Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Tapped Conversation.
Michael Edwards said:

Conversation has gone downhill and our youngsters are losing the art - and when they like do use it they like use it badly like. But they are not alone - lost count of the number of times I heard \'I was sat\', \'he was stood\' etc on the TV last night. Grrrrr.

As for the use of phones the world doesn\'t see itself any more, heads are downward bent with no appreciation of surroundings. So you can guess I love your write Andy.

March 10th, 2018 02:51

Sun and Moon.
willyweed said:

WOW Goldie a great write ! ww

March 9th, 2018 17:01

Sun and Moon.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

The SCRIPTURES tell us that P;anet Earth is blessed with two Perfect Lights for free. The SUN by day which is also a Solar heater ~ at no extra cost ! God knew there would be some nocturnal Activity ~ but also that the majority would be sleeping ! So he created the Moon which would reflect the Sun\'s light by night ~ MOONLIGHT ! It is much less intense than SUNLIGHT but sufficient for early man (20,000 BC ?) to do the Night Shift ! Because we have so much artificial light we tend to overlook how important MOONLIGHT would have been in 20,000 BC ! Yours BRIAN.

March 9th, 2018 15:59

Sun and Moon.
Resa71 said:

Beautifully discrptive!
I often spend time just gazing at the moon.
It seems to calm my mind, when things are really going crazy in my life.
Well done!
Resa

March 9th, 2018 12:53

Sun and Moon.
brianna jean zeiger said:

beautiful job! i love the imagery this poem provides!

March 9th, 2018 07:53

Sun and Moon.
Lorna said:

This is a beauty Goldfinch! I love the starts showing the holes in Heavens floor....... so peaceful......

March 9th, 2018 07:18

Sun and Moon.
Laura🌻 said:

A beautiful write, Gold!
May we always be attracted to the light in any shape or form! May it be the Sun, the Moon, and/or the Stars! A brilliant write for an illuminating read! Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

March 9th, 2018 07:14

Sun and Moon.
Ivory said:

Lovely piece. Sometimes we take for granted the beauty of the world around us.

March 9th, 2018 06:42

Sun and Moon.
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m looking out at frosted lawns and a clear cobalt blue sky - good to be alive - great write Andy

March 9th, 2018 03:09

Two Cats Fighting - For Orchi
Lorna said:

Ode to Orchidee - wonderful!

March 8th, 2018 17:23

Two Cats Fighting - For Orchi
orchidee said:

\'Ohhh, to not be in England, Now that Orchi\'s singing there!\' lol.

March 8th, 2018 11:04

Moments.
Ryuji said:

This was a great poem

March 8th, 2018 10:17

Two Cats Fighting - For Orchi
Michael Edwards said:

Great fun write Andy.

March 8th, 2018 04:47

Two Cats Fighting - For Orchi
orchidee said:

Heehee thanks Gold. One of them in the clip is me in me younger days. Is it?! So that\'s the reason for some dwindling congregations these days?! Know we why.
Time for me to torture KP with another song now.

March 8th, 2018 02:54

Two Cats Fighting - For Orchi
Laura🌻 said:

That is a great write, Gold!
An enjoyable read! You
fulfilled the challenge.
Yes, indeed!
One thing though... you
won’t be rid of him! You’re
stuck together by poetry!
Hooray for the great mind
and the mighty pen.
Hooray for FRIENDSHIPS!

~Laura~

March 8th, 2018 02:42

House of Canvas
rrodriguez said:

Wonderful write. Amazing how we can get inspired by another\'s creation. You certainly wrote an amazing piece here.

March 7th, 2018 12:33

House of Canvas
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ The acoustic Guitar is my favourite instrument and the only one I ever really mastered. Sometimes life surprises us ! I was staying a Spooky house in Savannah while the Residents (Missionaries) were in Haiti ! The had left a number for us to ring as they had promised lunch to any Residents ! When we arrive at the house ~ about 20 minutes by car it was very impressive (one whole dividing wall was a Fish Tank ! After a lavish evening meal our host ~ who looked just like Henry VIII ~ announced he would sing to us with his LUTE ! Apparently he was a well known musician in Savannah commanding a fee of $500 + for Weddings & parties etc. He had a very Elizabethan Sound (I have heard Julian Bream @ Snape Maltings !) One of the Songs he sang was Greensleeves ~ Awesome. Thanks for the Memory ~ Yours BRIAN

March 7th, 2018 11:09

House of Canvas
FineB said:

Hello Goldfinch,

What an awesome poem!

Good stuff!

Keep writing
FineB

March 7th, 2018 07:35

House of Canvas
Lorna said:

I had to \"run\" and look at the painting right away and it is truly something as Goldfinch said! You two are wonderful soulmates!

March 7th, 2018 06:26

House of Canvas
Laura🌻 said:

A great poem, Andy!
Now that I’ve seen
Michael’s painting that
inspired your poem, I
totally understand your
write and your choice
of music to enhance
the whole experience!
You’re both very
gifted and talented!
Bravissimi! 👏🏻👏🏻

~Laura~


March 7th, 2018 03:18

House of Canvas
orchidee said:

Anyone writing a poem about my singing? it\'ll be a very dark, horrific, terrifying poem, probably called \'Two Cats Fighting\', lol

March 7th, 2018 02:53

House of Canvas
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. But now it\'s all doom and gloom. But why? Cos \'Greensleeves\' fits a hymn tune. A cue for more singing from me! If that\'s not doom and gloom, what is?! heehee.

March 7th, 2018 02:52

House of Canvas
Michael Edwards said:

A fabulous tribute to my humble paintwork and I am so touched - thank you so much Andy - and a fine poem to boot.

March 7th, 2018 02:44

The Angels are There.
dusk arising said:

Angels, guardian spirits, guides, wotever they are they\'re there sure enough.

March 6th, 2018 16:24

The Angels are There.
Christina8 said:

I do have to agree with you GF! I believe in angels!

March 6th, 2018 12:28

The Angels are There.
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes I really agree that we are guided and cared for my friend - - a lovely read.

March 6th, 2018 10:00

Dementia Sea.
Laura🌻 said:

Gold,
A beautiful, but sad write!
Can feel the sadness as
I read your poem. Can
empathize...my mom
is almost totally in that
state! So difficult!

~Laura~

March 6th, 2018 05:06

The Angels are There.
Laura🌻 said:

Gold,
A beautiful message
with a beautiful visual!
The Angels are always
there to help us along
our traveling path.
That is true! We just
have to listen!

~Laura~

March 6th, 2018 04:11

The Angels are There.
Lorna said:

Oh I hope so Goldfinch! A psychic once told me I was \"guarded\" by spirits of children........ which explains a lot of things....... not sure they knew what they were doing......

March 6th, 2018 04:09

The Angels are There.
orchidee said:

A true and fine write Gold. Will the angels all dash off, or get their ear-plugs out, when they hear me singing in the heavenly choir?! heehee.

March 6th, 2018 03:15



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