Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
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Dove said:
I guess instead of a salmon you got a (flounder) well dear one, nice set of couplets and lovely story telling! Hope the incident was make believe! A bloody tale lol
August 7th, 2021 08:43
Dove said:
I guess instead of a salmon you got a (flounder) well dear one, nice set of couplets and lovely story telling! Hope the incident was make believe! A bloody tale lol
August 7th, 2021 08:43
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Doggerel Dave said:
And I know how you feel you ‘old duffer’
I’ve fallen over more often than that.
I know it’s difficult but I suffer
As I go down very hard with a splat.
Balance shot and always has been, Andy - my favourite spectator sport is surf board riding,their baletic skills then more so – they are gods to me - ..none of this should detract fromthe point that you have produced a great rhymer full of self deprecating comedic action.
August 7th, 2021 06:42
Doggerel Dave said:
And I know how you feel you ‘old duffer’
I’ve fallen over more often than that.
I know it’s difficult but I suffer
As I go down very hard with a splat.
Balance shot and always has been, Andy - my favourite spectator sport is surf board riding,their baletic skills then more so – they are gods to me - ..none of this should detract fromthe point that you have produced a great rhymer full of self deprecating comedic action.
August 7th, 2021 06:42
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John Prophet said:
Hope this was fictitious.
If not hope you’re feeling better!
August 7th, 2021 06:12
John Prophet said:
Hope this was fictitious.
If not hope you’re feeling better!
August 7th, 2021 06:12
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Neville said:
... this aint just one o them fishermen\'s tales now is it ....
... I hope someone had the sense to open a tin ..........
... any old how, you get the thumbs up from me ...
.................................................. :)
August 7th, 2021 02:17
Neville said:
... this aint just one o them fishermen\'s tales now is it ....
... I hope someone had the sense to open a tin ..........
... any old how, you get the thumbs up from me ...
.................................................. :)
August 7th, 2021 02:17
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orchidee said:
Did you go a**e over elbow? Or summat like that. Woof! Fido says \'Steady on there, old chap\' meaning me, saying such things! lol.
August 7th, 2021 01:45
orchidee said:
Did you go a**e over elbow? Or summat like that. Woof! Fido says \'Steady on there, old chap\' meaning me, saying such things! lol.
August 7th, 2021 01:45
Winner Takes All.
SureshG said:
It’s a fallacy to believe we compete for the sake of playing, but rather we play for the sake of competing - so hurray for your win!
August 6th, 2021 12:02
SureshG said:
It’s a fallacy to believe we compete for the sake of playing, but rather we play for the sake of competing - so hurray for your win!
August 6th, 2021 12:02
Winner Takes All.
Saxon Crow said:
Congratulations that man! Smug rights galore
August 6th, 2021 11:48
Saxon Crow said:
Congratulations that man! Smug rights galore
August 6th, 2021 11:48
Winner Takes All.
L. B. Mek said:
lol
Congrats, Andy
I\'m guessing, you\'ll be having
a weekend, with a spring
in your step...
August 6th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
lol
Congrats, Andy
I\'m guessing, you\'ll be having
a weekend, with a spring
in your step...
August 6th, 2021 05:21
Winner Takes All.
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you get your gold lettered name on the Wall of Fame in the club house, Andy? I really like the unabashed pride in your achievement you exhibit here.
The form your poem takes definitely has trophy like qualities - that took hard work didn\'t it?
August 6th, 2021 03:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you get your gold lettered name on the Wall of Fame in the club house, Andy? I really like the unabashed pride in your achievement you exhibit here.
The form your poem takes definitely has trophy like qualities - that took hard work didn\'t it?
August 6th, 2021 03:30
Winner Takes All.
orchidee said:
Good write Andy.
I was about eight hours singing, but I didn\'t win anything!
August 6th, 2021 02:16
orchidee said:
Good write Andy.
I was about eight hours singing, but I didn\'t win anything!
August 6th, 2021 02:16
Love Is There.
Freni Karaluthara said:
Nicely penned poem dear Goldfinch.
i liked the the last lines more:
One day I will be with her
But I feel that life is still there,
Still there for me.
I know will join her one day,
But there is no rush.
August 5th, 2021 11:01
Freni Karaluthara said:
Nicely penned poem dear Goldfinch.
i liked the the last lines more:
One day I will be with her
But I feel that life is still there,
Still there for me.
I know will join her one day,
But there is no rush.
August 5th, 2021 11:01
Life Storms.
Coyote said:
As therapy for the blues, dancing in the rain cannot be underestimated. Nice write.
August 4th, 2021 12:07
Coyote said:
As therapy for the blues, dancing in the rain cannot be underestimated. Nice write.
August 4th, 2021 12:07
Father And Son Togther.
Coyote said:
From one father to another, this is BEAUTIFUL! The bond between parent and child only grows stronger as time passes.
Nicely done sir.
August 4th, 2021 12:03
Coyote said:
From one father to another, this is BEAUTIFUL! The bond between parent and child only grows stronger as time passes.
Nicely done sir.
August 4th, 2021 12:03
Love Is There.
dusk arising said:
Your way of being is a lesson to us all Andy. A lesson worth taking home and living with for understanding brings a fullness after days of wondering.
August 4th, 2021 07:56
dusk arising said:
Your way of being is a lesson to us all Andy. A lesson worth taking home and living with for understanding brings a fullness after days of wondering.
August 4th, 2021 07:56
Love Is There.
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
In the clip - somewhere - there\'s a place where ya don\'t hear me sing! The further away, the better?
August 4th, 2021 01:33
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
In the clip - somewhere - there\'s a place where ya don\'t hear me sing! The further away, the better?
August 4th, 2021 01:33
Recovering From The Shock.
Thekkinkkattil said:
The shock and satisfaction you feel when your little ones grow up and play their role beautifully penned.Thanks for sharing
August 3rd, 2021 19:59
Thekkinkkattil said:
The shock and satisfaction you feel when your little ones grow up and play their role beautifully penned.Thanks for sharing
August 3rd, 2021 19:59
Recovering From The Shock.
MendedFences27 said:
Eventually they realize that the roles are shifting. Still a thrill when you realize that you raised them right. - Phil A
August 3rd, 2021 11:25
MendedFences27 said:
Eventually they realize that the roles are shifting. Still a thrill when you realize that you raised them right. - Phil A
August 3rd, 2021 11:25
Recovering From The Shock.
Doggerel Dave said:
To use one big walloping cliche everyone else had the forbearance and discretion to avoid:
Better late than never!... 😊
August 3rd, 2021 06:42
Doggerel Dave said:
To use one big walloping cliche everyone else had the forbearance and discretion to avoid:
Better late than never!... 😊
August 3rd, 2021 06:42
Recovering From The Shock.
L. B. Mek said:
you\'re such a refreshing Poet, Andy
a joy to read your subtle poetic brilliance
in all its diverse forms,
I think this will have me smiling all day
thank you, my friend
August 3rd, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
you\'re such a refreshing Poet, Andy
a joy to read your subtle poetic brilliance
in all its diverse forms,
I think this will have me smiling all day
thank you, my friend
August 3rd, 2021 05:03
Recovering From The Shock.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - I smiled when I knew what these lines were leading to - - he waited until that wonderful Italian feast was finished and surprised you at last my friend -- worth all the wait methinks when our offspring foots that special bill.
August 3rd, 2021 04:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - I smiled when I knew what these lines were leading to - - he waited until that wonderful Italian feast was finished and surprised you at last my friend -- worth all the wait methinks when our offspring foots that special bill.
August 3rd, 2021 04:36
Recovering From The Shock.
Saxon Crow said:
He\'s probably realised that you\'re getting on now and approaching second childhood and therefore stepping up into a more fatherly role.
August 3rd, 2021 02:47
Saxon Crow said:
He\'s probably realised that you\'re getting on now and approaching second childhood and therefore stepping up into a more fatherly role.
August 3rd, 2021 02:47
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