Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Muse
sorenbarrett said:
I have many muses love, misery, fear, anger, each emotion is one. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
I have many muses love, misery, fear, anger, each emotion is one. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 12:16
Breakfast
boot said:
As they do..it seems..unsatisfied..seek the greener side of fence...from the painting of your poetry
I think you\'re truly blessed..time..and view..
change what was new...to..boring..everyday
But in the end...a years long friend
Can recognize the true....
Was always the beginning
September 29th, 2026 00:59
boot said:
As they do..it seems..unsatisfied..seek the greener side of fence...from the painting of your poetry
I think you\'re truly blessed..time..and view..
change what was new...to..boring..everyday
But in the end...a years long friend
Can recognize the true....
Was always the beginning
September 29th, 2026 00:59
Breakfast
Doggerel Dave said:
Family relationships, it seems mostly cause pain somewhere, sometime. Longterm association, long term changes. I felt for you in your summary.
PS: I\'m voting for the marmalade too...
September 28th, 2026 03:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Family relationships, it seems mostly cause pain somewhere, sometime. Longterm association, long term changes. I felt for you in your summary.
PS: I\'m voting for the marmalade too...
September 28th, 2026 03:06
Breakfast
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this one hurt more than I expected...all that ordinary breakfast stuff wrapped around someone leaving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2026 16:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this one hurt more than I expected...all that ordinary breakfast stuff wrapped around someone leaving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2026 16:07
Breakfast
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the metaphor in this one that applied so nicely to several matters in relationships. Brilliant! and a fave
September 27th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the metaphor in this one that applied so nicely to several matters in relationships. Brilliant! and a fave
September 27th, 2026 12:16
Role model
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Jabberwocky…there’s a whole childhood sitting inside those few lines. I’m sorry you had reason to write them. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2026 22:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Jabberwocky…there’s a whole childhood sitting inside those few lines. I’m sorry you had reason to write them. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2026 22:53
Role model
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, wise and good advise. Nicely wrapped in poetic rhyme it gives a message.
September 26th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, wise and good advise. Nicely wrapped in poetic rhyme it gives a message.
September 26th, 2026 06:31
A.I.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Four lines, one awakening, and now I’m side-eyeing my laptop 🤣...thanks for that, Jabberwocky. Excellent write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Four lines, one awakening, and now I’m side-eyeing my laptop 🤣...thanks for that, Jabberwocky. Excellent write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:33
A.I.
Doggerel Dave said:
Consciousness then the key:
To be ‘am’ ain’t enough.
Prove that and then I’ll be
Happy it is no fluff.
More serious debate on AI is needed . Enjoyed your quatrain; mine above a tribute,Thanks.
September 23rd, 2026 18:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Consciousness then the key:
To be ‘am’ ain’t enough.
Prove that and then I’ll be
Happy it is no fluff.
More serious debate on AI is needed . Enjoyed your quatrain; mine above a tribute,Thanks.
September 23rd, 2026 18:02
A.I.
Kevin Hulme said:
Remember HAL 9000 in 2001 A Space Odyssey?
A good Write.
September 23rd, 2026 07:42
Kevin Hulme said:
Remember HAL 9000 in 2001 A Space Odyssey?
A good Write.
September 23rd, 2026 07:42
A.I.
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever so much put into so few words very nicely worded in rhyme that has its final impact in the last two words. Wow! a fave
September 23rd, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever so much put into so few words very nicely worded in rhyme that has its final impact in the last two words. Wow! a fave
September 23rd, 2026 04:30
New Armour
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Gary but if you go to the edge of the flat earth \"there be dragons!\" LOL
Andy
September 21st, 2026 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Gary but if you go to the edge of the flat earth \"there be dragons!\" LOL
Andy
September 21st, 2026 01:48
New Armour
Doggerel Dave said:
Great versification, but deluded; there\'s always something to slay, and if with or without steel the right target is located, then perhaps that is progress.
September 20th, 2026 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Great versification, but deluded; there\'s always something to slay, and if with or without steel the right target is located, then perhaps that is progress.
September 20th, 2026 18:28
New Armour
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Jabberwocky...polish the armour and enjoy the peace. Trouble always finds its way back. Well don, ym friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 17:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Jabberwocky...polish the armour and enjoy the peace. Trouble always finds its way back. Well don, ym friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 17:51
New Armour
sorenbarrett said:
Love this one and take it as metaphoric as well. We all wear armor against the forces outside of us and at times there is no enemy and no need for the armor. Well done my friend
September 20th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Love this one and take it as metaphoric as well. We all wear armor against the forces outside of us and at times there is no enemy and no need for the armor. Well done my friend
September 20th, 2026 04:44
Song Sung Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears of sadness will hopefully one day go away Gary and be replaced by tears of happiness.
Andy
September 18th, 2026 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears of sadness will hopefully one day go away Gary and be replaced by tears of happiness.
Andy
September 18th, 2026 01:08
Rain
Durdica Porobija said:
It is beautiful when peace takes hold of a song and settles into the emotions. The song could be placed within the semantic field of what the French call *savoir-vivre*.
September 17th, 2026 13:38
Durdica Porobija said:
It is beautiful when peace takes hold of a song and settles into the emotions. The song could be placed within the semantic field of what the French call *savoir-vivre*.
September 17th, 2026 13:38
Song Sung Blue
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that brings to mind that old saying that idle hands are the devils workshop. Keeping busy often helps get one\'s mind off one\'s troubles
September 17th, 2026 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that brings to mind that old saying that idle hands are the devils workshop. Keeping busy often helps get one\'s mind off one\'s troubles
September 17th, 2026 12:38
Song Sung Blue
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, what a strong poem. Setting private grief beside all those unfinished chores makes the moment feel honest and familiar. You cry, pull yourself together, and go finish what needs doing. I felt this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, what a strong poem. Setting private grief beside all those unfinished chores makes the moment feel honest and familiar. You cry, pull yourself together, and go finish what needs doing. I felt this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:58
Different Gods
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Gary showing how love can be split and sadness can dwell but the love of the children stays strong.
Andy
September 12th, 2026 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Gary showing how love can be split and sadness can dwell but the love of the children stays strong.
Andy
September 12th, 2026 01:08
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
Donteatmecows said:
children deserve the very best, all the safety, love, and blessings adults can possibly give them, I believe
September 11th, 2026 14:29
Donteatmecows said:
children deserve the very best, all the safety, love, and blessings adults can possibly give them, I believe
September 11th, 2026 14:29
Different Gods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is devastating. Love becomes betrayal, but fatherhood keeps you standing when everything else has collapsed. The contrast between who she was and who she became cuts incredibly deep. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2026 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is devastating. Love becomes betrayal, but fatherhood keeps you standing when everything else has collapsed. The contrast between who she was and who she became cuts incredibly deep. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2026 09:10
Different Gods
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words fill this piece, it has sadness and pain and a powerful statement about a broken relationship where values differ. Nicely written it evokes emotion from the reader. Well done.
September 11th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words fill this piece, it has sadness and pain and a powerful statement about a broken relationship where values differ. Nicely written it evokes emotion from the reader. Well done.
September 11th, 2026 04:24
Fools Mate (2)
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s funny how when young we\'re all Smooth and clear Skinned. Then end-up like a 10 by 4 of Dorian Gray.
Good Write.
September 9th, 2026 19:30
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s funny how when young we\'re all Smooth and clear Skinned. Then end-up like a 10 by 4 of Dorian Gray.
Good Write.
September 9th, 2026 19:30
Fools Mate (2)
Paul Bell said:
This feels like an ex- footballer whose best years are behind him.
From rich to poor which happens to a lot of them.
September 9th, 2026 11:30
Paul Bell said:
This feels like an ex- footballer whose best years are behind him.
From rich to poor which happens to a lot of them.
September 9th, 2026 11:30
Fools Mate (2)
sorenbarrett said:
This carries the flavor of a past era but still applies. Lovely rhyming and meter make it almost musical. Nicely done
September 9th, 2026 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
This carries the flavor of a past era but still applies. Lovely rhyming and meter make it almost musical. Nicely done
September 9th, 2026 08:32
Fools Mate (2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is one cutting piece. The chess imagery carries the speaker’s bitterness toward an ending that feels less like victory than mutual defeat. Dark, uncomfortable, and certainly provocative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is one cutting piece. The chess imagery carries the speaker’s bitterness toward an ending that feels less like victory than mutual defeat. Dark, uncomfortable, and certainly provocative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 08:26
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