Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Custer.
Hypothesis said:

This was quite a story that several individuals till this day can relate with. Wealth is an indulging moment that shows or depicts the true behavior of a human being. No matter the flaws or incentives being made.

Good story nonetheless poet.

March 9th, 2017 02:51

Vacancies.
Augustus said:

Kind of stuffy for my tastes. lol. Wow! On the edge of my seat. Love it!

March 8th, 2017 17:33

Vacancies.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Stuffed animals and disappeared tenants.!! Oh my that was a creepy bloodcurdling surprise for me. But glad that this is imagination and the thrill of a dark write. Kudos.

U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too , pls do.

March 8th, 2017 15:29

Vacancies.
willyweed said:

Oh what an honor and me looking for a boarding house, I knew you would have a dark and creepy write and I was so right I will save as fav you bloody mucker o mine thank you kind Sir! oh and now I feel stuffed? thank you Goldfinch for sure! WW

March 8th, 2017 07:39

Vacancies.
WriteBeLight said:

So creepy. Great Job!

March 8th, 2017 07:01

Vacancies.
Michael Edwards said:

Yes it ended up dark after starting out light - quite a read - and love the format - yes I really enjoyed it

March 8th, 2017 03:19

Vacancies.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

March 8th, 2017 03:16

Morpheus Sings.
Augustus said:

Cavitina is \"small simple song in Italian\". Did not know that . Said so when I looked it up. I loved the guitar version on YouTube. I sang tenor for many years in choirs so can relate to how that would be inspiring. Well done.

March 7th, 2017 19:14

Morpheus Sings.
willyweed said:

beautiful music to sooth the beast in all , now I guess I do sound like a cat in heat when I sing and play? nice piece golden!

March 7th, 2017 12:03

Morpheus Sings.
WriteBeLight said:

Such beautiful words.

March 7th, 2017 04:16

Morpheus Sings.
Michael Edwards said:

Great stuff and I loved Cleo

March 7th, 2017 03:07

Morpheus Sings.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

March 7th, 2017 02:56

Dementia - Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Augustus, I try to take care.

March 6th, 2017 12:37

Dementia - Senryu
Augustus said:

Great emotional write, a slipping that is so hard to stop. Don\'t forget to take care of yourself. Hugs.

March 6th, 2017 12:32

Dementia - Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you DS I know that you understand.

March 6th, 2017 09:06

Dementia - Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Tony.

March 6th, 2017 08:57

Dementia - Senryu
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed in such few words. Great write

March 6th, 2017 08:47

Dementia - Senryu
WriteBeLight said:

Yes, unfortunately true and poignant. I wish her and you the best.

March 6th, 2017 06:38

Dementia - Senryu
willyweed said:

This brings much sadness to my heart & soul I am sorry! ww

March 6th, 2017 05:45

Dementia - Senryu
Michael Edwards said:

So sorry to hear about your wife - this is such a great Senyu written with such feeling.

March 6th, 2017 03:04

Dementia - Senryu
orchidee said:

Sensitive write.

March 6th, 2017 02:51

Face.
WriteBeLight said:

Love the ending, in particular!

March 6th, 2017 00:39

Face.
willyweed said:

I guess I\'ll have to face it this is wonderful, life is as a face an attitude for joy or sorrow we choose our own medicine. great one here or bloody good ! WW

March 5th, 2017 10:45

Face.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FRIEND ~ For a lovely reminder about how much our faces reveal our inner moods and attitudes. When Moses came down from Mount Sinai after meeting God ~ his face shone like the face of an Angel ! Moses did not know it but the people did ! I greet people every Sunday on the way OUT of Church and they ALWAYS look much happier than when they went in ! INNER happiness is expressed by OUTER JOY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN

March 5th, 2017 04:41

Face.
orchidee said:

Good write.

March 5th, 2017 04:16

Face.
Michael Edwards said:

So right the face tells so much. My wife always makes a point of smiling. In restaurants or out shopping she gets great service whereas my hero is Victor Meldrew. (Who is Victor Meldrew I hear our American friends ask) . Love the poem.

March 5th, 2017 03:49

Searching for Answers.
Augustus said:

I looked. He told me to go pound sand. Heh, heh. Soooo true.

March 4th, 2017 16:50

Searching for Answers.
willyweed said:

yes we must talk to the man in the mirror. good one goldfinch! bravo! ww

March 4th, 2017 09:05

Searching for Answers.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

March 4th, 2017 08:38

Searching for Answers.
rrodriguez said:

Yes, humans need answers because there\'s a lot of questions, but the answers can come if you ask. Job well done!

March 4th, 2017 08:24



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