Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Watta Lotta Excrement.
Caring dove said:
lol goldfinch ! love this ... such a light hearted and fun read ! ha ha . thanks for sharing . tho i would say maybe edit the ending lol not being rude or anything but my opinion is it would be better without the word excrement anyhow but great piece of writing
January 26th, 2018 03:30
Caring dove said:
lol goldfinch ! love this ... such a light hearted and fun read ! ha ha . thanks for sharing . tho i would say maybe edit the ending lol not being rude or anything but my opinion is it would be better without the word excrement anyhow but great piece of writing
January 26th, 2018 03:30
Watta Lotta Excrement.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write Gold. I shall have to nip round there and add some water to ya whisky, after all that! heehee.
January 26th, 2018 03:04
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write Gold. I shall have to nip round there and add some water to ya whisky, after all that! heehee.
January 26th, 2018 03:04
Alone Or With God.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great POEM ANDY and in my experience too GOD is just like that ! But I always blame me ~ I pray ~ God answers ~ but alas I\'m not always tuned in (or ready ?) for the answer ! Bring on the Clowns ~ oe of my faves and Dame Judy is a GODDESS ! Yours BRIAN
January 25th, 2018 19:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great POEM ANDY and in my experience too GOD is just like that ! But I always blame me ~ I pray ~ God answers ~ but alas I\'m not always tuned in (or ready ?) for the answer ! Bring on the Clowns ~ oe of my faves and Dame Judy is a GODDESS ! Yours BRIAN
January 25th, 2018 19:31
Alone Or With God.
FredPeyer said:
I truly enjoyed your conversation with God, Goldfinch! I don\'t think I have ever been lonely in my life. Alone, yes, but lonely, no. And isn\'t it funny how one thought (or answer) can change contentment to questions without end!
Very well written!
January 25th, 2018 14:54
FredPeyer said:
I truly enjoyed your conversation with God, Goldfinch! I don\'t think I have ever been lonely in my life. Alone, yes, but lonely, no. And isn\'t it funny how one thought (or answer) can change contentment to questions without end!
Very well written!
January 25th, 2018 14:54
Alone Or With God.
orchidee said:
Yes, now look (not just you) - but what\'s all this thinking going on \'ere? is it dangerous, as you say?! lol.
This thinking will have to stop - will it?! heehee.
January 25th, 2018 14:19
orchidee said:
Yes, now look (not just you) - but what\'s all this thinking going on \'ere? is it dangerous, as you say?! lol.
This thinking will have to stop - will it?! heehee.
January 25th, 2018 14:19
Alone Or With God.
Laura🌻 said:
Goldi,
Often times, I like being
alone! Lonely I am not!
I always appreciated my
“alone” time! When my
children were young, I’d
ask them to give me some
“mommy time”! They knew
not to disturb me...unless
it was an emergency! It
worked most of the times!
I enjoyed reading this very
relatable write! Thank you
for sharing!
~Laura~
January 25th, 2018 10:44
Laura🌻 said:
Goldi,
Often times, I like being
alone! Lonely I am not!
I always appreciated my
“alone” time! When my
children were young, I’d
ask them to give me some
“mommy time”! They knew
not to disturb me...unless
it was an emergency! It
worked most of the times!
I enjoyed reading this very
relatable write! Thank you
for sharing!
~Laura~
January 25th, 2018 10:44
Alone Or With God.
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Gold. It might be hell if everyone had exactly everything they WANTed, which may or may be what they NEEDed.
The answer will be \'No\' to \'make me win the Lottery\'. Or will it be \'Yes\'?! ooh..
January 25th, 2018 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Gold. It might be hell if everyone had exactly everything they WANTed, which may or may be what they NEEDed.
The answer will be \'No\' to \'make me win the Lottery\'. Or will it be \'Yes\'?! ooh..
January 25th, 2018 02:52
Whale Meat Again.
WL Schuett said:
Nice that you can come up with a poem to fit a title , very well done with good humor
January 24th, 2018 19:36
WL Schuett said:
Nice that you can come up with a poem to fit a title , very well done with good humor
January 24th, 2018 19:36
Whale Meat Again.
FredPeyer said:
Given the difficulty of the title, you came up with a good one, Goldie! But why \'Fred\'? It\'s bad enough that every dumb joke has a guy named \'Fred\' in it! :-) (Just kidding, you can use my name without my permission!!!)
January 24th, 2018 10:58
FredPeyer said:
Given the difficulty of the title, you came up with a good one, Goldie! But why \'Fred\'? It\'s bad enough that every dumb joke has a guy named \'Fred\' in it! :-) (Just kidding, you can use my name without my permission!!!)
January 24th, 2018 10:58
Whale Meat Again.
Accidental Poet said:
For some reason I was thinking \"Whale Meet Again\". Very interesting though.
January 24th, 2018 09:07
Accidental Poet said:
For some reason I was thinking \"Whale Meet Again\". Very interesting though.
January 24th, 2018 09:07
The Key of Life.
Caring dove said:
aaw.... so sad :-( i feel so sorry for anybody who suffers with dementia , truly sad, you expressed this well , it surely is awful to see someone you love like this
January 24th, 2018 03:10
Caring dove said:
aaw.... so sad :-( i feel so sorry for anybody who suffers with dementia , truly sad, you expressed this well , it surely is awful to see someone you love like this
January 24th, 2018 03:10
I Am Here.
Louis Gibbs said:
Here\'s to you still being here, Goldie! Have a sip for me. I appreciated your write today.
January 23rd, 2018 08:58
Louis Gibbs said:
Here\'s to you still being here, Goldie! Have a sip for me. I appreciated your write today.
January 23rd, 2018 08:58
I Am Here.
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise introspection after a glass of fine wine Andy - an engaging read.
January 23rd, 2018 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise introspection after a glass of fine wine Andy - an engaging read.
January 23rd, 2018 06:07
I Am Here.
dusk arising said:
I knew you were in there somewhere! Dare i begin to think your inspiration for your fine output on mps is drawn from a glass of your favourite tipple... no, i think not - but i\'ve the cheek to suggest it.
January 23rd, 2018 05:44
dusk arising said:
I knew you were in there somewhere! Dare i begin to think your inspiration for your fine output on mps is drawn from a glass of your favourite tipple... no, i think not - but i\'ve the cheek to suggest it.
January 23rd, 2018 05:44
I Am Here.
Accidental Poet said:
And to see you here on MPS is our pleasure Andy. Great write as always.
January 23rd, 2018 04:58
Accidental Poet said:
And to see you here on MPS is our pleasure Andy. Great write as always.
January 23rd, 2018 04:58
I Am Here.
FredPeyer said:
Nice to see that \'you are there\', Goldie! And to see you with a bottle of wine and a glass in your hand endears you to me even more! Just came back from Costco with a carton full of bottles, including some old Zinfandel and a Cote du Rhone. The Zinfandel has 15% Alcohol which makes it rather heavy. But I like these kind of wines. And yes, my day is made if I wake up and I am still breathing!
Here is to you, my friend, may we be able to enjoy a glass once in a while for a long time to come!
Oh, btw, I did enjoy your poem!
January 23rd, 2018 03:52
FredPeyer said:
Nice to see that \'you are there\', Goldie! And to see you with a bottle of wine and a glass in your hand endears you to me even more! Just came back from Costco with a carton full of bottles, including some old Zinfandel and a Cote du Rhone. The Zinfandel has 15% Alcohol which makes it rather heavy. But I like these kind of wines. And yes, my day is made if I wake up and I am still breathing!
Here is to you, my friend, may we be able to enjoy a glass once in a while for a long time to come!
Oh, btw, I did enjoy your poem!
January 23rd, 2018 03:52
I Am Here.
orchidee said:
Cooeeee, yep, it\'s still you! It was still me the last time I looked in my mirror! You on that sherry there?!
Good write Gold.
January 23rd, 2018 03:18
orchidee said:
Cooeeee, yep, it\'s still you! It was still me the last time I looked in my mirror! You on that sherry there?!
Good write Gold.
January 23rd, 2018 03:18
Tell of Your Faith.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN ANDY ~ JESUS said ~ You will receive POWER when you are filled with the Holy Spirit and you WILL be my WITNESSES ~ In your Town ~ your COUNTY ~ your COUNTRY and wherever you happen to be ! Love Shine Jesus Shine ~ and your TESTIMONY ~ Thanks for sharing BRIAN
January 22nd, 2018 08:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN ANDY ~ JESUS said ~ You will receive POWER when you are filled with the Holy Spirit and you WILL be my WITNESSES ~ In your Town ~ your COUNTY ~ your COUNTRY and wherever you happen to be ! Love Shine Jesus Shine ~ and your TESTIMONY ~ Thanks for sharing BRIAN
January 22nd, 2018 08:32
Tell of Your Faith.
Michael Edwards said:
Well this got me thinking - I\'ve just looked back and see that I made some 340 postings last year but many of those were multiple postings (like yesterday with 3 limericks in one go) so bearing this in mind am up there with you Andy - and this doesn\'t take into account a number of multiple couplet and one-liner postings and a few on fusions which I haven\'t copied into this main gallery.. Wow - where did they all come from.
January 22nd, 2018 03:07
Michael Edwards said:
Well this got me thinking - I\'ve just looked back and see that I made some 340 postings last year but many of those were multiple postings (like yesterday with 3 limericks in one go) so bearing this in mind am up there with you Andy - and this doesn\'t take into account a number of multiple couplet and one-liner postings and a few on fusions which I haven\'t copied into this main gallery.. Wow - where did they all come from.
January 22nd, 2018 03:07
Tell of Your Faith.
orchidee said:
I dunno how many exactly I\'ve written in the past year, but that\'s good going - average of more than one per day.
January 22nd, 2018 02:58
orchidee said:
I dunno how many exactly I\'ve written in the past year, but that\'s good going - average of more than one per day.
January 22nd, 2018 02:58
Tell of Your Faith.
orchidee said:
A fine write and witness Gold. The hymn in the clip is good, but it\'s \'orrible if not sung properly.
And a way to kill ofs some hymns - sing them in \'rounds\' especially if not well known hymns. Causes utter chaos!
January 22nd, 2018 02:57
orchidee said:
A fine write and witness Gold. The hymn in the clip is good, but it\'s \'orrible if not sung properly.
And a way to kill ofs some hymns - sing them in \'rounds\' especially if not well known hymns. Causes utter chaos!
January 22nd, 2018 02:57
Unending Light?
Heather T said:
Oh my gosh, I just held on waiting for something profound! Makes me wonder what Confucius would say...
January 21st, 2018 16:00
Heather T said:
Oh my gosh, I just held on waiting for something profound! Makes me wonder what Confucius would say...
January 21st, 2018 16:00
Unending Light?
dusk arising said:
Inner light ... is it the strength held in our knowledge/belief in continuum of our spritual being beyond the here and now? The \'force\' which drives us on through adversity. The hopes and wishes of better tomorrows? Or the love of what we are all a part of.
Deprived of our sense of vision we are the more aware of our spiritual nature. Maybe the turning off of the light turned on daylight distancing the other.
Another excellent write sir.
January 21st, 2018 05:52
dusk arising said:
Inner light ... is it the strength held in our knowledge/belief in continuum of our spritual being beyond the here and now? The \'force\' which drives us on through adversity. The hopes and wishes of better tomorrows? Or the love of what we are all a part of.
Deprived of our sense of vision we are the more aware of our spiritual nature. Maybe the turning off of the light turned on daylight distancing the other.
Another excellent write sir.
January 21st, 2018 05:52
Unending Light?
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Andy - In the gales the other night the sensor on one of our outside lights got a touch of the vapours and was switching on and off all night long- I would have switched it off permanently but the switch is in the garage and didn\'t want to go outside in my nethers.
January 21st, 2018 03:08
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Andy - In the gales the other night the sensor on one of our outside lights got a touch of the vapours and was switching on and off all night long- I would have switched it off permanently but the switch is in the garage and didn\'t want to go outside in my nethers.
January 21st, 2018 03:08
Unending Light?
orchidee said:
Doh! lol. Good write Gold. Thought you had a vision there, like St Pauls\' bright light. Knocked him off his horse, so some pics show! Did he have a horse?!
January 21st, 2018 03:03
orchidee said:
Doh! lol. Good write Gold. Thought you had a vision there, like St Pauls\' bright light. Knocked him off his horse, so some pics show! Did he have a horse?!
January 21st, 2018 03:03
Unending Light?
FredPeyer said:
A totally unexpected ending! Maybe you should just leave that outside light on all the time!
January 21st, 2018 02:54
FredPeyer said:
A totally unexpected ending! Maybe you should just leave that outside light on all the time!
January 21st, 2018 02:54
Words.
Tony36 said:
Great write. When I was a kid and some would suggest that I started writing to deal with my emotions. I laughed and went on. Then when I was a teenager and had my first crush I wrote my first poem. I haven\'t stopped writing since.
P.s. my crush tore up the poem and had her brother beat me up
January 20th, 2018 10:04
Tony36 said:
Great write. When I was a kid and some would suggest that I started writing to deal with my emotions. I laughed and went on. Then when I was a teenager and had my first crush I wrote my first poem. I haven\'t stopped writing since.
P.s. my crush tore up the poem and had her brother beat me up
January 20th, 2018 10:04
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