Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Toast
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
nor would i . we can always make another piece of toast :-)
March 14th, 2018 05:44
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
nor would i . we can always make another piece of toast :-)
March 14th, 2018 05:44
Crow Says...
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it sounds like a wonderful loving relationship between you and your daughter.
March 13th, 2018 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it sounds like a wonderful loving relationship between you and your daughter.
March 13th, 2018 02:00
Crow Says...
Lorna said:
This is sort of a love poem between you and your daughter - really sweet and wise and well written J........
March 12th, 2018 06:34
Lorna said:
This is sort of a love poem between you and your daughter - really sweet and wise and well written J........
March 12th, 2018 06:34
No Surrender
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well written of how things are for some, they should be honoured.
March 6th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well written of how things are for some, they should be honoured.
March 6th, 2018 01:43
No Surrender
Lorna said:
You have spoken so well for the defeated in life J......
March 5th, 2018 05:33
Lorna said:
You have spoken so well for the defeated in life J......
March 5th, 2018 05:33
Cutting
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good strong write, may the ability to move on grace your soul.
February 28th, 2018 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good strong write, may the ability to move on grace your soul.
February 28th, 2018 01:47
Cutting
Lorna said:
This cuts to the chase....... Good one J - kind of sad .... frustration makes us sometimes say things we wish we could stuff back in our mouths........
February 27th, 2018 04:53
Lorna said:
This cuts to the chase....... Good one J - kind of sad .... frustration makes us sometimes say things we wish we could stuff back in our mouths........
February 27th, 2018 04:53
Flotsam and Jetsam
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, your future will be there for you to enjoy.
February 26th, 2018 09:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, your future will be there for you to enjoy.
February 26th, 2018 09:29
Flotsam and Jetsam
Lorna said:
Beautiful Jabberwocky..... I had to look up pelagic........ very haunting poem.........
February 26th, 2018 07:35
Lorna said:
Beautiful Jabberwocky..... I had to look up pelagic........ very haunting poem.........
February 26th, 2018 07:35
Single Dad
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, the love for your kids shines through your words.
February 26th, 2018 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, the love for your kids shines through your words.
February 26th, 2018 01:48
Single Dad
Jamie said:
Great! Keep up the good work... and the writing too!!
February 25th, 2018 08:30
Jamie said:
Great! Keep up the good work... and the writing too!!
February 25th, 2018 08:30
Siren Song
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe the song should be changed and a new beginning would be upon you.
February 24th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe the song should be changed and a new beginning would be upon you.
February 24th, 2018 01:19
Starling with a Chip
Michael Edwards said:
Pleased about that,
Enjoyed this bit of whimsy - or is it?
February 22nd, 2018 12:07
Michael Edwards said:
Pleased about that,
Enjoyed this bit of whimsy - or is it?
February 22nd, 2018 12:07
Starling with a Chip
Lorna said:
Love this - you are such a brat!!! Oh you make me laugh.......
February 22nd, 2018 06:51
Lorna said:
Love this - you are such a brat!!! Oh you make me laugh.......
February 22nd, 2018 06:51
Dissonance
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many like this but lieing can be hard as you have to remember what the lie was.
Good write.
February 22nd, 2018 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many like this but lieing can be hard as you have to remember what the lie was.
Good write.
February 22nd, 2018 01:15
Dissonance
Lorna said:
Lies are sooooooooooo tiring.... you have to remember them. Truth is soooooooo dangerous.... people bash you over the head with it.
February 21st, 2018 05:31
Lorna said:
Lies are sooooooooooo tiring.... you have to remember them. Truth is soooooooo dangerous.... people bash you over the head with it.
February 21st, 2018 05:31
Rose Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one J, at least you can see the roses and they can lead to beauty.
February 20th, 2018 08:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one J, at least you can see the roses and they can lead to beauty.
February 20th, 2018 08:44
Metamorphosis
Goldfinch60 said:
Loves metamorphosis
Wakens your repose
It may then just go
Leaving a rose.
February 19th, 2018 05:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Loves metamorphosis
Wakens your repose
It may then just go
Leaving a rose.
February 19th, 2018 05:02
Metamorphosis
dusk arising said:
Oh crikey this made me chuckle and its so clever. Full marks, less is more!
Definately goes into my favourites.
February 19th, 2018 05:01
dusk arising said:
Oh crikey this made me chuckle and its so clever. Full marks, less is more!
Definately goes into my favourites.
February 19th, 2018 05:01
Lack
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe not all our yesterdays had jam but many of them did.
February 19th, 2018 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe not all our yesterdays had jam but many of them did.
February 19th, 2018 01:09
Bitter Valentine
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, no messing around with these words.
February 16th, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, no messing around with these words.
February 16th, 2018 01:14
Bitter Valentine
Lorna said:
Your cynical humor made me laugh......... \"Still not dead\" - good! We\'re glad at least........
February 15th, 2018 20:06
Lorna said:
Your cynical humor made me laugh......... \"Still not dead\" - good! We\'re glad at least........
February 15th, 2018 20:06
Bitter Valentine
Herjourney said:
Oh wow ,I love this ,straight to the point and with much meaning. Why can the past be like a growing flower oh you have inspired me write something ,thank you,
February 15th, 2018 19:05
Herjourney said:
Oh wow ,I love this ,straight to the point and with much meaning. Why can the past be like a growing flower oh you have inspired me write something ,thank you,
February 15th, 2018 19:05
Hands of Cain
dusk arising said:
So true when we innocently place our heads upon the block of life.
February 13th, 2018 15:50
dusk arising said:
So true when we innocently place our heads upon the block of life.
February 13th, 2018 15:50
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