Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Strengthened by Words.
orchidee said:
A fine and true write G. But oh woe, I did not heed your words in 1066. You told me not to tell Harold to look up!
May 24th, 2017 01:27
orchidee said:
A fine and true write G. But oh woe, I did not heed your words in 1066. You told me not to tell Harold to look up!
May 24th, 2017 01:27
The Bubble.
Jabberwocky said:
Very moving, and simply and effectively written.
If I am ever called to raise my love I hope that I can do so with as much grace.
May 23rd, 2017 18:33
Jabberwocky said:
Very moving, and simply and effectively written.
If I am ever called to raise my love I hope that I can do so with as much grace.
May 23rd, 2017 18:33
The Bubble.
Augustus said:
So sad and so beautiful. I pray there will be moments you can both enjoy. Hugs.
May 23rd, 2017 12:05
Augustus said:
So sad and so beautiful. I pray there will be moments you can both enjoy. Hugs.
May 23rd, 2017 12:05
The Bubble.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY for putting your thoughts of your loved one in a lovely metaphor of her being in a bubble with limited access. A lovely but sad picture. I have a BUBBLE relationship but we are both in the same BUBBLE. This restricts our degrees of communication but we are together ! Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN.
May 23rd, 2017 10:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY for putting your thoughts of your loved one in a lovely metaphor of her being in a bubble with limited access. A lovely but sad picture. I have a BUBBLE relationship but we are both in the same BUBBLE. This restricts our degrees of communication but we are together ! Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN.
May 23rd, 2017 10:37
The Bubble.
Michael Edwards said:
My thoughts are with you - written with passion.
May 23rd, 2017 07:05
Michael Edwards said:
My thoughts are with you - written with passion.
May 23rd, 2017 07:05
The Bubble.
Fay Slimm. said:
Prayerful thoughts go with you in this hardest of tasks when a loved one is subjected to this called dementia. A most moving read my friend.
May 23rd, 2017 02:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Prayerful thoughts go with you in this hardest of tasks when a loved one is subjected to this called dementia. A most moving read my friend.
May 23rd, 2017 02:47
The Bubble.
P.H.Rose said:
GF60 this is so good.
Beautifully written
A story in each word
A sad time but put
So well into words...
May 23rd, 2017 02:39
P.H.Rose said:
GF60 this is so good.
Beautifully written
A story in each word
A sad time but put
So well into words...
May 23rd, 2017 02:39
The Bubble.
orchidee said:
I\'m having my own \'agony\' over a semi-adopted cat. Can we pray the bubble burst somehow? Some things \'can\'t be helped\' I find myself saying. Yet they can be helped through love, prayer, caring, etc - as you do. Thinking of you both.
May 23rd, 2017 01:38
orchidee said:
I\'m having my own \'agony\' over a semi-adopted cat. Can we pray the bubble burst somehow? Some things \'can\'t be helped\' I find myself saying. Yet they can be helped through love, prayer, caring, etc - as you do. Thinking of you both.
May 23rd, 2017 01:38
Struggle to Nobility.
WriteBeLight said:
It is hard to always try to improve everyday, but your message is correct!
May 22nd, 2017 18:09
WriteBeLight said:
It is hard to always try to improve everyday, but your message is correct!
May 22nd, 2017 18:09
Struggle to Nobility.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Oh woe, I did not try in 1066. I just said to Harold, \'Look up, Sire\'! I\'m responsible for it. oohh.
May 22nd, 2017 06:39
orchidee said:
A fine write. Oh woe, I did not try in 1066. I just said to Harold, \'Look up, Sire\'! I\'m responsible for it. oohh.
May 22nd, 2017 06:39
Struggle to Nobility.
swingline said:
Nothing to be ashamed of if you know you did your best .
May 22nd, 2017 03:14
swingline said:
Nothing to be ashamed of if you know you did your best .
May 22nd, 2017 03:14
Struggle to Nobility.
Michael Edwards said:
And always aim above yourself - great write and so true.
May 22nd, 2017 02:27
Michael Edwards said:
And always aim above yourself - great write and so true.
May 22nd, 2017 02:27
Sunlight - Haiku.
Fay Slimm. said:
Good haiku thanks for giving us something to think on today
May 21st, 2017 04:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Good haiku thanks for giving us something to think on today
May 21st, 2017 04:42
Sunlight - Haiku.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Love your riposte to SWINGLINE ~ You have been hoisted with your own HAIKU ! What i would do is add SO to line ONE ~ delete THE from line TWO maintaining the 17 SYLLABI with a 6 6 5 HAIKU ~ A 666 is of course a Demon Haiku ~ TOUCHE ! Every 24 hours ~ All over the World ~ Sunrise / Sunset ~ There is a GOD ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN ~ OR \"SO AS RISES SUN \" # etc ~ maintaining the sacred 575 and it sounds more Oriental ! B.
May 21st, 2017 04:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Love your riposte to SWINGLINE ~ You have been hoisted with your own HAIKU ! What i would do is add SO to line ONE ~ delete THE from line TWO maintaining the 17 SYLLABI with a 6 6 5 HAIKU ~ A 666 is of course a Demon Haiku ~ TOUCHE ! Every 24 hours ~ All over the World ~ Sunrise / Sunset ~ There is a GOD ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN ~ OR \"SO AS RISES SUN \" # etc ~ maintaining the sacred 575 and it sounds more Oriental ! B.
May 21st, 2017 04:07
Sunlight - Haiku.
swingline said:
If you added \"So\" to the beginning of the poem I think it would make it more reflective . Excellent words , great image
May 21st, 2017 01:51
swingline said:
If you added \"So\" to the beginning of the poem I think it would make it more reflective . Excellent words , great image
May 21st, 2017 01:51
Sunlight - Haiku.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Hope only the shadows grow darker, and not your night. In a positive way, I mean.
May 21st, 2017 01:31
orchidee said:
A fine write. Hope only the shadows grow darker, and not your night. In a positive way, I mean.
May 21st, 2017 01:31
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