Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The Man at the Door.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhh never be too sure ANDY an 6 ft pole would make a good weapon if he wanted to get his hands on your stash of gold sovereigns. I guess you saved them from the days when they were legal tender ! Please check \"SAY IT WITH FLOWERS\" Yours BRIAN

September 23rd, 2017 05:24

The Man at the Door.
Accidental Poet said:

You never know who could be at your door. A finely written piece of real life. ; )

September 23rd, 2017 03:53

The Man at the Door.
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold. Yet we can get some nasty looks and sharp words from people: \'Who are you?\'; \'I don\'t know who you are\', said to us in an unfriendly way.

September 23rd, 2017 01:50

The Man at the Door.
Michael Edwards said:

This gave me a smile - great fun.

September 23rd, 2017 01:44

Seeing the World Differently
Louis Gibbs said:

I love this map of the world ... depicted exactly as I see it. A fragmented, colorful blur. Your poem expresses great wisdom, Goldie! Thanks for sharing.

September 22nd, 2017 16:10

Seeing the World Differently
dusk arising said:

Oh the blinkers of our own limited reality. Each day we set a mood for ourselves and meet our fellow man in shades of our mood, so easily visually forming a subconscious \'type\' for each person we meet. Aren\'t we daft? Human nature to judge a book by its cover. That odd looking person could be the possessor of the most wonderful words or vision that could unlock so much wisdom for us. Yet he shuffles past our moods demeanor.
Provokative writing.

September 22nd, 2017 15:48

Seeing the World Differently
malubotelho said:

Yes Gold. Good thoughts, great message on your great writing. Everyone can teach us something. Even the animals can teach us a lot. Thanks for this writing.

September 22nd, 2017 09:26

Seeing the World Differently
WL Schuett said:

Good poem , good message well done

September 22nd, 2017 08:50

Seeing the World Differently
Michael Edwards said:

This is such a god work Andy and carries a great message.

September 22nd, 2017 07:56

Seeing the World Differently
Fay Slimm. said:

Very true Goldie - we need every one of these extraordinary people.

September 22nd, 2017 05:03

Seeing the World Differently
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. I admit I\'m very closed-minded to some things. I feel it\'s for my own safety.

September 22nd, 2017 01:46

Seeing the World Differently
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, your great poem serves as a reminder to all of us to do exactly as you write. And writers especially need to see the world through as many different eyes as they possibly can.

September 22nd, 2017 01:40

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
dusk arising said:

Quote \"mmm mmm another fine mess you\'ve gotten me into orchi\"
and what was harold steptoe doing on the beach anyway?


September 21st, 2017 15:22

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
malubotelho said:

I say it is a good humorous writing even though a don\'t understand it.

September 21st, 2017 09:25

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
WL Schuett said:

Good humor I\'m sure though I must admit I feel I\'m missing something . Glad to see you having fun

September 21st, 2017 08:55

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
orchidee said:

Will anyone ever guess our real ages, G/F?! Oohh, some other were there too then! heehee.

September 21st, 2017 06:50

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
Seeker said:

I must say I found this piece quite baffling and brilliantly funny. I love it. Bravo!!

September 21st, 2017 05:24

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

1066 And all That ~ Another area of UK Homour which (like Cricket) baffles our Brethren across the Pond. I was UNCLE HAROLD\'S dress adviser and having just acquired my FIRST HARLEY I advised him to wear a Crash Helmet with Vizor ! He replied ~ I want them to see the \"WHITES O\' ME EYES\" ~ and they did !

On his gravestone I wrote
\'AROLD on is \' ORSE
with is \'AWK in is \'AND
and a HARROW (he was well educated )
in is HEYE ~ RIP

Thanks for the memory BRIAN The BULLSHI**ER

September 21st, 2017 05:20

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
Fay Slimm. said:

Can just imagine the play for attention at that battle of Hastings between two good friends

September 21st, 2017 04:51

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
FredPeyer said:

You two guys are a riot! The Laurel and Hardy of MPS! Great write, enjoyed it!

September 21st, 2017 03:04

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
Michael Edwards said:

Wish I\'d been there with you - on the other site that is - I was at the battle - I was tea boy. Love this piece and when I see daft humour I know all\'s well with the world.

September 21st, 2017 01:32

Goldie and Orchi at Hastings.
orchidee said:

Tee hee, we\'re barmy! lol.

September 21st, 2017 01:25

Throat Cutting.
dusk arising said:

Ha ha ha your wit doesn\'t need sharpening does it!

September 20th, 2017 15:44

Throat Cutting.
myself and me said:

Hahaha, electric razor. You scared me at the beginning of the poem.
A good humor.

September 20th, 2017 15:18

Throat Cutting.
Louis Gibbs said:

Certainly a little levity never hurts. Nice chuckle ... thanks, Goldie.

September 20th, 2017 14:34

Throat Cutting.
WL Schuett said:

Lol you had me worried then a good laugh

September 20th, 2017 13:17

Throat Cutting.
Christina8 said:

Well, despite what some have said, I thought it was funny! You wrote a good poem here! LOL Christina

September 20th, 2017 10:52

Throat Cutting.
malubotelho said:

That is funny Gold. You are being so childish. Be careful, don\'t go too deep. Lol 😂

September 20th, 2017 10:49

Throat Cutting.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS ANDY ~ SUICIDE IS NEVER REALLY FUNNY ~ However for many it i just a \"cri de coeur\" A Friend of mine tried to commit by eating 10 packs of TREBOR strong mints ~ funny thing was he nearly died. Another died (accidently) when his electric shaver (plugged in) fell in the bath ~ so you were closer than you thought to \"felo de se\" Thanks for a LAFF we don\'t get many on a WEDNESDAY MORNING ! BRAIN

September 20th, 2017 05:47

Throat Cutting.
Michael Edwards said:

Oh you\'re an amusing blade young Andy - gave me a smile.

September 20th, 2017 04:39



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