Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky



Toast
Caring dove said:

nor would i . we can always make another piece of toast :-)

March 14th, 2018 05:44

Crow Says...
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and it sounds like a wonderful loving relationship between you and your daughter.

March 13th, 2018 02:00

Crow Says...
Lorna said:

This is sort of a love poem between you and your daughter - really sweet and wise and well written J........

March 12th, 2018 06:34

\"Fine\"
Ivory said:

I like the playfulness of your words.
Good write.

March 7th, 2018 08:26

No Surrender
Goldfinch60 said:

Very well written of how things are for some, they should be honoured.

March 6th, 2018 01:43

No Surrender
Lorna said:

You have spoken so well for the defeated in life J......

March 5th, 2018 05:33

Cutting
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good strong write, may the ability to move on grace your soul.

February 28th, 2018 01:47

Cutting
Lorna said:

This cuts to the chase....... Good one J - kind of sad .... frustration makes us sometimes say things we wish we could stuff back in our mouths........

February 27th, 2018 04:53

Flotsam and Jetsam
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, your future will be there for you to enjoy.

February 26th, 2018 09:29

Flotsam and Jetsam
Lorna said:

Beautiful Jabberwocky..... I had to look up pelagic........ very haunting poem.........

February 26th, 2018 07:35

Single Dad
Goldfinch60 said:

Great write, the love for your kids shines through your words.

February 26th, 2018 01:48

Single Dad
Jamie said:

Great! Keep up the good work... and the writing too!!

February 25th, 2018 08:30

Single Dad
Lorna said:

More than all right! Fun again......

February 25th, 2018 05:58

Siren Song
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe the song should be changed and a new beginning would be upon you.

February 24th, 2018 01:19

Siren Song
Lorna said:

She\'s got you already.............

February 23rd, 2018 07:30

Starling with a Chip
Michael Edwards said:

Pleased about that,
Enjoyed this bit of whimsy - or is it?

February 22nd, 2018 12:07

Starling with a Chip
Lorna said:

Love this - you are such a brat!!! Oh you make me laugh.......

February 22nd, 2018 06:51

Dissonance
Goldfinch60 said:

There are many like this but lieing can be hard as you have to remember what the lie was.
Good write.

February 22nd, 2018 01:15

Dissonance
Lorna said:

Lies are sooooooooooo tiring.... you have to remember them. Truth is soooooooo dangerous.... people bash you over the head with it.

February 21st, 2018 05:31

Rose Garden
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one J, at least you can see the roses and they can lead to beauty.

February 20th, 2018 08:44

Rose Garden
Lorna said:

Sad one J............

February 20th, 2018 04:59

Metamorphosis
Goldfinch60 said:

Loves metamorphosis
Wakens your repose
It may then just go
Leaving a rose.


February 19th, 2018 05:02

Metamorphosis
dusk arising said:

Oh crikey this made me chuckle and its so clever. Full marks, less is more!
Definately goes into my favourites.

February 19th, 2018 05:01

Lack
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe not all our yesterdays had jam but many of them did.

February 19th, 2018 01:09

Pits
Lorna said:

Her loss Jabberwocky...... go find another one.

February 16th, 2018 04:59

Bitter Valentine
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, no messing around with these words.

February 16th, 2018 01:14

Bitter Valentine
Lorna said:

Your cynical humor made me laugh......... \"Still not dead\" - good! We\'re glad at least........

February 15th, 2018 20:06

Bitter Valentine
Herjourney said:

Oh wow ,I love this ,straight to the point and with much meaning. Why can the past be like a growing flower oh you have inspired me write something ,thank you,

February 15th, 2018 19:05

Hands of Cain
dusk arising said:

So true when we innocently place our heads upon the block of life.

February 13th, 2018 15:50

Gingerbread
dusk arising said:

And tomorrow - sunshine! Good write.

February 12th, 2018 16:01



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