Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Gary, the passing of children is so horrendous in any way they pass.
Andy
September 9th, 2026 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Gary, the passing of children is so horrendous in any way they pass.
Andy
September 9th, 2026 00:59
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
Paul Bell said:
Not sure if this is highlighted by the trial in America, or mistrial as it turns out.
You seem to hear about this more and more, and you always hope they get hung if they\'re not insane.
September 8th, 2026 13:25
Paul Bell said:
Not sure if this is highlighted by the trial in America, or mistrial as it turns out.
You seem to hear about this more and more, and you always hope they get hung if they\'re not insane.
September 8th, 2026 13:25
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a devastating poem, Jabberwocky. The innocence of the children, the trust they still carry, and the sheer betrayal at the center of it all make this brutally hard to read...and that is exactly why it lands so deeply. Haunting work, my friend. Yeah, no dry eyes here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a devastating poem, Jabberwocky. The innocence of the children, the trust they still carry, and the sheer betrayal at the center of it all make this brutally hard to read...and that is exactly why it lands so deeply. Haunting work, my friend. Yeah, no dry eyes here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 10:40
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
sorenbarrett said:
There are tragedies hard for the average person to understand. Why a mother would kill her children but then like other things we don\'t understand all things have their causes and far be it to me to judge. I have known men that have killed infants and young children and they have very troubled minds, some pathetic and others not knowing what they are doing. Very well written it is haunting and chilling as well as heart rending.
September 8th, 2026 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
There are tragedies hard for the average person to understand. Why a mother would kill her children but then like other things we don\'t understand all things have their causes and far be it to me to judge. I have known men that have killed infants and young children and they have very troubled minds, some pathetic and others not knowing what they are doing. Very well written it is haunting and chilling as well as heart rending.
September 8th, 2026 09:34
Genital Whats?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is wickedly funny. The whole thing has that dry, dismissive bite where the politeness somehow makes it even nastier. 😂 Great fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is wickedly funny. The whole thing has that dry, dismissive bite where the politeness somehow makes it even nastier. 😂 Great fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 08:16
Genital Whats?
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a picture to start the morning. A fun read about a not too fun thought. Well done with rhyme my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a picture to start the morning. A fun read about a not too fun thought. Well done with rhyme my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:05
Racist? Moi?
Doggerel Dave said:
Judgements made in situations which might affect me directly feel perfectly valid. Judgements in any other direction I would have to examine. Neat clear write though without ambiguity.
September 6th, 2026 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Judgements made in situations which might affect me directly feel perfectly valid. Judgements in any other direction I would have to examine. Neat clear write though without ambiguity.
September 6th, 2026 20:44
Racist? Moi?
Kevin Hulme said:
I understand what you\'re saying. But we have a Weak Government. One empty suit replaced another. Eunuchs all.
September 6th, 2026 20:34
Kevin Hulme said:
I understand what you\'re saying. But we have a Weak Government. One empty suit replaced another. Eunuchs all.
September 6th, 2026 20:34
Racist? Moi?
sorenbarrett said:
Used to be conservative until my daughters were wed then went rogue a liberal rebel saw the erros of my ways became an anarchist till I saw it didn\'t work so now just an old cynic a political atheist.
September 6th, 2026 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Used to be conservative until my daughters were wed then went rogue a liberal rebel saw the erros of my ways became an anarchist till I saw it didn\'t work so now just an old cynic a political atheist.
September 6th, 2026 08:00
Gardener
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Gary leading to a very sad end, I hope that you can find her.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Gary leading to a very sad end, I hope that you can find her.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:58
Gardener
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful and quietly brutal piece, Jabberwocky. The garden feels full of love, intimacy, and family…then the final turn changes the entire landscape without needing to raise its voice. Excellent poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful and quietly brutal piece, Jabberwocky. The garden feels full of love, intimacy, and family…then the final turn changes the entire landscape without needing to raise its voice. Excellent poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:35
Gardener
sorenbarrett said:
The twist in this one made me think and that is what poetry is supposed to do as well as feel. Nicely written my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
The twist in this one made me think and that is what poetry is supposed to do as well as feel. Nicely written my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:21
Fortza poesia ! (Go Poetry!)
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Gary, I write every day.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Gary, I write every day.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:03
Favourite Cup
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things that we bek can bring us such wonderful memories Gary.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things that we bek can bring us such wonderful memories Gary.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 00:58
Fortza poesia ! (Go Poetry!)
Doggerel Dave said:
A poem on poetry is by no means my favourite kind. However, in your case I\'ll make an exception here...
September 4th, 2026 16:31
Doggerel Dave said:
A poem on poetry is by no means my favourite kind. However, in your case I\'ll make an exception here...
September 4th, 2026 16:31
Fortza poesia ! (Go Poetry!)
sorenbarrett said:
Works for me my friend. Good advice set to rhyme. Nicely done my friend.
September 4th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Works for me my friend. Good advice set to rhyme. Nicely done my friend.
September 4th, 2026 03:54
Favourite Cup
Doggerel Dave said:
Some glue, a shelf. Toothbrush holder. I have the exact article.
At least your wife could provide a soft landing for your cup pieces should you change your mind...
September 3rd, 2026 18:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Some glue, a shelf. Toothbrush holder. I have the exact article.
At least your wife could provide a soft landing for your cup pieces should you change your mind...
September 3rd, 2026 18:18
Favourite Cup
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a riot, Jabberwocky! You turn a shattered household treasure into a tender memorial, then casually dispose of the marriage in the closing seconds...warm, wicked, and perfectly timed. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a riot, Jabberwocky! You turn a shattered household treasure into a tender memorial, then casually dispose of the marriage in the closing seconds...warm, wicked, and perfectly timed. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:24
Favourite Cup
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss some for the better some for the worse put to a bit of humor. It is always best when we can laugh at our losses. Good one my friend
September 3rd, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss some for the better some for the worse put to a bit of humor. It is always best when we can laugh at our losses. Good one my friend
September 3rd, 2026 03:58
Kick the Boorie (can)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a terrific piece, Jabberwocky! The rhyme races along with all the excitement, strategy, and glorious chaos of children at play…then circles around and sends everyone charging off once more. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2026 21:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a terrific piece, Jabberwocky! The rhyme races along with all the excitement, strategy, and glorious chaos of children at play…then circles around and sends everyone charging off once more. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2026 21:43
Kick the Boorie (can)
sorenbarrett said:
A most clever wording to describe an old game I remember well. Nostalgia measures one\'s age and here is a game gone out of style long ago. I love your clever rhyming and meter in this work and combined with the nostalgia it gets a fave from me.
September 2nd, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A most clever wording to describe an old game I remember well. Nostalgia measures one\'s age and here is a game gone out of style long ago. I love your clever rhyming and meter in this work and combined with the nostalgia it gets a fave from me.
September 2nd, 2026 04:33
Red
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Gary that show the sad and happy things in life.
Andy
September 2nd, 2026 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Gary that show the sad and happy things in life.
Andy
September 2nd, 2026 01:01
Red
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this one cuts deep. It starts almost casually, even cruelly funny, then the emotional weight arrives hard when the children enter the picture. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this one cuts deep. It starts almost casually, even cruelly funny, then the emotional weight arrives hard when the children enter the picture. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:34
Red
sorenbarrett said:
Here irony becomes humor and reality at the same time. All things happen for the best, at least that is what we tell ourselves it we want to remain happy. Well written my friend
September 1st, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Here irony becomes humor and reality at the same time. All things happen for the best, at least that is what we tell ourselves it we want to remain happy. Well written my friend
September 1st, 2026 04:00
Player
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Gary but it\'s bad enough to have a son that looks like me. LOL
Andy
September 1st, 2026 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Gary but it\'s bad enough to have a son that looks like me. LOL
Andy
September 1st, 2026 00:44
Player
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is outrageously cheeky. The confidence just keeps escalating until it becomes its own punchline...bold, shameless, and very funny, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is outrageously cheeky. The confidence just keeps escalating until it becomes its own punchline...bold, shameless, and very funny, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2026 08:33
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