Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky



Yeah, I Said Those Things
Nicholas Browning said:

This is cool. Like a man in a trench coat with a fedora cool.

August 17th, 2017 07:00

Yeah, I Said Those Things
burning-embers said:

Tell it like it is and if they cant handle it.......

August 17th, 2017 04:55

Indifference
Goldfinch60 said:

Indifference can be a mighty weapon.

August 13th, 2017 02:01

Indifference
Louis Gibbs said:

A feigned, fabricated indifference is a man\'s default defense, as you so well portray, JW! Good poem!

August 12th, 2017 12:24

Lava
Jabberwocky said:

Thanks Goldfinch :)

August 7th, 2017 14:11

Lava
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with a great meaning within it.

August 5th, 2017 08:51

Friends
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, may your shoes walk you to the roads of happiness.

July 31st, 2017 00:24

Friends
poetboy123 said:

This rhythm and rhyme is exceptional, keep up the great work!

July 30th, 2017 10:48

Friends
Heather T said:

I think we all share the experience you\'ve penned here so well. The circles tighten through the years.

July 30th, 2017 08:41

Friends
BananaMayonnaise said:

I love the rhyming :)

July 30th, 2017 04:37

I am a Frog
Jabberwocky said:

Thanks Goldfinch.
:)

July 28th, 2017 17:42

I am a Frog
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, always be yourself, if you change to suit others you are only betraying yourself.

July 27th, 2017 01:07

Solomon and Me
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, always chose to be yourself, at least you know what has happened in your own life.

July 24th, 2017 00:53

Solomon and Me
kevin browne said:

the great King Soloman. the demise of mans belief that God does not exist and that man wastes his entire life in believing so. you captured some of the things he wrote about on a massive scale. the wisdom of all wisdom\'s, apparently?

July 23rd, 2017 16:29

Colour-Fast
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful write.

July 21st, 2017 03:53

Contest
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

July 18th, 2017 00:53

Porch
Goldfinch60 said:

May your life always start with everyday being a good one.

July 15th, 2017 00:03

Porch
Nicholas Browning said:

A bit of reflection to start the day. This is both beautiful and inspirational. Good work.

July 14th, 2017 12:51

Porch
Louis Gibbs said:

Not worth staying in a bad relationship, as this good poem so well expresses. Thanks for this statement of knowing when to move on with your life, Jabberwocky!

July 14th, 2017 08:54

Porch
burning-embers said:

Really well written sir! Love the wisdom in the savoir-faire. Shrug ya shoulders and get on with the rest of yer life beautifully demonstrated.

July 14th, 2017 06:49

Baby poems
Goldfinch60 said:

Good writes, I bet the children loved them.

July 14th, 2017 01:50

Baby poems
onepauly said:

quite the verses.

July 13th, 2017 12:59

Baby poems
MissileOfUncertainty said:

This is adorable, and a prime example that poetry doesn\'t have a depressing or sad undertone. That it can be happy and carefree! Thank you for sharing- and trust me (as a daughter). One day you\'re kids will be ever so thankful for the poems you\'ve written for them.

July 13th, 2017 11:02

Baby poems
rita_ehn said:

Very cute and catchy

July 13th, 2017 10:32

The Endless End
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

July 13th, 2017 00:44

The Endless End
Augustus said:

That your love is forever. Nice!

July 12th, 2017 17:08

The Endless End
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 12th, 2017 10:19

The Endless End
burning-embers said:

Thats profound sir! Strong, well chosen phrasing.

July 12th, 2017 04:19

Deluded
Goldfinch60 said:

\"Tyger Tyger, burning bright,
In the forests of the night;
What immortal hand or eye,
Could frame thy fearful symmetry? \"

Good write

July 12th, 2017 00:15

Deluded
Nicholas Browning said:

Haha, nice. I hope it doesn\'t.

July 11th, 2017 19:28



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