Comments received on poems by orchidee



Times Of Trials
orchidee said:

You fading out, Gold (Andy) - verse 5?! Aww!

August 6th, 2022 01:49

Protection Place
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 6th, 2022 00:19

Protection Place
orchidee said:

Sometimes a 4 verse (maximum) hymn-poem of 4 lines each can help to concentrate thoughts. Though sometimes it may be less or more verses, or 6 line or 8 line verses.
Not forgetting the metres - or in my poems, more accurately, formats. Strictly speaking, metres put accents on certain syllables.

August 5th, 2022 01:59

Led By The Light
Bella Shepard said:

The beauty of light is that is exposes all, so that we may be enlightened. A good write my friend.

August 4th, 2022 14:13

Led By The Light
Neville said:



I kinda like what Fay said :)

August 4th, 2022 08:56

Led By The Light
jazzwa30 said:

love it good read

August 4th, 2022 08:40

Led By The Light
Fay Slimm. said:

Nothing like light to expose dark deeds my friend - -- being children of light is the best way to live..

August 4th, 2022 02:12

Seeds Scene
Bella Shepard said:

Seeds and soil, such a beautiful analogy of that reciprocal relationship. Can\'t have one without the other.

August 3rd, 2022 12:15

Seeds Scene
Goldfinch60 said:

May those seeds always bring love and wonder to our lives Orchi.

Andy

August 3rd, 2022 01:51

Seeds Scene
orchidee said:

We are not the seeds. The seed is the word of God. We are the soil types.

August 3rd, 2022 01:42

Excellent Exhortings
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 3rd, 2022 01:02

Excellent Exhortings
Raven333 said:

Really loved reading this write, well written with great flow

August 2nd, 2022 14:59

Excellent Exhortings
Neville said:



Lost for words ................... I am :)

August 2nd, 2022 09:05

Excellent Exhortings
arqios said:

Love that word, \"weal.\" Brings to mind so many other words and meanings.

August 2nd, 2022 07:07

Time And Trust
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 1st, 2022 02:32

Sheep Security
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 1st, 2022 01:03

Sheep Security
Bella Shepard said:

I love the image as Jesus as Good Shepherd. A lovely write my friend.

July 31st, 2022 11:07

Sheep Security
Neville said:


sheep dogs and electric fences both worked in my day :)

July 31st, 2022 01:52

Storm Stilled
Bella Shepard said:

I love this story of Jesus, it begs the question \"What do we really have to fear?\" Great write my friend.

July 30th, 2022 13:32

Storm Stilled
Neville said:


I started to feel sea-sick part way through .. so shall reserve my judgement until I feel able to return :)

July 30th, 2022 08:24

Salvation Sure
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

July 30th, 2022 00:54

Salvation Sure
Neville said:



I feel certain that this is a hymn poem in 6.6.8.6 format .. unless of course, we are both mistaken .. Neville :)


July 29th, 2022 13:23

Salvation Sure
Jerry Reynolds said:

Fine one, Orchi.
A turn toward hope is good.

July 29th, 2022 09:03

Salvation Sure
arqios said:

With Him our host no one is lost.

July 29th, 2022 06:22

Salvation Sure
ForeverJesus7 said:

I like this piece, my friend. Keep fighting the good fight. Keep writing the good write. Trust in the Lord.
Persistence is key

July 29th, 2022 01:51

Salvation Sure
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes being alive in spirit is the best way to live. Good write Orchi.

July 29th, 2022 01:46

Welcome Worship
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

July 29th, 2022 00:16

Welcome Worship
Neville said:



Don\'t ya just love them joyful noises Mr. O :)

July 28th, 2022 13:32

Welcome Worship
Saxon Crow said:

Not more singing?!! Pleeeeeeaaassseeeee noooooooooooooooo!

July 28th, 2022 08:45

Welcome Worship
arqios said:

If there are any who know celebration that would be those that pertain to the Lord.

July 28th, 2022 03:14



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