Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
....to my breast
Thoughts In Time said:
They say keep ur enemies close...š¹
October 13th, 2019 04:32
Thoughts In Time said:
They say keep ur enemies close...š¹
October 13th, 2019 04:32
āAttack the Enemy Where They are Notā
Thoughts In Time said:
Lol..sometimes the ghost is all there is...mind is a powerful thingš¹
October 11th, 2019 05:52
Thoughts In Time said:
Lol..sometimes the ghost is all there is...mind is a powerful thingš¹
October 11th, 2019 05:52
Desire
Goldfinch60 said:
a very good emotive write, beauty is on the inside of people no matter how beautiful (or ugly) they look.
October 10th, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
a very good emotive write, beauty is on the inside of people no matter how beautiful (or ugly) they look.
October 10th, 2019 00:29
Desire
Thoughts In Time said:
Thatās normally how it goes..āpraises never sungā..sad but true ..thereās so much more than the flesh but sometimes we lose to learn..deep writeš¹
October 9th, 2019 08:21
Thoughts In Time said:
Thatās normally how it goes..āpraises never sungā..sad but true ..thereās so much more than the flesh but sometimes we lose to learn..deep writeš¹
October 9th, 2019 08:21
Retrospect
Goldfinch60 said:
Some decisions are made in error but only experience can tell us where they were wrong.
August 3rd, 2019 14:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Some decisions are made in error but only experience can tell us where they were wrong.
August 3rd, 2019 14:21
Jam
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I will always have some jam to share J.
August 2nd, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I will always have some jam to share J.
August 2nd, 2019 01:17
Jam
Silkseduction said:
Reading this put me in the mood for some jam!
Great job!
August 1st, 2019 15:47
Silkseduction said:
Reading this put me in the mood for some jam!
Great job!
August 1st, 2019 15:47
Jam
Neville said:
what a nice little rhyming whimsey we have here.. nicely penned from start to end....
I fancy some marmalade & strong cheddar cheese on crusty bread....
Neville
August 1st, 2019 12:10
Neville said:
what a nice little rhyming whimsey we have here.. nicely penned from start to end....
I fancy some marmalade & strong cheddar cheese on crusty bread....
Neville
August 1st, 2019 12:10
Victim
Fay Slimm. said:
A very well perceived view of the growing need to be known as a victim. This one goes into my faves.
July 29th, 2019 03:57
Fay Slimm. said:
A very well perceived view of the growing need to be known as a victim. This one goes into my faves.
July 29th, 2019 03:57
Victim
Neville said:
a good un and that\'s for sure .. thoroughly enjoyed sir... Neville
July 29th, 2019 03:33
Neville said:
a good un and that\'s for sure .. thoroughly enjoyed sir... Neville
July 29th, 2019 03:33
Rival
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom give you a new path of wonder and joy.
July 21st, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom give you a new path of wonder and joy.
July 21st, 2019 01:09
Denoument
Goldfinch60 said:
May that truth become a distant memory soon and your life moves on into further wonderful memories.
July 20th, 2019 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
May that truth become a distant memory soon and your life moves on into further wonderful memories.
July 20th, 2019 00:45
Shade
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Woah wow bravo!! The first stanza sings soulfully on the jilted love but the niece stanza shows relief and the better off feeling, I think I would say sth like that if I leave my hit tempered hubby ever. Kudos for this awesome rhyming poem.
And pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too.
July 18th, 2019 12:09
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Woah wow bravo!! The first stanza sings soulfully on the jilted love but the niece stanza shows relief and the better off feeling, I think I would say sth like that if I leave my hit tempered hubby ever. Kudos for this awesome rhyming poem.
And pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too.
July 18th, 2019 12:09
Genius Abroad
Goldfinch60 said:
May that genius show you the way to a happy future and not worry what others think.
June 25th, 2019 15:19
Goldfinch60 said:
May that genius show you the way to a happy future and not worry what others think.
June 25th, 2019 15:19
Cups
Goldfinch60 said:
Very applicable in many places in the world. These problems could all be solved but those with the power and money just want to keep it for themselves.
May 31st, 2019 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Very applicable in many places in the world. These problems could all be solved but those with the power and money just want to keep it for themselves.
May 31st, 2019 01:33
Sybarites
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dads and mums must be prudent for the sake of their children.
Good to see you back J.
May 30th, 2019 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dads and mums must be prudent for the sake of their children.
Good to see you back J.
May 30th, 2019 00:23
Catharsis
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope your fine words fill the hole quickly Jabberwocky.
February 18th, 2019 16:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope your fine words fill the hole quickly Jabberwocky.
February 18th, 2019 16:26
Catharsis
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Big holes need lots of filling J
Captured very well indeed
All the best
February 18th, 2019 05:35
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Big holes need lots of filling J
Captured very well indeed
All the best
February 18th, 2019 05:35
Parsimony
gla8sscock said:
She is vile. An ugly, worthless waste of space. Stop obsessing about her, she isnt worth your time.
February 13th, 2019 14:12
gla8sscock said:
She is vile. An ugly, worthless waste of space. Stop obsessing about her, she isnt worth your time.
February 13th, 2019 14:12
Parsimony
Lorna said:
I\'m getting to really dislike that woman. This is beautifully penned........
February 8th, 2019 06:39
Lorna said:
I\'m getting to really dislike that woman. This is beautifully penned........
February 8th, 2019 06:39
Posturing
Goldfinch60 said:
This became a very emotive write at the end, the love is obviously never completely died.
February 5th, 2019 15:41
Goldfinch60 said:
This became a very emotive write at the end, the love is obviously never completely died.
February 5th, 2019 15:41
Transfer
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - original thinking on the over-use of cyber-offers. Love the last line as a finalƩ - - Good read again.
February 5th, 2019 07:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - original thinking on the over-use of cyber-offers. Love the last line as a finalƩ - - Good read again.
February 5th, 2019 07:08
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