Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Pebble
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, love the last line. I do hope that you have shaken the pebble out of your shoe.
February 12th, 2018 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, love the last line. I do hope that you have shaken the pebble out of your shoe.
February 12th, 2018 01:49
Pebble
dusk arising said:
A really this is really good. You punch line is truly excellent.
A pleasure to read work of this quality here.
February 11th, 2018 16:32
dusk arising said:
A really this is really good. You punch line is truly excellent.
A pleasure to read work of this quality here.
February 11th, 2018 16:32
Pebble
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting .. i especially love the ending .. about the pebble :-)
February 11th, 2018 11:13
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting .. i especially love the ending .. about the pebble :-)
February 11th, 2018 11:13
Toilet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, I hope that your (now) younger days bring you happiness.
February 9th, 2018 09:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, I hope that your (now) younger days bring you happiness.
February 9th, 2018 09:00
Diner
Lorna said:
This was a fun read Jabberwocky..... a good laugh.......... sounds like you are having fun!
February 7th, 2018 07:04
Lorna said:
This was a fun read Jabberwocky..... a good laugh.......... sounds like you are having fun!
February 7th, 2018 07:04
Wee Giraffe
Lorna said:
I enjoyed this so much - thanks - what a laugh........ you pesky father you.
February 5th, 2018 05:14
Lorna said:
I enjoyed this so much - thanks - what a laugh........ you pesky father you.
February 5th, 2018 05:14
Caprice
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, Cupids can come from any direction and can be shot in the most unexpected circumstances.
January 25th, 2018 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, Cupids can come from any direction and can be shot in the most unexpected circumstances.
January 25th, 2018 01:12
Caprice
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
nice piece of writing :-) i am not sure cupid fires an arrow in ay direction , tho its a nice thought lol
January 24th, 2018 04:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
nice piece of writing :-) i am not sure cupid fires an arrow in ay direction , tho its a nice thought lol
January 24th, 2018 04:21
Bottom Line
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write J but I believe that the game is never over, I will always be in the game.
December 17th, 2017 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write J but I believe that the game is never over, I will always be in the game.
December 17th, 2017 02:21
Plastic Cup (Challenge Poem)
Goldfinch60 said:
You won the challenge, good write.
December 3rd, 2017 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
You won the challenge, good write.
December 3rd, 2017 01:54
Rapture
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, I do hope the valley fills soon.
Good to see you back again.
November 24th, 2017 09:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, I do hope the valley fills soon.
Good to see you back again.
November 24th, 2017 09:23
Wave
Goldfinch60 said:
That wave will need to be very big to get to me in the Midlands!
Good write.
October 27th, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That wave will need to be very big to get to me in the Midlands!
Good write.
October 27th, 2017 01:00
Old Long Since
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good but sad emotive write, may the light come back into your life.
October 23rd, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good but sad emotive write, may the light come back into your life.
October 23rd, 2017 00:46
Harvester
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope is always there and with good planting and care in its growing will flower into glory.
October 20th, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope is always there and with good planting and care in its growing will flower into glory.
October 20th, 2017 08:02
Skank
Christina8 said:
This is a really good and raw poem! I\'ve seen gals like this and it truly makes me sad. I agree with Santita 100%. Excellent job!
October 18th, 2017 08:30
Christina8 said:
This is a really good and raw poem! I\'ve seen gals like this and it truly makes me sad. I agree with Santita 100%. Excellent job!
October 18th, 2017 08:30
Indifference
Emmarunway said:
really enjoyed this. this poem has been thoughts in my own head.
August 22nd, 2017 06:07
Emmarunway said:
really enjoyed this. this poem has been thoughts in my own head.
August 22nd, 2017 06:07
Yeah, I Said Those Things
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write. Take it or leave eh?
August 18th, 2017 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write. Take it or leave eh?
August 18th, 2017 00:38
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