Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky



Pebble
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, love the last line. I do hope that you have shaken the pebble out of your shoe.

February 12th, 2018 01:49

Pebble
dusk arising said:

A really this is really good. You punch line is truly excellent.
A pleasure to read work of this quality here.


February 11th, 2018 16:32

Pebble
Caring dove said:

interesting .. i especially love the ending .. about the pebble :-)

February 11th, 2018 11:13

Toilet
Goldfinch60 said:

Good strong write, I hope that your (now) younger days bring you happiness.

February 9th, 2018 09:00

Toilet
Lorna said:

I love your Dylan quote..... love that song.

February 9th, 2018 08:11

Diner
Goldfinch60 said:

Those appetites need to be sated.

February 7th, 2018 08:57

Diner
Lorna said:

This was a fun read Jabberwocky..... a good laugh.......... sounds like you are having fun!

February 7th, 2018 07:04

Wee Giraffe
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good fun write.

February 6th, 2018 01:47

Wee Giraffe
Tony36 said:

Love it, great write

February 5th, 2018 10:42

Wee Giraffe
Lorna said:

I enjoyed this so much - thanks - what a laugh........ you pesky father you.

February 5th, 2018 05:14

Broke
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and so very true.

January 26th, 2018 08:59

Caprice
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, Cupids can come from any direction and can be shot in the most unexpected circumstances.

January 25th, 2018 01:12

Caprice
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 24th, 2018 08:01

Caprice
Caring dove said:

nice piece of writing :-) i am not sure cupid fires an arrow in ay direction , tho its a nice thought lol

January 24th, 2018 04:21

Christmas Eve As Is
Goldfinch60 said:

My that joy be always with you J.

December 25th, 2017 01:14

Blind
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

December 18th, 2017 13:40

Bottom Line
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write J but I believe that the game is never over, I will always be in the game.

December 17th, 2017 02:21

Voices
Goldfinch60 said:

Good reflective write J.

December 10th, 2017 10:44

Plastic Cup (Challenge Poem)
Goldfinch60 said:

You won the challenge, good write.

December 3rd, 2017 01:54

Plastic Cup (Challenge Poem)
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 2nd, 2017 15:53

Rapture
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write, I do hope the valley fills soon.

Good to see you back again.

November 24th, 2017 09:23

Wave
Goldfinch60 said:

That wave will need to be very big to get to me in the Midlands!
Good write.

October 27th, 2017 01:00

Old Long Since
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good but sad emotive write, may the light come back into your life.

October 23rd, 2017 00:46

Old Long Since
Laura🌻 said:

Sad and relatable!

October 22nd, 2017 14:49

Harvester
Goldfinch60 said:

Hope is always there and with good planting and care in its growing will flower into glory.

October 20th, 2017 08:02

Skank
Christina8 said:

This is a really good and raw poem! I\'ve seen gals like this and it truly makes me sad. I agree with Santita 100%. Excellent job!

October 18th, 2017 08:30

Skank
Goldfinch60 said:

Very sad but extremely emotive write.

October 18th, 2017 07:58

Horizon
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write Jabberwocky.

September 28th, 2017 08:16

Indifference
Emmarunway said:

really enjoyed this. this poem has been thoughts in my own head.

August 22nd, 2017 06:07

Yeah, I Said Those Things
Goldfinch60 said:

Good strong write. Take it or leave eh?

August 18th, 2017 00:38



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