Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Handover
SLR said:
The unspoken hope here is heartbreaking. Tragic. I love the flow of words tugging heartstrings throughout the whole piece.
May 11th, 2018 18:00
SLR said:
The unspoken hope here is heartbreaking. Tragic. I love the flow of words tugging heartstrings throughout the whole piece.
May 11th, 2018 18:00
Dearth
SLR said:
Good flow with a real message. Great last two lines. Sums it up nicely.
May 10th, 2018 23:26
SLR said:
Good flow with a real message. Great last two lines. Sums it up nicely.
May 10th, 2018 23:26
Dearth
dusk arising said:
Excellent writing. Truly conveys the disappointment and emptiness which continue after the loss. I really felt this. Goes into my favourites.
May 10th, 2018 05:20
dusk arising said:
Excellent writing. Truly conveys the disappointment and emptiness which continue after the loss. I really felt this. Goes into my favourites.
May 10th, 2018 05:20
This Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be hard and the kids can drive you crazy but I don\'t believe that you would ever want to be without them.
May 10th, 2018 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be hard and the kids can drive you crazy but I don\'t believe that you would ever want to be without them.
May 10th, 2018 00:36
This Life
SLR said:
This is great! But I do wonder... When have you been to my house??? This is crazy familiar!!! Love it!!
May 9th, 2018 21:14
SLR said:
This is great! But I do wonder... When have you been to my house??? This is crazy familiar!!! Love it!!
May 9th, 2018 21:14
This Life
dusk arising said:
A great depiction of everyday monotony and the gradual build up of stress levels. A quiet shout for help(?) or a relief valve sounding off? Very entertaining either way.
May 9th, 2018 13:52
dusk arising said:
A great depiction of everyday monotony and the gradual build up of stress levels. A quiet shout for help(?) or a relief valve sounding off? Very entertaining either way.
May 9th, 2018 13:52
This Life
w c said:
I really enjoyed reading this poem- loved the rhythm and rhyme
May 9th, 2018 12:44
w c said:
I really enjoyed reading this poem- loved the rhythm and rhyme
May 9th, 2018 12:44
Batman
SLR said:
TOO CUTE! It reminds me of my kids when they were younger. Thank you for posting it.
May 8th, 2018 22:39
SLR said:
TOO CUTE! It reminds me of my kids when they were younger. Thank you for posting it.
May 8th, 2018 22:39
Ease
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your coffee and your ease as your Siren calls go out over the sea.
May 8th, 2018 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your coffee and your ease as your Siren calls go out over the sea.
May 8th, 2018 00:10
Tickled
Goldfinch60 said:
I am glad that you held your breath otherwise we would not have seen these words.
May 7th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
I am glad that you held your breath otherwise we would not have seen these words.
May 7th, 2018 00:38
Minotaur (letting go)
Laura🌻 said:
Jabberwocky,
A great write with great imagery! I did enjoy the read! If one searches long enough, the light will be found! Keep your light forever shining!
~Laura~
April 26th, 2018 09:40
Laura🌻 said:
Jabberwocky,
A great write with great imagery! I did enjoy the read! If one searches long enough, the light will be found! Keep your light forever shining!
~Laura~
April 26th, 2018 09:40
Minotaur (letting go)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write. May your love abound.
April 26th, 2018 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write. May your love abound.
April 26th, 2018 07:57
Minotaur (letting go)
Lorna said:
That last line is a killer....... so glad you\'re back writing again...........
April 26th, 2018 07:00
Lorna said:
That last line is a killer....... so glad you\'re back writing again...........
April 26th, 2018 07:00
Forebearance
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write Jabberwocky, you are a very strong person and will overcome all with your strength.
March 19th, 2018 09:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write Jabberwocky, you are a very strong person and will overcome all with your strength.
March 19th, 2018 09:24
Forebearance
Lorna said:
I hope you are not really a broken man,
Confronting in terror the folly of his arrogance.... as for Jesus, he was just a nice Jewish boy that people exploited through the centuries.....
March 19th, 2018 07:55
Lorna said:
I hope you are not really a broken man,
Confronting in terror the folly of his arrogance.... as for Jesus, he was just a nice Jewish boy that people exploited through the centuries.....
March 19th, 2018 07:55
Reflection
Goldfinch60 said:
May that window into your life show you the way towards a shining future.
March 17th, 2018 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
May that window into your life show you the way towards a shining future.
March 17th, 2018 01:15
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