Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Now.
willyweed said:

there is only one scared moment \" now\" always was always will be. excellent write Goldfinch!

March 29th, 2017 06:54

Now.
WriteBeLight said:

NOW that is a great point and good advice!

March 29th, 2017 03:48

Now.
Garry said:

Now is our future. Elegantly said.
However it\'s pretty soon our past. All very confusing. It\'s probably to do with quantum mechanics.

March 29th, 2017 03:42

Now.
Michael Edwards said:

A great philosophy and one I adhere to all the time - I never look back and plan for tomorrow for tomorrow will be now pretty soon.

March 29th, 2017 02:16

Now.
orchidee said:

Good write. Let\'s not get into some tangle about whether \'now\' exists or not. Of course it does! I know - the next minute will then be the \'now\' when it arrives. But for the present, this minute is \'now\'.

March 29th, 2017 02:11

So Alone.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

we become lost souls,after years of togetherness

March 28th, 2017 20:03

Nelson Went To Battle.
WriteBeLight said:

Oh. Great write. The guy knows fashion for every situation.

March 28th, 2017 18:42

Nelson Went To Battle.
Garry said:

Excellent. Very entertaining.

March 28th, 2017 10:03

Nelson Went To Battle.
Michael Edwards said:

Now this made my day with a broad grin .

March 28th, 2017 07:06

Nelson Went To Battle.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks GF ~ very droll ! A colour for all reasons AMEN ~ BRIAN. Please visit my Solar HAIKU ~ thanks B

March 28th, 2017 06:04

Nelson Went To Battle.
orchidee said:

Oohh heehee. Were we there? Did I muck it up again, for Nelsons\' eye, like I did in 1066? Now why did I tell Harold to look up?!

March 28th, 2017 02:03

So Alone.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you for your comment.

March 27th, 2017 08:15

So Alone.
Tony36 said:

Sad to hear that

March 27th, 2017 08:08

So Alone.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Fay for your kind comments, he and I get on very well.

March 27th, 2017 08:06

So Alone.
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes that friendly word can lead to all sorts of sharing as people in that situation can be very lonely - - well done for giving time for a chat and for caring. A fine read.

March 27th, 2017 07:53

So Alone.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks GF for a lovely sentimental poem for a Monday Morning. Loss of one\'s Partner must be the worst experience ! I have male friends who have suffered bereavement and it helps ~ but the loss remains 24/7 ~ Yours BRIAN.

March 27th, 2017 07:44

So Alone.
Garry said:

As usual a thoughtful offering, beautifully written. Enjoed as always.

March 27th, 2017 05:17

So Alone.
orchidee said:

Sensitive story. I saw a programme - someone faked an illness supposedly, to avoid paying a debt. yet when debt collectors called he became unwell in reality. unless he was faking that too, but he became unconscious. We don\'t know some people\'s situations. It only makes us more angry towards fraudsters.

March 27th, 2017 02:34

So Alone.
Michael Edwards said:

Such a sad poem but also quite warming - love the way this has been put together - great read.

March 27th, 2017 02:03

So Alone.
WriteBeLight said:

So sorry for him, and others whom have lost loved ones. It is nice he has you to talk to. Thanks for sharing your story Goldfinch. I hope he can feel better and know there are more chapters in his life to live and write.

March 27th, 2017 01:47

The Past is Another Country.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

life is a journey into the unknown and beyond

March 27th, 2017 01:01

The Past is Another Country.
Augustus said:

A man of experience.

March 26th, 2017 21:57

The Past is Another Country.
WriteBeLight said:

I agree with the point of view Goldfinch!

March 26th, 2017 08:16

The Past is Another Country.
Philip said:

Very good sentiment, well written. Looking forward is the only way. Phil.G

March 26th, 2017 03:54

The Past is Another Country.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

March 26th, 2017 03:13

I Wonder.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you so much WBL.

March 25th, 2017 08:19

I Wonder.
WriteBeLight said:

I recall a talk I heard where you put yourself on your deathbed thinking of all of the dreams and goals you did not attempt. And, suddenly they were standing around you, angry that you did not give them life. Don\'t mean to sound morbid. But, this hit hard with me. I can relate to the thought in your words Goldfinch. If writing poetry was one of your goals and dreams, well you have reached it and have done so, very skillfully and beautifully.

March 25th, 2017 07:39

I Wonder.
orchidee said:

I sort of knew you might reply in that way - no regrets, but contentment, etc :)

March 25th, 2017 06:38

I Wonder.
Michael Edwards said:

Rules = structure and stability in a civilised society - and theres the rub not all societies are civilised, well not in our western sense at least. I can empathise with the points made in the stanza though but there are rules and there are rules. Good poem.

March 25th, 2017 04:04

I Wonder.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for meditating GF great poem in both structure and subject. As Christians we have great liberty # w are under GRACE and not constrained by LAW. There is only one constraint WWJD ? What would JESUS do ? Never forget that in HIS day Jesus was regarded as a bit of a REBEL ! Yiours BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

March 25th, 2017 03:43



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