Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Shrinking World
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,
A fine write I can relate to.
I enjoyed the video very much!

Yes, this world is getting smaller every day!
Although I’ve done a lot of traveling myself, my two children hop on airplanes as if they’re going grocery shopping! They are incredible! God Bless them!

As a matter of fact, my son told me a few days ago that he’s going golfing at St. Andrews...and my daughter was in Prague last month for a singing guest appearance!


~Laura~

June 6th, 2018 15:40

Shrinking World
Lorna said:

I\'ll say! Just a short hop to what might have been occupied Paris and Nazis! 84 Avenue Foch and the Gestapo........ (why did that pop into my head - God knows).........

June 6th, 2018 07:04

Shrinking World
dusk arising said:

I have never felt the desire to travel outside of UK.
Having written that i sat and thought about it. I love to travel in UK but no desire at all to go elsewhere.
Certainly the world would appear to have shrunk since the jet airliner was invented. Oh, and the chunnel.

June 6th, 2018 06:52

Shrinking World
dusk arising said:

I have never felt the desire to travel outside of UK.
Having written that i sat and thought about it. I love to travel in UK but no desire at all to go elsewhere.
Certainly the world would appear to have shrunk since the jet airliner was invented. Oh, and the chunnel.

June 6th, 2018 06:32

Shrinking World
Fay Slimm. said:

The reaches of this generation astound me too dear Goldi - - they think nothing of travel to the ends of the earth and feel the world is thier oyster - but hopefully the young look inside at core values and choose to adjust to others\' needs. A deep and thoughtful verse here my friend.

June 6th, 2018 05:52

Shrinking World
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s so incredibly small. I can recall my parents hardly ventured beyond Southgate and when they took a holiday in Ireland it was as if they had discovered another world. Bit different now - I have travelled all over the world and have an apartment in Cyprus - I know the island like the back of my hand and feel at home there as soon as I step off the plane.

June 6th, 2018 04:19

Shrinking World
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

June 6th, 2018 02:59

Love Unknown.
dusk arising said:

I think life and love springs things upon us which we dont anticipate but through it all love teaches us about ourselves and our place in this existence as we become ready for the next.
However your futures unfold there will be love holding both your hands as your guide.


June 5th, 2018 18:05

Love Unknown.
Fay Slimm. said:

A heart-wrenching write along with the music - - such test on true love is that final question in the last line. Love and hugs to you both - from Fay.

June 5th, 2018 16:15

Love Unknown.
Fox said:

Written from the heart and a beautiful piece by Tchaikovsky. Thank you for sharing!
Those we truly love are never lost and those years of passion never really go away. You\'ll both carry them in your hearts forever (and through your words, you\'ll carry them through the minds of others too).

Wishing you both the best!

June 5th, 2018 12:38

Love Unknown.
Michael Edwards said:

As Cat says - she must be one super lady but you must be a hell of a man - I\'ve great respect for you both.

June 5th, 2018 12:29

Pre-Technology.
FineB said:

Thank you Goldfinch60.

An incredible poem.

Things were much better in the past when we truly used our mind and imagination before the advent of technology that has made us lazy at times.

Keep writing
FineB

June 5th, 2018 07:16

Love Unknown.
Lorna said:

Course she will know you Andy.... she\'s just going to where words are superfluous...........

June 5th, 2018 06:35

Love Unknown.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ for a sad Poem today ~ but a sadness tinged with JOY we can all share as we share and care for our loved ones with limited communication and nearing Heaven\'s Door. They all know we love them and sometimes surprise us by what they say ! Memory extends beyond the GRAVE so our love will never die. For those of us who have \"Assurance of Salvation\" we surely know we will be reunited in the Glory when all physical & mental imperfections will be swept away ~when our Mortal shall be clothed with Immortality ~ AMEN ! Please check my Cockney Rhyming Slang Poem & Video ~ BROTHER BRIAN (UK) & SISTER ANGELA (NZ) Thanks for T\'s very haunting 6th SYMPHONY a perfect complement to your elegant poem ~ B !

June 5th, 2018 04:38

Love Unknown.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,
Yes...Adagio Lamentoso...
Sad...but...beautiful!

I’d like to believe that...
As long as you know...
She’ll always know!

Much love to your
beautiful wife!❤️

~Laura~



June 5th, 2018 02:35

Love Unknown.
orchidee said:

In a similar vein, I\'m not with a certain church at present, but why, when they had special prayer times for a person with the \'c\' word, did the person later pass away? Really, we can only say \'Don\'t know why\'.

June 5th, 2018 01:32

Love Unknown.
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Gold. We remember when we met Cally in person, you and I!

June 5th, 2018 01:29

Pre-Technology.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,
Reading your write has brought to mind so many examples of things gone wrong that I’ve witnessed because of technology when I was still teaching...using a “smart board”! Well many times when it’d malfunction, it wasn’t so smart!
I enjoyed the read and listening to Queen!

~Laura~

June 4th, 2018 19:01

This Old Codger.
Lorna said:

Awwww Andy I hate to burst your bubble but 70 ain\'t old............ go have a Piggy Beer.......... that being said, I\'m glad you are still here.........

June 4th, 2018 07:46

Pre-Technology.
Lorna said:

Hey Andy - OMG - it\'s even hit church........ I retired in the nick of time .... they were making work impossible with \"technical improvements\"..... and just for funny..... my doctor missed telling me I had a touch of anemia because they had \"changed systems\" and he couldn\'t access my information as he was talking to me (with the screen at his side). Perhaps this is why the kids are going back to vinyl records.... they are just longing for simpler days..

June 4th, 2018 07:30

Pre-Technology.
Michael Edwards said:

I can just visualise the scene and the irony of it even though I haven\'t witnessed technology in church - mind you I haven\'t attended a service in church (apart from funerals and marriages) for over 50 years.

June 4th, 2018 05:01

Pre-Technology.
dusk arising said:

Well at least you dont have a public address system attached to the steeple and employ somebody to chant a horrible sounding monologue through it at certain times of day - as happens in parts of the world.
I\'m sure there was enough goodwill in your church on this occasion to generate a lot of smiles and understanding. Maybe a small test from above, a lesson perhaps.


June 4th, 2018 03:03

Pre-Technology.
orchidee said:

We had an infant Baptism. Sometimes causes a pantomime, and terrifying if the child is held over the font. Thankfully it went well, and the priest also kissed the baby in an \'ahh\' moment!

June 4th, 2018 02:59

Pre-Technology.
orchidee said:

Doh! if having hymn books, there\'s a fiendish trick - do we \'omit the starred verses\' or not? The trick is that the service leader does not tell us, and only the choir know. They don\'t tell us either - leading to complete confusion and garbled words. We\'re not all singing from the same sheet (or verses rather)!
One choir I knew was a bit like the Mafia - sing what WE want, or else....! \'The Firm\' who controlled all the songs.

June 4th, 2018 02:57

This Old Codger.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,
A beautiful and inspirational write! The more I read your writings, the better I feel about life in general! Just today, my husband and I were talking about the same subject! We are at a place in our lives where we’re re-evaluating and appreciating our years together! Our children are doing well and we’re very thankful for their successes! If we were to leave this earth today, we’d be fine with that!

Thank you for your daily share! I always look forward to them!

~Laura~

June 3rd, 2018 18:46

This Old Codger.
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ll stick around with you Andy

June 3rd, 2018 10:41

This Old Codger.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ FATS WALLER A Gentleman of JAZZ and STYLE in His dress - singing - piano - great icon of JAZZ ! Love the poem - Growing Old gracefully - AMEN - BRIAN

June 3rd, 2018 03:24

This Old Codger.
HangingbyaHalo said:

This is so beautiful! I think about this a lot, how much more there is do.
I aspire to be the same way as I age.
There will always be books to read music to hear and words to write. ❤️

June 3rd, 2018 01:46

This Old Codger.
orchidee said:

Keep on codging and sweeping majestically Gold. I\'ll lend ya a broom!
I got to stay, as I got too many songs to sing still. Aww, why people say \'unfortunately!\' heehee.

June 3rd, 2018 01:36

Childhood Innocence.
Gary Edward Geraci said:

And to think our Creator revealed to us that being “childlike” is the natural state we have been created for to live life to its fullest. An instructive write...

June 2nd, 2018 18:41



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