Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
All Father
sorenbarrett said:
We all make judgements and interventions as if we were a god yet how fallible we are and in fact so are the gods. Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings to me.
August 19th, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all make judgements and interventions as if we were a god yet how fallible we are and in fact so are the gods. Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings to me.
August 19th, 2026 08:07
Short and Neat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the final turn gives this little piece tremendous weight. Poetry becomes a way of surviving what cannot be changed. Excellent write, Jabberwocky. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the final turn gives this little piece tremendous weight. Poetry becomes a way of surviving what cannot be changed. Excellent write, Jabberwocky. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:58
Rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the strange fear that peace might quiet the very darkness that once fed the poetry. This captures that tension beautifully. Great work, Jabberwocky. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 17:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the strange fear that peace might quiet the very darkness that once fed the poetry. This captures that tension beautifully. Great work, Jabberwocky. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 17:44
Short and Neat
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree. Clever wording in good rhyme.
August 17th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree. Clever wording in good rhyme.
August 17th, 2026 07:57
Rain
Thomas W Case said:
There’s something tender and damn sad about reaching peace in the poem while your own mood can’t quite follow you there. I like how the rain washes everything clean, yet somehow leaves the memory of pain behind.
August 16th, 2026 08:02
Thomas W Case said:
There’s something tender and damn sad about reaching peace in the poem while your own mood can’t quite follow you there. I like how the rain washes everything clean, yet somehow leaves the memory of pain behind.
August 16th, 2026 08:02
Rain
sorenbarrett said:
To forgive but not forget comes to mind with this poem. Pain may remain but anger is gone. Well written
August 16th, 2026 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
To forgive but not forget comes to mind with this poem. Pain may remain but anger is gone. Well written
August 16th, 2026 07:56
Endless
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise these words of frustration
penned succinctly poetic by you
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(sometimes, it seems our world
is full \'of lover\'s without love\'
and \'humanist peace seekers
devoid of a night\'s decent rest\'
as if
in our very questing for the calm rivers
in existence\'s chaotic seas
fate paths a far more ominous journey
for us to earn the wisdom, we seek.)
October 24th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise these words of frustration
penned succinctly poetic by you
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(sometimes, it seems our world
is full \'of lover\'s without love\'
and \'humanist peace seekers
devoid of a night\'s decent rest\'
as if
in our very questing for the calm rivers
in existence\'s chaotic seas
fate paths a far more ominous journey
for us to earn the wisdom, we seek.)
October 24th, 2022 03:45
Napkins
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure all will be well before that pack is empty.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure all will be well before that pack is empty.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:56
Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Like yourself all day through Jabberwocky it is well worth it.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Like yourself all day through Jabberwocky it is well worth it.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:43
Blackest Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
May the pages of your book now lead you to a wonderful chapter in your life Jabberwocky.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May the pages of your book now lead you to a wonderful chapter in your life Jabberwocky.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:28
Dragonslayer
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one J, and thank you for my first laugh of the day.
Andy
May 22nd, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one J, and thank you for my first laugh of the day.
Andy
May 22nd, 2021 00:43
Shadow
L. B. Mek said:
\'So our love then; a beach
we danced across,
leaving not a footprint.\'
\'It is me standing now
Facing dusk
Anchoring my long shadow.\'
wonderfully paced poetry, accessibly worded
thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'So our love then; a beach
we danced across,
leaving not a footprint.\'
\'It is me standing now
Facing dusk
Anchoring my long shadow.\'
wonderfully paced poetry, accessibly worded
thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2021 05:27
Shadow
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I like the prickly nature imagery that you use to convey and express your muse. Its a great wry lament in metaphor. Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 7th, 2021 02:30
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I like the prickly nature imagery that you use to convey and express your muse. Its a great wry lament in metaphor. Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 7th, 2021 02:30
Shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
As dusk falls and the darkness descends remember that that darkness will become light in the new day.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
As dusk falls and the darkness descends remember that that darkness will become light in the new day.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:36
Shadow
rosiedm said:
I like this it makes me think of the fire over here in co.down mourne mountains 2 weekends ago how it burnt for 2 days or more ..I wish it could of been longer I\'m awful about longer poems I think its because all the great poets write pages of one poem .. and I write longer too (Im okay not great) 😁
May 6th, 2021 13:15
rosiedm said:
I like this it makes me think of the fire over here in co.down mourne mountains 2 weekends ago how it burnt for 2 days or more ..I wish it could of been longer I\'m awful about longer poems I think its because all the great poets write pages of one poem .. and I write longer too (Im okay not great) 😁
May 6th, 2021 13:15
“Dusky”
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is within each other and has no boundaries.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is within each other and has no boundaries.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 00:41
Dirty Shoes
RDS said:
Haha nice Jabberwocky, fun with some undertones. You don\'t often see many poems about poo. Probably because we\'re all told you can\'t polish a turd. But thank you here we see you\'ve rolled it in Glitter!
November 23rd, 2020 16:01
RDS said:
Haha nice Jabberwocky, fun with some undertones. You don\'t often see many poems about poo. Probably because we\'re all told you can\'t polish a turd. But thank you here we see you\'ve rolled it in Glitter!
November 23rd, 2020 16:01
Dirty Shoes
L. B. Mek said:
great read,
I gravitate to the fun element you added (deliberately or not) to what is usually a dour topic
November 23rd, 2020 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
great read,
I gravitate to the fun element you added (deliberately or not) to what is usually a dour topic
November 23rd, 2020 04:03
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