Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



My Tomorrows.
Fay Slimm. said:

A glorious piece of morning music chosen to match the excellent verse. May your mornings be all this and more Goldie.

September 6th, 2017 04:57

She Fever Too.
dusk arising said:

Whichever way it reads
it\'ll satisfy your needs
the beauty\'s in its crafting
not in yer flipping shafting

I think it was brilliant.


September 6th, 2017 04:33

My Tomorrows.
Michael Edwards said:

A fine write Andy

September 6th, 2017 02:16

My Tomorrows.
orchidee said:

A fine morning write. You hearing those blackbirds speaking, and the other birds too?! I\'m gonna sing it: \'Morning has broken....\' Meoowwooo!

September 6th, 2017 01:59

She Fever Too.
myself and me said:

Pie with wine? This is a perfect combination.
Interesting, I would say.

September 5th, 2017 18:39

She Fever Too.
sue.evans said:

A light hearted read - I enjoyed reading this - thank you 😊

September 5th, 2017 14:42

She Fever Too.
orchidee said:

Of course it\'s the pork pie meaning for me, not any swoony stuff! A fine write G. Was it she who must be obeyed?!

September 5th, 2017 10:31

She Fever Too.
WL Schuett said:

Love that pie lol well done

September 5th, 2017 09:11

She Fever Too.
Michael Edwards said:

Not worried how it\'s taken - just pour the wine. Great write which gave me a smile - JM eat your heart out.

September 5th, 2017 07:00

She Fever Too.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thnaks for the Memory ANDY ~ Awesome Poem ~ elegantly recited. Love your poem too ~ a nie play on words. I\'m having a Steak Pie Peas & Mash and a small (125cc) red wine for LUNCH ! Have to keep sober at work ~ but I\'m on my BIKE ! Please check COLORS .... ~ A B & K Collaboration ~ Thanks BRIAN

September 5th, 2017 06:03

She Fever Too.
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - you wrote your fill in this yummy version dear Goldie. Great read.

September 5th, 2017 04:30

She Fever Too.
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, dirty mind or not, red wine or not, meats or not, YOU baked a pretty impressive poem! Love it!

September 5th, 2017 03:09

She Fever Too.
Mugsdaddy said:

I think I may have a dirty mind as this poem spoke to me way beyond the words.

September 5th, 2017 02:04

Jigsaw of Life.
myself and me said:

Life just like Jigsaw puzzles, you need to find the right piece and put it at the right place. some are easy, some are taken a long time to figure out.
Nice poem. Your love is the best piece in your wife\'s puzzle.

September 4th, 2017 16:30

Jigsaw of Life.
FredPeyer said:

Using a jigsaw puzzle as a metaphor for life is genius! Great writing, Goldfinch.


September 4th, 2017 14:12

Jigsaw of Life.
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a good and inspired piece of advice my friend.

September 4th, 2017 13:54

Jigsaw of Life.
poetboy123 said:

A beautiful piece illustrating an eternal conflict we all have, keep it up Gold!

September 4th, 2017 13:45

Two into One.
malubotelho said:

You were dripping blood from your pen. First time I read something like this from you. I think Eddy is spilling some blood on all of us. Now we have cute blood inspiration. Enjoyed very much reading.

September 4th, 2017 10:15

Jigsaw of Life.
Seek said:

Wow! What a perspective on life. The sadness does not obscure the positives though, IMHO. Great write!

September 4th, 2017 09:30

Jigsaw of Life.
orchidee said:

I wish I would shut up - Sherry, come out of that cellar now! heehee.

September 4th, 2017 08:49

Jigsaw of Life.
dusk arising said:

This just isn\'t fair..... why do my jigsaws have bits missing. You\'ve done it again. Good writing sir!

September 4th, 2017 08:46

Jigsaw of Life.
WL Schuett said:

Thoughtful piece yes life is a jigsaw.... the sadness underlying this poem is moving....

September 4th, 2017 07:45

Jigsaw of Life.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

The JIGSAW of LIFE a very evocative phrase ! We haven\'t forgotten that your beloved WIFE has Alzheimer\'s and pray for Patience for You and understanding for your Lady Wife. Unlike many in the 30 ~ 40 Age Group I love JIGGIES and find them very relaxing ! My GF (29) and I do the outline first and then complete ~ reliant on the Big Picture and the colour and shape of the individual pieces. Angela is good on Skies and Meadows and Water ~ I like lots of detail so we are a Good Team. Please check the new B & S Fusion on Drink ~ Yours BRIAN,

September 4th, 2017 04:40

Jigsaw of Life.
Accidental Poet said:

Excellent poem of the puzzle of life. Sadly, sometimes there\'s a missing piece that can\'t be found. Thanks for sharing Goldfinch. My adoptive mother passed from Alzheimer\'s Disease . Hugs for your wife.

September 4th, 2017 02:34

Jigsaw of Life.
Michael Edwards said:

So well written but such sadness behind the lines.

September 4th, 2017 02:08

Jigsaw of Life.
orchidee said:

Good write G/F. I got problems with a \'jigsaw\' of sorting out these sherries in me cellar! So many of them.

September 4th, 2017 01:42

Two into One.
WL Schuett said:

Good fun mr. Hyde ... seems good to do something different

September 3rd, 2017 16:45

Two into One.
myself and me said:

It seems you are all ready to celebrate Halloween. Goose bump all over me.
Chilly writing.

September 3rd, 2017 11:06

Two into One.
Louis Gibbs said:

I see you are in touch with the dark side we all possess and explore from lifetime to lifetime. A sign of a well-balanced soul, Goldie. Well expressed!

September 3rd, 2017 10:59

Two into One.
dusk arising said:

Fangs very much for that. It gave me a thirst. Very enjoyable reading.

September 3rd, 2017 06:25



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