Comments received on poems by orchidee
The Two Ways
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot - only a few get there? Sounds rough to me, but probably no worse than being in one of our traffic halts because an oversized truck has jammed in a tunnel. Result: sent on a diversion....😇!!!
March 11th, 2023 04:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot - only a few get there? Sounds rough to me, but probably no worse than being in one of our traffic halts because an oversized truck has jammed in a tunnel. Result: sent on a diversion....😇!!!
March 11th, 2023 04:01
Restorative Remembrances
Bella Shepard said:
The second stanza in particular I love. My morning walks are a sort of meditation of all those works and wonders. Lovely write dear Orchi, thank you.
March 10th, 2023 12:56
Bella Shepard said:
The second stanza in particular I love. My morning walks are a sort of meditation of all those works and wonders. Lovely write dear Orchi, thank you.
March 10th, 2023 12:56
A Lion\'s Share-In
Bella Shepard said:
Such a good write my friend, the image of the lion always inspires.
March 9th, 2023 09:13
Bella Shepard said:
Such a good write my friend, the image of the lion always inspires.
March 9th, 2023 09:13
A Lion\'s Share-In
Doggerel Dave said:
Heavy duty job. Works weekends as well? Gets double time or only time and a half? Nothing? Should call the Union....
March 9th, 2023 03:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Heavy duty job. Works weekends as well? Gets double time or only time and a half? Nothing? Should call the Union....
March 9th, 2023 03:55
Worship Me?
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t get it - who said the devil had title rights to all that stuff anyway. Probably wasn\'t his in the first place--- Did Jesus ask to see the title deeds...Alright - He may not have wanted to accept, but it would have been wise to know for sure that he was dealing with a con man....
March 8th, 2023 07:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t get it - who said the devil had title rights to all that stuff anyway. Probably wasn\'t his in the first place--- Did Jesus ask to see the title deeds...Alright - He may not have wanted to accept, but it would have been wise to know for sure that he was dealing with a con man....
March 8th, 2023 07:38
Worship Me?
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Steven, I always enjoy your work very much and look forward to the next one you write
March 8th, 2023 07:33
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Steven, I always enjoy your work very much and look forward to the next one you write
March 8th, 2023 07:33
Worship Me?
Neville said:
my personal Buddhist path precludes my worshiping anyone or thing .. but I have no objection to the beliefs of those who hold dear differing thoughts and principles .. and with that now off my chest, I wish thee well and must dash .. I gotta plane to catch .... 🐧🐭😎👍
March 8th, 2023 03:35
Neville said:
my personal Buddhist path precludes my worshiping anyone or thing .. but I have no objection to the beliefs of those who hold dear differing thoughts and principles .. and with that now off my chest, I wish thee well and must dash .. I gotta plane to catch .... 🐧🐭😎👍
March 8th, 2023 03:35
Dwelling Delights 2
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t tell anyone, but Dwelling Delights 1 has snuck into the tents of sin and is having a jolly good knees up....
March 7th, 2023 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t tell anyone, but Dwelling Delights 1 has snuck into the tents of sin and is having a jolly good knees up....
March 7th, 2023 18:32
Dwelling Delights 2
Neville said:
would someone please pen dwelling delights 3 and swoon as possible ..
March 7th, 2023 09:36
Neville said:
would someone please pen dwelling delights 3 and swoon as possible ..
March 7th, 2023 09:36
Jump From Temple Top?
Neville said:
I think I\'ll just give this one a miss for now and just watch how you and your fellow lemmings get on .. 🐀🐀🐭🐁
March 6th, 2023 04:18
Neville said:
I think I\'ll just give this one a miss for now and just watch how you and your fellow lemmings get on .. 🐀🐀🐭🐁
March 6th, 2023 04:18
Jump From Temple Top?
Doggerel Dave said:
So is this from where the middle ages\' test for a witch was conceived, orchi?
March 6th, 2023 03:53
Doggerel Dave said:
So is this from where the middle ages\' test for a witch was conceived, orchi?
March 6th, 2023 03:53
Helpful Hope
sorenbarrett said:
Orchidee your second and fourth stanzas really hit me. This was a wonderful prayer, song, poem of hope.
March 5th, 2023 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
Orchidee your second and fourth stanzas really hit me. This was a wonderful prayer, song, poem of hope.
March 5th, 2023 07:38
Helpful Hope
Doggerel Dave said:
The body of the poem is far too technical for my sinple mind, orchi - thus I will confine myself to your title and ask is hope helpful, and does it always bring home the goods, or at least a bone for Fido....?😇!!!
March 5th, 2023 06:59
Doggerel Dave said:
The body of the poem is far too technical for my sinple mind, orchi - thus I will confine myself to your title and ask is hope helpful, and does it always bring home the goods, or at least a bone for Fido....?😇!!!
March 5th, 2023 06:59
Helpful Hope
Neville said:
it always helps if there is a little hope left over at the end of another long day ............. 🐀🐀
March 5th, 2023 03:32
Neville said:
it always helps if there is a little hope left over at the end of another long day ............. 🐀🐀
March 5th, 2023 03:32
Stones To Bread?
orchidee said:
N - this sounds a bit like:
There was an old trout named KP..
I can\'t finish the limerick - I will swoon! lol.
March 4th, 2023 05:17
orchidee said:
N - this sounds a bit like:
There was an old trout named KP..
I can\'t finish the limerick - I will swoon! lol.
March 4th, 2023 05:17
Stones To Bread?
Neville said:
while standing tall
indeed erect
he called out loud
gawd flippin heck ..
if I am to eat another stone
I\'ll end up dead
I need summat else instead
so please just gimmi bread ..
While kneelin down
and fit to bust
he whispered low
and low he cussed ..
I\'m not starvin
but when needs must
I might just munch upon a few locusts .... 🪳🪲🕷️🦟🐧😎
March 4th, 2023 04:40
Neville said:
while standing tall
indeed erect
he called out loud
gawd flippin heck ..
if I am to eat another stone
I\'ll end up dead
I need summat else instead
so please just gimmi bread ..
While kneelin down
and fit to bust
he whispered low
and low he cussed ..
I\'m not starvin
but when needs must
I might just munch upon a few locusts .... 🪳🪲🕷️🦟🐧😎
March 4th, 2023 04:40
Stones To Bread?
Doggerel Dave said:
The tempter needs to be bought into line.
With you and KP it should be a breeze;
But KP and the tempter both align,
While you spend too much time on your knees… 😇
March 4th, 2023 04:21
Doggerel Dave said:
The tempter needs to be bought into line.
With you and KP it should be a breeze;
But KP and the tempter both align,
While you spend too much time on your knees… 😇
March 4th, 2023 04:21
Lasting Love
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, the quality of mercy, and love. May it always be. Good write.
March 3rd, 2023 16:17
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, the quality of mercy, and love. May it always be. Good write.
March 3rd, 2023 16:17
Lasting Love
Neville said:
its a great concept .. but sadly few get to realise it for one reason or another ..
March 3rd, 2023 08:42
Neville said:
its a great concept .. but sadly few get to realise it for one reason or another ..
March 3rd, 2023 08:42
Lasting Love
arqios said:
The love that lasts outlasts the latest love in our endless series of loves.
March 3rd, 2023 08:30
arqios said:
The love that lasts outlasts the latest love in our endless series of loves.
March 3rd, 2023 08:30
Lasting Love
sorenbarrett said:
He certainly must have a great deal of patience (except for some like Sodom and Gomorrah)
March 3rd, 2023 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
He certainly must have a great deal of patience (except for some like Sodom and Gomorrah)
March 3rd, 2023 06:22
Lasting Love
Doggerel Dave said:
I wonder why God hasn\'t suffered a nervous breakdown by now..... 😇
March 3rd, 2023 03:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I wonder why God hasn\'t suffered a nervous breakdown by now..... 😇
March 3rd, 2023 03:49
Going On In Grace
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Steven, going on in grace perfectly said my friend
March 2nd, 2023 12:09
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Steven, going on in grace perfectly said my friend
March 2nd, 2023 12:09
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