Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Move Forward - Tanka.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for caring UNCLE ANDY - We both love Beethoven ! Appassiona very frenetic ~ almost the BUM of the Flightel BEE ! Big contrast to the Moonlight at the beginning !
CARPE DIEM ! We dont get many TANKAS and they do presnt an opportunity to amplify the SENRYU (or HAIKU) which is their role !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR Beloved JOYCE !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 21st, 2019 14:08
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for caring UNCLE ANDY - We both love Beethoven ! Appassiona very frenetic ~ almost the BUM of the Flightel BEE ! Big contrast to the Moonlight at the beginning !
CARPE DIEM ! We dont get many TANKAS and they do presnt an opportunity to amplify the SENRYU (or HAIKU) which is their role !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR Beloved JOYCE !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 21st, 2019 14:08
Move Forward - Tanka.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Nice tanka here Andy, well done.
Ex animo, Alan
December 21st, 2019 06:06
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Nice tanka here Andy, well done.
Ex animo, Alan
December 21st, 2019 06:06
By Her Side.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
You had tears flowing down your face as you were writing this ...
I had tears flowing down my face as I read it!
It reminded me of the night my mom decided to give up her earthly existence and let her spirit fly to join my dad’s! I sat next to her and her last words to me were, “Let me go. Don’t cry. Just sit next to me. Everything will be alright!” I fell asleep with my head next to hers as she quietly slipped away! I feel cheated in the sense that we never said goodbye! That is what I constantly think about...and the tears flow uncontrollably!
I know if she were here she would tell me to stop the crying and to get over it!
I do try to listen, but it’s not easy!
My love to Joyce and to you!
I do think of her a lot!
~Laura~
December 21st, 2019 05:47
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
You had tears flowing down your face as you were writing this ...
I had tears flowing down my face as I read it!
It reminded me of the night my mom decided to give up her earthly existence and let her spirit fly to join my dad’s! I sat next to her and her last words to me were, “Let me go. Don’t cry. Just sit next to me. Everything will be alright!” I fell asleep with my head next to hers as she quietly slipped away! I feel cheated in the sense that we never said goodbye! That is what I constantly think about...and the tears flow uncontrollably!
I know if she were here she would tell me to stop the crying and to get over it!
I do try to listen, but it’s not easy!
My love to Joyce and to you!
I do think of her a lot!
~Laura~
December 21st, 2019 05:47
Move Forward - Tanka.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Yes, and \'tomorrow\' never comes. When it gets here, it\'s always \'today\'.
Did I muck it up in 1066? - those who gave their \'today\' that we might have our \'tomorrow\'. No tomorrow for Harold! Doh!
December 21st, 2019 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Yes, and \'tomorrow\' never comes. When it gets here, it\'s always \'today\'.
Did I muck it up in 1066? - those who gave their \'today\' that we might have our \'tomorrow\'. No tomorrow for Harold! Doh!
December 21st, 2019 02:52
Move Forward - Tanka.
Michael Edwards said:
A sobering thought - super tanka.
December 21st, 2019 02:26
Michael Edwards said:
A sobering thought - super tanka.
December 21st, 2019 02:26
By Her Side.
Suresh said:
You sit by her bedside, and the beauty that was tear up your eyes. That is love indeed.
December 20th, 2019 20:35
Suresh said:
You sit by her bedside, and the beauty that was tear up your eyes. That is love indeed.
December 20th, 2019 20:35
By Her Side.
myself and me said:
I am deeply moved by the writing. How lucky she is to have someone like you to love her, take care of her.
December 20th, 2019 14:25
myself and me said:
I am deeply moved by the writing. How lucky she is to have someone like you to love her, take care of her.
December 20th, 2019 14:25
Sunday Drivers?
Gregstarandgoff said:
Lol I feel your pain!
And love the poem!
December 20th, 2019 04:59
Gregstarandgoff said:
Lol I feel your pain!
And love the poem!
December 20th, 2019 04:59
By Her Side.
Michael Edwards said:
You had me welling up reading this. What a touching write.
December 20th, 2019 03:52
Michael Edwards said:
You had me welling up reading this. What a touching write.
December 20th, 2019 03:52
By Her Side.
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold, and especially at this season. Thinking of you all.
December 20th, 2019 03:14
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold, and especially at this season. Thinking of you all.
December 20th, 2019 03:14
Sunday Drivers?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening UNCLE ANDY ~ Brian & I are often on the Roads on a Sunday going to MUMS or MAMAS for Sunday Lunch after Church ~ We are both still courting ! The average speeeeeeeed is about 20 mph and a lot of them are *Red velve covered Steering Wheel Drivers !* another folk song. Love your song ~ and the CORRIES !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR Beloved JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 19th, 2019 16:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening UNCLE ANDY ~ Brian & I are often on the Roads on a Sunday going to MUMS or MAMAS for Sunday Lunch after Church ~ We are both still courting ! The average speeeeeeeed is about 20 mph and a lot of them are *Red velve covered Steering Wheel Drivers !* another folk song. Love your song ~ and the CORRIES !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR Beloved JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 19th, 2019 16:05
Sunday Drivers?
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sounds like you are seeing red Andy.
Ex animo, Alan
December 19th, 2019 14:54
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sounds like you are seeing red Andy.
Ex animo, Alan
December 19th, 2019 14:54
Sunday Drivers?
FineB said:
Excellent write Goldfinch.
I work with a lot of fast streamers and apprentices in my job.
Some of them really are old codgers in spirit!
Keep writing FineB
December 19th, 2019 06:24
FineB said:
Excellent write Goldfinch.
I work with a lot of fast streamers and apprentices in my job.
Some of them really are old codgers in spirit!
Keep writing FineB
December 19th, 2019 06:24
Sunday Drivers?
Michael Edwards said:
Oh yes how I curse them and there are many about.
I have so many gripes my current being those who don\'t know the rules at roundabouts - especially those still indicating right as they leave and those who don\'t indicate left when they are alongside the exit which is the one before they ibntend to leave. Lots of grrrrs
December 19th, 2019 03:12
Michael Edwards said:
Oh yes how I curse them and there are many about.
I have so many gripes my current being those who don\'t know the rules at roundabouts - especially those still indicating right as they leave and those who don\'t indicate left when they are alongside the exit which is the one before they ibntend to leave. Lots of grrrrs
December 19th, 2019 03:12
What is Christmas?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning UNCLE ANDY - Thanks for DIZZY excellent a very smooth HORN ! I loved last Christmas in the Sun in Auckland - New Zealand - BUT - I was 11,500 miles away form BRIAN and it hurt - It gives me a glimpse of your separation from Your Beloved Joyce. Thanks for sharing your aching Heart with us. Your loving relationship with JOYCE is always a great inspiration to Brian & I who will be just starting out on our Married Life in 2020 ! Never be ashamed to shed a tear in a lovely Poetry Group like MPS - we are ALL here for each other - Poetry is always CATHARTIC ! AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR BELOVED JOYCE
Love @ Christmas ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 18th, 2019 04:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning UNCLE ANDY - Thanks for DIZZY excellent a very smooth HORN ! I loved last Christmas in the Sun in Auckland - New Zealand - BUT - I was 11,500 miles away form BRIAN and it hurt - It gives me a glimpse of your separation from Your Beloved Joyce. Thanks for sharing your aching Heart with us. Your loving relationship with JOYCE is always a great inspiration to Brian & I who will be just starting out on our Married Life in 2020 ! Never be ashamed to shed a tear in a lovely Poetry Group like MPS - we are ALL here for each other - Poetry is always CATHARTIC ! AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR BELOVED JOYCE
Love @ Christmas ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 18th, 2019 04:59
Lost in Transaltion.
FineB said:
Hi Goldfinch60,
A great write.
Your poem title happens to be the title of one of my favourite films.
Well, I have a O Level in French but I hardly speak it anymore. Je ne sais pas pourqoir.
Keep writing FineB
December 18th, 2019 04:14
FineB said:
Hi Goldfinch60,
A great write.
Your poem title happens to be the title of one of my favourite films.
Well, I have a O Level in French but I hardly speak it anymore. Je ne sais pas pourqoir.
Keep writing FineB
December 18th, 2019 04:14
What is Christmas?
FineB said:
Hi Goldfinch60,
A beautiful write which really captures the spirit of Xmas.
I hope you will have a good Xmas in spite of personal circumstances.
Merry Xmas and keep on writing FineB
December 18th, 2019 04:10
FineB said:
Hi Goldfinch60,
A beautiful write which really captures the spirit of Xmas.
I hope you will have a good Xmas in spite of personal circumstances.
Merry Xmas and keep on writing FineB
December 18th, 2019 04:10
What is Christmas?
Poetic Dan said:
Wow you got me with this one as I read down I had in my head it\'s nothing but programming but then you pulled the heart strings. I Guess for me you are right, it\'s just another moment to hold my loves ones tightly.
Thank you for sharing light, I hope you and your family all the best!
December 18th, 2019 03:42
Poetic Dan said:
Wow you got me with this one as I read down I had in my head it\'s nothing but programming but then you pulled the heart strings. I Guess for me you are right, it\'s just another moment to hold my loves ones tightly.
Thank you for sharing light, I hope you and your family all the best!
December 18th, 2019 03:42
What is Christmas?
orchidee said:
It\'s horrible time for some folk, we know, whether their situation is better or worse than yours - loneliness, etc, the long break of the holidays (for some anyway).
Or maybe saying - the good old days, but not now?
I hope there is some small spark at least in your heart, of the true meaning of Christmas. :)
December 18th, 2019 03:14
orchidee said:
It\'s horrible time for some folk, we know, whether their situation is better or worse than yours - loneliness, etc, the long break of the holidays (for some anyway).
Or maybe saying - the good old days, but not now?
I hope there is some small spark at least in your heart, of the true meaning of Christmas. :)
December 18th, 2019 03:14
Highlighted.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks Uncle Andy ~ Loved the Video & the HAIKU ! We always see a lot in the Clouds ! But often I see different things from Angela ~ vive la difference !
Blessings & Peace teo YOU & YOUR Beloved JOYCE
Love Brian & Angela 💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 17th, 2019 10:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks Uncle Andy ~ Loved the Video & the HAIKU ! We always see a lot in the Clouds ! But often I see different things from Angela ~ vive la difference !
Blessings & Peace teo YOU & YOUR Beloved JOYCE
Love Brian & Angela 💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 17th, 2019 10:50
Highlighted.
Michael Edwards said:
I love these and this is a real good \'un.
December 17th, 2019 03:42
Michael Edwards said:
I love these and this is a real good \'un.
December 17th, 2019 03:42
Alcohol.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Andy ~ Loved the Schubert ~ played it with my Dinner ~ Shepherds Pie from Iceland & a pint of OLD SPECKLED HEN ! Angela is out with her Girls from Work tonight ! They have booked a MINIBUS both ways ! Loved the POEM !
PAUL to TIMOTHY ~ Please dont drink the water ~ its contaminated and you know you have a dicky tummy ! Ive sent you a couple of Bottles of Wine ~ with Dr Luke ~ He*ll keep an eye on you ! I want you fit and well for our next Missionary Journey not down with Adelphi Belly ! 1 Timothy 5 v 23 !
My MUM is teetotal but she always had a bottle of brandy and put a drop in her tea *For Her Tummy*s sake ! She drinks about 15 cups a day ~ each with a wee drop ! Angela*s Dad introduced her to RIOJA Tinto which she now enjoys with her GORGONZOLA ! Dont tell the CHIANTI Merchant !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR Beloved JOYCE
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 16th, 2019 15:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Andy ~ Loved the Schubert ~ played it with my Dinner ~ Shepherds Pie from Iceland & a pint of OLD SPECKLED HEN ! Angela is out with her Girls from Work tonight ! They have booked a MINIBUS both ways ! Loved the POEM !
PAUL to TIMOTHY ~ Please dont drink the water ~ its contaminated and you know you have a dicky tummy ! Ive sent you a couple of Bottles of Wine ~ with Dr Luke ~ He*ll keep an eye on you ! I want you fit and well for our next Missionary Journey not down with Adelphi Belly ! 1 Timothy 5 v 23 !
My MUM is teetotal but she always had a bottle of brandy and put a drop in her tea *For Her Tummy*s sake ! She drinks about 15 cups a day ~ each with a wee drop ! Angela*s Dad introduced her to RIOJA Tinto which she now enjoys with her GORGONZOLA ! Dont tell the CHIANTI Merchant !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR Beloved JOYCE
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 16th, 2019 15:14
Alcohol.
Poetic Dan said:
That ended shorter than expected but then did it if alcohol was involved. Great work!
December 16th, 2019 10:16
Poetic Dan said:
That ended shorter than expected but then did it if alcohol was involved. Great work!
December 16th, 2019 10:16
Alcohol.
orchidee said:
Erm, yes lol. Aww, why no-one invite me to parties which have alcohol? We know why. I\'m the phantom tipple-waterer! I\'m a real pain and horror at this season. I might be disguised as Santa.
December 16th, 2019 03:03
orchidee said:
Erm, yes lol. Aww, why no-one invite me to parties which have alcohol? We know why. I\'m the phantom tipple-waterer! I\'m a real pain and horror at this season. I might be disguised as Santa.
December 16th, 2019 03:03
Alcohol.
Michael Edwards said:
And I love my enemy - as they say:
A meal without wine is like a day without sunshine.
December 16th, 2019 02:22
Michael Edwards said:
And I love my enemy - as they say:
A meal without wine is like a day without sunshine.
December 16th, 2019 02:22
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