Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Unbroken Love.
onepauly said:
this is a gift many of us do not possess.
great write, and song.
July 17th, 2018 04:24
onepauly said:
this is a gift many of us do not possess.
great write, and song.
July 17th, 2018 04:24
Unbroken Love.
Poetic Dan said:
Such a tender writing my friend may the rest of both your days be as blissfully lovely as the words you used and the songs.
July 17th, 2018 04:07
Poetic Dan said:
Such a tender writing my friend may the rest of both your days be as blissfully lovely as the words you used and the songs.
July 17th, 2018 04:07
Unbroken Love.
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Gold.
One of the \'mystics\' said (St John Vianney?), or he heard it said to him: \'I look at God and He looks on me, and all is well\'.
Meanwhile - I\'m killing people softly with my songs! heehee.
July 17th, 2018 01:47
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Gold.
One of the \'mystics\' said (St John Vianney?), or he heard it said to him: \'I look at God and He looks on me, and all is well\'.
Meanwhile - I\'m killing people softly with my songs! heehee.
July 17th, 2018 01:47
Escape.
onepauly said:
im always outside the box.
but every once in a while I take a peek in.
July 16th, 2018 07:44
onepauly said:
im always outside the box.
but every once in a while I take a peek in.
July 16th, 2018 07:44
Escape.
Poetic Dan said:
Love it, nothing left in my mind but blissfulness of a little rhyme.
July 16th, 2018 02:15
Poetic Dan said:
Love it, nothing left in my mind but blissfulness of a little rhyme.
July 16th, 2018 02:15
Escape.
dusk arising said:
I love it! Lateral thinking.
Actually, when you read some of the wonderful pieces presented here on MPS clearly there are t hose among us who do think outside the box evident by the \'angle\' from which they approach their subject. I like to be surprised by such indirect routes which inspire me to think again.
July 16th, 2018 01:50
dusk arising said:
I love it! Lateral thinking.
Actually, when you read some of the wonderful pieces presented here on MPS clearly there are t hose among us who do think outside the box evident by the \'angle\' from which they approach their subject. I like to be surprised by such indirect routes which inspire me to think again.
July 16th, 2018 01:50
Escape.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Doh, I saw some items, the reverse of \'keep calm and carry on\'. They said \'Panic and give up!\'
Any escape from my singing room/box, if one enters it? I will lock the door and keep the key if anyone enters. It\'s a torture room! heehee.
July 16th, 2018 01:46
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Doh, I saw some items, the reverse of \'keep calm and carry on\'. They said \'Panic and give up!\'
Any escape from my singing room/box, if one enters it? I will lock the door and keep the key if anyone enters. It\'s a torture room! heehee.
July 16th, 2018 01:46
Preying in the Choir.
dusk arising said:
I wonder if the congregation notice? Maybe a suggestions box could bring some refreshing hints upon creating a little more joy when the angels sing.
This must be so annoying. I\'d have started an resistence movement myself and got him ousted.
Les, remains my favourite comic, thank you for the fun video.
July 15th, 2018 16:08
dusk arising said:
I wonder if the congregation notice? Maybe a suggestions box could bring some refreshing hints upon creating a little more joy when the angels sing.
This must be so annoying. I\'d have started an resistence movement myself and got him ousted.
Les, remains my favourite comic, thank you for the fun video.
July 15th, 2018 16:08
Preying in the Choir.
orchidee said:
I suppose he\'s staying too? One choir got a bit like the Mafia - or some of them did. \'Do what we say, sing what we want, or else....\' The whole thing has gone now. Some bloke with a guitar replaced him, I heard. There he was every week, like clockwork, like it or not...! (Cries of \'Arrgghhh, not again\'!).Now he\'s gone too.
July 15th, 2018 07:33
orchidee said:
I suppose he\'s staying too? One choir got a bit like the Mafia - or some of them did. \'Do what we say, sing what we want, or else....\' The whole thing has gone now. Some bloke with a guitar replaced him, I heard. There he was every week, like clockwork, like it or not...! (Cries of \'Arrgghhh, not again\'!).Now he\'s gone too.
July 15th, 2018 07:33
Preying in the Choir.
Poetic Dan said:
Well expressed and happy it\'s now of your chest!
July 15th, 2018 07:08
Poetic Dan said:
Well expressed and happy it\'s now of your chest!
July 15th, 2018 07:08
Preying in the Choir.
Heartwriter said:
Yep. I myself am familiar with the character. I know one well. Great write.
July 15th, 2018 04:17
Heartwriter said:
Yep. I myself am familiar with the character. I know one well. Great write.
July 15th, 2018 04:17
Preying in the Choir.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for showcasing LES DAWSON ~ along with KEN DODD ~ TOMMY COOPER ~ MORCOMBE (and WISE) ~ VICTORIA WOOD ~ JULIE WALTERS the last of the GREAT BRITISH Comedians (and those who graced the Music Halls before them) honed in the Agony & Ecstasy of the 20th Century. A Dead & Dying breed we shall never see their likes again. I have been in several Choirs as a BARITONE / BASS in my time. Praise GOD there were always those PRAYED but also alas a few who PREYED ~ c\'est toujours la vie ! Loved the pome ! Today ANGELA has shared HOW GREAT THOU ART ~ in MAORI ~ beautiful please check ! Have a Blessed Sunday ~ Yours BRIAN
July 15th, 2018 03:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for showcasing LES DAWSON ~ along with KEN DODD ~ TOMMY COOPER ~ MORCOMBE (and WISE) ~ VICTORIA WOOD ~ JULIE WALTERS the last of the GREAT BRITISH Comedians (and those who graced the Music Halls before them) honed in the Agony & Ecstasy of the 20th Century. A Dead & Dying breed we shall never see their likes again. I have been in several Choirs as a BARITONE / BASS in my time. Praise GOD there were always those PRAYED but also alas a few who PREYED ~ c\'est toujours la vie ! Loved the pome ! Today ANGELA has shared HOW GREAT THOU ART ~ in MAORI ~ beautiful please check ! Have a Blessed Sunday ~ Yours BRIAN
July 15th, 2018 03:27
Preying in the Choir.
Michael Edwards said:
And thanks for the Les Dawson clip - will there ever be comedians of his ilk again?
July 15th, 2018 02:38
Michael Edwards said:
And thanks for the Les Dawson clip - will there ever be comedians of his ilk again?
July 15th, 2018 02:38
Preying in the Choir.
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly we all know, or have known, someone like this - fine write Andy.
July 15th, 2018 02:32
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly we all know, or have known, someone like this - fine write Andy.
July 15th, 2018 02:32
Symbols for Words.
Michael Edwards said:
Defeats my intelligence - the worlds gone mad - I wonder what is so important that they spend all their hours looking at a screen - at least of who use the spoken word will be members of an elite club - a secret club.
July 14th, 2018 09:57
Michael Edwards said:
Defeats my intelligence - the worlds gone mad - I wonder what is so important that they spend all their hours looking at a screen - at least of who use the spoken word will be members of an elite club - a secret club.
July 14th, 2018 09:57
Symbols for Words.
dusk arising said:
Another of your great observational pieces. It amuses me how couples are lost in their phones these days. I see it everywhere. Seems that i am the only one takes a book/newspaper/magazine into a waiting room/cafe if i am on my own.
However, i have to admit, at home my laptop is seldom shut down. Perhaps if my ageing eyesight were better i too would spend more time lost on my tiny phone.
I am a lover of conversation so even ignore all but the most important phone calls when in company.
July 14th, 2018 09:02
dusk arising said:
Another of your great observational pieces. It amuses me how couples are lost in their phones these days. I see it everywhere. Seems that i am the only one takes a book/newspaper/magazine into a waiting room/cafe if i am on my own.
However, i have to admit, at home my laptop is seldom shut down. Perhaps if my ageing eyesight were better i too would spend more time lost on my tiny phone.
I am a lover of conversation so even ignore all but the most important phone calls when in company.
July 14th, 2018 09:02
Symbols for Words.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY the early part of the 20th C was a great era for the development of JAZZ. Love GENE KRUPER ~ He made the skins talk ! Yes it is a shame we have all become ROBOTS communicating electronically and not verbally. The sense of SPEECH & LANGUAGE is one of God\'s greatest gifts to Man and another proof that we are CREATED in God\'s likeness \"Just a fraction lover than the ANGELS\" and NOT MECHANISTICALLY EVOLVED \"Just a fraction higher than the APES\" I thank GOD every day that I am an ANGEL & not an APE ! I have stated elsewhere that I never have had (and never will have) a MOBILE and carrying a LAPTOP or TABLET is like carrying an OXYGEN CYLINDER ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my TIME POEM ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN
July 14th, 2018 04:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY the early part of the 20th C was a great era for the development of JAZZ. Love GENE KRUPER ~ He made the skins talk ! Yes it is a shame we have all become ROBOTS communicating electronically and not verbally. The sense of SPEECH & LANGUAGE is one of God\'s greatest gifts to Man and another proof that we are CREATED in God\'s likeness \"Just a fraction lover than the ANGELS\" and NOT MECHANISTICALLY EVOLVED \"Just a fraction higher than the APES\" I thank GOD every day that I am an ANGEL & not an APE ! I have stated elsewhere that I never have had (and never will have) a MOBILE and carrying a LAPTOP or TABLET is like carrying an OXYGEN CYLINDER ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my TIME POEM ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN
July 14th, 2018 04:11
Symbols for Words.
Heartwriter said:
Lol! It\'s true speach is being limited in chaps today. It\'s much easier to symbolize. Great write.
July 14th, 2018 03:40
Heartwriter said:
Lol! It\'s true speach is being limited in chaps today. It\'s much easier to symbolize. Great write.
July 14th, 2018 03:40
Symbols for Words.
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
Pertinent poem reflecting the reality of our age. I like the intimate, conversational style. You\'ve highlighted the abuse of technology by some people, who overuse and overrely on it, at a cost. Without modern technology, we (my wife and I) would never have got in touch after so many years, but it is a double-edged sword and you have graphically demonstrated this. Thank you and well done, sir!
July 14th, 2018 03:12
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
Pertinent poem reflecting the reality of our age. I like the intimate, conversational style. You\'ve highlighted the abuse of technology by some people, who overuse and overrely on it, at a cost. Without modern technology, we (my wife and I) would never have got in touch after so many years, but it is a double-edged sword and you have graphically demonstrated this. Thank you and well done, sir!
July 14th, 2018 03:12
Symbols for Words.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. They could have been e-mailing each other across the table!
I\'m being Cliff Richard: \'Oh, it\'s so funny/ That we don\'t talk any more....\'
July 14th, 2018 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. They could have been e-mailing each other across the table!
I\'m being Cliff Richard: \'Oh, it\'s so funny/ That we don\'t talk any more....\'
July 14th, 2018 01:34
Symbols for Words.
Poetic Dan said:
I think that\'s all it will be in the end like a kids version of Egyptian symbols. I love to chat especially on trains
July 14th, 2018 01:22
Poetic Dan said:
I think that\'s all it will be in the end like a kids version of Egyptian symbols. I love to chat especially on trains
July 14th, 2018 01:22
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