Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Deluded
onepauly said:
funny and great
really. keep up the writing. they might get longer.
July 11th, 2017 18:52
onepauly said:
funny and great
really. keep up the writing. they might get longer.
July 11th, 2017 18:52
Deluded
burning-embers said:
Wot - no thorn in the paw? I just pray its got indigestion. A very thought provoking piece.
July 11th, 2017 14:09
burning-embers said:
Wot - no thorn in the paw? I just pray its got indigestion. A very thought provoking piece.
July 11th, 2017 14:09
Deluded
FredPeyer said:
After reading this poem I went to your homepage and read a whole lot of your previous ones.
Wish I could write like you! Every one of them is a gem, including this one.
July 11th, 2017 04:05
FredPeyer said:
After reading this poem I went to your homepage and read a whole lot of your previous ones.
Wish I could write like you! Every one of them is a gem, including this one.
July 11th, 2017 04:05
Half Full / Half Empty
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write. I don\'t know about porcupine but I have heard that hedgehog is quite nice - never tried it as in the UK it is becoming quite rare to see nowadays.
July 10th, 2017 23:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write. I don\'t know about porcupine but I have heard that hedgehog is quite nice - never tried it as in the UK it is becoming quite rare to see nowadays.
July 10th, 2017 23:40
Half Full / Half Empty
Augustus said:
Twine and sack were made of hemp. Hey, hey. Cheers.
July 10th, 2017 10:24
Augustus said:
Twine and sack were made of hemp. Hey, hey. Cheers.
July 10th, 2017 10:24
Half Full / Half Empty
Nicholas Browning said:
I didn\'t even know you could eat porcupine.
July 10th, 2017 05:59
Nicholas Browning said:
I didn\'t even know you could eat porcupine.
July 10th, 2017 05:59
Dignity
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is for living so keep your head up so all cn be seen. Good write.
July 10th, 2017 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is for living so keep your head up so all cn be seen. Good write.
July 10th, 2017 00:18
Dignity
burning-embers said:
Succinct. This life and living it is what we\'re here to do. Well written and strong.
July 9th, 2017 08:30
burning-embers said:
Succinct. This life and living it is what we\'re here to do. Well written and strong.
July 9th, 2017 08:30
Tiger
Augustus said:
Interesting , you are already something else/other in a dream and that other then in turn wants to be other than itself. Provoking.
July 8th, 2017 21:33
Augustus said:
Interesting , you are already something else/other in a dream and that other then in turn wants to be other than itself. Provoking.
July 8th, 2017 21:33
Tiger
Louis Gibbs said:
A profound little piece, Jabber! I thoroughly enjoyed it,
July 8th, 2017 10:52
Louis Gibbs said:
A profound little piece, Jabber! I thoroughly enjoyed it,
July 8th, 2017 10:52
Summer Rain (haiku)
Augustus said:
I am sorry but my mind is taken over by the devil when I picture her in a wet dress. Or maybe that is entended---a dancing flower. Nice one!
July 7th, 2017 18:36
Augustus said:
I am sorry but my mind is taken over by the devil when I picture her in a wet dress. Or maybe that is entended---a dancing flower. Nice one!
July 7th, 2017 18:36
Summer Rain (haiku)
kevin browne said:
nice one beautiful, sweet and short. easy consuming in the though of it. I love the transition it carries also.
July 7th, 2017 12:16
kevin browne said:
nice one beautiful, sweet and short. easy consuming in the though of it. I love the transition it carries also.
July 7th, 2017 12:16
No Return
Poetic Dan said:
O That feeling :(
Wonderfully written, thanks for reminding me where I\'ve come from ;)
July 3rd, 2017 05:23
Poetic Dan said:
O That feeling :(
Wonderfully written, thanks for reminding me where I\'ve come from ;)
July 3rd, 2017 05:23
Channel
FredPeyer said:
Nice poem, love the ending. Don\'t know what kind of channel I would be, too many interests to fit into one shoe.
June 22nd, 2017 18:51
FredPeyer said:
Nice poem, love the ending. Don\'t know what kind of channel I would be, too many interests to fit into one shoe.
June 22nd, 2017 18:51
Channel
Louis Gibbs said:
I like this one a lot, Jabberwocky, and can certainly relate!
June 22nd, 2017 10:01
Louis Gibbs said:
I like this one a lot, Jabberwocky, and can certainly relate!
June 22nd, 2017 10:01
Cherry Tree
FredPeyer said:
I like it. It reminds me so much of when as kids we \"raided\" the neighbors cherry trees.
June 20th, 2017 18:43
FredPeyer said:
I like it. It reminds me so much of when as kids we \"raided\" the neighbors cherry trees.
June 20th, 2017 18:43
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