Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Tandem of Love.
Louis Gibbs said:
A well presented metaphor, Goldie. Congratulations on the enviable union it represents!
September 26th, 2017 08:00
Louis Gibbs said:
A well presented metaphor, Goldie. Congratulations on the enviable union it represents!
September 26th, 2017 08:00
The Tandem of Love.
Michael Edwards said:
We are both blessed Andy - great work.
September 26th, 2017 07:03
Michael Edwards said:
We are both blessed Andy - great work.
September 26th, 2017 07:03
The Tandem of Love.
dusk arising said:
Such a lovely idea to compare a marriage to a lifetimes journey on a tandem. Beautiful.
Goes into my favourites.
September 26th, 2017 06:46
dusk arising said:
Such a lovely idea to compare a marriage to a lifetimes journey on a tandem. Beautiful.
Goes into my favourites.
September 26th, 2017 06:46
The Tandem of Love.
Christina8 said:
Such a beautiful poem about marriage. So, congratulations on a lifetime of love!
September 26th, 2017 06:22
Christina8 said:
Such a beautiful poem about marriage. So, congratulations on a lifetime of love!
September 26th, 2017 06:22
The Tandem of Love.
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful first read of enduring love - love that last line -
- congratulations dear friend.
September 26th, 2017 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful first read of enduring love - love that last line -
- congratulations dear friend.
September 26th, 2017 02:51
The Tandem of Love.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I\'m sure in eternity it will be level ground. Not in a boring, uninteresting sense, but no hills to climb, no dangerous paths, etc.
Then again there may be, but we shall explore it all with ease and unstrained, for heaven shall be, well, \'heaven\'! But - me bike rusted up years ago. Soon after 1066 I think, when I pedalled away from Hastings.
September 26th, 2017 02:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I\'m sure in eternity it will be level ground. Not in a boring, uninteresting sense, but no hills to climb, no dangerous paths, etc.
Then again there may be, but we shall explore it all with ease and unstrained, for heaven shall be, well, \'heaven\'! But - me bike rusted up years ago. Soon after 1066 I think, when I pedalled away from Hastings.
September 26th, 2017 02:06
Dark Comfort.
dusk arising said:
You do realise you\'re absent mindedly eating biscuits while its still dark don\'t you. Which reminds me of a poem i read someplace...
I\'ve complimented you before about your amazing ability to create a great poem out of a moment all would overlook bar you. You\'ve a keen mind for the everyday unusual/overlooked in the world around you. Pleasure to read, raises a smile.
September 25th, 2017 17:46
dusk arising said:
You do realise you\'re absent mindedly eating biscuits while its still dark don\'t you. Which reminds me of a poem i read someplace...
I\'ve complimented you before about your amazing ability to create a great poem out of a moment all would overlook bar you. You\'ve a keen mind for the everyday unusual/overlooked in the world around you. Pleasure to read, raises a smile.
September 25th, 2017 17:46
Dark Comfort.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, I love your poem, and I think I need to try this as well. Your whole attention focused on the screen, no distractions (unless of course, you decide to surf a little bit to get some inspiration! :-) ).
September 25th, 2017 16:49
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, I love your poem, and I think I need to try this as well. Your whole attention focused on the screen, no distractions (unless of course, you decide to surf a little bit to get some inspiration! :-) ).
September 25th, 2017 16:49
Dark Comfort.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Malu, it is not cold yet, mind you I do not feel the cold, I still wear short sleeved shirts in the winter.
September 25th, 2017 12:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Malu, it is not cold yet, mind you I do not feel the cold, I still wear short sleeved shirts in the winter.
September 25th, 2017 12:44
Beauty Revealed.
FredPeyer said:
Did I ever tell you, Goldfinch, that you are an awesome writer?
There, followed your advice! :-)
Seriously, 1. you are awesome, and 2. this is great advice and a great poem.
September 25th, 2017 11:15
FredPeyer said:
Did I ever tell you, Goldfinch, that you are an awesome writer?
There, followed your advice! :-)
Seriously, 1. you are awesome, and 2. this is great advice and a great poem.
September 25th, 2017 11:15
Dark Comfort.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Until the words stop\", I know this compulsion of which you speak, Goldie. Thanks for sharing your special time.
September 25th, 2017 10:24
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Until the words stop\", I know this compulsion of which you speak, Goldie. Thanks for sharing your special time.
September 25th, 2017 10:24
Dark Comfort.
WL Schuett said:
I like this look into your morning , good poem
September 25th, 2017 07:45
WL Schuett said:
I like this look into your morning , good poem
September 25th, 2017 07:45
Dark Comfort.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful perspective into your work, GF! Very nice! Thanks for sharing.
September 25th, 2017 06:57
Christina8 said:
Beautiful perspective into your work, GF! Very nice! Thanks for sharing.
September 25th, 2017 06:57
Dark Comfort.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. I tried the same thing, but fell over the cat in the dark! heehee.
September 25th, 2017 01:56
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. I tried the same thing, but fell over the cat in the dark! heehee.
September 25th, 2017 01:56
Beauty Revealed.
dusk arising said:
Amen. Lovely words. Spread a little love around.
September 24th, 2017 16:47
dusk arising said:
Amen. Lovely words. Spread a little love around.
September 24th, 2017 16:47
Beauty Revealed.
malubotelho said:
You are so right. Nice things you say is never lost. We can say something and forget about but people will remember. Good advice.
September 24th, 2017 16:16
malubotelho said:
You are so right. Nice things you say is never lost. We can say something and forget about but people will remember. Good advice.
September 24th, 2017 16:16
Beauty Revealed.
Christina8 said:
Thanks for this uplifting poem, Goldie! A good reminder for all.
September 24th, 2017 12:47
Christina8 said:
Thanks for this uplifting poem, Goldie! A good reminder for all.
September 24th, 2017 12:47
Beauty Revealed.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wisdom spoken here, Goldie. Great advice!
September 24th, 2017 10:00
Louis Gibbs said:
Wisdom spoken here, Goldie. Great advice!
September 24th, 2017 10:00
Beauty Revealed.
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, a wonderful observation of beauty in people. ; )
September 24th, 2017 07:59
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, a wonderful observation of beauty in people. ; )
September 24th, 2017 07:59
Beauty Revealed.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ I am an ENCOURAGER and always see the Good in People I meet and (as opportunity arises) I tell them ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN.
September 24th, 2017 03:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ I am an ENCOURAGER and always see the Good in People I meet and (as opportunity arises) I tell them ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN.
September 24th, 2017 03:25
Beauty Revealed.
Michael Edwards said:
This goes well with Wallace\'s earlier posting about giving a smile - great advice and poem.
September 24th, 2017 01:54
Michael Edwards said:
This goes well with Wallace\'s earlier posting about giving a smile - great advice and poem.
September 24th, 2017 01:54
Beauty Revealed.
orchidee said:
A true write Gold. We (or I anyway) could be preoccupied, or \'not bother\' or whatever reason that we may not take a moment.
September 24th, 2017 01:36
orchidee said:
A true write Gold. We (or I anyway) could be preoccupied, or \'not bother\' or whatever reason that we may not take a moment.
September 24th, 2017 01:36
The Man at the Door.
FredPeyer said:
I guess there is no shortage of fun subjects to write about. Very funny and well written, orchidee!
September 23rd, 2017 18:01
FredPeyer said:
I guess there is no shortage of fun subjects to write about. Very funny and well written, orchidee!
September 23rd, 2017 18:01
The Man at the Door.
Christina8 said:
I find it odd that he made you check his ID badge but who knows? Never know when you\'ll need and 8 ft long rail. Good write!
September 23rd, 2017 10:53
Christina8 said:
I find it odd that he made you check his ID badge but who knows? Never know when you\'ll need and 8 ft long rail. Good write!
September 23rd, 2017 10:53
The Man at the Door.
malubotelho said:
Another fun write Gold. I can see you are good on writing for fun. Thanks for everyday life fun moments.
September 23rd, 2017 08:46
malubotelho said:
Another fun write Gold. I can see you are good on writing for fun. Thanks for everyday life fun moments.
September 23rd, 2017 08:46
The Man at the Door.
dusk arising said:
A lady phones me up and makes an arrangement for me to call at a specific time to service her boiler. I turn up with both hands full of equipment i need at exactly the right time, when she answers the door i introduce myself \'hello im dusky here to service your boiler as agreed\' .......\'have you got any I.D.?\' she asks.
I swear one of these days i\'m going to say NO and walk away.
Nice writing sir... touched a spot as u can see.
September 23rd, 2017 08:06
dusk arising said:
A lady phones me up and makes an arrangement for me to call at a specific time to service her boiler. I turn up with both hands full of equipment i need at exactly the right time, when she answers the door i introduce myself \'hello im dusky here to service your boiler as agreed\' .......\'have you got any I.D.?\' she asks.
I swear one of these days i\'m going to say NO and walk away.
Nice writing sir... touched a spot as u can see.
September 23rd, 2017 08:06
« Return to the profile of Goldfinch60
