Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Endless Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW ANDY ~ Thanks for reminding us of the heartache you bear because of your Dear Wife\'s Condition. It is so so sad My Dad 65 and my Mum 60 are still hanging in mentally but mnobility for my Dad is getting worse. I attended a Church reunion recently an it was sad to see friend of 70+ incapacitated and not even recognizing me As you say at the end of your poignant POEM ~ Love and more Love is the answer ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Thanks for Clair de Lune a family favorite !

September 14th, 2017 17:15

Endless Love.
myself and me said:

There are so many diseases far beyond the reach of today\'s medicine, while love is the only hope for all the suffer.
Your love is the best support for your wife.
Very touching poem. Well done.

September 14th, 2017 12:09

Endless Love.
Allysnewworld said:

There\'s no real way to quantify poetry but having read this I can say, this is the closest thing to the true heart and beauty that poetry intends on conveying. Honest read with meaning and emotion. I feel it all and I wish you all the best. I hope you find the beauty in the path you will both be walking together.

September 14th, 2017 11:49

Endless Love.
Tony36 said:

Wow, where do I even begin, Awesome write

September 14th, 2017 11:41

Endless Love.
WL Schuett said:

Bless you brother you\'re a good man , keep being strong I know you love her it\'s very evident.... beautiful poem too

September 14th, 2017 07:48

Endless Love.
FredPeyer said:

Reading your incredible poem, Goldfinch, made me think of my dad\'s best friend. For years, after he could not care for her anymore at home, he visited his wife who had Alzheimers, every day, fed her, stayed with her, read to her, even though eventually she did not recognize him anymore. We all have to be prepared to be in the same position one day, and your poem, even though it did bring tears to my eyes, also gave me a lot of hope. It is like a beacon of light in a dark place!

September 14th, 2017 03:36

Endless Love.
orchidee said:

Also, I was struck reading a bit of Revelation lately. It says a time will come with no more mourning, death, crying, or pain. In that time those things are called \'former things\'. Meanwhile they remain, as we all know. Those sort of verses inspire me to some of my most, well, inspirational, poetry. Not that ALL of the present life is as a vale of tears though.

September 14th, 2017 01:51

Endless Love.
orchidee said:

It\'s not the first time a poem of yours triggers something in me - some feeling, and then I shed a tear or two. Even some lesser emotive themes and experiences. Thinking of you both. Love wins through somehow, some way. Anyone can just SAY that, but not the same as living through it.

September 14th, 2017 01:49

Endless Love.
Frank Prem said:

Terrible for you both. I wish you only the best in weathering it.

September 14th, 2017 01:39

Endless Love.
Poetic Dan said:

Reading this with sunrise in my eyes
As a tear falls down from your words
I thank you for a humble start to my day.
May the this day pass blissfully for you both.

September 14th, 2017 01:27

Endless Love.
Michael Edwards said:

Reading your poem and the accompanying comments made me well up too. To have your poem \'adopted\' by the healthcare professionals is an accolade so well deserved for a moving and beautiful write.

September 14th, 2017 01:18

What is Time?
Simple-Man87 said:

I love \"time is moments.\"

I really enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing.

September 13th, 2017 12:24

What is Time?
myself and me said:

I got lost in your time, and forgot my time.
Great.

September 13th, 2017 11:38

What is Time?
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, I think the lines \'Time, that never-ending line of moments\' must be one of the best descriptions of time I ever read. Great poem!

September 13th, 2017 10:30

What is Time?
Louis Gibbs said:

So glad you find time to share your poetry, Goldie! Always enjoyable.

September 13th, 2017 09:54

What is Time?
WL Schuett said:

Time is wonderful as is this poem

September 13th, 2017 09:07

What is Time?
orchidee said:

Cooee, I forgot to fill up the syphon with water. Pssst! Do you hear that pesky whisky-waterer?!

September 13th, 2017 08:29

What is Time?
Goldfinch60 said:

May there be more for your enjoyment of life. Thank you MD

September 13th, 2017 08:09

What is Time?
Mugsdaddy said:

I am so glad I had time to read just in time to appreciate it in a timely fashion. So thanks for this time, until the next time... Oh I\'m out of time.
Mugsdaddy

September 13th, 2017 07:56

What is Time?
Michael Edwards said:

I don\'t mind a bit of water in my scotch but only water and nothing else - will find time for one before lunch.

September 13th, 2017 04:45

What is Time?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for this ANDY ~ Time is endless it has neither beginning nor end ! The beautiful Song and your equally beautiful Poem echo the Words of SOLOMON \"To everything there is a SEASON and TIME to every PURPOSE under Heaven \" Ecclesiastes 3 v 1. TEMPUS FUGIT so CARPE DIEM ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check \"Seasons of Love\" an S & B collaboration ~ Thanks S & B

September 13th, 2017 03:10

What is Time?
Frank Prem said:

It is indeed a fine time, every time, GF. Cheers.

September 13th, 2017 02:17

What is Time?
orchidee said:

A fine time for this write G/F. Meanwhile - a long as there\'s time for me sherries and porkies, no other time matters! heehee.

September 13th, 2017 01:47

What is the Time?
rrodriguez said:

Gf, smartly done... The question about time is so endless... Enjoyed it!

September 12th, 2017 15:57

What is the Time?
myself and me said:

“What is the time?”
It is the time to read your poem on MPS.

September 12th, 2017 12:15

What is the Time?
Michael Edwards said:

The correct answer to the question: \'What\'s the time?\' is of course: \'


\'the indefinite continued progress of existence and events in the past, present, and future regarded as a whole.

Why does nobody ever get it right?

September 12th, 2017 10:53

What is the Time?
WL Schuett said:

Never wear a watch yet I\'m never late for dinner Good write I think about time a lot just not what time is it now

September 12th, 2017 10:18

What is the Time?
Louis Gibbs said:

Time serves to cue the players when to interact on the stage of life. Good thoughts, Goldie.

September 12th, 2017 07:54

What is the Time?
dusk arising said:

Time as we perceive it is a weird commodity.
Have you ever heard yourself say \'I won\'t have time until Thursday\' ? Erm.... thinking about it is sure to produce a headache. Or \'Thats the last time i tell you\'.
So we created time zones to make time more manageable (does it?) but regardless of USA being 5/6 hours behind us - it simply isn\'t true is it. Time is time its just the \'stage\' of the day thats different.

I try not to think about time too much - though i hate being late for appointments.

Your writing certainly provoked me LOL.

September 12th, 2017 02:59

What is the Time?
Mugsdaddy said:

You guys sound really sadistic. Does anyone really care what time...
Crap I\'m late.

September 12th, 2017 02:52



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