Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Shredded Life.
Louis Gibbs said:
As dads, all we can do is be there for them as they make their way through life, making the mistakes that come with gaining wisdom. Kudos on this fine presentation that expresses it so well, Goldie!
July 27th, 2017 08:18
Louis Gibbs said:
As dads, all we can do is be there for them as they make their way through life, making the mistakes that come with gaining wisdom. Kudos on this fine presentation that expresses it so well, Goldie!
July 27th, 2017 08:18
Shredded Life.
Fay Slimm. said:
I can imagine how you felt my friend - to see a loved daughter\'s past life in shreds must be dreadful indeed.
July 27th, 2017 07:36
Fay Slimm. said:
I can imagine how you felt my friend - to see a loved daughter\'s past life in shreds must be dreadful indeed.
July 27th, 2017 07:36
Shredded Life.
kevin browne said:
bless you and you daughter at this emotional time for you both. the disappearance of the letters wiping away the memories your daughter doesn\'t need so she the right thing and at least now you are aware of her thoughts. sentimental write my friend.
July 27th, 2017 05:57
kevin browne said:
bless you and you daughter at this emotional time for you both. the disappearance of the letters wiping away the memories your daughter doesn\'t need so she the right thing and at least now you are aware of her thoughts. sentimental write my friend.
July 27th, 2017 05:57
Shredded Life.
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes, G/F, it takes a shredder to clean up our lives. Great poem, like it!
July 27th, 2017 04:46
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes, G/F, it takes a shredder to clean up our lives. Great poem, like it!
July 27th, 2017 04:46
Shredded Life.
Michael Edwards said:
The shredder - sad but satisfying - good read.
July 27th, 2017 01:55
Michael Edwards said:
The shredder - sad but satisfying - good read.
July 27th, 2017 01:55
Shredded Life.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. I suppose we could say - there goes my life, good or bad things, as we shred papers, etc.
July 27th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. I suppose we could say - there goes my life, good or bad things, as we shred papers, etc.
July 27th, 2017 01:52
Shredded Life.
burning-embers said:
Some mornings i awake feeling like a shredded document. Love the thought and sentiment within your words. Strange isn\'t it that using a shredder is somehow very satisfying. It must be a similar feeling to how the army barber feels when new recruits arrive.
July 27th, 2017 01:49
burning-embers said:
Some mornings i awake feeling like a shredded document. Love the thought and sentiment within your words. Strange isn\'t it that using a shredder is somehow very satisfying. It must be a similar feeling to how the army barber feels when new recruits arrive.
July 27th, 2017 01:49
Treasure the Moment.
Michael Edwards said:
Never lose a moment make use of all the time you have - super piece of work G
July 26th, 2017 10:38
Michael Edwards said:
Never lose a moment make use of all the time you have - super piece of work G
July 26th, 2017 10:38
Treasure the Moment.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"How many moments are there in each second\" ... Good thought-provoking line, in a good thought-provoking poem, Goldie!
July 26th, 2017 08:33
Louis Gibbs said:
\"How many moments are there in each second\" ... Good thought-provoking line, in a good thought-provoking poem, Goldie!
July 26th, 2017 08:33
Treasure the Moment.
burning-embers said:
Too true. I\'ve been having a few lately i shan\'t treasure though. An excellent write sir.
July 26th, 2017 07:29
burning-embers said:
Too true. I\'ve been having a few lately i shan\'t treasure though. An excellent write sir.
July 26th, 2017 07:29
Treasure the Moment.
FredPeyer said:
Yes, Goldfinch, first we have to recognize them, then treasure them.
July 26th, 2017 04:12
FredPeyer said:
Yes, Goldfinch, first we have to recognize them, then treasure them.
July 26th, 2017 04:12
Treasure the Moment.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such wise advice in these lines G. - - moments are precious.
July 26th, 2017 03:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Such wise advice in these lines G. - - moments are precious.
July 26th, 2017 03:36
Treasure the Moment.
orchidee said:
A fine 1973 song too. Sometime after then I lost contact with Top of the Pops! lol.
July 26th, 2017 01:39
orchidee said:
A fine 1973 song too. Sometime after then I lost contact with Top of the Pops! lol.
July 26th, 2017 01:39
Treasure the Moment.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. That\'s a lot of moments for a day. They do seem to go quickly when one is enjoying one\'s self, and vice versa! I remember moments of 1066 too.....!
July 26th, 2017 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. That\'s a lot of moments for a day. They do seem to go quickly when one is enjoying one\'s self, and vice versa! I remember moments of 1066 too.....!
July 26th, 2017 01:37
Marriage to Eternity.
Heather T said:
Your love and blessings shine through your words. What a forever treasure to gift your son and his new wife. May blessings abound in their marriage!
July 25th, 2017 22:39
Heather T said:
Your love and blessings shine through your words. What a forever treasure to gift your son and his new wife. May blessings abound in their marriage!
July 25th, 2017 22:39
Marriage to Eternity.
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on your son\'s marriage, Goldie. I join you in wishing them a beautiful journey together.
July 25th, 2017 08:12
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on your son\'s marriage, Goldie. I join you in wishing them a beautiful journey together.
July 25th, 2017 08:12
Marriage to Eternity.
burning-embers said:
Its such a simple thing you appear to have written but the way you have done it is beautiful.
July 25th, 2017 05:48
burning-embers said:
Its such a simple thing you appear to have written but the way you have done it is beautiful.
July 25th, 2017 05:48
Marriage to Eternity.
Renzi said:
This is so very lovely. LOVE ♡ Congratulations to your son and his wife. And such a special gift you\'ve writtten 😊
July 25th, 2017 04:01
Renzi said:
This is so very lovely. LOVE ♡ Congratulations to your son and his wife. And such a special gift you\'ve writtten 😊
July 25th, 2017 04:01
Marriage to Eternity.
Michael Edwards said:
Aah this so lovely and SO well written - the best gift they could wish for.
July 25th, 2017 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Aah this so lovely and SO well written - the best gift they could wish for.
July 25th, 2017 02:51
Marriage to Eternity.
Frank Prem said:
Lovely sentiments for them GF. Wish them the very best.
July 25th, 2017 02:49
Frank Prem said:
Lovely sentiments for them GF. Wish them the very best.
July 25th, 2017 02:49
Marriage to Eternity.
FredPeyer said:
That is so beautiful, Goldfinch! Writing a poem for your own sons wedding is the best gift ever. I wrote what we call in Swiss German a \"Schnitzelbank\" for my sons wedding. It is a long poem talking about their life, how they met, etc. in a fun way. He wanted me to frame it, so I did.
July 25th, 2017 01:52
FredPeyer said:
That is so beautiful, Goldfinch! Writing a poem for your own sons wedding is the best gift ever. I wrote what we call in Swiss German a \"Schnitzelbank\" for my sons wedding. It is a long poem talking about their life, how they met, etc. in a fun way. He wanted me to frame it, so I did.
July 25th, 2017 01:52
Marriage to Eternity.
orchidee said:
What more could they want, than something like this?! :)
July 25th, 2017 01:39
orchidee said:
What more could they want, than something like this?! :)
July 25th, 2017 01:39
Reading Man.
Jooles said:
Aw I love the fact you gave him the poem....such a bold move....love it
July 24th, 2017 18:34
Jooles said:
Aw I love the fact you gave him the poem....such a bold move....love it
July 24th, 2017 18:34
Reading Man.
Louis Gibbs said:
A good book is a great place to get lost in. We\'ve all been to that place. Your poem paints an easily-relatable picture, thanks for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 09:26
Louis Gibbs said:
A good book is a great place to get lost in. We\'ve all been to that place. Your poem paints an easily-relatable picture, thanks for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 09:26
Reading Man.
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly not many seem to \'get\' poetry - well I do and I love this piece of work
July 24th, 2017 03:20
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly not many seem to \'get\' poetry - well I do and I love this piece of work
July 24th, 2017 03:20
Reading Man.
FredPeyer said:
I do like this one Goldfinch. You don\'t know how many times I was that man!
July 24th, 2017 03:02
FredPeyer said:
I do like this one Goldfinch. You don\'t know how many times I was that man!
July 24th, 2017 03:02
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