Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Build Bridges - Senryu.
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - a great piece - if only...!
November 24th, 2017 03:18
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - a great piece - if only...!
November 24th, 2017 03:18
Prison Walls
Christina8 said:
This write shows what a great caretaker you are for your wife and how you put everything else in second place for her. God bless you. And may He get you through these times!
November 23rd, 2017 13:12
Christina8 said:
This write shows what a great caretaker you are for your wife and how you put everything else in second place for her. God bless you. And may He get you through these times!
November 23rd, 2017 13:12
Prison Walls
Louis Gibbs said:
My heart goes out to you, Goldie. May your love, your music, and your poetry get you through this.
November 23rd, 2017 09:33
Louis Gibbs said:
My heart goes out to you, Goldie. May your love, your music, and your poetry get you through this.
November 23rd, 2017 09:33
Prison Walls
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve visited several prisons in the course of my work and this super sensitive write really brings home the sense of loneliness and entrapment I experienced and which reflects in the situation you so well describe.
November 23rd, 2017 03:29
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve visited several prisons in the course of my work and this super sensitive write really brings home the sense of loneliness and entrapment I experienced and which reflects in the situation you so well describe.
November 23rd, 2017 03:29
Prison Walls
orchidee said:
Sensitive write Gold. Seems strange climbing back in to prison. I went to a show art a former prison. Had not seen the inside before. Saw Oscar Wilde\'s cell there. Bit ghastly - ground floor was for criminals awaiting execution.
November 23rd, 2017 03:08
orchidee said:
Sensitive write Gold. Seems strange climbing back in to prison. I went to a show art a former prison. Had not seen the inside before. Saw Oscar Wilde\'s cell there. Bit ghastly - ground floor was for criminals awaiting execution.
November 23rd, 2017 03:08
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
FredPeyer said:
Great, great poem, Goldfinch! There are nights where I wonder the same thing, but obviously without expressing it as eloquently and beautifully as you did here.
November 22nd, 2017 13:13
FredPeyer said:
Great, great poem, Goldfinch! There are nights where I wonder the same thing, but obviously without expressing it as eloquently and beautifully as you did here.
November 22nd, 2017 13:13
Cupboard Love.
FredPeyer said:
Love it, Goldfinch! So many times, what for us is a mess, is loving \'help\' from our kids!
November 22nd, 2017 12:49
FredPeyer said:
Love it, Goldfinch! So many times, what for us is a mess, is loving \'help\' from our kids!
November 22nd, 2017 12:49
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
rrodriguez said:
Well, wishing all to have a better night and asking Morpheus to hang around a little longer. Thanks Andy, great poem.
November 22nd, 2017 11:11
rrodriguez said:
Well, wishing all to have a better night and asking Morpheus to hang around a little longer. Thanks Andy, great poem.
November 22nd, 2017 11:11
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
myself and me said:
I guess Morpheus is busy with preparing food for Thanksgiving.
November 22nd, 2017 11:08
myself and me said:
I guess Morpheus is busy with preparing food for Thanksgiving.
November 22nd, 2017 11:08
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
Louis Gibbs said:
Yep, been there. More often it seems as time goes by. I guess we find more things to worry about over time?
Good write here, Goldie.
November 22nd, 2017 09:34
Louis Gibbs said:
Yep, been there. More often it seems as time goes by. I guess we find more things to worry about over time?
Good write here, Goldie.
November 22nd, 2017 09:34
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
Fay Slimm. said:
A good question to put to the one who helps us shut down at night - love the image you chose too Goldi - wishing you a better sleep tonight my friend.
November 22nd, 2017 08:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A good question to put to the one who helps us shut down at night - love the image you chose too Goldi - wishing you a better sleep tonight my friend.
November 22nd, 2017 08:52
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
orchidee said:
Cooeee Morpheus - where are ya?! Good write Gold.
November 22nd, 2017 03:04
orchidee said:
Cooeee Morpheus - where are ya?! Good write Gold.
November 22nd, 2017 03:04
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
Michael Edwards said:
I just love this Andy - super piece and even Ovid would plaud it - into favourites.
November 22nd, 2017 02:52
Michael Edwards said:
I just love this Andy - super piece and even Ovid would plaud it - into favourites.
November 22nd, 2017 02:52
Cupboard Love.
myself and me said:
You describe the curiosity of the kids so well.
November 21st, 2017 20:36
myself and me said:
You describe the curiosity of the kids so well.
November 21st, 2017 20:36
Cupboard Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY all the Kids ~ I know ~ love cupboards and also love to empty them ! When I have visitors to my Sacred Flat ~ with Kids ~ I lock all the Cupboards and the FRIDGE \"Kids should be seen (keep your eye on them at all times !) and kept out of Cupboards and Drawers ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN. Please check my NEW FUSION on Food & Drink for Celebration ~ and (if your Muse moves !) please add a Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
November 21st, 2017 18:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY all the Kids ~ I know ~ love cupboards and also love to empty them ! When I have visitors to my Sacred Flat ~ with Kids ~ I lock all the Cupboards and the FRIDGE \"Kids should be seen (keep your eye on them at all times !) and kept out of Cupboards and Drawers ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN. Please check my NEW FUSION on Food & Drink for Celebration ~ and (if your Muse moves !) please add a Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
November 21st, 2017 18:00
Cupboard Love.
Christina8 said:
Good write. I remember that stage when pots and pans were a treasured find for my son!
November 21st, 2017 13:09
Christina8 said:
Good write. I remember that stage when pots and pans were a treasured find for my son!
November 21st, 2017 13:09
Cupboard Love.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - this describes well the intention of young children to \"help\" their Mom - - great read.
November 21st, 2017 08:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - this describes well the intention of young children to \"help\" their Mom - - great read.
November 21st, 2017 08:32
Cupboard Love.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the innocence of childhood well captured here Andy.
November 21st, 2017 08:22
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the innocence of childhood well captured here Andy.
November 21st, 2017 08:22
Cupboard Love.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. So you do work with children and animals?! Are they taboo for actors to work with?
I could do simple hymn-poems I suppose, not even rhyming.
November 21st, 2017 03:06
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. So you do work with children and animals?! Are they taboo for actors to work with?
I could do simple hymn-poems I suppose, not even rhyming.
November 21st, 2017 03:06
Lifes Highway.
FredPeyer said:
Love this poem, Goldfinch! There will be a stop eventually, but in the meantime, let\'s follow your advice!
November 20th, 2017 17:20
FredPeyer said:
Love this poem, Goldfinch! There will be a stop eventually, but in the meantime, let\'s follow your advice!
November 20th, 2017 17:20
A New Ending.
Louis Gibbs said:
\'We live our lives with what we have learned\', indeed! \"Regrets as experiences\" captures the whole point, to me, of being here. Life is simply a learning process, is it not?
Well done wisdom poem, Goldie, reflecting what you obviously have learned through experience.
November 20th, 2017 09:55
Louis Gibbs said:
\'We live our lives with what we have learned\', indeed! \"Regrets as experiences\" captures the whole point, to me, of being here. Life is simply a learning process, is it not?
Well done wisdom poem, Goldie, reflecting what you obviously have learned through experience.
November 20th, 2017 09:55
A New Ending.
Christina8 said:
Very wise Goldfinch! Lets just say your poem was very helpful to me. Great write!
November 20th, 2017 07:58
Christina8 said:
Very wise Goldfinch! Lets just say your poem was very helpful to me. Great write!
November 20th, 2017 07:58
A New Ending.
dusk arising said:
So true.. if only i could turn back time. But armed with yesterdays experience and faith in my spiritual thought i struggle onto face tomorrows challenges. Hopefully wiser but..... \"i\'m only human after all\"
November 20th, 2017 03:49
dusk arising said:
So true.. if only i could turn back time. But armed with yesterdays experience and faith in my spiritual thought i struggle onto face tomorrows challenges. Hopefully wiser but..... \"i\'m only human after all\"
November 20th, 2017 03:49
A New Ending.
kevin browne said:
well said, GoldFinch60, it would be at treasure if we could rectify all our mistakes somehow and to live a life full of jam packed prosperity. I love your written words here. they mean a lot to human life.
November 20th, 2017 02:59
kevin browne said:
well said, GoldFinch60, it would be at treasure if we could rectify all our mistakes somehow and to live a life full of jam packed prosperity. I love your written words here. they mean a lot to human life.
November 20th, 2017 02:59
A New Ending.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I regret my KP marriage, but can\'t do a thing to change it now. Oh woe! I\'m stuck, attached to this ball and chain she put on me, and she\'s thrown away the key! heehee.
November 20th, 2017 02:55
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I regret my KP marriage, but can\'t do a thing to change it now. Oh woe! I\'m stuck, attached to this ball and chain she put on me, and she\'s thrown away the key! heehee.
November 20th, 2017 02:55
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