Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Walking Home.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent humour
I hope they appreciated the wit
August 9th, 2019 03:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent humour
I hope they appreciated the wit
August 9th, 2019 03:03
Walking Home.
Neville said:
Nearly scared the shi shi shirt off me back.. I was not expecting that.. f f f frightfully good fun sir.... Nevile
August 9th, 2019 02:41
Neville said:
Nearly scared the shi shi shirt off me back.. I was not expecting that.. f f f frightfully good fun sir.... Nevile
August 9th, 2019 02:41
Walking Home.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - I am still chuckling at that well-penned scene - bet that scared them even more Andy - -- thanks for the first smile of my day
August 9th, 2019 02:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - I am still chuckling at that well-penned scene - bet that scared them even more Andy - -- thanks for the first smile of my day
August 9th, 2019 02:14
Abandoning christianity.
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no fear in love my dear friend - so with love\'s true spirituality at heart your journey will become more enlightened with Knowing.
August 8th, 2019 16:10
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no fear in love my dear friend - so with love\'s true spirituality at heart your journey will become more enlightened with Knowing.
August 8th, 2019 16:10
Abandoning christianity.
moordykspot2 said:
Full of sadness my friend It may always be that way. I lost my faith overnight. and years later I still feel bitter of the abandonment. Life goes on It has to, I wish you well.
August 8th, 2019 15:33
moordykspot2 said:
Full of sadness my friend It may always be that way. I lost my faith overnight. and years later I still feel bitter of the abandonment. Life goes on It has to, I wish you well.
August 8th, 2019 15:33
Abandoning christianity.
dusk arising said:
I can\'t tell you how much your words resound within me. My watershed was my beautiful daughter being born mentally handicapped overseen by this omnipotent god.
Since rejecting the falsness of christianity so much more spirituality has entered my life. My disbeliefs, in the christianity i grew up being taught, are bolstered by the likes of eloquent speakers such as Stephen Fry who are able to voice the subject far better than me.
August 8th, 2019 13:18
dusk arising said:
I can\'t tell you how much your words resound within me. My watershed was my beautiful daughter being born mentally handicapped overseen by this omnipotent god.
Since rejecting the falsness of christianity so much more spirituality has entered my life. My disbeliefs, in the christianity i grew up being taught, are bolstered by the likes of eloquent speakers such as Stephen Fry who are able to voice the subject far better than me.
August 8th, 2019 13:18
Abandoning christianity.
Suresh said:
We are guilted in to believing, and then fear holds us captive.
Absence of these, we become truly liberated.
August 8th, 2019 12:46
Suresh said:
We are guilted in to believing, and then fear holds us captive.
Absence of these, we become truly liberated.
August 8th, 2019 12:46
Abandoning christianity.
Michael Edwards said:
I feel for the \'journey\' you\'ve been on - seems like you\'ve arrived at the right shore - so pleased for you.
August 8th, 2019 10:47
Michael Edwards said:
I feel for the \'journey\' you\'ve been on - seems like you\'ve arrived at the right shore - so pleased for you.
August 8th, 2019 10:47
Abandoning christianity.
orchidee said:
I just got caught up, distracted maybe with some forms of service - Pentecostal type - should I sit, stand, clap, bow, ump up and down, etc? Though it didn\'t seem to affect my basic beliefs.
August 8th, 2019 01:47
orchidee said:
I just got caught up, distracted maybe with some forms of service - Pentecostal type - should I sit, stand, clap, bow, ump up and down, etc? Though it didn\'t seem to affect my basic beliefs.
August 8th, 2019 01:47
Abandoning christianity.
orchidee said:
Some could be happy for you, and say \'Glad you\'ve left all that rubbish now\', but I feel the sadness in this.
In my hymn-poems, even if I might not trust in all I write, I feel there is a spark of faith, however small at times.
I can understand it though, with words such as \'Christ meets all my needs\', which can seem to mock you, and others.
Yet I go on writing about \'comfort\' etc - in the sense of \'solace\' and \'strengthen\'.
August 8th, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
Some could be happy for you, and say \'Glad you\'ve left all that rubbish now\', but I feel the sadness in this.
In my hymn-poems, even if I might not trust in all I write, I feel there is a spark of faith, however small at times.
I can understand it though, with words such as \'Christ meets all my needs\', which can seem to mock you, and others.
Yet I go on writing about \'comfort\' etc - in the sense of \'solace\' and \'strengthen\'.
August 8th, 2019 01:44
Abandoning christianity.
Neville said:
these words will sadden many of those who find them here... they are indeed sad.. however, I am sure that most will understand.... and there is nowt to forgive..... Sometime just unburdening oneself is a massive relief my friend........ Neville
August 8th, 2019 01:37
Neville said:
these words will sadden many of those who find them here... they are indeed sad.. however, I am sure that most will understand.... and there is nowt to forgive..... Sometime just unburdening oneself is a massive relief my friend........ Neville
August 8th, 2019 01:37
To The Right Place.
Christina8 said:
It is good that you are happy and more than accepting of the place that you are at in your life....enjoyed the write, Andy!
August 7th, 2019 20:11
Christina8 said:
It is good that you are happy and more than accepting of the place that you are at in your life....enjoyed the write, Andy!
August 7th, 2019 20:11
To The Right Place.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
I like the way you think...
and write!
I guess most of us end up where we need to be! I never thought I’d be where I am right now, but here I am...
and will be as long as I’m needed!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:32
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
I like the way you think...
and write!
I guess most of us end up where we need to be! I never thought I’d be where I am right now, but here I am...
and will be as long as I’m needed!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:32
To The Right Place.
Neville said:
when you get to that special place, dont ya just know it.....
You have penned a perfect acceptance poem here GF60 ..
Neville
August 7th, 2019 06:00
Neville said:
when you get to that special place, dont ya just know it.....
You have penned a perfect acceptance poem here GF60 ..
Neville
August 7th, 2019 06:00
To The Right Place.
dusk arising said:
That sir is a very good read. Immediately i thought of the book \"The road less traveled\" where i learned much.
Some might think that to write such a piece the author would be smug.... but no sir not you. Your writing reveals a very humble down to earth soul who has indeed traveled far spiritually.
August 7th, 2019 05:03
dusk arising said:
That sir is a very good read. Immediately i thought of the book \"The road less traveled\" where i learned much.
Some might think that to write such a piece the author would be smug.... but no sir not you. Your writing reveals a very humble down to earth soul who has indeed traveled far spiritually.
August 7th, 2019 05:03
To The Right Place.
Fay Slimm. said:
What better place to be in than where you want to be - an appealing write Andy.
August 7th, 2019 05:01
Fay Slimm. said:
What better place to be in than where you want to be - an appealing write Andy.
August 7th, 2019 05:01
Knowledges.
Seek said:
Yes those were the days when everything learned was new or a milestone, even the minor punishment had their functions. A true experience in growth that would come to build our reserves of wisdom. Enjoyed this.
August 7th, 2019 03:22
Seek said:
Yes those were the days when everything learned was new or a milestone, even the minor punishment had their functions. A true experience in growth that would come to build our reserves of wisdom. Enjoyed this.
August 7th, 2019 03:22
To The Right Place.
Michael Edwards said:
We can\'t ask more than that in life - I also have ended in a good place but it doesn\'t happen by accident - we all have to work at it - enjoyed the write.
August 7th, 2019 03:15
Michael Edwards said:
We can\'t ask more than that in life - I also have ended in a good place but it doesn\'t happen by accident - we all have to work at it - enjoyed the write.
August 7th, 2019 03:15
To The Right Place.
orchidee said:
Well, there\'s many trees in the woods, we know, but I may mean some trees bigger than others. Doh!
August 7th, 2019 01:38
orchidee said:
Well, there\'s many trees in the woods, we know, but I may mean some trees bigger than others. Doh!
August 7th, 2019 01:38
To The Right Place.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. It\'s tricky taking a path at a fork, if we\'ve not been along it before. Sometimes we may just head in a \'general direction\', e.g. in woods - look for the big tree; or group of 3 trees; or the holly bush, etc. as sign-posts.
August 7th, 2019 01:38
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. It\'s tricky taking a path at a fork, if we\'ve not been along it before. Sometimes we may just head in a \'general direction\', e.g. in woods - look for the big tree; or group of 3 trees; or the holly bush, etc. as sign-posts.
August 7th, 2019 01:38
Reuben had a Brother.
Christina8 said:
Seriously, there is nothing better or more cherished than a poem for a new baby! (or anybody!) Great job Andy!
August 6th, 2019 17:29
Christina8 said:
Seriously, there is nothing better or more cherished than a poem for a new baby! (or anybody!) Great job Andy!
August 6th, 2019 17:29
Reuben had a Brother.
Fay Slimm. said:
They and their parents will cherish these caring words Andy - a beautiful thought wrapped in a kind poem.
August 6th, 2019 05:05
Fay Slimm. said:
They and their parents will cherish these caring words Andy - a beautiful thought wrapped in a kind poem.
August 6th, 2019 05:05
Reuben had a Brother.
dusk arising said:
Lucky Reuben has a younger brother,
How they\'ll laugh and play with one another,
He and Seth will Surely look up,
When they\'re standing tall and fully grown up.
To the cleverest dad and most wonderful mother.
well i just had to join in on hearing wonderful news.... welcome to this life baby Seth.
August 6th, 2019 05:04
dusk arising said:
Lucky Reuben has a younger brother,
How they\'ll laugh and play with one another,
He and Seth will Surely look up,
When they\'re standing tall and fully grown up.
To the cleverest dad and most wonderful mother.
well i just had to join in on hearing wonderful news.... welcome to this life baby Seth.
August 6th, 2019 05:04
Reuben had a Brother.
Neville said:
what a lovely gift for those boys, their parents and of course all those of us who visit this page.... Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:33
Neville said:
what a lovely gift for those boys, their parents and of course all those of us who visit this page.... Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:33
Dreamworld Acrostic.
Christina8 said:
An acrostic well done, sir! wonderful read.
August 5th, 2019 21:27
Christina8 said:
An acrostic well done, sir! wonderful read.
August 5th, 2019 21:27
Dreamworld Acrostic.
dusk arising said:
You\'ve lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective, rejuvenated (?) a stroll in dreamland... let it take you where it will....
.... where\'s the harm in it - but don\'t fall in the river.
August 5th, 2019 12:42
dusk arising said:
You\'ve lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective, rejuvenated (?) a stroll in dreamland... let it take you where it will....
.... where\'s the harm in it - but don\'t fall in the river.
August 5th, 2019 12:42
Dreamworld Acrostic.
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sometimes we just have to disappear into our own dreamworld just to get away for a bit!
August 5th, 2019 11:41
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sometimes we just have to disappear into our own dreamworld just to get away for a bit!
August 5th, 2019 11:41
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