Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



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Jon Nakapalau said:

Wonderful - inspired!

August 7th, 2021 15:58

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Dove said:

I guess instead of a salmon you got a (flounder) well dear one, nice set of couplets and lovely story telling! Hope the incident was make believe! A bloody tale lol


August 7th, 2021 08:43

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Doggerel Dave said:

And I know how you feel you ‘old duffer’
I’ve fallen over more often than that.
I know it’s difficult but I suffer
As I go down very hard with a splat.

Balance shot and always has been, Andy - my favourite spectator sport is surf board riding,their baletic skills then more so – they are gods to me - ..none of this should detract fromthe point that you have produced a great rhymer full of self deprecating comedic action.


August 7th, 2021 06:42

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John Prophet said:

Hope this was fictitious.
If not hope you’re feeling better!

August 7th, 2021 06:12

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BusyB said:

Brilliant, hope the thumb is on the mend

August 7th, 2021 04:11

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Neville said:


... this aint just one o them fishermen\'s tales now is it ....

... I hope someone had the sense to open a tin ..........

... any old how, you get the thumbs up from me ...

.................................................. :)

August 7th, 2021 02:17

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orchidee said:

Did you go a**e over elbow? Or summat like that. Woof! Fido says \'Steady on there, old chap\' meaning me, saying such things! lol.

August 7th, 2021 01:45

Winner Takes All.
Trenz Pruca said:

Good you you Andy. Keep on winning.

August 6th, 2021 16:40

Winner Takes All.
SureshG said:

It’s a fallacy to believe we compete for the sake of playing, but rather we play for the sake of competing - so hurray for your win!

August 6th, 2021 12:02

Winner Takes All.
Saxon Crow said:

Congratulations that man! Smug rights galore

August 6th, 2021 11:48

Winner Takes All.
L. B. Mek said:

lol
Congrats, Andy
I\'m guessing, you\'ll be having
a weekend, with a spring
in your step...

August 6th, 2021 05:21

Winner Takes All.
Doggerel Dave said:

Do you get your gold lettered name on the Wall of Fame in the club house, Andy? I really like the unabashed pride in your achievement you exhibit here.
The form your poem takes definitely has trophy like qualities - that took hard work didn\'t it?

August 6th, 2021 03:30

Winner Takes All.
orchidee said:

Good write Andy.
I was about eight hours singing, but I didn\'t win anything!

August 6th, 2021 02:16

Another Fine Day Haiku.
SureshG said:

YES!!!!!!

August 5th, 2021 13:48

Love Is There.
Freni Karaluthara said:

Nicely penned poem dear Goldfinch.
i liked the the last lines more:
One day I will be with her
But I feel that life is still there,
Still there for me.
I know will join her one day,
But there is no rush.

August 5th, 2021 11:01

Another Fine Day Haiku.
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!

August 5th, 2021 04:38

Another Fine Day Haiku.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

August 5th, 2021 01:18

Love Is There.
Jon Nakapalau said:

Nice - inspired.

August 4th, 2021 16:40

Life Storms.
Coyote said:

As therapy for the blues, dancing in the rain cannot be underestimated. Nice write.

August 4th, 2021 12:07

Father And Son Togther.
Coyote said:

From one father to another, this is BEAUTIFUL! The bond between parent and child only grows stronger as time passes.
Nicely done sir.

August 4th, 2021 12:03

Love Is There.
dusk arising said:

Your way of being is a lesson to us all Andy. A lesson worth taking home and living with for understanding brings a fullness after days of wondering.

August 4th, 2021 07:56

Love Is There.
orchidee said:

A poignant write Gold.
In the clip - somewhere - there\'s a place where ya don\'t hear me sing! The further away, the better?

August 4th, 2021 01:33

Love Is There.
iAli said:

Great writing dear poet!❣

August 4th, 2021 01:27

Love Is There.
Saxon Crow said:

Always. A beautiful poem

August 4th, 2021 01:17

Recovering From The Shock.
Thekkinkkattil said:

The shock and satisfaction you feel when your little ones grow up and play their role beautifully penned.Thanks for sharing

August 3rd, 2021 19:59

Recovering From The Shock.
MendedFences27 said:

Eventually they realize that the roles are shifting. Still a thrill when you realize that you raised them right. - Phil A

August 3rd, 2021 11:25

Recovering From The Shock.
Doggerel Dave said:

To use one big walloping cliche everyone else had the forbearance and discretion to avoid:
Better late than never!... 😊

August 3rd, 2021 06:42

Recovering From The Shock.
L. B. Mek said:

you\'re such a refreshing Poet, Andy
a joy to read your subtle poetic brilliance
in all its diverse forms,
I think this will have me smiling all day
thank you, my friend

August 3rd, 2021 05:03

Recovering From The Shock.
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - I smiled when I knew what these lines were leading to - - he waited until that wonderful Italian feast was finished and surprised you at last my friend -- worth all the wait methinks when our offspring foots that special bill.

August 3rd, 2021 04:36

Recovering From The Shock.
Saxon Crow said:

He\'s probably realised that you\'re getting on now and approaching second childhood and therefore stepping up into a more fatherly role.

August 3rd, 2021 02:47



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