Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Dementia - Senryu
willyweed said:
This brings much sadness to my heart & soul I am sorry! ww
March 6th, 2017 05:45
willyweed said:
This brings much sadness to my heart & soul I am sorry! ww
March 6th, 2017 05:45
Dementia - Senryu
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear about your wife - this is such a great Senyu written with such feeling.
March 6th, 2017 03:04
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear about your wife - this is such a great Senyu written with such feeling.
March 6th, 2017 03:04
Face.
willyweed said:
I guess I\'ll have to face it this is wonderful, life is as a face an attitude for joy or sorrow we choose our own medicine. great one here or bloody good ! WW
March 5th, 2017 10:45
willyweed said:
I guess I\'ll have to face it this is wonderful, life is as a face an attitude for joy or sorrow we choose our own medicine. great one here or bloody good ! WW
March 5th, 2017 10:45
Face.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRIEND ~ For a lovely reminder about how much our faces reveal our inner moods and attitudes. When Moses came down from Mount Sinai after meeting God ~ his face shone like the face of an Angel ! Moses did not know it but the people did ! I greet people every Sunday on the way OUT of Church and they ALWAYS look much happier than when they went in ! INNER happiness is expressed by OUTER JOY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
March 5th, 2017 04:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRIEND ~ For a lovely reminder about how much our faces reveal our inner moods and attitudes. When Moses came down from Mount Sinai after meeting God ~ his face shone like the face of an Angel ! Moses did not know it but the people did ! I greet people every Sunday on the way OUT of Church and they ALWAYS look much happier than when they went in ! INNER happiness is expressed by OUTER JOY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
March 5th, 2017 04:41
Face.
Michael Edwards said:
So right the face tells so much. My wife always makes a point of smiling. In restaurants or out shopping she gets great service whereas my hero is Victor Meldrew. (Who is Victor Meldrew I hear our American friends ask) . Love the poem.
March 5th, 2017 03:49
Michael Edwards said:
So right the face tells so much. My wife always makes a point of smiling. In restaurants or out shopping she gets great service whereas my hero is Victor Meldrew. (Who is Victor Meldrew I hear our American friends ask) . Love the poem.
March 5th, 2017 03:49
Searching for Answers.
Augustus said:
I looked. He told me to go pound sand. Heh, heh. Soooo true.
March 4th, 2017 16:50
Augustus said:
I looked. He told me to go pound sand. Heh, heh. Soooo true.
March 4th, 2017 16:50
Searching for Answers.
willyweed said:
yes we must talk to the man in the mirror. good one goldfinch! bravo! ww
March 4th, 2017 09:05
willyweed said:
yes we must talk to the man in the mirror. good one goldfinch! bravo! ww
March 4th, 2017 09:05
Searching for Answers.
rrodriguez said:
Yes, humans need answers because there\'s a lot of questions, but the answers can come if you ask. Job well done!
March 4th, 2017 08:24
rrodriguez said:
Yes, humans need answers because there\'s a lot of questions, but the answers can come if you ask. Job well done!
March 4th, 2017 08:24
Searching for Answers.
Philip said:
I agree totally with the sentiment. Good words. Phil .G
March 4th, 2017 04:47
Philip said:
I agree totally with the sentiment. Good words. Phil .G
March 4th, 2017 04:47
Searching for Answers.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Sometimes saying \'with help from above\' can be an excuse, wanting Him to do it all. And yet somehow I don\'t feel we can do it all on our own. I know you don\'t mean this in a \'selfish\' way.
March 4th, 2017 04:03
orchidee said:
A fine write. Sometimes saying \'with help from above\' can be an excuse, wanting Him to do it all. And yet somehow I don\'t feel we can do it all on our own. I know you don\'t mean this in a \'selfish\' way.
March 4th, 2017 04:03
Searching for Answers.
Michael Edwards said:
Sage advice indeed and well constructed.
March 4th, 2017 02:49
Michael Edwards said:
Sage advice indeed and well constructed.
March 4th, 2017 02:49
Live in Peace - FIBS
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting form. New to me. You\'ve mastered it with this piece. Beautifully structured and flows smoothly to an uplifting conclusion. Nice one - Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:34
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting form. New to me. You\'ve mastered it with this piece. Beautifully structured and flows smoothly to an uplifting conclusion. Nice one - Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:34
Live in Peace - FIBS
willyweed said:
FIBS were I am from means untruthful statements...you must live far from here? plus your poem is shaped like a Christmas tree decoration plus I liked it and will try to do it? WW
March 3rd, 2017 14:56
willyweed said:
FIBS were I am from means untruthful statements...you must live far from here? plus your poem is shaped like a Christmas tree decoration plus I liked it and will try to do it? WW
March 3rd, 2017 14:56
Live in Peace - FIBS
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been doing the odd one for a while now and they can be great fun.
March 3rd, 2017 14:01
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been doing the odd one for a while now and they can be great fun.
March 3rd, 2017 14:01
Live in Peace - FIBS
WriteBeLight said:
I am filled with the feeling of fresh air Goldfinch!
March 3rd, 2017 06:23
WriteBeLight said:
I am filled with the feeling of fresh air Goldfinch!
March 3rd, 2017 06:23
Live in Peace - FIBS
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic form and well done for inspiring us with the subject too. - great read my friend.
March 3rd, 2017 05:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic form and well done for inspiring us with the subject too. - great read my friend.
March 3rd, 2017 05:05
Live in Peace - FIBS
orchidee said:
Great write. Are us two \'over the hill\'? Well, we was there in 1066 anyway. lol.
March 3rd, 2017 03:29
orchidee said:
Great write. Are us two \'over the hill\'? Well, we was there in 1066 anyway. lol.
March 3rd, 2017 03:29
Live in Peace - FIBS
Michael Edwards said:
Great construction and great poem as well. you\'ve inspired me to have a go when I get some time.
March 3rd, 2017 02:47
Michael Edwards said:
Great construction and great poem as well. you\'ve inspired me to have a go when I get some time.
March 3rd, 2017 02:47
Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
MendedFences27 said:
Two of my favorite characters. Read all, watched all, of the books and movies. Couldn\'t pass this one up. I guess it\'s always best to have a tent with a floor in it. I still didn\'t see it coming. Holmes is such a genius. Well, thoroughly enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 13:45
MendedFences27 said:
Two of my favorite characters. Read all, watched all, of the books and movies. Couldn\'t pass this one up. I guess it\'s always best to have a tent with a floor in it. I still didn\'t see it coming. Holmes is such a genius. Well, thoroughly enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 13:45
Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
WriteBeLight said:
That is a wonderful story Goldfinch! Great!
March 2nd, 2017 12:08
WriteBeLight said:
That is a wonderful story Goldfinch! Great!
March 2nd, 2017 12:08
Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
Augustus said:
From Louisiana, USA I interpreted \"nicked\" as a hole and it still made sense, but I love the true English slang bit. Enjoyable.
March 2nd, 2017 11:42
Augustus said:
From Louisiana, USA I interpreted \"nicked\" as a hole and it still made sense, but I love the true English slang bit. Enjoyable.
March 2nd, 2017 11:42
Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
willyweed said:
this was funny when I only thought I knew what nicked meant then you confirmed and the laff riot began too freakin\' sweet Bravo! just Golden! ww
March 2nd, 2017 05:16
willyweed said:
this was funny when I only thought I knew what nicked meant then you confirmed and the laff riot began too freakin\' sweet Bravo! just Golden! ww
March 2nd, 2017 05:16
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