Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Body Clock.
Louis Gibbs said:
Time ... a fluid and fabricated construct of this world. Well expressed here, Goldie!
I love the Salvador Dali art piece on Time. One of my favorites of his.
November 2nd, 2017 09:50
Louis Gibbs said:
Time ... a fluid and fabricated construct of this world. Well expressed here, Goldie!
I love the Salvador Dali art piece on Time. One of my favorites of his.
November 2nd, 2017 09:50
Body Clock.
Christina8 said:
You picked the perfect picture to go with your poem! Ours happens sunday as I guess people have already said. But our internal time clock, our circadian rhythm, never changes! Great write!!
November 2nd, 2017 06:30
Christina8 said:
You picked the perfect picture to go with your poem! Ours happens sunday as I guess people have already said. But our internal time clock, our circadian rhythm, never changes! Great write!!
November 2nd, 2017 06:30
Body Clock.
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Andy - It\'s a real pain isn\'t it?
November 2nd, 2017 06:07
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Andy - It\'s a real pain isn\'t it?
November 2nd, 2017 06:07
Body Clock.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Hi ANDY ~ Please check my FUSION on Films ~ thanks BRIAN
November 2nd, 2017 05:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Hi ANDY ~ Please check my FUSION on Films ~ thanks BRIAN
November 2nd, 2017 05:13
Body Clock.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
When God created Planet Earth as a suitable habitat for Homo Sapiens Sapiens ~ He also provided Times & Seasons ~ Day & Night and Spring ~ Summer ~ Autumn ~ Winter. Man introduced the division of Day & Night into 24 hours and each hour into 60 minutes and each minute in 60 seconds ~ very non-metric ! This was to enable us to time Football Matches etc and to time records for the Olympic Games. Springing forward an hour in the Spring ~ technically makes it lighter for kds going to School in the morning ~ so we have to Fall back an hour in the Fall (AUTUMN) to balance the books. For the Ancients who still rise and fall according to the Sun 6 am (up with t\'Sun to milk our cows) is now 5 am ~ OK However if you\'ve adjusted your TEASMADE (we know you\'ve got one !) to BST then you will have to smoulder in the PIT for an extra hour. Another example of trying to alter God\'s plan and reaping a whirlwind ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
November 2nd, 2017 04:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
When God created Planet Earth as a suitable habitat for Homo Sapiens Sapiens ~ He also provided Times & Seasons ~ Day & Night and Spring ~ Summer ~ Autumn ~ Winter. Man introduced the division of Day & Night into 24 hours and each hour into 60 minutes and each minute in 60 seconds ~ very non-metric ! This was to enable us to time Football Matches etc and to time records for the Olympic Games. Springing forward an hour in the Spring ~ technically makes it lighter for kds going to School in the morning ~ so we have to Fall back an hour in the Fall (AUTUMN) to balance the books. For the Ancients who still rise and fall according to the Sun 6 am (up with t\'Sun to milk our cows) is now 5 am ~ OK However if you\'ve adjusted your TEASMADE (we know you\'ve got one !) to BST then you will have to smoulder in the PIT for an extra hour. Another example of trying to alter God\'s plan and reaping a whirlwind ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
November 2nd, 2017 04:59
Body Clock.
Accidental Poet said:
Goldie, we have the same time change here on this side of the pond. But it doesn\'t happen until this Sunday morning. But a great write you\'ve penned here.
November 2nd, 2017 03:56
Accidental Poet said:
Goldie, we have the same time change here on this side of the pond. But it doesn\'t happen until this Sunday morning. But a great write you\'ve penned here.
November 2nd, 2017 03:56
Straight to Arrears.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lol,and you didn`t get that rent
November 1st, 2017 18:17
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lol,and you didn`t get that rent
November 1st, 2017 18:17
Straight to Arrears.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ Real life is always better than fiction When I was doing Research (Biochemistry) I had a card on my bench saying \"Prayer changes things\" My Professor asked me if I prayed about the Project ? I said yes in Biochemistry we are only thinking God\'s thoughts after Him ! We had been stuck on a crux in the synthesis of a natural product (an organic molecule). I prayed hard that night and the very next day I found the answer in an Obscure Indian Chemical Journal which enabled the synthesis to move forward ! My Supervisor was delighted and his comment was \"You must have really prayed hard last night !\" AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 17:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ Real life is always better than fiction When I was doing Research (Biochemistry) I had a card on my bench saying \"Prayer changes things\" My Professor asked me if I prayed about the Project ? I said yes in Biochemistry we are only thinking God\'s thoughts after Him ! We had been stuck on a crux in the synthesis of a natural product (an organic molecule). I prayed hard that night and the very next day I found the answer in an Obscure Indian Chemical Journal which enabled the synthesis to move forward ! My Supervisor was delighted and his comment was \"You must have really prayed hard last night !\" AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 17:21
Straight to Arrears.
lasergraph said:
Bad timing, to leave with the rent unpaid.
November 1st, 2017 16:13
lasergraph said:
Bad timing, to leave with the rent unpaid.
November 1st, 2017 16:13
Straight to Arrears.
myself and me said:
Love the poem and the illustration, full of humor.
November 1st, 2017 10:43
myself and me said:
Love the poem and the illustration, full of humor.
November 1st, 2017 10:43
Straight to Arrears.
Louis Gibbs said:
I too once managed rental properties, and can relate to your poem first-hand. Had a tenant move in and promptly die, before paying his rent! A true \'dead-beat\' one could say. Good write, Goldie!
November 1st, 2017 09:42
Louis Gibbs said:
I too once managed rental properties, and can relate to your poem first-hand. Had a tenant move in and promptly die, before paying his rent! A true \'dead-beat\' one could say. Good write, Goldie!
November 1st, 2017 09:42
Straight to Arrears.
Christina8 said:
I enjoyed your lighthearted write this morning! Wonderfully written!
November 1st, 2017 06:28
Christina8 said:
I enjoyed your lighthearted write this morning! Wonderfully written!
November 1st, 2017 06:28
Straight to Arrears.
kevin browne said:
such a funny poem with a sad effect of course. you have put it so eloquently as in not too offend. perfectly written.
November 1st, 2017 05:32
kevin browne said:
such a funny poem with a sad effect of course. you have put it so eloquently as in not too offend. perfectly written.
November 1st, 2017 05:32
Straight to Arrears.
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Goldfinch, and you say it really happened. Life is just so unpredictable!
November 1st, 2017 04:24
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Goldfinch, and you say it really happened. Life is just so unpredictable!
November 1st, 2017 04:24
Straight to Arrears.
Michael Edwards said:
Dead money I guess - great fun write Andy.
November 1st, 2017 04:09
Michael Edwards said:
Dead money I guess - great fun write Andy.
November 1st, 2017 04:09
Straight to Arrears.
Accidental Poet said:
I saw the image of pall bearers carrying the coffin with one knocking on it. I immediately thought there was going to be a reply of, \"Sorry I\'m not in, but please leave a message and I\'ll get back to you soon as I can\"
November 1st, 2017 03:16
Accidental Poet said:
I saw the image of pall bearers carrying the coffin with one knocking on it. I immediately thought there was going to be a reply of, \"Sorry I\'m not in, but please leave a message and I\'ll get back to you soon as I can\"
November 1st, 2017 03:16
Straight to Arrears.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Gold. That\'s very inconvenient, one popping their clogs when the rent\'s due!
Also, got to be careful with friends we may only remember at Christmas. If too far away to visit, etc, we may hear \'Oh they\'ve gone; they passed away years ago\'. Well, if no-one informs us, how shall we know if they\'ve passed on?
November 1st, 2017 02:53
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Gold. That\'s very inconvenient, one popping their clogs when the rent\'s due!
Also, got to be careful with friends we may only remember at Christmas. If too far away to visit, etc, we may hear \'Oh they\'ve gone; they passed away years ago\'. Well, if no-one informs us, how shall we know if they\'ve passed on?
November 1st, 2017 02:53
Can You Hear It??
FredPeyer said:
Unfortunately, a lot of times my silences are filled with the overpowering noise of the tinning in my ears. I am more aware of it when there is silence.
But your poem is incredibly well written. Had to make it a fav.
October 31st, 2017 11:36
FredPeyer said:
Unfortunately, a lot of times my silences are filled with the overpowering noise of the tinning in my ears. I am more aware of it when there is silence.
But your poem is incredibly well written. Had to make it a fav.
October 31st, 2017 11:36
KP And Orchi Got Married.
Louis Gibbs said:
Well written description of the big event, Goldie. I can just see them both ... the boobs that is.
October 31st, 2017 07:33
Louis Gibbs said:
Well written description of the big event, Goldie. I can just see them both ... the boobs that is.
October 31st, 2017 07:33
KP And Orchi Got Married.
Christina8 said:
Oh this is too cute!! I enjoyed it very much!!
October 31st, 2017 06:29
Christina8 said:
Oh this is too cute!! I enjoyed it very much!!
October 31st, 2017 06:29
KP And Orchi Got Married.
Accidental Poet said:
Oh, this is precious. Do we need to send in a medical team to revive orchi? I think he\'s overswooned. Good luck orchi. ; )
October 31st, 2017 03:53
Accidental Poet said:
Oh, this is precious. Do we need to send in a medical team to revive orchi? I think he\'s overswooned. Good luck orchi. ; )
October 31st, 2017 03:53
KP And Orchi Got Married.
orchidee said:
Well, I thought so, though Santita is back - so it\'s all on again?! Oh woe!
October 31st, 2017 03:03
orchidee said:
Well, I thought so, though Santita is back - so it\'s all on again?! Oh woe!
October 31st, 2017 03:03
KP And Orchi Got Married.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, just right, and specially-chosen music Gold! heehee. Oh yes, that old Orchi got more sense and more comfort out of the guinea pigs in the end! He\'s a one! He\'s got away with it for now - it\'s been postponed. But it only delays the agony for him (i.e. me!).
October 31st, 2017 02:59
orchidee said:
Oh lol, just right, and specially-chosen music Gold! heehee. Oh yes, that old Orchi got more sense and more comfort out of the guinea pigs in the end! He\'s a one! He\'s got away with it for now - it\'s been postponed. But it only delays the agony for him (i.e. me!).
October 31st, 2017 02:59
Can You Hear It??
Louis Gibbs said:
Of all the pleasing sounds we hear... music, nature, a lover\'s voice ... Silence is the most beautiful. Well expressed here, Goldie!
October 30th, 2017 11:29
Louis Gibbs said:
Of all the pleasing sounds we hear... music, nature, a lover\'s voice ... Silence is the most beautiful. Well expressed here, Goldie!
October 30th, 2017 11:29
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