Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Crossing Out.
orchidee said:
Use pencil - ya can erase things easily! I nearly always do, then type up poems on to files gradually, after having written a few. Or get our quills out?!
August 28th, 2019 03:53
orchidee said:
Use pencil - ya can erase things easily! I nearly always do, then type up poems on to files gradually, after having written a few. Or get our quills out?!
August 28th, 2019 03:53
Crossing Out.
dusk arising said:
Ha, do you use a quill when writing too? I\'m laughing at your description of the practicality of writing. Recalling an ex who shuffled three or four pieces of A4 lined paper full of crossings out and margin jottings as she attempted to fluently read the poem she had just composed.
How much easier i find composition using the simplest of word processors on my laptop having myself graduated from the pen and paper of years ago. I think that being so much more orderly, it assists the creative juices to flow more readily.
A great subject for your poem today. I expect it will be fun in your group too.
August 28th, 2019 02:18
dusk arising said:
Ha, do you use a quill when writing too? I\'m laughing at your description of the practicality of writing. Recalling an ex who shuffled three or four pieces of A4 lined paper full of crossings out and margin jottings as she attempted to fluently read the poem she had just composed.
How much easier i find composition using the simplest of word processors on my laptop having myself graduated from the pen and paper of years ago. I think that being so much more orderly, it assists the creative juices to flow more readily.
A great subject for your poem today. I expect it will be fun in your group too.
August 28th, 2019 02:18
Crossing Out.
orchidee said:
Glad some of you are having fun there. The Poetry Group I went to seemed bit dreary, and some waffled on. We could think \'Oh no, not another poem from him/her\'.
I\'m sure some pretended they liked the poems, with feeble applause after each one.
And now a song: \'Alway\'...……….! heehee. I dunno the words to it yet!
August 28th, 2019 01:50
orchidee said:
Glad some of you are having fun there. The Poetry Group I went to seemed bit dreary, and some waffled on. We could think \'Oh no, not another poem from him/her\'.
I\'m sure some pretended they liked the poems, with feeble applause after each one.
And now a song: \'Alway\'...……….! heehee. I dunno the words to it yet!
August 28th, 2019 01:50
Crossing Out.
orchidee said:
Oh I\'ve not been to Poetry Group for ages - if it\'s still running. Doh! It would have been last night too - last Tuesday in the month, bi-monthly.
August 28th, 2019 01:33
orchidee said:
Oh I\'ve not been to Poetry Group for ages - if it\'s still running. Doh! It would have been last night too - last Tuesday in the month, bi-monthly.
August 28th, 2019 01:33
Crossing Out.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. It\'s just me, but I rarely seem to cross out much, or to \'start again\'. I do occasionally though.
\'Tis a good write, right I am sure!\'
I fell out with a publisher, who did not like \'alway\' - how fussy! As if a publication depended on that as a major issue. I thought: \'Grrr, but it don\'t rhyme otherwise, ya daft ******\'Woof! Fido stopped me there!
August 28th, 2019 01:30
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. It\'s just me, but I rarely seem to cross out much, or to \'start again\'. I do occasionally though.
\'Tis a good write, right I am sure!\'
I fell out with a publisher, who did not like \'alway\' - how fussy! As if a publication depended on that as a major issue. I thought: \'Grrr, but it don\'t rhyme otherwise, ya daft ******\'Woof! Fido stopped me there!
August 28th, 2019 01:30
New Life.
Suresh said:
GP\'s - to GC\'s
distant yet close
not responsible, yet more caring
compassionate, yet patient
August 27th, 2019 14:19
Suresh said:
GP\'s - to GC\'s
distant yet close
not responsible, yet more caring
compassionate, yet patient
August 27th, 2019 14:19
New Life.
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly delightful poetic welcome to the newest family member dear Andy - Congratulations on the birth of a grand daughter and am sure she will treasure these words when she is grown....... thank you for sharing them here.
August 27th, 2019 13:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly delightful poetic welcome to the newest family member dear Andy - Congratulations on the birth of a grand daughter and am sure she will treasure these words when she is grown....... thank you for sharing them here.
August 27th, 2019 13:29
New Life.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY - ANGELA here (10:30pm Tuesday !) Brian & I love Autumn Leaves - any version ! Thanks for the Poem - lovely ! At 32 I should be a MAMMA by now - but GOD has His own timings ! I cant wait to get back to Essex (Im missing the 90F + heatwave !) and I love Autumn in Essex. Its still Winter here & Weather has been 15C (59F) today !
Every Blessing & Joy for You & Yours
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 27th, 2019 05:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY - ANGELA here (10:30pm Tuesday !) Brian & I love Autumn Leaves - any version ! Thanks for the Poem - lovely ! At 32 I should be a MAMMA by now - but GOD has His own timings ! I cant wait to get back to Essex (Im missing the 90F + heatwave !) and I love Autumn in Essex. Its still Winter here & Weather has been 15C (59F) today !
Every Blessing & Joy for You & Yours
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 27th, 2019 05:39
New Life.
dusk arising said:
That unconditional love for our offspring is a wonderful thing. I know the rewards grandchildren bring to us in our senior years.
Such joy.
I hope your words were well received, as they are here.
August 27th, 2019 01:04
dusk arising said:
That unconditional love for our offspring is a wonderful thing. I know the rewards grandchildren bring to us in our senior years.
Such joy.
I hope your words were well received, as they are here.
August 27th, 2019 01:04
Mistakes.
dusk arising said:
So very true of course. And one becomes more prepared to accept the risks of making mistakes ... they do indeed teach us.
Good observational stuff.
August 26th, 2019 05:31
dusk arising said:
So very true of course. And one becomes more prepared to accept the risks of making mistakes ... they do indeed teach us.
Good observational stuff.
August 26th, 2019 05:31
Mistakes.
Fay Slimm. said:
A wise reminder dear Andy - mistakes are what make us if we see them aright. Thank you for the beautiful solo and verse .
August 26th, 2019 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A wise reminder dear Andy - mistakes are what make us if we see them aright. Thank you for the beautiful solo and verse .
August 26th, 2019 03:12
Mistakes.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy - DVORAK Arias are always a great Blessing. The poem reminds us of two important facts !
1. We can only learn by our own mistakes !
2. We must never forget our MISTAKES !
Blessings & Peace - to You & Joyce
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 26th, 2019 01:57
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy - DVORAK Arias are always a great Blessing. The poem reminds us of two important facts !
1. We can only learn by our own mistakes !
2. We must never forget our MISTAKES !
Blessings & Peace - to You & Joyce
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 26th, 2019 01:57
Mistakes.
orchidee said:
It\'s this \'thinking\' that does it. It\'s very dangerous for us, we know! heehee.
August 26th, 2019 01:27
orchidee said:
It\'s this \'thinking\' that does it. It\'s very dangerous for us, we know! heehee.
August 26th, 2019 01:27
Steadfast.
Tom Wood said:
A poem... Truly a gift of the heart. Your son really loves you, I\'m very happy for both of you, and happy that we all have this fantastic poem. By the way, Sing Sing Sing is literally my favorite song. Excellent song choice, Gold :)
August 26th, 2019 00:51
Tom Wood said:
A poem... Truly a gift of the heart. Your son really loves you, I\'m very happy for both of you, and happy that we all have this fantastic poem. By the way, Sing Sing Sing is literally my favorite song. Excellent song choice, Gold :)
August 26th, 2019 00:51
Steadfast.
vanessa wallace said:
That is so beautiful. That is such a loving gift from your son.
August 25th, 2019 17:51
vanessa wallace said:
That is so beautiful. That is such a loving gift from your son.
August 25th, 2019 17:51
Steadfast.
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful thing to receive from your son, you are truly blessed!
August 25th, 2019 12:41
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful thing to receive from your son, you are truly blessed!
August 25th, 2019 12:41
Steadfast.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
This is an awesome poem...
a loving gift from your son!
‘The Apple hasn’t fallen far from the Tree’!!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 10:35
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
This is an awesome poem...
a loving gift from your son!
‘The Apple hasn’t fallen far from the Tree’!!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 10:35
Steadfast.
dusk arising said:
Would that we all could feel so respectful and loving toward our parents.
August 25th, 2019 02:53
dusk arising said:
Would that we all could feel so respectful and loving toward our parents.
August 25th, 2019 02:53
Steadfast.
Neville said:
It seems you are both blessed my friend.. what a delight to receive such fine and loving words from your son...
Neville
August 25th, 2019 01:25
Neville said:
It seems you are both blessed my friend.. what a delight to receive such fine and loving words from your son...
Neville
August 25th, 2019 01:25
Apathy.
Fay Slimm. said:
es - - so true these words dear Andy - --- - - you chose the right word Apathy to describe both sides of the issue.
August 24th, 2019 02:55
Fay Slimm. said:
es - - so true these words dear Andy - --- - - you chose the right word Apathy to describe both sides of the issue.
August 24th, 2019 02:55
Apathy.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Yes....hallelujah!
Being indifferent at the appropriate time can be rewarding!😉
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 02:17
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Yes....hallelujah!
Being indifferent at the appropriate time can be rewarding!😉
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 02:17
Apathy.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ BRIAN here. Im still laughing at the SILENT MONKS version of the HALLELULAH CHORUS ! Im posting it to several of my Friends who conduct Choirs and daring them to Practice it for CHRISTMAS. We have a bit more LIBERTY in Evangelical Circles ! We often do Choruses with the Kids with Words on Boards ! YOUTUBE is mine of Goodies. Check Angelas poem with CAT STEVENS \"Morning has Broken ~ Beautiful Video !
I agree with the sentiment in your Discourse. For those who would provoke us A Gentle Answer or No Answer does (in my experience) turn away wrath. Thanks for caring & sharing.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 24th, 2019 01:53
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ BRIAN here. Im still laughing at the SILENT MONKS version of the HALLELULAH CHORUS ! Im posting it to several of my Friends who conduct Choirs and daring them to Practice it for CHRISTMAS. We have a bit more LIBERTY in Evangelical Circles ! We often do Choruses with the Kids with Words on Boards ! YOUTUBE is mine of Goodies. Check Angelas poem with CAT STEVENS \"Morning has Broken ~ Beautiful Video !
I agree with the sentiment in your Discourse. For those who would provoke us A Gentle Answer or No Answer does (in my experience) turn away wrath. Thanks for caring & sharing.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 24th, 2019 01:53
Car Trouble?
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
You experienced one of those welcomed moments that are unexplainable! Your aim that morning was to go see Joyce...and you did! Miracles do happen!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 01:22
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
You experienced one of those welcomed moments that are unexplainable! Your aim that morning was to go see Joyce...and you did! Miracles do happen!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 01:22
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