Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Mary Had a Little Lamb 7.
Fay Slimm. said:

Yep - that was the song that got us all going back along Goldy - - sensuous whispering and sighs had a lot to answer for........ eh ? I loved the \"Mary Had\" verse too ........

February 27th, 2019 04:04

Mary Had a Little Lamb 7.
orchidee said:

Thanks Gold. A bit swoony, though not resorting to F & B. It does not do much for poems to use F & B, especially if used too much - and it only starts Fido barking - ooh!

February 27th, 2019 02:58

Mary Had a Little Lamb 7.
Michael Edwards said:

I recall the song well - and I loved it. Ah memories. And thanks for the first big smile of the day - love the \'Mary Had\' verses.

February 27th, 2019 02:58

Time Lost in Words.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE ANDY : Brian & I love DG : an exceptionally sweet HORN ! Thinkin & writing Poetry does take time and Brian taught me to jot ideas for a poem in a book or if i see a picture
that inspires me to try to turn it into a Poem. I am also inspired by the Poetry of Others : Hymns & (like Uncle Steve the BIBLE) All I need is more TIME to focus. Dont forget that (like Brian) I am still working 9 to 5 most days & some evenings !
Blessings & Love to YOU & JOYCE :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our FUSION : Fave Cuddly Toy : Ta
Its nearly NOON (Tuesday) here CLINIC @ 2pm !

February 26th, 2019 17:19

Time Lost in Words.
Fay Slimm. said:

Getting lost within your words and hearing Dizzy is my idea of delight dear Goldy

February 26th, 2019 09:03

Time Lost in Words.
Neville said:

That is just precisely as it often is... well said & well read............ N

February 26th, 2019 04:43

Time Lost in Words.
dusk arising said:

I have so many unfinished pieces which i think stem from the occasions you describe.
Good old Dizzy, do you know the story of his bent trumpet?. Here is an interpretation of one of his pieces i think you may like:-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UokS1EpIRPw

February 26th, 2019 04:43

Time Lost in Words.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Sometimes I give myself a time limit. Time to write a \'shortie\' maybe. But not to rush it, as I can always come back to a partially-completed poem.

February 26th, 2019 03:05

Time Lost in Words.
Michael Edwards said:

So true - I also get lost and lose all idea of time - when an idea comes I just have to get the bones down on paper and then fill it in the flesh with words.

February 26th, 2019 02:47

Our Choir.
FineB said:

Hello Goldfinch 60,

An excellent poem.

You have captured well the heart and soul of a choir and how it\'s heart beats.

Keep writing Fine B.

February 25th, 2019 05:33

Our Choir.
dusk arising said:

Blame the director every time, you\'re right.

February 25th, 2019 05:01

Our Choir.
Fay Slimm. said:

I love these harmonious male voice choirs and thanks for this well written way they achieve their fine results.

February 25th, 2019 03:49

Our Choir.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great Write G
Just like the choir
Excellent finish
Poor old MD

February 25th, 2019 03:36

Our Choir.
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold. They \'threw out\' the Choir at one church. A great pity. Then a guy with a guitar replaced them. A bit poor replacement. They groaned each week. There he was regular as clockwork. I don\'t mind \'modern\' worship, but that\'s all they had for a while - just one guy strumming.
It\'s the cutbacks, you know! lol. But the adults in the choir were a bit like a Mafia. \'Sing what we want, or else....\'

February 25th, 2019 03:25

Our Choir.
Goldfinch60 said:

Vocal Majority are one of the best Barbershop Choruses in the world.

February 25th, 2019 02:05

Hairstyles.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lol,a new generation,no doubt

February 24th, 2019 19:49

Hairstyles.
dusk arising said:

I knew a lady who had legs like her dawg. It was a basset hound.

On this occasion Goldfinch I imagine you did not offer a copy of your verse to the dog in question... ooppss i mean lady.

February 24th, 2019 12:24

Hairstyles.
Neville said:

what about the bloke.. we all wanna know about the bloke... or at least I do..

February 24th, 2019 06:23

Hairstyles.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

People love heir dogs
I wonder if the dogs love their people QUITE so much
Geat observation piece G

February 24th, 2019 05:13

Hairstyles.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

LOVE ME : LOVE MY DOG !

Thanks Uncle Andy : I have seen similar in UK & NZ : People morphing into their Dogs ! However never Cats : Cats have too much dignity !
Thanks for sharing
Blessings to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love CP awesome !

February 24th, 2019 04:16

Hairstyles.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,

I love when you “people watch” because your pen will record what you’ve observed and we, the readers, benefit by your talents!
I enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing!

My love to Joyce and to you!

~Laura~

February 24th, 2019 03:57

Hairstyles.
Michael Edwards said:

Love the observation and I\'ve seen similar in the past - great write and what is more - it gives me an idea for a fun write. cheers Andy.

February 24th, 2019 03:03

Hairstyles.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. I\'ve heard it said that some people and their dogs look alike.

February 24th, 2019 03:03

Fear of Writing.
Jo March said:

It\'s such a wonderful poem! I really enjoyed it. I especially liked the line: \"So many opportunities are around you.\" Yes, that is so true. There are so many of them and they are everywhere. It is up to us to notice them. And yes, we absolutely must put our feelings into words. I believe that this is at least partly the purpose of poetry. Thank you for this poem.

February 24th, 2019 00:53

Fear of Writing.
Angela1711 said:

Very well written. I am sure she appreciated the encouragement you gave her. That poem will most definitely inspire :) x

February 23rd, 2019 18:46

Fear of Writing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI UNCE ANDY : BRIAN & I LOVE ALL GENRES OF JAZZ : Love BING & this number spells out New Orleans JAZZ just like it is ! BRIAN has been teaching me about Poetry so your Poem today rings an inner BELL ! Looking forward to the Barristas first Poem please post on this site ! Thanks ANGELA !
Blessings & love to YOU & JOYCE 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

February 23rd, 2019 16:10

Fear of Writing.
Laura🌻 said:

Andy,

Great idea to give the young lady your poem to encourage her to write some of her own! If she shares one of her poems, perhaps you can post it here...with her permission, of course!
I enjoyed the video!
As Bing Crosby said,
“Positively Therapeutic”!

My love to Joyce and to you!

~Laura~

February 23rd, 2019 15:45

Fear of Writing.
FineB said:

Hello Goldfinch60,

That was lovely. Thank you.

I feel inspired for my next poem I shall write.

I love the picture from High Society and the song from the film too!

Keep writing FineB.

February 23rd, 2019 05:06

Fear of Writing.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Well G for someone that doesn\'t know how you just about nailed it,,, If that is a block day you are a true poet
Great words like reading butter soft and smooth

February 23rd, 2019 03:38

Fear of Writing.
orchidee said:

Yes, a fine write again Gold. I should \'flow\' myself. Sometimes I fuss - will others like it? will they understand it? etc.

February 23rd, 2019 02:50



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