Comments received on poems by lovelydarkanddeep
It\'s okay
mekhked said:
When I came to see the sun
I met the pretty nature moon
Who took me around the town
Where we couldn\'t be alone
That is our life ;unrevealing secret
Are Sad,poor,tears,dark and light
what we need ?this not important,if we be through night
May 5th, 2017 16:59
mekhked said:
When I came to see the sun
I met the pretty nature moon
Who took me around the town
Where we couldn\'t be alone
That is our life ;unrevealing secret
Are Sad,poor,tears,dark and light
what we need ?this not important,if we be through night
May 5th, 2017 16:59
It\'s okay
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing ANGEL ~ this poem has a lot of positivity and has made us all think about LOVE & LIFE ! I agree with you when we each stand back from our own lives & loves there is much we can thank GOD for ~ and when we count our Blessings and our Stars ~ we can all say IT\'S OK ! The form of the poem is very elegant a quartet of quatrains with an abab cdcd efef ghgh rhyming pattern similar to that used in the English Sonnet. A sonnet is restricted to 14 lines ~ yours has 16. Also the lines in a Sonnet must have a strict meter such as iambic petameter (10 syllables per line). Had you condensed verse 4 to 2 lines \"When we humans start to doubt ~ We remember what it\'s truly about\" It would have been a 4442 English Sonnet. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ love it ! Hugs ~ BRIAN.
April 11th, 2017 14:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing ANGEL ~ this poem has a lot of positivity and has made us all think about LOVE & LIFE ! I agree with you when we each stand back from our own lives & loves there is much we can thank GOD for ~ and when we count our Blessings and our Stars ~ we can all say IT\'S OK ! The form of the poem is very elegant a quartet of quatrains with an abab cdcd efef ghgh rhyming pattern similar to that used in the English Sonnet. A sonnet is restricted to 14 lines ~ yours has 16. Also the lines in a Sonnet must have a strict meter such as iambic petameter (10 syllables per line). Had you condensed verse 4 to 2 lines \"When we humans start to doubt ~ We remember what it\'s truly about\" It would have been a 4442 English Sonnet. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ love it ! Hugs ~ BRIAN.
April 11th, 2017 14:42
It\'s okay
willyweed said:
to me this is about hope and faith and it is a very good poem makes one think and that is always good
April 11th, 2017 13:36
willyweed said:
to me this is about hope and faith and it is a very good poem makes one think and that is always good
April 11th, 2017 13:36
It\'s okay
Michael Edwards said:
Brian\'s the one to answer the question but whatever it is its a super bit of writing with a great message.
April 11th, 2017 10:34
Michael Edwards said:
Brian\'s the one to answer the question but whatever it is its a super bit of writing with a great message.
April 11th, 2017 10:34
February 2, 2017
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poetic expression. Excellent write!
April 10th, 2017 01:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poetic expression. Excellent write!
April 10th, 2017 01:22
The other you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly deep. You write with a true understanding of compassionate, unconditional love. You don\'t have to like someone, no do you have to like what someone does, in order to love them. Your poem captures that profound and important truth! Well done!
April 10th, 2017 01:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly deep. You write with a true understanding of compassionate, unconditional love. You don\'t have to like someone, no do you have to like what someone does, in order to love them. Your poem captures that profound and important truth! Well done!
April 10th, 2017 01:16
The other you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly deep. You write with a true understanding of compassionate, unconditional love. You don\'t have to like someone, no do you have to like what someone does, in order to love them. Your poem captures that profound and important truth! Well done!
April 10th, 2017 01:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly deep. You write with a true understanding of compassionate, unconditional love. You don\'t have to like someone, no do you have to like what someone does, in order to love them. Your poem captures that profound and important truth! Well done!
April 10th, 2017 01:16
Picture it
whisperingquill said:
This is splendidly written like I\'m actually walking in a field of wonder and this poem is being whispered in the wind
April 7th, 2017 17:41
whisperingquill said:
This is splendidly written like I\'m actually walking in a field of wonder and this poem is being whispered in the wind
April 7th, 2017 17:41
Picture it
Garry said:
Lovely idea, Beatifully encapsulated in the closing two lines.
April 7th, 2017 16:41
Garry said:
Lovely idea, Beatifully encapsulated in the closing two lines.
April 7th, 2017 16:41
Picture it
willyweed said:
yes this is beautiful home is a feeling more than a place its where ever your heart can smile where you are happy, and I hope you are home Izzy peace & love ww
April 7th, 2017 15:32
willyweed said:
yes this is beautiful home is a feeling more than a place its where ever your heart can smile where you are happy, and I hope you are home Izzy peace & love ww
April 7th, 2017 15:32
Picture it
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks IZZY ~ This poem is as beautiful as you are ! It reminds me that wherever I am in the World (i have touched all SEVEN CONTINENTS) there is a place I call home and I\'m not AT HOME until I am back there where my loved ones are. You poem suggests it not just a place ~ or people it\'s both. There are people ~ Family & Special Friends and an extra-special Friend (who I would die for !). She is my HOME ~ She is my HAPPINESS ! It is these people (and place) that makes HOME ~ HOME ! Friendly Hugs for you ~ BRIAN
April 7th, 2017 13:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks IZZY ~ This poem is as beautiful as you are ! It reminds me that wherever I am in the World (i have touched all SEVEN CONTINENTS) there is a place I call home and I\'m not AT HOME until I am back there where my loved ones are. You poem suggests it not just a place ~ or people it\'s both. There are people ~ Family & Special Friends and an extra-special Friend (who I would die for !). She is my HOME ~ She is my HAPPINESS ! It is these people (and place) that makes HOME ~ HOME ! Friendly Hugs for you ~ BRIAN
April 7th, 2017 13:54
Why did you ask when you already know?
poetboy123 said:
Excellent write. Believe in yourself, because in the end the only person you can truly count on is the one that\'s been with you since the beginning.
April 4th, 2017 20:20
poetboy123 said:
Excellent write. Believe in yourself, because in the end the only person you can truly count on is the one that\'s been with you since the beginning.
April 4th, 2017 20:20
Why did you ask when you already know?
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
April 4th, 2017 15:02
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
April 4th, 2017 15:02
Why did you ask when you already know?
willyweed said:
when true love comes you will know, but she don\'t always say hello, she just smiles with her eyes but you will realize as you watch your spirit rise, you are young love will come enjoy yourself while you wait. peace and love for you Izzy. ww
April 4th, 2017 10:30
willyweed said:
when true love comes you will know, but she don\'t always say hello, she just smiles with her eyes but you will realize as you watch your spirit rise, you are young love will come enjoy yourself while you wait. peace and love for you Izzy. ww
April 4th, 2017 10:30
do i have to explain?
Jabberwocky said:
It\'s human nature to remember incomplete things more prominently than completed things.
Perhaps you just need to be acknowledged.
Sadly that is often withheld when relationships break down.
You have to force the closure yourself. Realise that you are responsible for your own happiness and self regard and not allow anyone else to usurp that power.
April 4th, 2017 08:06
Jabberwocky said:
It\'s human nature to remember incomplete things more prominently than completed things.
Perhaps you just need to be acknowledged.
Sadly that is often withheld when relationships break down.
You have to force the closure yourself. Realise that you are responsible for your own happiness and self regard and not allow anyone else to usurp that power.
April 4th, 2017 08:06
Love, Hurt
willyweed said:
that will never be the right answer, we must all face our fate, our lives. good poem Izzy!
April 3rd, 2017 06:49
willyweed said:
that will never be the right answer, we must all face our fate, our lives. good poem Izzy!
April 3rd, 2017 06:49
The other you
willyweed said:
to bully is only to deflect your own pain onto someone else, to ease your own sorrow. So what is this persons problem? good write Izzy!
March 31st, 2017 14:42
willyweed said:
to bully is only to deflect your own pain onto someone else, to ease your own sorrow. So what is this persons problem? good write Izzy!
March 31st, 2017 14:42
Why would you? Why did you?
willyweed said:
I hope your felling better Izzy?
slow down it will work out. WW
March 30th, 2017 19:30
willyweed said:
I hope your felling better Izzy?
slow down it will work out. WW
March 30th, 2017 19:30
Why would you? Why did you?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh ANGEL ~ this is such a sad sad poem for one so young. But having fallen in and out of love and been hurt by a Lover I can empathise and do understand how you feel. Thinking of you and praying that this so so sad situation will soon be resolved ~ Big Comforting Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 30th, 2017 14:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh ANGEL ~ this is such a sad sad poem for one so young. But having fallen in and out of love and been hurt by a Lover I can empathise and do understand how you feel. Thinking of you and praying that this so so sad situation will soon be resolved ~ Big Comforting Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 30th, 2017 14:10
I Could Dream But,
willyweed said:
for dreams and dreamers near and far
the dreams we dream are who we are
nice dream LDAD
March 29th, 2017 15:01
willyweed said:
for dreams and dreamers near and far
the dreams we dream are who we are
nice dream LDAD
March 29th, 2017 15:01
My valentine to You
willyweed said:
your poem is wonderful and lovely~ feelings from the heart put on paper make for great poetry. write on ! WW
March 29th, 2017 13:44
willyweed said:
your poem is wonderful and lovely~ feelings from the heart put on paper make for great poetry. write on ! WW
March 29th, 2017 13:44
My valentine to You
whisperingquill said:
Nice tribute to unrequited love I\'ve felt this way also to have no reciprocation very relatable
March 29th, 2017 12:46
whisperingquill said:
Nice tribute to unrequited love I\'ve felt this way also to have no reciprocation very relatable
March 29th, 2017 12:46
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