Experience Counts.
myself and me said:
Yes, indeed, and those experience riches our life.
May 17th, 2021 19:31
myself and me said:
Yes, indeed, and those experience riches our life.
May 17th, 2021 19:31
Experience Counts.
Andy Hunter said:
You\'re words are so true. I was once tasked with training graduates and some wanted to take time and learn while others simply believed a qualification meant they could jump on the promotion ladder without trying. Needless to say they soon realised their mistakes.
May 17th, 2021 13:13
Andy Hunter said:
You\'re words are so true. I was once tasked with training graduates and some wanted to take time and learn while others simply believed a qualification meant they could jump on the promotion ladder without trying. Needless to say they soon realised their mistakes.
May 17th, 2021 13:13
Experience Counts.
dusk arising said:
Just how true this is came home to me the other day when I was working alongside an 18 yr old. Youth and vigour but no experience.
Oh how sweet would it be to be 18 again but with all my years of experience.
May 17th, 2021 01:04
dusk arising said:
Just how true this is came home to me the other day when I was working alongside an 18 yr old. Youth and vigour but no experience.
Oh how sweet would it be to be 18 again but with all my years of experience.
May 17th, 2021 01:04
Golden Girl.
Neville said:
just a little bit special this GF60 .. just like the woman who evidently inspired it ................................ Neville
May 16th, 2021 11:41
Neville said:
just a little bit special this GF60 .. just like the woman who evidently inspired it ................................ Neville
May 16th, 2021 11:41
Golden Girl.
Andy Hunter said:
A haunting poem. A ghostly vision. Great writing Andy.
May 16th, 2021 05:58
Andy Hunter said:
A haunting poem. A ghostly vision. Great writing Andy.
May 16th, 2021 05:58
Golden Girl.
Fay Slimm. said:
A description not to be forgotten this lady - your words live on in tribute to the lovely song and that beautiful woman dear Andy.
May 16th, 2021 04:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A description not to be forgotten this lady - your words live on in tribute to the lovely song and that beautiful woman dear Andy.
May 16th, 2021 04:48
Golden Girl.
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words , goldfinch 🙂 really liked reading this
May 16th, 2021 01:25
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words , goldfinch 🙂 really liked reading this
May 16th, 2021 01:25
Golden Girl.
dusk arising said:
A mist of mystery surrounds your fascinating piece today Goldfinch. Such poise and grace present when a beautiful woman single mindedly makes her way.
May 16th, 2021 01:18
dusk arising said:
A mist of mystery surrounds your fascinating piece today Goldfinch. Such poise and grace present when a beautiful woman single mindedly makes her way.
May 16th, 2021 01:18
She Found Herself.
myself and me said:
She is definitely a lucky one and a strong one too. How many got lost and never came back. Nice writing.
May 15th, 2021 22:15
myself and me said:
She is definitely a lucky one and a strong one too. How many got lost and never came back. Nice writing.
May 15th, 2021 22:15
She Found Herself.
dusk arising said:
It\'s sad how people can be dominated by a relationship and lose what they are. I have seen it and been it in the past. It happens all too readily. At my stage in life I have decided not to risk it again and to carry on to my final years being the unfettered \'me\'.
There\'s a good message in your words today and i hope very few readers find themselves in a restrictive relationship such as you describe.
May 15th, 2021 05:30
dusk arising said:
It\'s sad how people can be dominated by a relationship and lose what they are. I have seen it and been it in the past. It happens all too readily. At my stage in life I have decided not to risk it again and to carry on to my final years being the unfettered \'me\'.
There\'s a good message in your words today and i hope very few readers find themselves in a restrictive relationship such as you describe.
May 15th, 2021 05:30
She Found Herself.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
meanwhile - did I find \'Me\', \'Myself\', or \'I\'? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
May 15th, 2021 01:58
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
meanwhile - did I find \'Me\', \'Myself\', or \'I\'? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
May 15th, 2021 01:58
She Found Herself.
Caring dove said:
Listening is so important ! 🙂great that she got her strength and power back
May 15th, 2021 01:39
Caring dove said:
Listening is so important ! 🙂great that she got her strength and power back
May 15th, 2021 01:39
Unjustified Violence.
Andy Hunter said:
Had me puzzled until I got to the end. Very good 🙂
May 14th, 2021 17:16
Andy Hunter said:
Had me puzzled until I got to the end. Very good 🙂
May 14th, 2021 17:16
Unjustified Violence.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good story Andy. Love the suggestions the images make.
May 14th, 2021 14:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good story Andy. Love the suggestions the images make.
May 14th, 2021 14:06
Unjustified Violence.
dusk arising said:
If you had to choose, which colour croquet ball would you be?
May 14th, 2021 10:52
dusk arising said:
If you had to choose, which colour croquet ball would you be?
May 14th, 2021 10:52
Unjustified Violence.
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read to help inject that Friday feeling Andy,
thanks!
although, I suggest
there\'s much worse Manmade things to be, than a ball
in a sport,
like a fish hook, maybe or a bullet
accessories both, to that other type
of hunting sport
where those who get knocked down
never get to see the Sun, again...
(please note: commentary is on
hunting for Pleasure not need)
May 14th, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read to help inject that Friday feeling Andy,
thanks!
although, I suggest
there\'s much worse Manmade things to be, than a ball
in a sport,
like a fish hook, maybe or a bullet
accessories both, to that other type
of hunting sport
where those who get knocked down
never get to see the Sun, again...
(please note: commentary is on
hunting for Pleasure not need)
May 14th, 2021 06:16
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