Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O for the wings ~ For the wings of a Dove ~ Far far away would I fly ! We all long to join the birds BROTHER ! Nettles can be a bit touchy ~ BUT ~ Daffs in the Nettle Patch also causes me joy ! Thanks for caring BRIAN.
April 11th, 2017 08:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O for the wings ~ For the wings of a Dove ~ Far far away would I fly ! We all long to join the birds BROTHER ! Nettles can be a bit touchy ~ BUT ~ Daffs in the Nettle Patch also causes me joy ! Thanks for caring BRIAN.
April 11th, 2017 08:04
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write, true beauty can be found in some of the oddest places
April 11th, 2017 07:37
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write, true beauty can be found in some of the oddest places
April 11th, 2017 07:37
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
lovelydarkanddeep said:
Beautifully worded and uplifting.
April 11th, 2017 07:11
lovelydarkanddeep said:
Beautifully worded and uplifting.
April 11th, 2017 07:11
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
willyweed said:
I love a good dream poem just like this one. well done sir!
April 11th, 2017 06:58
willyweed said:
I love a good dream poem just like this one. well done sir!
April 11th, 2017 06:58
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
WriteBeLight said:
Very beautiful walk Goldfinch!
April 11th, 2017 06:12
WriteBeLight said:
Very beautiful walk Goldfinch!
April 11th, 2017 06:12
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
P.H.Rose said:
Really lovely poem
Those where you
Think I\'m them
I find really remarkable
I\'ve woke up with poem
in my head from that
Type of dream...
Well done GF60
April 11th, 2017 05:19
P.H.Rose said:
Really lovely poem
Those where you
Think I\'m them
I find really remarkable
I\'ve woke up with poem
in my head from that
Type of dream...
Well done GF60
April 11th, 2017 05:19
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
Michael Edwards said:
Great positive message. Not only in nature but also in cities - I love to look up and see the brilliant architecture we have - and then when I look down and see everyone else walking along looking blankly straight ahead or even down at the ground quite oblivious of what is there.
April 11th, 2017 05:15
Michael Edwards said:
Great positive message. Not only in nature but also in cities - I love to look up and see the brilliant architecture we have - and then when I look down and see everyone else walking along looking blankly straight ahead or even down at the ground quite oblivious of what is there.
April 11th, 2017 05:15
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an upbeat feel of positive vibes in this poem my friend.
April 11th, 2017 04:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an upbeat feel of positive vibes in this poem my friend.
April 11th, 2017 04:35
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
orchidee said:
Good write. I saw a daffodil growing in a compost heap. Not a huge heap of manure, as it was in our garden!
April 11th, 2017 02:05
orchidee said:
Good write. I saw a daffodil growing in a compost heap. Not a huge heap of manure, as it was in our garden!
April 11th, 2017 02:05
My Nemesis.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem BROTHER ~ in the 21st C we all have tangible NEMESIS not the unseen mystic 20th C ones ! Mine is my mothers ornamental pond in general and the waterfall pump in particular ! I get soaked getting it out to clean ! My DAD\'s alergic to water ! For a few days it\'s like NIAGARA people pay 50p just to see it ! Then it gets slower and slower ~ a drizzle then it stops ! Mum is on the phone ~ BRIAN its the pump and I I\'m entertaining the Ladies from the Guild on Thursday for a Garden Party ~ so i drop everything and set out (for the third time this month) to CLEAN THE BL** DY PUMP ~ My NEMSIS ! I used to play a BASS PYROCANTHA in the School Orchestra ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
April 10th, 2017 15:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem BROTHER ~ in the 21st C we all have tangible NEMESIS not the unseen mystic 20th C ones ! Mine is my mothers ornamental pond in general and the waterfall pump in particular ! I get soaked getting it out to clean ! My DAD\'s alergic to water ! For a few days it\'s like NIAGARA people pay 50p just to see it ! Then it gets slower and slower ~ a drizzle then it stops ! Mum is on the phone ~ BRIAN its the pump and I I\'m entertaining the Ladies from the Guild on Thursday for a Garden Party ~ so i drop everything and set out (for the third time this month) to CLEAN THE BL** DY PUMP ~ My NEMSIS ! I used to play a BASS PYROCANTHA in the School Orchestra ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
April 10th, 2017 15:58
My Nemesis.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you, the garden always needs something done to it.
April 10th, 2017 10:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you, the garden always needs something done to it.
April 10th, 2017 10:12
My Nemesis.
WriteBeLight said:
I thought you might be talking about the garden. HA HA clever!
April 10th, 2017 09:48
WriteBeLight said:
I thought you might be talking about the garden. HA HA clever!
April 10th, 2017 09:48
My Nemesis.
willyweed said:
And here I thought you killed the neighbor. good one!
April 10th, 2017 07:19
willyweed said:
And here I thought you killed the neighbor. good one!
April 10th, 2017 07:19
My Nemesis.
P.H.Rose said:
I knew it was a plant,
bush Or tree of some
Kind after the first
Few words....
I love this GF60
Really good write.
For me a poem where
The meaning is the
Last line, is the best kind
April 10th, 2017 07:12
P.H.Rose said:
I knew it was a plant,
bush Or tree of some
Kind after the first
Few words....
I love this GF60
Really good write.
For me a poem where
The meaning is the
Last line, is the best kind
April 10th, 2017 07:12
My Nemesis.
Bibbeck said:
A very clever write! Starting evocatively and atmospheric... causing a surprise smile at the end.
April 10th, 2017 03:50
Bibbeck said:
A very clever write! Starting evocatively and atmospheric... causing a surprise smile at the end.
April 10th, 2017 03:50
My Nemesis.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - clever verse with a sting in its tail - my own battle is with ivy - like Michael it grows where it should not but I still love the greens of the leaves. Good read my friend.
April 10th, 2017 02:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - clever verse with a sting in its tail - my own battle is with ivy - like Michael it grows where it should not but I still love the greens of the leaves. Good read my friend.
April 10th, 2017 02:37
My Nemesis.
Michael Edwards said:
I have battled with pyracantha many times in the past but don\'t have it in my present house. Instead I do battle with the ivy on the main wall - it is dry dusty and choking and needs at least three trims a year. So yes this great poem has much resonance in the Edwards household. .
April 10th, 2017 02:01
Michael Edwards said:
I have battled with pyracantha many times in the past but don\'t have it in my present house. Instead I do battle with the ivy on the main wall - it is dry dusty and choking and needs at least three trims a year. So yes this great poem has much resonance in the Edwards household. .
April 10th, 2017 02:01
My Nemesis.
orchidee said:
Ahhh, I thought it might be a sinister blackberry bush! Did you hack through the bush?!
April 10th, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Ahhh, I thought it might be a sinister blackberry bush! Did you hack through the bush?!
April 10th, 2017 01:44
Acts of Kindness and Love.
poetboy123 said:
This is very true. Keep it up Gold!
April 9th, 2017 20:04
poetboy123 said:
This is very true. Keep it up Gold!
April 9th, 2017 20:04
Acts of Kindness and Love.
WriteBeLight said:
Very great thought here Goldfinch. We all need to appreciate one another.
April 9th, 2017 07:05
WriteBeLight said:
Very great thought here Goldfinch. We all need to appreciate one another.
April 9th, 2017 07:05
Acts of Kindness and Love.
Michael Edwards said:
So simply expressed and so effective - just the littlest of acts can make a difference like smiling at someone no matter how miserable they appear (strangers, shop assistants etc) can help cheer them up a bit.
April 9th, 2017 03:36
Michael Edwards said:
So simply expressed and so effective - just the littlest of acts can make a difference like smiling at someone no matter how miserable they appear (strangers, shop assistants etc) can help cheer them up a bit.
April 9th, 2017 03:36
Acts of Kindness and Love.
P.H.Rose said:
Love this GF60
Life and love
Between us
All like a jigsaw
Interconnecting
Us by the
Deeds we do
April 9th, 2017 02:47
P.H.Rose said:
Love this GF60
Life and love
Between us
All like a jigsaw
Interconnecting
Us by the
Deeds we do
April 9th, 2017 02:47
No Money In Good.
willyweed said:
one man has a zillion
another sleeps under the bridge
more people worship money
then they do God
corporate greed rules this world. good point GF
April 8th, 2017 08:13
willyweed said:
one man has a zillion
another sleeps under the bridge
more people worship money
then they do God
corporate greed rules this world. good point GF
April 8th, 2017 08:13
Lost in a Book.
wolf10 said:
A short and simple poem that every reader can relate too .
April 8th, 2017 06:58
wolf10 said:
A short and simple poem that every reader can relate too .
April 8th, 2017 06:58
No Money In Good.
WriteBeLight said:
There is a good side to money Goldfinch. But, I agree. What I see going on in the U.S., and they way some people spend their money is disgusting. I can see why some think of us as the Ugly Americans. Very thought provoking poem!
April 8th, 2017 06:36
WriteBeLight said:
There is a good side to money Goldfinch. But, I agree. What I see going on in the U.S., and they way some people spend their money is disgusting. I can see why some think of us as the Ugly Americans. Very thought provoking poem!
April 8th, 2017 06:36
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